【英語寫作技巧】Unit+4+essay(I)課件

1、【英語寫作技巧】Unit+4+essay(I)【英語寫作技巧】Unit+4+essay(I)AssignmentSome intensive English Programs in the United States offers a foreign student the options of living with an American family while he or she is studying abroad. Many students feel that such a home-stay program is a valuable part of their local l

2、earning experience. However, others may feel that such a plan is of little value. In a short essay, discuss one or two advantages of living with an American family and then state one or two disadvantages. Tell whether you are in favor of or opposed to the idea of home-stay. Give examples to support

3、your opinion.AssignmentSome intensive Engli 1.A foreign student studying in America is wise to live with an American family because when a foreign student came to the United States he must make many important adjustment. A foreign student must change to survive in his new environment. A foreign stud

4、ent also learns how to take on responsibilities concerning his new family, he adopts to their American lifestyle as they adopt to his. It is a learning experience on both parts.You have an advantage when living with an American family, because they would learn the American ways and customs better wi

5、th an American family than if they would live with his own homeboy. The American family becomes a second family to the foreign student. At times a foreign student may get homesick; but having a trustworthy second family can give him the security and acceptance he needs. He is probably used to having

6、 a family around him, so he will feel safe if he lives with an American family. Then he must consider that he will be in a stranger place. Everything will be new to you.His American family can help him learn his way around. So foreign student is smart to live with an American family.The American fam

7、ily becomes a 2.A foreign student studying in the United States often has an opportunity to live with an American family. There may be one or two disadvantages to this living arrangement; however, I believe there are far more advantages.First of all, some minor disadvantages to living with an Americ

8、an family include lack of privacy and little opportunity to have independence. For instance, the foreign student may find that the family expects him to join them in group activities such as watching TV and going on picnics. At times, however, he might enjoy staying in his room to read or write lett

9、ers to his family and friends. Another drawback to live in an American home involves the possibility that the family may treat the student like a child.2.A foreign student studying iEven though there may be one or two disadvantages to living with an American family, the advantages far outweigh them.

10、 By taking part in a home stay program, the student has an excellent opportunity to learn about American customs. He will find out how to behave in different social situations such as parties and ceremonies and how to dress these occasions. Another advantage to living with an American family is that

11、 the student is in an ideal environment to improve his English. For example, each time he has a conversation with someone in the family, this native speaker can help him with his pronunciation and grammar. The most important thing is that he will be surround by English most of the time during his st

12、ay in the United States.Even though there may be one oAlthough I agree that there may be a couple of disadvantages to living with an American family, I feel that the advantages are more obvious. In a home-stay program, the student can learn about American customs in the most natural way possible. In

13、 addition, he will find himself in an atmosphere in which his English will certainly improve. In my opinion, these are two most important goals for him to consider, and living with an American family is the best way to achieve them.Although I agree that there ma1. another reason is students are like

14、ly to generate unhappy experiences with their hosters as the differences in culture and habits.2. in present-day society, students in our country go abroad for a further education and face the issue whether live with one of the local families or just stay in the dormitory.3. they not only cant get t

15、he chance to learn but also waste their own time.4. in my opinion, I am in favor of opposing this idea.5. I consider that home-stay is a fantastic way to learn a countrys language and culture, which can help you melt in the new surroundings soon.6. consider things as their way is the first step into

16、 the country.1. another reason is students ReviewThe right choice of words The effective sentencesThe complete paragraphsThe audience-oriented writingReviewStep 1 Have a strong idea/argument/thesis/point of view /themeWhat really interests you?Brainstorm- Jot down your own opinions even though you t

17、hink they arent “what the teacher expects”.- Discard ideas that do not excite you.- Of the remaining ideas, pick the one you know the most or feel most strongly about.Step 1 Step 2Is the idea too general? Do you need to narrow it down? Which do you understand and feel strongly about? Choose from amo

18、ng those for your purpose/argument/main idea your theme.Step 2Step 3Imagine your audience the people to whom it might be fun or necessary to tell your idea. Write as if you were writing to those people or that person. Step 3Step 4 Think about explaining things in such a way that your imagined reader

19、 would understand and that would hold their interest. Remember your reader your audience as you think about and jot down notes about the following:Step 4 Introduction:What background or setting information is needed to introduce your audience to your theme? Body:Whats the “plot”? What events are imp

20、ortant to relate to your audience? Remember your main idea your purpose your theme.Conclusion:How can you state or restate your theme in such a way that your audience will be able to grasp your point? The conclusion should NOT repeat exactly what you said before.Introduction:Organizing The EssayIntr

21、oductory ParagraphBody Paragraph #1Body Paragraph #2Body Paragraph #3Concluding Paragraph Organizing The EssayIntroductRespected VOA producers: I am a Chinese student. I have been learning English for 6 years. I like English and I like to listen to VOA. In the morning, I get up at 6 oclock and liste

22、n to VOA programs. I have stuck to this habit for a long time. But I dont have a timetable and I often miss my favorite programs. So I ask for a timetable.Respected VOA producers:Dear Sirs, I wish you could send me a timetable of VOA. Im a college student in China. I listen to VOA every day. But I d

