高考英語模擬試題分類匯編書面表達(dá)

1、【全國通用版】2011屆高考英語模擬試題分類匯編(書面表達(dá))【2011 湖北省八校二聯(lián)】 短文寫作(共一題；滿分 25分)你是21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)(21st Century )的讀者，也經(jīng)常向該報(bào)投稿。她的這就是生 活欄目(That s Life)的下期話題是：Farilure happens when you quit. To go on till you succeed is what life is all about.該欄目編輯向你約稿，請你發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)并陳述理由，字?jǐn)?shù) 100左右。Sample writingMy understanding of life is to achieve go

2、als, big or small, through efforts. To succeed doesn t necessarily mean having much money or power; it means we try hard to live a rich life rather than give up easily.Life is sweet and full of challenges. If we give up too soon, we may miss good opportunities to arrive at our destination in time or

3、 even worse, we may drive ourselves into difficult situations. Take Robinson Crusoe for example. If he had been the kind of person to give up without trying, he would have no chance of survival on the deserted island for 27 years. It was hope and perseverance that made his survival possible.So bear

4、this in mind: failure happens when we quit and to go on till you succeed is what life is all about.【2011 廣東省揭陽市一?！俊緦懽鲀?nèi)容】暑假即將來臨。你們班的同學(xué)討論了假期計(jì)劃，提出了不同看法，請根據(jù)提 示寫一篇有關(guān)該討論的英語日記。呆在家里外出旅游你的選擇優(yōu)點(diǎn).花費(fèi)少，舒適方便.可以做自己喜歡的事， 如讀書、做運(yùn)動(dòng)等增長知識(shí)、開闊眼界(horizon/view )我打算去打工， 這既能士外長見 識(shí)，鍛煉思志， 還能培養(yǎng)自己 的社交能力。缺點(diǎn)不能親身了解外面的世界花費(fèi)多、旅途不便【寫作要求】

5、用五句話表達(dá)上表的全部內(nèi)容，并組成一篇連貫的短文。(日記的開頭已經(jīng)給 出，不計(jì)入句數(shù))【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。June 1st , 2011 FineAs the summer holiday is drawing near, we had a discussion on how to spend the holiday in our class this afternoon.June 1st ,2011FineAs the summer holiday is drawing near, we had a discussion on how to spend th

6、e holiday in our class this afternoon.Some are in favor of staying at home saying that it is both comfortable and convenient. They can save some money and do the things they like such as reading and doing sports. But of course they will lose the opportunity to see the outside world themselves. Other

7、s, however, prefer to go out travelling to enrich their knowledge and broaden their views. The disadvantage is that they have to take into consideration the expense and the difficulties they may have during the trips. As for me I will find a part time job to gain ualuabl experience, strengthen my wi

8、ll power and improve my social skills.【2011 江蘇省泰州市一?！?書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）最近，你班就“ 90后的成長”話題進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)社會(huì)調(diào)查，調(diào)查顯示，人們對“90后”青少年的現(xiàn)狀褒貶不一。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇文章， 介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果，并談?wù)勀阕约?作為一名“ 90后”的感想。優(yōu)點(diǎn)缺點(diǎn)你自己的感想.思想獨(dú)立、后志1可.樂于接受并嘗試新事物.自信、熱情.珍惜友情，善于交流.依賴性強(qiáng).心理抗挫能力不足.缺乏責(zé)任感.自控力差（至少兩點(diǎn)）注意：1 .對所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2.詞數(shù)150左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。4.參考詞匯

9、：挫折 frustration3.文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。Recently our class has conducted a survey about“The growth of post - 90 sgeneration ” . People have different opinions on it.【答案】One possible version:Recently our class has conducted a survey about The growth of post-90s generation. People have different opinions o

10、n it.Some people think that the post-90s generation are confident, ambitious and independent in thinking. They are fond of new things, ready to accept and try them. Whats more, they have many new ideas, which makes them more creative. Its especially worth mentioning that they are enthusiastic and ca

11、ring. They treasure friendship and are good at communicating with others.However, others argue that the post-90s generation are too self-centered anddependent on their parents in life or teachers in study. They tend to live acomfortable life but are less able to overcome frustration. Besides, some o

12、f them lack the sense of responsibility and dont know how to show gratitude to others. Worse still, many are so weak in controlling themselves that they are often addicted to the Internet.As a member of them, I think we post-90s generation should be aware of our own strengths and weaknesses, so that

