2023屆高考英語讀后續(xù)寫專項(xiàng)模擬訓(xùn)練（含解析）

1、讀后續(xù)寫一閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。This evening as I was leaving a supermarket where I had just bought many daily necessities and food, I noticed this man going through the garbage can outside of the store. As I walked to my car I watched him as he reached in the garbage can and pulled out fa

2、st food trash bags and inspected all that was in the thrown-away bags. He did this for several minutes. He would find a few fries in one bag and a bite or two of a hamburger in another. You can see the hamburger wrapper by his knee where he was placing the food items hed found.He never bothered anyo

3、ne or tried to stop and beg for money as people entered and left the store. After he went through the entire trash can he neatly cleaned up the area and wrapped up the food he found in the dirty hamburger wrapper. My heart literally hurt for him. I am not someone who just hands out money or even hel

4、ps homeless people because so many are not truly homeless. I dont guess Ive ever seen someone actually go through a garbage can to try to find food to eat.I knew I had to help him. I got out of my car and asked him if I could buy him something to eat. He told me he would appreciate anything I could

5、get him. He was on a bike and I told him if hed follow me, Id buy him a meal at the fast food place around the block. He followed me and I bought him the biggest meal they had on the menu.When I brought him his food, he was so thankful. He told me his name was Steve and hed been homeless ever since

6、his sister died last September. He was trying to get off the streets, but it was so hard.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。When I got back in my car, I drove off with such a heaviness in my heart for this man._He broke down crying._參考范文1When I got back in my car, I drove off with such a heaviness

7、 in my heart for this man. I drove down the road and felt compelled to go back to help this man. When I came back he had finished his meal and was riding away. I pulled up beside him and asked him if there was any way I could help him. He told me not really. I asked him if I could buy him a few meal

8、s and put it on a gift card for him.He broke down crying. He told me he prayed for a hot meal and I came to his help! I was speechless! Come to think of it, thats not a prayer Ive ever prayed! I always pray over my food, but Ive never prayed for a meal. its expected! Ive never doubted that I wouldnt

9、 be able to eat. Tears began to fill my eyes! Oh my. how blessed I am.! It dawned on me that this man had helped me realize just how blessed I am and what I take for granted.參考范文2When I got back in my car, I drove off with such a heaviness in my heart for this man. I drove down the road and felt com

10、pelled to go back to help this man. When I came back he had just finished his meal. I pulled up beside him and asked him if there was any way I could help him. He told me I had already done a lot for him. As I noticed the sign of the supermarket, it suddenly struck me that I could give him some dail

11、y necessities and food as a gift. I got out of my car and took some groceries into a bag from the boot.He broke down crying. He could say nothing but the repeated “thanks”. I did not expect his reaction like that, but I could understand his uncontrollable emotions. I told him to take care of himself

12、 and returned to my car. As I drove off, I saw him from the rear waving his hands with loud “thank you”. I knew that I did something right and I would continue to help anyone in need in the future.本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者幫助了一位翻垃圾桶去找吃的男人，正是因?yàn)閹椭@個男人讓作者感恩自己所擁有的東西的故事。1.段落續(xù)寫：由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)我回到車?yán)铮規(guī)е活w為這個男人感到沉重的心離開了?！?/p>

13、可知，第一段可描寫作者還是想要幫助男人。由第二段首句內(nèi)容“他哭了起來?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼戇@個男人感激及作者的感悟。2.續(xù)寫線索：注意幫助感謝折返悲傷感悟3.詞匯激活行為類.停下：pull up / come to a stop.幫助：came to ones help/assist/give ones aid情緒類.幸運(yùn)的：blessed / fortunate/lucky.說不出話來：speechless/see a wolf/words fail me二閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。For my fifth-grade science fair

14、 project, I got six chicken eggs in an incubator(孵化器).“But I dont know anything about hatching an egg.”Mrs. Brubeck smiled. “You dont have to be an immediate expert at everything, Juli. The idea here is to learn something new.”“But what if they die?”“Then they die. Document your work scientifically

