人教版九年級英語unit7寫作教程課件

1、 Unit7 Should Students Bring a Mobile Phone to School?寫作話題： School life（學(xué)校生活）Learning objectives1.能運(yùn)用本單元所學(xué)的與規(guī)則有關(guān)的單詞、短語和句子表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)和轉(zhuǎn)述他人的觀點(diǎn)。2. 表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，能提出有力的論據(jù)。同時(shí)也能虛心聽取不同于自己的意見和建議。3. 讓學(xué)生明白接受父母、老師的合理化建議對他們成長的重要性。書信 書信是一種應(yīng)用非常廣泛的應(yīng)用文形式之一。英文書信的種類很多，但可以把它們歸為兩大類，一類是私人書信（personal letters），另一類是商務(wù)書信（business le

2、tters），例如：申請信、求職信、推薦信、證明信、感謝信等。英文書信的書寫有一定的格式。一封完整的書信應(yīng)包括寄信人的地址和日期；收信人的姓名和地址；稱呼、正文、結(jié)尾和簽名Pre-writing Writing guidelines(寫作方法指導(dǎo))書信題的寫作方法：（一）信封格式： 名字、信箱、地域范圍由小到大，寫在右下角（與我們相反）。（二）信紙格式： 日期：本月份的縮寫 稱呼（后面的標(biāo)點(diǎn)是逗號,冒號）:Dear Sir or Madam, To whom it may concern, 正文：空4個(gè)字節(jié)或者頂格寫，段與段之間空行） 簽名：sincerely yours書信寫作的五點(diǎn)要求：1

3、、開門見山說意圖2、咨詢/ 建議1、2、3、3、不同內(nèi)容可分段4、感謝客氣不可少5、期待回信成老套Language box（語言工具箱） 1Unit topic languages（單元話題語言）(1) Chunks（詞塊）動詞詞塊: send messages with phones spend too much time doing sth, get in touch with be interested in cheat in exams depend on介詞詞塊: during the class Whats more連詞詞塊: rather than first of all no

4、tuntilQuiz: Read aloud the chunks above and try to match the meaning by numbering. 動詞詞塊：( )對感興趣 ( )花費(fèi)太多時(shí)間做某事 ( )用手機(jī)發(fā)信息( )與某人取得聯(lián)系 ( )依靠，依賴( ) 考試作弊 介詞詞塊( )而且( )在課堂上連詞詞塊( ) 首先 ( )而不是 ( ) 直到才（2）Patterns（句型）I dont agree that;I think it is good to doIt is necessary for sb to do sth; Its easy for sb to do

5、sth; 2. Extensive languages（拓展性語言）Famous saying，proverbs, aphorisms and Classical sample sentences（名言、諺語、警句與經(jīng)典例句）(1). A nation has its rule and a family also has one! 國有國法，家有家規(guī)！ (2). Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards. 沒有規(guī)矩不成方圓。 (3). Everyone is expected to stick to the rules. 每個(gè)

6、人都要遵守規(guī)則。 (4). Keep to the rules, and nothing can go wrong. 按規(guī)矩辦事情就不會出差子。 (5). Rules are meant to be followed, not broken. 規(guī)則制訂出來是讓人遵守，而不是讓人破壞。 Xiaoze - A studentMiss Gao -A MotherInterviewShould Students Bring a Mobile Phone to School？who?A teacher- Miss Cao 3 different people3 different opinions Sh

7、ould Students Bring a Mobile Phone to School？whoideareasonteacherdisagreesThe students often 1. with phones during the class.They spend too much time 2. on the phone rather than do homework. 3. agreesIt is esay for the parents to4 . with children. Students can use phones to5. at once when they get h

8、urt by accident. student depends It is good to help our study or talk with parents.Using them to 6. or to play too much games is too bad.Listen and fill in the chart 聽取信息Should Students Bring a Mobile Phone to School？whoideareasonteacherdisagreesThe students often 1. with phones during the class.The

9、y spend too much time 2. on the phone rather than do homework. 3. agreesIt is esay for the parents to4 . with children. Students can use phones to5. at once when they get hurt by accident. student depends It is good to help our study or talk with parents.Using them to 6. or to play too much games is

10、 too bad.Listen and fill in the chart 聽取信息send messageplaying gamesget in touch ask for help cheat in exammotherRead and find ! 讀聽力材料，找出以下詞句。(1).結(jié)果狀語從句(2).條件狀語從句(3).賓語從句 (4).時(shí)間狀語從句(5).it作形式主語 (6).動名詞作主語(7).表示條理順序的過渡詞：Students are so interested in games on mobile phones that they have no time to stud

11、y.I dont think its a good idea to bring mobile phones to school.If they have trouble, they can use the mobile phones to ask for help.Students must give their mobile phones when they get to school.Its not good to use mobile phones too long.Cheating in exams with mobile phones is forbidden.besides , w