13、 we can put emphasis on perfecting ourselves. Only in this way can we gain respect and faith from others.【2011 安徽六校檢測】現(xiàn)在全社會(huì)都在倡導(dǎo)低碳生活，呵護(hù)地球家園。而每年的元宵節(jié)，你所在的城市都要舉行一場30分鐘的焰火晚會(huì)。據(jù)報(bào)道：一場這樣的焰火晚會(huì)耗資大約150萬元。市民為此議論紛紛。請你以Is it Wise to Celebrate the Lantern Festival with Fireworks?”為題寫一篇英 語短文,談?wù)勀銓Υ说目捶?。要求?.不要逐字翻譯所給素材

14、。.為了使行文流暢，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。.字?jǐn)?shù)100120左右。Is it Wise to Celebrate the Lantern Festival with Fireworks?In China , it s a custom to celebrate the Lantern Festival by settingofffireworks.【答案】Is it Wise to Celebrate the Lantern Festival with Fireworks?In China , it s a custom to celebrate the Lantern Fe

15、stival by setting off fireworks. In my city, there is an annual firework show sponsored by the government. It is true that setting off fireworks does offer relaxation and excitement to the citizens. However, I don t think it is wise to celebrate the Lantern Festival in this way. My reasons are as fo

16、llows.Firstly,it is really a waste of money. The fireworks last only 30 minutes,but it costs about 1.5 million yuan, which can be used for the city construction.Secondly, while fireworks are wonderful to look at, they cause air pollution. Besides, some unexpected fires might break out , causing heav

17、y damage and loss.In conclusion, celebrating the Lantern Festival with fireworks isn t necessary.【2011 安徽名校聯(lián)考】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）隨著我國經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展，越來越多的小汽車進(jìn)入家庭，提高了人民的生活水平，但是也造成了嚴(yán)重的交通擁擠和環(huán)境污染。 20l0年中秋節(jié)前一天在交通高峰期北京、 上海等全 國各大中等城市發(fā)生了嚴(yán)重的堵車現(xiàn)象。 請你從此現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因、 帶來的危害入手，就改 進(jìn)措施等方面寫一篇英語短文參加全市舉辦的英語征文比賽。注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文

18、連貫；.參考詞匯：交通擁堵： traffic jam ；車輛：vehicles【答案】With the rapid development of our countrys economy, more and more cars are coming into common families, which causes serious traffic jams, environmental pollution as well as loss of economy.As far as I am concerned, the solutions to this problem are present

19、ed as follows: first of all, the governments ate supposed to restrict the amount of car-buying, and meanwhile raise the costs of owning private ears. Besides, vehicles from other places should be properly limited to enter downtowns. In addition, the governments should design the reasonable traffic s

20、ystems of their own cities.In a word, the traffic jams have increasingly affected aspects of social life. Therefore, we must spare no efforts to solve this problem to keep up our countrys economic rise.【2011 寶雞一檢】假定你是李華，美國教師Dannel在過去的一月曾在你校指導(dǎo)學(xué)生研究性學(xué)業(yè)習(xí)課(inquirystudy ),他不久前回國，請你根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)和要求給他發(fā)一封電子郵件。寫作要點(diǎn)：

21、.對他的指導(dǎo)表示謝意。.回憶一次在他的指導(dǎo)下生動(dòng)活潑并且富有意義的小探究活動(dòng)?；顒?dòng)最主要的是學(xué)會(huì) 了自主學(xué)習(xí)和思考。.今后的設(shè)想。要求：.短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域；.短文的詞數(shù)不少于100 (不含已寫姨的部分)；.內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫；.書寫須清晰、工整；.郵件中不能體現(xiàn)本人真實(shí)信息。Dear Dannel,I m Li Hua, one of your Chinese students.Yours Sincerely, Li Hua【答案】Ml三節(jié),有皆衰玷分第分Daftr Dumel.卜m Iturir. 季&r 4 Rui fhiw tludiE&h It1* iiJjth*

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24、國卜Yqve RjU，0?！?011 巢湖一檢】書面表達(dá)（共1小題，滿分25分）近來你們學(xué)校正準(zhǔn)備創(chuàng)建和申報(bào)“省綠色學(xué)?！?，請你據(jù)此給某英文報(bào)寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：建設(shè)綠色校園的重要性派綠色校園不僅是指綠色的環(huán)境為了建設(shè)綠色校園，我們應(yīng)該注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；以使行文連貫；3、開頭語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Recently, our school is aiming at building a green campus. What is a green school?Recently, our school is aiming at building a green