15、and youll still get an A” She pulled The Beginners Guide to Raising Chickens from her bookshelf and said, “Read the book and set yourself up tonight.”That night I came home, more worried than ever. Id read the book. I had to turn the eggs three times a day and regulate the temperature and humidity(濕

16、度). But aside from that, what was there to do?My father came with a cardboard tube and a flashlight. He taped the two together so that the light beam was forced straight out the tube. “I will show you how to candle the eggs,” he said, then switched off the light and held an egg up to the cardboard t

17、ube. “The light lets you see through the shell so you can watch the embryo(胚胎) develop. Look, see the dark spot here?”“Is that an embryo?”“Thats it!”Suddenly it felt real. The eggs were alive! Surely they had to live!For the next three weeks, I was completely consumed with the growing of chicks. I l

18、abeled the eggs A, B, C, D, E and F, but before long they had names, too: Abby, Bonnie, Clyde, Dexter, Eunice and Florence. Every day I weighed them, candled them, turned them. I drew diagrams of various stages of an embryos development. I documented the daily changes and weight loss of each egg. On

19、 the outside the eggs were boring, but I knew what was happening inside!注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Then one morning I was candling Bonnie when I noticed a gentle peck(啄)._The day came when I was supposed to hand in my science fair project._參考范文1When I got back in my car, I drove off with s

20、uch a heaviness in my heart for this man. I drove down the road and felt compelled to go back to help this man. When I came back he had finished his meal and was riding away. I pulled up beside him and asked him if there was any way I could help him. He told me not really. I asked him if I could buy

21、 him a few meals and put it on a gift card for him.He broke down crying. He told me he prayed for a hot meal and I came to his help! I was speechless! Come to think of it, thats not a prayer Ive ever prayed! I always pray over my food, but Ive never prayed for a meal. its expected! Ive never doubted

22、 that I wouldnt be able to eat. Tears began to fill my eyes! Oh my. how blessed I am.! It dawned on me that this man had helped me realize just how blessed I am and what I take for granted.參考范文2When I got back in my car, I drove off with such a heaviness in my heart for this man. I drove down the ro

23、ad and felt compelled to go back to help this man. When I came back he had just finished his meal. I pulled up beside him and asked him if there was any way I could help him. He told me I had already done a lot for him. As I noticed the sign of the supermarket, it suddenly struck me that I could giv

24、e him some daily necessities and food as a gift. I got out of my car and took some groceries into a bag from the boot.He broke down crying. He could say nothing but the repeated “thanks”. I did not expect his reaction like that, but I could understand his uncontrollable emotions. I told him to take

25、care of himself and returned to my car. As I drove off, I saw him from the rear waving his hands with loud “thank you”. I knew that I did something right and I would continue to help anyone in need in the future.本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者幫助了一位翻垃圾桶去找吃的男人，正是因?yàn)閹椭@個男人讓作者感恩自己所擁有的東西的故事。1.段落續(xù)寫：由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)我回到車?yán)?，我?guī)е活w為

26、這個男人感到沉重的心離開了?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡哌€是想要幫助男人。由第二段首句內(nèi)容“他哭了起來。”可知，第二段可描寫這個男人感激及作者的感悟。2.續(xù)寫線索：注意幫助感謝折返悲傷感悟3.詞匯激活行為類.停下：pull up / come to a stop.幫助：came to ones help/assist/give ones aid情緒類.幸運(yùn)的：blessed / fortunate/lucky.說不出話來：speechless/see a wolf/words fail me三閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。On February 21,

27、2018, Christine Cheers world fell apart. Someone on the other end of the phone had said the words that bring parents to their knees: “Theres been an accident.” Her 32-year-old Navy flight surgeon James was injured in a training mission. At hospital, Christine and her husband David were told that he

28、would never breathe on his own and he would never smile at them again.It was time for Christine to honor the spirit of her son who had switched his major from commerce engineering to premed (醫(yī)學(xué)預(yù)科) because he wanted to help people. It was time to make her every worst day some strangers best one. She

29、instructed the hospital to begin the organ donation process. Christine Cheers wasnt leaving the hospital until every last one of her sons organs left the building. She and David watched hospital employees carry coolers from the operation room. The last one was his heart. “That was the one I cared ab

