高考英語(yǔ)新題型策略指導(dǎo)：應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作（二）課件

1、高考新題型策略指導(dǎo)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作（二）一、 典例分析題型示例1 假如你是李華，你以前一直對(duì)英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法和寫(xiě)作感到困惑，李老師給了你很好的建議和幫助，甚至幫你訓(xùn)練口語(yǔ)。現(xiàn)在你的英語(yǔ)成績(jī)進(jìn)步很大，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)封信感謝李老師。Poor content!Bad structure!Problems?Grading standards 第五檔（1315分）覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。Principles of score 評(píng)分原則3.詞數(shù)少于60和多余100的，從

2、總分中減去2分。4.評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。5.6.如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差，以致影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。contentlanguagecoherencehandwritingWhat makes perfect writing?1. Complete content 內(nèi)容完整3. Advanced language 語(yǔ)言高級(jí)2. Clear coherence 條理清晰Complete in Content (內(nèi)容完整)01What makes perfect writing?How?二、應(yīng)用實(shí)踐（2019全國(guó)卷1）假定你是李華，暑假

3、在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國(guó)畫(huà)展覽。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括： 1.寫(xiě)信目的 2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì) 3.能做的事情BeginningBodyEndinga letter of application 4. Conclusion(add by yourself) Complete content：1.Structure Beginning（background+purpose）I am Li Hua and I am delighted to know that volunteers are needed for a Chinese painting exhibition. Im wri

4、ting to_.apply for the positionComplete content：2.Beginning應(yīng)用文開(kāi)頭格式 . Im writing to.交代背景,簡(jiǎn)介題干信息 + 寫(xiě)明來(lái)意，體現(xiàn)文體假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國(guó)畫(huà)展覽, 寫(xiě)一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者。 Id appreciate it if you could consider my application. Ending (Thanks/Hope/Expectations)Complete content：3.EndingMore examplesMore examplesMore exampl

5、esStudent A: 個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì); 能做的事情First, I am interested in Chinese paintings. Also, I can communicate with others in English fluently. Student B: 個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì); 能做的事情 First, I am interested in Chinese paintings so my related knowledge will help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form. Also, having b

6、een exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English.details explainingthe resultdetails explaining the reason2 main points2 main pointsPair work:Compare and see which is better? Why?Complete content：4.Body Body1. main point2. main point3. How can we com

7、e up with the supporting details in Body part?reasonresultexampleeffectHow?Fill in the blanks with proper conjunctions. Visiting a Chinese family can be a very good opportunity to experience Chinese culture. Here are some advice. _, Chinese people are not very strict with being punctual, _ you dont

8、have to worry about the time of arrival. I suggest that you arrive five to ten minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. _, it would be better if you could bring some gifts, _ make sure you wouldnt bring a watch or a clock. _, table manners are what you should pay attention to

9、. _, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. To begin withsoIn additionbutLastlyFor exampleClear coherence (條理清晰)02What makes perfect writing?How?More examples:（一）用于“開(kāi)始”詞匯有：Firstly, first of all, in the first place, above all, to begin with(二) 表示“遞進(jìn)”：besides, in addition, whats

10、 more, moreover, furthermore, meanwhile, last but not least, lastly, finallyPoor vocabulary and sentence patterns!Problems?題型示例2 問(wèn)題描述：語(yǔ)言平淡，缺乏亮點(diǎn)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作得分得分低的寫(xiě)作特點(diǎn)：1.缺乏承上啟下的詞語(yǔ)和句子2.僅使用簡(jiǎn)單的詞或短語(yǔ) 3.句式單一，不會(huì)使用從句、非謂語(yǔ)、倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)等句型。Advanced language (語(yǔ)言高級(jí))03What makes perfect writing?How?策略1多用高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，少用普通表達(dá)方式釋義普通表達(dá)高級(jí)表

11、達(dá)能夠做be able to dobe capable of doing習(xí)慣于be used tobe accustomed to實(shí)際上actuallyas a matter of fact喜歡like, love, enjoyhave a taste for, be fond of, be crazy about策略1多用高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，少用普通表達(dá)方式釋義普通表達(dá)高級(jí)表達(dá)得到getobtain, acquire重要，要緊importantmatter, count, essential, significant, vital,crucial決定做decide to dobe determin

12、ed to do相信believe that-hold the firm belief that-,be convinced that-The film Ne Zha is popular among people.It makes people more interested in Chinese culture. The film Ne Zha, _, makes people more interested in Chinese culture.The film Ne Zha is popular among people, _ people more interested in Chi

13、nese culture.which is popular among peoplemaking策略2：用高級(jí)句型Change into relative clause定語(yǔ)從句. Change into non-finite verbs非謂語(yǔ). Many doctors made great efforts to fight the disease.Their action really touched me._ really touched me _ _ many doctors made great efforts to fight the disease._ _ many doctors

14、 _ _ to fight the disease _ touched me.great efforts It is was thatWhatthat Change into noun clause名詞性從句. Change into emphatic sentence強(qiáng)調(diào)句. Advanced sentence patternsEveryone should attach great importance to garbage classification. Then our society will be cleaner.Everyone should attach great impor

15、tance to garbage classification _ _our society will be cleaner._ _ everyone attach great importance to garbage classification _ our society be cleaner.so thatOnly ifwillChange into adverbial clause狀語(yǔ)從句. Change into inverted sentence倒裝句. Advanced sentence patternsWays to get advanced sentence pattern

16、sRelative clause 定語(yǔ)從句Noun clause 名詞性從句Adverbial clause 狀語(yǔ)從句Non-finite verbs非謂語(yǔ)Inverted sentence倒裝句Emphatic sentence 強(qiáng)調(diào)句.Summary:Tip: As we only need to write about 80 words, two or three advanced sentences will be enough. 假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國(guó)朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問(wèn)有關(guān)習(xí)俗，請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.到達(dá)時(shí)間；2.合適的禮物；3.餐桌禮儀。 An

17、alyses:Style:A letter of replyParagraphs: 3三、即時(shí)鞏固Paragraph 1: Background+purpose你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國(guó)朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問(wèn)有關(guān)習(xí)俗+回復(fù)相關(guān)信息 In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest toa Chinese friends home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevantdetails.Paragraph 2:郵件內(nèi)容包括：1.到達(dá)時(shí)間；2.合適的禮物；3.餐桌禮儀。 M

18、ain points: Conjunctions: Advanced sentence patterns:1.到達(dá)時(shí)間；2.合適的禮物；3.餐桌禮儀。 to begin with, besides, whats more定語(yǔ)從句；狀語(yǔ)從句；非謂語(yǔ) To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arriveearly, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningfuland interesting. Besides, youd better bring some gifts, like a book or aChinese knot. Whats more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoidmaking noises while chewing food.Last paragraph:Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have theconfidence that you will have a great time.祝愿或期望One p