2022-2023學(xué)年新教材高中英語Unit4NaturalDisastersSectionⅣReadingforWriting學(xué)案新人教版必修第一冊

1、PAGE PAGE 17Section Reading for Writing每/日/金/句：It is always calm before a storm.暴風(fēng)雨前總是風(fēng)平浪靜。精讀課文疏通理解障礙讀文清障crash kr vt. & vi.碰撞；撞擊n.撞車；碰撞crash into撞倒；沖入sweep away消滅；徹底消除sweepswip vt. & vi.(swept, swept)打掃；清掃wave wev n海浪；波浪vi. & vt.揮手；招手huge waves巨浪strikestrak vi.& vt. (struck, struck/stricken)侵襲；突擊；擊打

2、 n罷工；罷課；襲擊off prep.離，距離some adv.(about)大約；約莫stand at達(dá)到特定水平(或數(shù)量、高度等)affect vt.影響；(疾病侵襲)；深深打動official n官員 adj.官方的；正式的government officials政府官員missing adj.(lost)失蹤的local adj.當(dāng)?shù)氐?n當(dāng)?shù)厝藄afety n安全處所expect vt.預(yù)計，預(yù)料even adv.更(程度副詞)常用的修飾比較級的程度副詞、短語還有still, far, any, much, a lot等。deliverdlv(r) vt. & vi.遞送；傳達(dá) vt

3、.發(fā)表 原文呈現(xiàn)The Daily NewsTSUNAMI HITS ASIA：OVER 6，500 DEADBy Robert Woodhouse Monday, 27 December 2004The most powerful earthquake in the past 40 years caused a tsunami that crashed into coastlines across Asia1 yesterday, killing more than 6, 500 people in Indonesia, India, Thailand, Malaysia, and at l

4、east four other countries2. Fishermen, tourists, hotels, homes, and cars were swept away by huge waves caused by the strong earthquake that reached a magnitude of 9.03. The undersea quake struck around 7：00 am., Sunday off the west coast of Indonesias Sumatra Island. In that area alone, at least 1，8

5、70 people were killed.1此處是關(guān)系代詞that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，修飾tsunami。that在從句中作主語。2此處是現(xiàn)在分詞短語作結(jié)果狀語。3此處是過去分詞短語作后置定語，修飾waves，該結(jié)構(gòu)中that引導(dǎo)的定語從句修飾先行詞earthquake。In Sri Lanka, some 1，600 kilometres west of the quake centre, the number of deaths stood at 2，498, and one million more were affected by the tsunami, government offi

6、cials said. Indian officials said as many as 1，900 had been killed along the southern coast. Another 254 were found dead in Thailand and 54 in three other countries4. In southern Thailand, 1，900 people were hurt and many more were missing， local officials said. “I was having breakfast with my three

7、children when water started filling my home5. We had to leave everything and run to safety，” said Chandra Theeravit, a local Thai woman.4此處dead in Thailand為主語Another 254的補(bǔ)足語；54 in three other countries為省略句，補(bǔ)全為54 were found dead in three other countries。5本句運用了“sb. be doing sth. when.”結(jié)構(gòu)，意為“某人正在做某事，這時

8、（突然）”Thousands of people are still missing, and the number of deaths is expected to grow even higher over the next few days. Foreign aid is being organised6 for the tsunamihit countries. However, dangerous conditions and damaged roads will make it difficult to deliver food and supplies7.6此處是現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時的被動

9、語態(tài)，其構(gòu)成是be being done。7在此結(jié)構(gòu)中，it是形式賓語，形容詞difficult作賓補(bǔ)，后面的不定式短語to deliver food and supplies是真正的賓語。課文翻譯每日新聞海嘯襲擊亞洲：6 500余人喪生羅伯特伍德豪斯供稿2004年12月27日，星期一昨日，40年來最強(qiáng)烈的地震引發(fā)的海嘯重創(chuàng)了亞洲沿海地帶，造成印度尼西亞、印度、泰國、馬來西亞和至少其他四個國家的6 500多人喪生。漁民、游客、酒店、住房和汽車都被9.0級強(qiáng)震引發(fā)的巨浪卷走了。這場海底地震發(fā)生在周日早上7點鐘左右，地點在印度尼西亞蘇門答臘島西海岸。僅該地區(qū)就有至少1 870人喪生。政府官員稱，在