25、 campus. What is a green school?It means not only a green campus, but a green atmosphere for our study and life.For one thing, a green campus means more plants, less pollution and no waste.Each of us can do something, such as planting trees and flowers or just saving electricity and water in our dai

26、ly life. It will make a big difference.For anotherthing, it is necessary for us students to make great efforts to create a harmonious atmosphere of mutual trust and respect between teachers and students. Besides, it is important to keep a friendly and supportive attitude towards each other.According

27、ly, if everyone does one thing for our school, well surely turn our school into a better one.【2011 廈門期末質(zhì)檢】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）自2010年9月起，廈門開始實(shí)行高二年級(jí)周六禁止補(bǔ)課的規(guī)定。某英文報(bào)社為此向全 市高二學(xué)生征文。假如你是李華，請將你對此事的想法以及周末安排撰稿給報(bào)社。注意：.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；.請根據(jù)下圖提示，選擇其中一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)； 3 .詞數(shù)：130左右：開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear editor,This letter is in response to the

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30、1七b?用1!由1 FfrF Kft超F(xiàn)l墓由 “冷同堂即Tq bril 加u the Eh, rrM M them 加,*皿1 amcEi，aver the pria*c Wc”tue Uun th# will ptfl ui m thr 414“川二鼾 m clkfc cmrwncc csm%. nprciidiy fw dM【2011 福州期末質(zhì)檢】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）隨著高考的臨近，越來越多的學(xué)生開始焦慮，他們的健康問題引起越來越多人的關(guān)注。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，以“青少年心理健康問題大家談”為話題，給 21世紀(jì)英文服務(wù)投稿。注意：.短文必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，行文連貫；.短文開

31、頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；.詞數(shù)120左右。參考詞匯：psychological 心理（上）的consultant提供咨詢的專家With the national entrance examination coming on, more and more gradating students suffer from various kinds of anxieties.參考范文】*Vi：h thu n日二icnml ontrm門ce e苫mT_i 門m: i 口n cciiinu 白門_ tcte mnd tcfq rrdum: inM 臺(tái): udEritm 5 千十匚1-vmic：UE k

32、inds; cf 口門算 i 己二 iE自 Scf 號(hào) cannc* ejt c- s I eep .e I I and fai I to concentrate on their studies Some are afraid of taking exa.ns and others even Icse hope for thei r future I ifeThe causes of ths Tienta I prcb I ems above nay i nc I ude tcc much zschcc I uork h i expectat i ons from the teachers

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35、1 撫順六校聯(lián)考】假如你班要就“如何為高考做準(zhǔn)備”開一個(gè)班會(huì)，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀銓Ω呖紓淇歼^程中要注意的事項(xiàng)及建議理由：保持良好的心態(tài)有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強(qiáng)克服困難的勇氣；目標(biāo)明確、正確評(píng)價(jià)自己。太低的目標(biāo)使人松懈，太高的目標(biāo)使人喪失信心；與父母、老師或同學(xué)溝通幫忙走出困境；作息合理，飲食均衡，以保持旺盛的精力。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已為你寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。.參考詞匯：明確的(definite) 評(píng)價(jià)(estimation )No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successfu

36、l in the National CollegeEntranceExamination.【答案】No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National college Entrance Examination. Yet what should we do in order to achieve success? Here are some suggestions.First, it s very important to have a right attitude, for a normal state

37、of mind and self-confidence not only helps us to relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely. Meanwhile, we should have a definite goal and a correct estimation of ourselves. Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disappointed with what we have known and done. Besides, we d

38、 better sometimes talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when we re in trouble. Finally, striking a proper balance between study and rest keeps us energetic and a healthy diet is useful as well.With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance.【2011 ?？诹Ｈ?lián)】

39、書面表達(dá)（滿分25分） 假設(shè)有一批英國中學(xué)生將來你校就讀，校方要求你在開班典禮上介紹一下學(xué)校的有關(guān)要求。 請按以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇發(fā)言稿。上學(xué)要穿戴整潔 上課不遲到、早退 保持校園清潔走路靠右行；若要騎車上學(xué)，請辦自行車許可證注意：.詞數(shù)：100左右；.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；.開頭已為你寫好。Welcome to our參考詞匯：許可證一 permitGood morning, dear friendsschool.Thanks.【答案】Good morning, dear friends. Welcome to our school. Nowplease allow me to intro

40、duce you to some of our school rules here. As high school students, firstly, we are expected to be neatly dressed when at school. Secondly, it must be made clear that we should never be late for class or leave school before it is over. The school isa place for us to live and study in, so we must kee

