湖南高考作文題-精講版課件

1、2007年湖南高考英語作文 假設你叫王平，李華是你的同窗好友，請根據(jù)下列要點，用英文給李華寫一篇畢業(yè)留言。 要點：1.簡要描述李華在你心目中的印象 2.用一到兩個相關事例進行具體描述 3.對李華表示美好的祝愿 試題分析： 2007年湖南高考英語作文與2006年相比，第一：題型變化不大,主要內容給出，但是還必須考生發(fā)揮具體事例第二：內容變化不大，去年是寫老師Mr. Moore，今年寫的是同窗好友李華，去年把描述老師的內容融入詩歌中間，需要同學們去提取，今年用漢字來描述要點。第三考試形式依然是 強調的應用文留言，留言其實跟書信，便條差不多。 寫作技巧Dear Li hua, 第一段:簡要描述李華在

2、你心目中的印象。即文章中心. 時態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時. 第二段:舉出你能夠想的出來的，最簡單的事例去證明第一段. 時態(tài):一般過去 時. 第三段:總結并給出你的祝福. 時態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在 時. Yours sincerely Wang ping 寫作技巧Dear Li hua, Of all my classmates, you ,the most considerate and warmhearted girl, are always ready to give your hand to everyone who needs to help.第一段寫第一個要點。即文章中心. 第二段舉出你能夠想的出來的，

3、最簡單的事例.時態(tài):一般過去 時 All in all, you are the fantastic girl who deserves all the beautiful prospects, such as studying in Beijing University. Finally wish you success and realize your dream! 第三段總結并給出你的祝福. Yours sincerely Wang ping 第二段的范文I clearly remember that last year our classmates Xiaomei suffered f

4、rom acute appendix at night. It is you who took her to the hospital in midnight as quickly as possible. In order not to disturb others you even didnt call up other classmates to accompany you. Until the next morning other classmates in our dormitory got to know the fact. And we knew that you didnt s

5、leep all the night to attend to Xiaomei. Moreover in our daily life, you always comfort the one who are in depression because of bad score or classmates relationship. So we would like to call you the sweet sister. Main mistakes1.He is the sense of humour. He has the strong sense of humour.2.You are

6、a very friendly people. You are a very friendly person/man/girl/boy.3.Look back on past,we are very excited. When we look back on/Looking back on the past (three years),we are very excited.4.He is very hard work study. He works hard /studies hard very much.5.teached/maked/seeed/meeted/hurted taught/

7、made/saw/met/hurt6.He will be graducation He will graducate/leave school.Main mistakes7.We study with each other everyday. We study with each other every day. e.g. in everyday life.8.In order to your future. In order to build up/cerate your beautiful future.9.Wish/hopeHope to do /hope that-clause.e.g.I hope that you will have a beautiful future.Wish to do /wish sb to do /wish that-clausee.g.I wish that you would have a beautiful future=I wish you to have a