23、ont know the exact time of the program. Thats why I make this request. And your help will be appreciated.Dear Sirs,The Introduction Paragraphopens with a very general statement about the topic often followed by some supporting examples then finishes with a narrow statement about the topic-main thesi

24、s. (The main thesis functions like the topic sentence of the basic paragraph. It is the most important sentence of the essay. )The Introduction ParagraphopenUse of topic sentenceNow people become increasingly aware of the importance of acquiring a mastery of a foreign language. To them, the knowledg

25、e of a foreign language, say, English, often means a good opportunity for ones career, even a passport to a prosperous future. Many of them equate success in life with the ability of speaking a foreign language.Use of topic sentenceUse of a quotation“Great minds must be ready not only to take the op

26、portunity, but to make them.” Colton, a great writer once remarked. But it still has a profound significance now. To a person, in whose lifetime opportunities are not many, to make opportunities is more essential to his success.Use of a quotationAsking a questionWhat do you want from your work? Mone

27、y? Promotion? Interesting challenges? Continual learning? Work-based friendship? The opportunity to develop your own idea and potentials? Though we are all individuals and so our answers will differ, all agree that work provides more than material things.Asking a questionOffering relevant background

28、It was reported in the newspaper that a student killed four of his classmates just because of a trivial matter. It can be easily seen that pressure has become a serious issue we cannot neglect.Offering relevant backgroundThroughout human history, the physical universe has often presented dangers to

29、explorers. For example, when primitive humans left their tribal villages to search for food and water, they risked death or injury from dangerous animals. Later, when people sailed the oceans in search of new lands for settlement or trade, many died in terrible storms. Similarly, the ocean of outer

30、space has many dangers, but it also has several unique challenges for explorers. Throughout human history, the The Body Paragraphs The body portion of the essay is the largest portion. Typically, it has three paragraphs, but it might have two paragraphs and of course it can have many more than three

31、. Each of these paragraphs usually has a topic sentence and several supporting sentences, just like the basic paragraph we have studied. The Body Paragraphs The bodyAn Example of Three Body Paragraphs One of the challenges that is unique to space is the fact that space is a vacuum, which is a risk f

32、or various reasons. First, in a vacuum there is no atmosphere and therefore no air pressure. Without air pressure, the human body has no oxygen to sustain itself. After too many minutes without oxygen, a person would lose consciousness and eventually die. Also, in a vacuum a persons blood will gradu

33、ally begin to boil. Finally, without an atmosphere, the rays of the Sun can cause radiation poisoning. An Example of Three Body Parag Another difficulty that is unique to outer space is the presence of meteors and micrometeors. These are pieces of rock and metal that are left over from the formation

34、 of the solar system. Many of these objects travel at very high speeds. Under the Earths blanket of air, people are usually protected from meteor impacts. However, in space, people and spaceships are vulnerable to collisions with meteors. It is true that the chance of meteor impacts is relatively sm

35、all, but if even a small micrometeor happens to collide with a spacecraft, it could cause serious damage. Another difficulty th A third special challenge involved with the environment of space involves the fact that it is very difficult to find life-sustaining water off the Earth. For example, the p

36、lanet Mercury, which is closest to the Sun, is too hot to have water, so space travelers must take water from Earth if they want to visit Mercury. A similar situation exists on the planet Venus, second from the Sun. This planet is likewise too hot for water to exist. Similarly, the fourth planet, Ma

37、rs, is too cold and dry, although there may be some water frozen at the north and south poles of the planet. A third special cStructure Analysis the main thesis statement of this essay - Similarly, the ocean of outer space has many dangers, but it also has several unique challenges for explorers.The

38、 first body paragraph discusses the dangers of space vacuum.The second body paragraph gives information about meteors.The third paragraph mentions the fact that water is very difficult to find on other planets. Structure Analysis the mainThe concluding paragraph There are other difficulties involved

39、 with space exploration, but these are three of the most important ones. In summary, without adequate air pressure, the unprotected human body may be seriously harmed in a vacuum. In addition, meteors can threaten human life and damage spacecraft. Finally, the lack of water in space means that human

40、 life may have a difficult time surviving on other planets. As one can see, the challenges of space travel are rather different from terrestrial dangers. The concluding paragraph another example of a concluding paragraph: As mentioned above, the Earths natural environment has often presented dangers

41、 to explorers. Dangerous animals, vast oceans, and violent weather have presented risks to humans. However, the new frontier of outer space, with its vacuum, meteors, and lack of water, presents unique challenges to people who desire to explore it. another example of a concludin Admittedly, science

42、has created atomic bombs and produced pervasive pollution. But it has transformed the lives of millions of people. It has multiplied mans energy, hopes, ambitions and understanding. It has elevated and will continue to elevate man intellectually and spiritually. Admittedly, science has crIt is time that the government spoke out against corruption and took strong actions to punish whoever takes bribes or embezzles fund. For present official corruption, if permitted to continue, will not only tarnish the governments popularity, but lead to it