41、p it clean. Lastly, when you are walking on the road, please remember to keep to the right, and, if you want to go to school by bike, you must have a bicycle permit.Thanks.【2011 杭州一檢】書面表達(dá)（滿分30分）5月9日，為了慶祝母親節(jié)，高二（3）班開展了以“感恩父母”為主題的班會(huì)活動(dòng)（自 制禮物、給父母寫信、“感動(dòng)父母”金點(diǎn)子比賽等）。假如你是校英語報(bào)記者，請按下列要點(diǎn) 用英語寫一則100 120詞的新聞報(bào)道。標(biāo)題已給

42、出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。.時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)宗旨、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容。.同學(xué)們的表現(xiàn)。.對本次活動(dòng)的感想或評(píng)論。Teenagers Expressed Thanks to Their ParentsUicpExd Thank% tc Thtif MarcnlxOn 4*.如工lcr：$ r*fTbm J Grade 2 held jI.*、hwc1 E %u* 士etetraie M(jCkt ,3人 Z Ihcmc出 M EpfTxN,M 由h汰& tn fiiir porcnlv Apjfl ftotW tr聯(lián) 尊* by tfwrv/九0*ttona wrc IcQm to tlwv ponnti an*

43、! sHgani/wd a ciixjipt：Tioe 由 *1kh ihc %+小 w * the hea w” to nujvr hi5 t( bfl parent * mjM win，MitdeHb mA4c 4的 and Htce kedc 由Ui concfTtiraifd aBrnii. Seme me W山岳心 t*wc p, Fm dw iMly. $WA Et Hf time 將r g g do KrwOf 2幅 irtm for their pwt love【2011 焦作期末調(diào)研】目前，就業(yè)形式越來越嚴(yán)峻。就業(yè)壓力不僅是大學(xué) 生無法回避的事實(shí)，也是高中生需要考慮的問題。就

44、此你校編輯部開展了一次題 為“就業(yè)危機(jī)對高中生的啟示”的英語征文活動(dòng)。請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇征文，闡明你的觀點(diǎn)。.努力學(xué)習(xí)，拓寬知識(shí)面；.發(fā)展才能，提高個(gè)人素質(zhì)；.加強(qiáng)合作精神，培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)意識(shí)；. 了解社會(huì)需求，做好人生規(guī)劃；.你的觀點(diǎn)注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；文章開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；What WeHigh School Students Learn From the Job-hunting Crisis書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假如你叫李華，是一位高中生。隨著科技的發(fā)展，iPod已成為中學(xué)生的新寵。用iPod既可聽音樂、閱讀純文本電子書，又可玩電子游戲。

45、請你用英語給某英語報(bào)社寫一封信，談?wù)勚袑W(xué)生使用iPod的情況。信的內(nèi)容須包括以下幾點(diǎn)：1. 使用iPod對學(xué)習(xí)的好處。對課堂紀(jì)律和學(xué)習(xí)可能產(chǎn)生的負(fù)面影響。As we all know, the employment situation is getting more and more serious now. Being high school students, what can we learn from it?【答案】What We High School Students Learn From the Job-hunting CrisisAs we all know, the empl

46、oyment situation is getting more serious now. Being high school students, what can we learn from it?To start with, we should put all our heart into study to broaden our knowledge in various fields. It is required that we should develop ourabilities in many aspects and improve our personal qualities

47、to achieve our goals in this highly competitive society. Additionally, learning to cooperate with others is another thing we must do, for the sense of teamwork contributes to success more quickly. Last but not least , as young generation in China, we d better set our long-4erm plans to meet whatsoci

48、ety demands.At present I think only by working hard can our ability be fully developed . I ll spare no effort to study hard to accomplish my goal.【2011 許昌期末】第二節(jié)書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假如你叫李華，是一名高三學(xué)生，請給某英文報(bào)社Heart to Heart欄目的編輯Mary寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：1、正在緊張備考，身心壓力很大；2、父母期望很高，不斷施壓；3、與父母難溝通，很苦惱；4、希望Mary就如何與父母溝通提些建議。要求：1、詞數(shù)100

49、左右（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)）；2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Mary,I am a Senior 3 student.Looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Mary,I am a Senior 3 student. I m going to take this summer s college entrance examination. In preparation for it, I am studying very hard. As a result, I often feel exhauste

