《書面表達》專題練習(xí)-完整版課件

1、English writing英語書面表達訓(xùn)練看到以下圖片你能想到哪些東西呢?請盡可能多的說出圖片中的信息。get up 6:30 AM Its six thirty in the morning. He is getting up.six thirty in the morninggo to school7:30 AM Its seven thirty in the morning.They are going to school.seven thirty in the morningplay basketball4:00 PMIts four oclock in the afternoon

2、. He is playing basketball.four oclock in the afternoonsing5:00PMIts five oclock in the afternoon.She is singing.five oclock in the afternoonread a book6:20 PM Its six twenty in the evening.She is reading a book.six twenty in the evening9:30 PMsleepIts nine thirty in the evening.She is sleeping.nine

3、 thirty in the evening8:00 PMbrother play computer games mother clean father runtalk on the phone sister do homeworkgrandparentswatch TV Its eight oclock in the evening .My brother is playing computer games .My mother is cleaning .My father is running. Im talking on the phone. My sister is doing her

4、 homework. My grandparents are watching TV. What a busy night! A busy night怎樣寫好圖片類短文呢？ 單幅圖。 多幅圖。多幅圖可能是按順序排列，也有可能是先排列、再寫作。單幅畫多幅畫 準備工作： 1 仔細審題，明確要求。 羅列信息，認真分析，審清題意。 列出要點（人物，時間，事件，地點等的單詞，短語）。 注意動詞的運用（確定好時態(tài)，語態(tài)）。 2 緊扣要點，尋求思路。 草擬提綱，確定開頭。 把剛才列出的單詞和短語擴展成句子。 擬好結(jié)尾，可適當發(fā)表自己觀點。 寫作中： 1 開門見山，緊扣主題。 如介紹自己筆友：I have a

5、 pen pal. 介紹自己的一天：I have a busy day. 2 語言正確，規(guī)范地道,避免使用中文式英語。 如：I very much love you. 3 標點符號規(guī)范，正確。 4 重短輕長，就易避難。以寫正確，通順為最基本要求。 5 過渡自然，表達流暢。 學(xué)會正確使用連詞，保持行文流暢。 注意不重復(fù)使用可置換的詞。 6 適當評論，發(fā)表己見。 如：How beautiful a day! How friendly they are! We have a good time today. 成文以后： 1 一般語法項目的檢查。 人稱:Lucy is my sister. He is

6、 12 years old .( She) 時態(tài):They go to the movies now.( are going) 主謂一致:Tom work with people and money. (works) 習(xí)慣用法:She wants go to the park. (wants to go) 2 注意語序。（中文和英文的順序不 一樣）寫出的句子要符合英語表達習(xí)慣。 I like with my sister play computer games. I like to play computer games with my sister. 3 書寫規(guī)范，謄寫整齊。收集信息，列出提

7、綱。開門見山，列出主題抓住主題，描寫細節(jié)發(fā)表主見，畫龍點睛結(jié)尾有力仔細檢查，認真謄寫。Now ,lets go! 假如你叫Lucy,請 給你的筆友Tom寫一封信，向他介紹一下這張照片。字數(shù)50詞左右， 注意書信的格式。 書寫展示 要改進嗎？為什么？Dear Tom: Thanks for your letter and the photos. Here is my family photo . Look ,my mother is drinking some water .My father is washing the car .My brother Jim is drawing .I am

8、 doing my homework . Can you see the cat in the tree？ Its Mimi. He is running in the tree. Can you write to me soon ? yours Lucy Homework請根據(jù)以下圖片和提示寫一則故事。字數(shù)50詞左右。 The man is shopping in the store. He is taking some food. Then he goes to the bus stop.（公共汽車站）Look, he is waiting for(等候) a bus and he is reading a newspaper. Lisa and Tim see the man, They are talking to