30、out most, Christine says, “With bravery and selflessness, James had such an amazing heart.”Seeing Jamess heart leave the building, Christine fell into a sadness so deep that climbing out seemed impossible. Her only comfort would be to find out that Jamess organs had helped people, so she wrote each

31、receiver a letter just to know if they were doing all right.Mike Cohen, a cyclist, had a heart transplant. Jamess heart! Two months after the surgery, Mike got a call from the organization that arranged the transplant (移植). They had a letter for him from Jamess mother. As he read Christines letter,

32、Mike began to understand just how special his new heart was. Eager to know more about James, Mike googled him. He found they had a lot in common. They were both athletic and practically the same age. Another thing he learned about James: His grave site (墓地) was in Jacksonvillethe other side of the c

33、ountry.注意： 1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Upon recovery, Mike announced on social media to take a cross-country trip._Mike got off his bike and walked straight to Christine, who was waiting at the grave site._One possible version:Upon recovery, Mike announced on social media to take a cross-count

34、ry trip. He wanted to cycle to Jamess grave site to pay his respects in person. It seemed fitting to make the journey by biketo show how transformative the heart was. Mike was back to cycling and gradually built up his body. Blessings for the ride flooded in on social media. “What a biker with a big

35、 heart,” someone commented. Hearing about Mikes decision, Christine and David decided they would meet him there when he arrived. Mike got off his bike and walked straight to Christine, who was waiting at the grave site. “Thank you. Thanks for coming.” said Christine as they folded into a deep hug. T

36、hen came the tears. They were not the deep weeping tears of grief, but tears of relief from a mother who knew shed done right. At Jamess headstone, Mike squatted down and took a deep breath, feeling the strong pulse of Jamess heart in his chest. He told James how thankful he was and promised to take

37、 care of his heart.解析：本文以心臟為線索展開，講述了James讓父母在他去世后，將所有器官捐給需要的人，心臟捐給了Mike。Mike在收到James母親的信后，開始了解James并發(fā)現(xiàn)了James與自己有很多相似之處，想要親自去拜訪James的父母表示感謝和敬佩，隨后便騎自行車來到國家的另一端James的家。1.段落續(xù)寫：由第一段首句內(nèi)容“康復(fù)后，Mike在社交媒體上宣布進(jìn)行橫跨全國的旅行。”可知，第一段可描寫Mike為騎行的準(zhǔn)備及大家在媒體上對此事的看法。由第二段首句內(nèi)容“Mike下了自行車，徑直走向在墓地等候的克里斯汀。”可知，第二段可描寫Mike見到James父母后，

38、向他們表達(dá)感激和敬意，并在James墓前承諾好好照顧他的心臟。2.續(xù)寫線索：宣布騎行鍛煉身體見到James的父母表示感激和敬意承諾好好照顧心臟3.詞匯激活行為類知道、得知：knew/ learned about說、宣布：announced/ told/ said騎自行車去：cycle to/ make the journey by bike情緒類悲傷：sadness/ grief寬慰：comfort/ relief四閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。A Narrow EscapeA

39、 feeling of terror came over ten-year-old Chet Roscow.He had been swimming in the A Narrow EscapeMatawan River by himself. But he had the idea that someone or something was watching him.And then he saw a large gray fin(鰭)slicing through the water like a knife. What was that? Could it be a shark? Tha

40、t was impossible! Elm Hills was miles and miles from the ocean. How could a shark find its way into this little river?But now Chet could see it coming toward him.The shark was bigger than Chet himself. The black eyes staring up through the water-killer eyes.Chet dived toward the shore, pounding thro

41、ugh the water and kicking with all his might. His feet touched the bottom. He was running now, looking over his shoulder. The shark was right behind him, its huge jaws wide open and its white teeth shining in its blooded mouth.Those killer eyes stared at Chet. And then, with a flick of its tail, the

42、 shark pushed itself backward into the water, and disappeared down the river.Chet rose to his knees and threw up. When he could stand, he suddenly noticed his fiends,Sid,Monty and Dewey, standing on the dock(碼頭).Before he could stop them,they had dived into the water.Get out of the water!he screamed