50、d both physically and mentally. However, my parents still put a lot of pressure on me. I know they have great expectations for me, but I feel that the pressure is too heavy for me to cope with. I attempted to communicate with them, but failed.Now I m quite upset about it. How can my parents understa

51、nd me? I really don t know what to do. Could you please give me some advice?Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【2011 濟(jì)南質(zhì)檢】假設(shè)你是李華。下面是你正在Bayview Hotel度假的相關(guān)信息，請你根據(jù)圖畫和文字提示,F*Kridj”irim I的快I Eihf|rain-tetkLuriihtF barefriendly peopk用英語給你的朋友 Shirley寫一封信，介紹你度假的情況并邀請他明年與你同來此地度假。Mond 叩 time for me!Eve

52、rihing new Spielberg film Tuesday Coach trip to aid towniEveningdises注意：1.詞數(shù)：120-150詞。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Shirley,I m now on holiday at the Bayview Hotel.Yours,Li Hua【答案】評(píng)分原則.本題總分為30分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。.評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次。判斷文章檔次時(shí)，要注意要點(diǎn)，更要注意按照詞匯及語法結(jié)構(gòu)運(yùn)用及表達(dá)方法總體評(píng)價(jià)文章。.拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以

53、考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。.語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤主要指以下幾種：主謂不一致，動(dòng)詞形式（句子時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)）不對，詞組搭配不當(dāng)、句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤、詞序不當(dāng)、關(guān)鍵詞用錯(cuò)。.如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。.詞數(shù)少于120和多于150的，從總分中減去 2分。One possible version ：Dear Shirley,I m now on holiday at the Bayview Hotel. This is a nice family-run hotel on seafront. In the yard there s a swimming pool. From t

54、he hotel windows you can see the sea and mountains. There s also a rest aurant which offers good food and there are nice bars. too. The people here arc friendly and helpful.The holiday offers various activities. This is what I did: I went sailing in thesea on Monday. And on Monday evening I saw a ne

55、w Spielberg film. On Tuesday I had a coach trip to an old town, which is a popular place of interest and in the evening I went to a disco party.It s the most enjoyable holiday I ve ever had. I like it here so much that I vealready decided that I must come again next year. I do hope you ll come with

56、me.T n】already looking forward to that 1Yours,Li Hua【2011 濟(jì)寧質(zhì)檢】寫作（滿分30分）假設(shè)彳叫Li Yuan,剛收到兩周前在網(wǎng)上訂購的一件英國商品，發(fā)現(xiàn)質(zhì)量有問題。 請用英語寫一封120150詞的投訴信，包括以下要點(diǎn)：商品名稱、訂購時(shí)間及價(jià)格何時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)何種質(zhì)量問題你所希望的解決方式改進(jìn)產(chǎn)品或服務(wù)質(zhì)量的建議注意：信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Manager,Customer Service DepartmentDear Sir or Madam,Sincerely yours, Li Yuan【答案】ManagerCustomer

57、Service DepartmentDear Sir or Madam,Two weeks ago I placed an order via the Internet for a copy of The Future Is Digital, which is priced at $ 60. This morning I received a package from your company and as I eagerly unpacked it, to mysurprise, I found the back cover of the book missing. Although it

58、wouldn t affect my reading much, I do wish to have a perfect copy.Could you please send me another copy as soon as possible? If you like, I could post the copy in my hands back to you- at your expense of course.This incident shows there s still room for improvement concerning your customer service.

59、I do hope you can look into this matter and find out what it is that caused the damage.I m looking forward to your earlier reply.Sincerely yours,Li Yuan【2011 鎮(zhèn)江期末調(diào)研】請你根據(jù)下表所提并針對這種現(xiàn)象parents behaved書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）供的信息寫一篇英語文章,簡單介紹一下這種現(xiàn)象及出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因,提一些建議?，F(xiàn)象家長小時(shí)候現(xiàn)在的小孩當(dāng)前，家長普遍認(rèn)為現(xiàn)在孩子的行為習(xí)慣沒有他們自己小時(shí)候的好。懂禮貌、尊重別人、循規(guī)蹈矩

60、不樂于助人、不尊重別人、崇尚自由。原因建議注意:.互聯(lián)網(wǎng)及電視節(jié)目中不良信息的影響.家長和老師過分關(guān)注學(xué)生成績，忽視對學(xué)生行為習(xí)慣的培養(yǎng) （提出至少兩點(diǎn)建議）.對所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。.詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Nowadays, a large number of children have bad manners while their well when they were at the same age.【答案】Nowadays, a large number of children have bad manners while their par