托福寫作備考結(jié)構(gòu)規(guī)劃之中間段落詳解

1、第 PAGE9 頁 共 NUMPAGES9 頁托福寫作備考構(gòu)造規(guī)劃之中間段落詳解托福寫作備考構(gòu)造規(guī)劃之中間段落詳解中間段落的文章構(gòu)造通常如下：Transitional words + topic sentence + development。假如考生在平時能純熟運用這樣的一個構(gòu)造來展開作文，那么考場上就會憑借這份思維定勢來幫助自己抓住每一分。中間三個段落都可以套用這種形式。(1)Transitional words主要有以下三種，即表順序：firstly, secondly, finally (last but not least表并列：besides, in addition;表比照：in

2、contrast, in parison。這些銜接詞會讓文章看起來脈絡(luò)明晰，組織嚴密，也就做到了評分標準中的“well-organized”一條。(2)主題句，顧名思義，向考官展示的是考生作文的主要意旨所以它在中間段落中的作用是至關(guān)重要的。通常主題句應該注意一下幾點：1.主題句必須是陳述句。有的考生想在寫作中創(chuàng)新，于是采用反問句或者其他看似多樣化的題目，然而這種多樣性帶來的后果是給考官觀點不明確的印象，很自然地會影響到分數(shù)。2.必須說明觀點。假如考生把一句無關(guān)痛癢的話放在主題句的位置上，很顯然無法說明自身觀點。比方像“今天是晴天”這樣的話沒有說明觀點;然而“今天是個好天氣”就包含一種感情色彩在

3、里面，給人一種立場明確的感覺。考生應該切記：沒有反駁余地的就不可以作為主題句。3.態(tài)度必須堅決。但是不能極端。4.每段必須有主題句。理論上講沒有主題句是可以的，但是考場上不可以，沒有主題就會浪費考官的時間去幫你總結(jié)主題，然而繁忙的考官是不會那么仁慈地去分析p 你的題目來抓取你的觀點的。(3)至于中間段落的展開(development)那么需要大家學習積累一些常用的段落展開方法，比方舉例法、比擬法、因果法等。托福寫作高分總分值范文點評和思路解析：偏好手工制作還是機器制造?托福寫作難點話題一覽Items made by hand or items made by machine, which do

4、 you prefer?Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific exles to explain your choice.寫作思路展開構(gòu)造分析p 這道題還是比擬詳細的。不過選擇比擬自由，無論選哪一種都行，只要列出幾個好的理由。(注意，假如說家具的話也有很多種，根據(jù)不同的種類，也可以有不同的偏好) 手工：可

5、以按照特定要求制作，有特色，但缺點是本錢往往會比擬高。機械：一般批量消費，所以相對缺乏特色，但同時本錢較低，更容易獲得。本話題高分范文賞析There are a wide variety of products, such as clothes or furniture, which can be made either by hand or by machine. Both of these methods of manufacturing products have their advantages, and both hold an important place in society.

6、 To decide which is best, one should pare the advantages of each method. There are many advantages of making products with the aid of machines. First, machine-made products tend to be cheaper than their handcrafted counterparts. As machines are very steady and do the exact same thing every time they

7、 recreate a product, these type of products tend to have consistent quality. Frequently, handmade products have extremes in their product quality; it can either be extremely good or extremely poor. Finally, machine-made products have the advantage of being able to use some finishes and materials tha

8、t cannot be used when creating something by hand. These include some types of steel, laminates, and enamel finishes. There are also many advantages of buying handcrafted products. When people purchase handcrafted products, they are supporting the arts and crafts munities. Buying these types of produ

9、cts keeps many people employed, as it takes much more time to create an object by hand. Handcrafted objects tend to have much more diversity, as it is almost impossible to create an exact duplicate of an object if you are making it by hand. Overall, I think that there are advantages of using both ma

10、chine-made products and hand-made products. I think that if one can afford to buy high quality handmade clothing and furniture, that would be the best situation. These types of products tend to last much longer than their machine-made counterparts, and one can be satisfied knowing that they are supp

11、orting an artist. However, if one cannot afford to buy high quality handmade products, it is probably better to buy things that are machine-made. Machine-made products tend to be of higher quality than poorly made handcrafted products.托福寫作高分總分值范文點評和思路解析：參加團隊做leader還是member?托福寫作難點話題一覽Is it better to

12、be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Use specific reasons and exles to support your answer.寫作思路展開構(gòu)造分析p 討論做leader的好處：主動，可以使用多的資，獲得更多;缺點：風險大，要承當更多責任。討論做mem

13、ber的好處：安逸;沒有風險;缺點：收獲較小。另外，如何選擇做leader還是member一定程度上與一個人的性格有關(guān)。同時，還需要看是做什么的group，視情況而定。本話題高分范文賞析When working in a group, there are many different positions, but basically, one can think of a group as having two job types: member and leader. Some people believe that it is better to be a member of a grou

14、p than it is to be the leader. However, I think it is better to be a leader in a group because as the leader, ones ideas are more likely to be heard, he/she is more likely to receive accolades for plete work, and he/she is able to make important decisions for the group. The leader of a group has the

15、 strongest voice of all. If someone enjoys ing up with new, exciting concepts and making a difference in a project, then he/she should be the leader. It can be a frustrating experience at time to be a member of a group. At times, a members ideas are not taken seriously, because he/she does not have

16、respect that the leader has. If one leads a group, his/her ideas will always be heard and respected, and usually followed through with. When a project is plete, it is the leader that receives accolades for doing a good job. While the entire team gets some respect and appreciation upon pletion, it is

17、 the leader who receives the most admiration. This is an advantage for building ones resume, and generally gaining respect in society. People always respect the leader of a group more than the members. Moreover, it is better to be the leader of a group than a member because the leader is able to wie

18、ld the power. Being the leader means getting a say in all decisions, and often, is allowed to follow through with any ideas that he/she thinks up. This can mean that things that a person finds important will be pleted quickly and efficiently. Overall, I believe that it is better to be the leader of a group than to be a member. A leader can make decisions, follow through with them, and receive recognition for a job well done. However