43、.Get out! Get out now!He thundered down the path and onto the dock.You have to get out! Theres a shark!You hear that,Monty? Sid said.Theres a shark in the river! Wed better get out.Sid lifted himself up on the dock and took a running leap off the edge of the dock.He jumped into the river with such a

44、n enormous splash that Chet got thoroughly wet. Monty and Dewey dived in after him.Oh shaaaaaaa-rrrrrrrk!Sid called through cupped hands.Here, shark! Come and get us!They laughed, and Chet stood there, totally helpless. 注意1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。But then he noticed Sid,strangely still in t

45、he river._Before he had a chance to think,Chet was in the water,leaving Monty and Dewey on the dock._參考答案：But then he noticed Sid, strangely still in the river. His face had gone white. His mouth was open, like he was going to scream. Chets insides turned to jelly when he saw the shining fin moving

46、slowly through the water. Hurry! Chet cried Get out! Monty and Dewey flew out of the water. But Sid seemed stuck. The shark was closer to the surface now, its black eyes almost glowing. They all screamed at Sid, but Sid still didnt move. The shark was getting closer.Before he had a chance to think,

47、Chet was in the water, leaving Monty and Dewey on the dock. He swam as fast as he could toward Sid, grabbed hold of Sids arm and pulled him. Monty and Dewey were at the edge of the dock, reaching down for them. Sid lifted himself up and Chet planted his hands on the dock. Chet was almost out of the

48、water when something caught his leg Its got my leg! Chet screamed. “Pull! Sid shouted. They pulled until Chets leg finally came free! Chet was injured, but to his relief, his friends were safe.1.段落續(xù)寫：由第一段首句內(nèi)容“但這時他注意到希德，奇怪的是，他還呆在河里。”可知，第一段可描寫希德在河里時的一些動作和狀態(tài)以及鯊魚正在逼近的危險(xiǎn)境況。由第二段首句內(nèi)容“切特還沒來得及思考，就已經(jīng)下水了，把蒙提和杜

49、威留在了碼頭上?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫切特對希德的營救過程和遇到的危險(xiǎn)狀況。2.續(xù)寫線索：游泳遇鯊魚躲鯊魚提醒朋友救朋友朋友得救3.詞匯激活行為類變成：turn to/become出去：get out/go out抓?。篻rab/catch情緒類尖叫、呼喊：scream/shriek/cry寬慰、安慰：relief/comfort五閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。One Saturday afternoon, I was watching TV in the living room with my grandpa when a blinding flas

50、h of lightning flashed across the sky, followed by a deafening sound, and the pictures on TV disappeared with that sound. Before I realized what had happened, a gray-white shadow rushed in through the open window and flew over my head. Bang! It hit the wall and slid off to the floor. Shaking with fe

51、ar, I approached it cautiously and saw that it was a pigeon. It looked at me in fear, trying to open its wings and struggling its feet, but apparently powerless.So I called my grandpa and immediately set out to give it a helping hand. Taking it in my hands, I felt a few drops of warmth on my hands.

52、It was blood! I gently spread its wings and there were a few red feathers inside. “Dont worry. Well get it out alive,” Grandpa said to me. Then he got the first-aid kit. With some cotton, we dried the blood, cleaned the wound and then put it under a hairdryer to dry. All went smoothly, for the pigeo

53、n had no strength left to resist. There happened to be an empty birdcage at home, so I put it in gently and added a little water and some grains.For the next few days, the moment I got home from school, I would run to feed the pigeon. And Grandpa helped a lot, tidying up the cage daily. Little by li

54、ttle, its strength returned. One evening, I fed it with the biscuit I was eating. It enjoyed it! One week later, its wound almost healed (痊愈); its feathers grew and it became brave. Whenever I sat at the table eating biscuits, it looked up at me, cooing (咕咕地叫) constantly. To my joy, I could also rea

55、ch into the cage to touch it. When I gently fingered its head, it playfully pecked (啄) at me. Finally it completely recovered. But every time I was with it, it seemed restless in the cage. To make it happy and pretty, I tied an orange string (線)around its leg.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好。One day, howe