12、hats more, in addition to 如今，越來越多的中學(xué)生擁有手機(jī), 就學(xué)生是否可帶手機(jī)來學(xué)校，你校在社會上做了調(diào)查，以下是調(diào)查結(jié)果。請給雜志社編輯寫封信，描述此報(bào)告結(jié)果。呼吁社會對此給予足夠的關(guān)注。writing要求： 1.語言準(zhǔn)確得當(dāng)，語句連貫，符合邏輯，內(nèi)容包括表格所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象。2. 詞數(shù)在80個(gè)左右。作文的標(biāo)題，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。whoideareasons老師不同意上課發(fā)信息，玩游戲，考試作弊，。父母同意家長易于與孩子聯(lián)系，意外受傷時(shí)方便求助我認(rèn)為 自擬Interview your group mates.Report their ideas a

13、nd say out your own ideas.Step 1 Step2 Think and Fill（想一想，填一填）審題體裁：_人稱：_時(shí)態(tài)：_第一人稱 ，第三人稱結(jié)合一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用文 Beginning :用一句話去過渡到圖表內(nèi)容。 Body:圖表內(nèi)容 (1.老師看法 2.母親看法3.說明個(gè)人看法,并號召大家) Ending: 2.確定文章體裁人稱和時(shí)態(tài)中心主題句過渡詞結(jié)尾句1.擬提綱3. 注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號、大小寫；保持書寫工整清楚。呼吁社會關(guān)注此事Step 3 列一列自我檢測，精 益 求 精修正角度：人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、字?jǐn)?shù)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號、字母大小寫、要點(diǎn)句子完整、詞法語法請和同伴交換習(xí)作，依據(jù)

14、以上提示和下列評價(jià)表，相互欣賞與修改習(xí)作，然后給對方的習(xí)作打分。 同伴互賞我欣賞，我快樂！修改習(xí)作時(shí)可使用這些符號： 優(yōu)美句子； 漏詞；錯處：； 刪除；語法錯誤 G ； 人稱錯誤 P；時(shí)態(tài)錯誤 T； 拼寫錯誤Sp 項(xiàng)目標(biāo)準(zhǔn)自我評價(jià)同伴評價(jià)教師評價(jià)結(jié)構(gòu)（3分）段落合理 （2 分）銜接自然 (1分)內(nèi)容（8分）要點(diǎn)1:老師的意見2分）要點(diǎn)2:家長的意見（2分）要點(diǎn)3：自己的見解 （2分）拓展合理 (2分)語言（3分）詞匯豐富 (1分)句法正確 ，語言優(yōu)美( 2分)卷面（1分）書寫工整（ 1分）評分表Show Time Should Students Bring a Mobile Phone to

15、School?Dear Sir or Madam， As we all know mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. We do a survey about whether students should bring mobile phones to school. Most teachers think students should pay more attention to their study. If students bring mobile phon

16、es to school, theyll play games during the class, send messages, even cheat in exams with mobile phones. Its so terrible! However, parents have different ideas. They would like their children to bring mobile phones when they go to school. Parents think its convenient to get in touch with children. A

17、lso, if the children are in trouble, they can ask for help with phones. I am a student. As for me , although I want to bring the mobile phones with myself, I do not do that. I cant control myself well. Meanwhile, its not safe to do like that, after all, mobile phones are expensive. Dear sir or madam

18、, I really hope it can be put in the newspaper to make people know the disadvantages about bringing phones to school. Sincerely yours, Tom 文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清楚，要點(diǎn)齊全，格式正確。文章主體部分?jǐn)⑹銮逦?，運(yùn)用多種從句。連接詞多樣化，層次感分明。其中even, also, as for me, although 等詞能夠抓到讀者的眼球。最后結(jié)尾部分提出了自己的愿望，表達(dá)了自己的感受 Should Students Bring a Mobile Phone t

19、o School?Dear Sir or Madam， As we all know mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. We do a survey about whether students should bring mobile phones to school. Different people have different ideas. Most teachers dont allow students to bring mobile phones to

20、 school. If they bring phones to school, they cant focus on study. They maybe send messages with phones. Playing games on the phones and cheating in exams with phones are too bad for students. But parents hope students should bring phones with themselves. Its not only easy for parents to make sure w

21、here their kids are, but also students can get help with the phones. I have the same idea with teachers. Whats more, its not safe to bring phones to school. How to make it perfect? I think we should have a g00d discussion. After all ,nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards. Sincerely

22、Yours. Tom 【點(diǎn)評】本文思路清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，內(nèi)容簡明扼要。文章主體開頭句就說明Different people have different ideas.然后分別介紹各自觀點(diǎn)。動名詞做主語也是本文亮點(diǎn)。最后Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.（沒有規(guī)矩，不成方圓。）引出文章結(jié)尾。Everything has his advantages and disadvantages.Use it in the right way. Everything has his advantages and disadvantag

23、es.Use the mobile phone in the right way. HomeworkCheck and rewrite 二次修正 重寫作文 ByebyeListeningReading material Is it good for students to bring phones to school? It has been discussed all over the country. Here are some of their opinions:Miss Cao (a teacher from No.2 Middle School)As a teacher, I dont agree that the students should bring a mobile phone to school. Firstly, They often send messages with phones during the class or sometimes when they are having a test! Secondly, many students are so interested in playing games that