10、斯里蘭卡，震中以西約1 600千米處，死亡人數(shù)高達(dá)2 498人，另有100多萬人受到海嘯的影響。印度官員稱，南部海岸地區(qū)有多達(dá)1 900人喪生。泰國另有254人喪生，其他三個國家有54人喪生。當(dāng)?shù)毓賳T表示，泰國南部有1 900人受傷，失蹤人數(shù)則更多。泰國當(dāng)?shù)氐囊晃粙D女錢德拉特拉維說：“當(dāng)時我和我的三個孩子正在吃早餐，海水開始灌入我的家里。我們只好扔下一切，跑到安全地帶。”仍有成千上萬人失蹤，預(yù)計未來幾天死亡人數(shù)還將增加。目前人們正在為這些受災(zāi)國家組織國外援助。然而，險惡的條件和受損的道路將使運送食品和物資變得困難。對接寫作體現(xiàn)學(xué)以致用目標(biāo)一 宏觀理解構(gòu)建模板1.Read the news re

11、port and find out the key points of it.（time place events cause effect following events）_2Read the report again and write down the main idea of each paragraph._3Read the summary of the news report on P55 and find out what is cut out in the summary._4According to the news report and its summary，we ca

12、n write a summary of a news report like this.（寫作模板）On （時間）.，（事件）.happened in （地點）.It caused （后果）.And.is expected to happen（后續(xù)）.目標(biāo)二 寫作要領(lǐng)技法指導(dǎo)本單元的寫作任務(wù)是為新聞報道（記敘文）寫概要。文體感知概要寫作是一種要求閱讀和寫作并重的英語高考題型，有準(zhǔn)確性、完整性、概括性、客觀性和個體性等特點。概要寫作提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的短文，要求考生在對原文閱讀后，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。概要所用詞句既要用詞準(zhǔn)確、結(jié)構(gòu)合理、語意連貫、不得抄襲原文，又要能完全概括

13、出文章的中心大意。注意事項1詞數(shù)要限制在60詞左右，上下限不得超出十個單詞。2要根據(jù)文章的題材特點進(jìn)行概要寫作。3人稱和時態(tài)要與所給文章中的人稱和時態(tài)保持一致，但必要時也可以轉(zhuǎn)變成為第三人稱。4寫作時盡可能地使用復(fù)合句，必要時可轉(zhuǎn)換詞性，不得完全照抄照搬原文。5進(jìn)行概要寫作時，一定不要加入自己的觀點并對原文加以評論；一定不要引入與原文內(nèi)容無關(guān)的信息。寫作步驟1確定體裁，明確主題及結(jié)構(gòu)體裁結(jié)構(gòu)記敘文記敘文：人物、時間、地點、事件（起因發(fā)展結(jié)果）夾敘夾議文：六要素寓意/啟示說明文事物的性質(zhì)功能類：對象性質(zhì)功能問題/現(xiàn)象解決方法類： 現(xiàn)象原因結(jié)果議論文論點論據(jù)結(jié)論2.確定主題句，找關(guān)鍵信息畫出每一段

14、的主題句，抓住關(guān)鍵信息，忽略次要信息。3改寫關(guān)鍵信息，得出要點使用意義相同或相近的單詞、短語或句式，或使用不同的句子結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)同樣的意思。如改變語態(tài)，肯定變否定等。4添加連接詞，使行文連貫要牢記各段落要點之間的邏輯關(guān)系和自然銜接，用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞連貫全文。 常用的關(guān)聯(lián)詞有： however，besides，in addition，therefore，instead 等等。話題詞匯extreme weather 極端天氣natural disasters 自然災(zāi)害make a difference 有影響， 有關(guān)系and so on 等等； 諸如此類 millions of 數(shù)百萬的 countle

15、ss 無數(shù)的； 數(shù)不盡的damage 毀壞cut down 削減； 砍倒plenty of 足夠的； 大量的 protect 保護(hù)常用句式1描寫某事物的性質(zhì)功能。即“對象性質(zhì)功能利弊”： （In the passage ）The writer introduces. to us, especially its. , from which we know.2針對某個問題提出解決方法或措施。即“問題解決方法”： The passage tells us. So the author tells us how to. including.3介紹某現(xiàn)象及其原因、結(jié)果。即“現(xiàn)象原因結(jié)果”： The au

16、thor talks about. It is caused by. As a result（Consequently）.目標(biāo)三 寫作實踐分步演練【寫作要求】請閱讀下面短文寫一篇60詞左右的概要。The earthquake that hit San Francisco on April 18, 1906 shook down hundreds of thousands of dollars worth of walls and chimneys （煙囪）. But the fire that followed burned up hundreds of millions of dollars

17、 worth of buildings and homes. Never before in history has a city been so completely destroyed. San Francisco is gone. The factories, the great stores and newspaper buildings, the hotels, and the great houses of the rich are all gone. On Wednesday morning at a quarter past five came the earthquake.

18、A moment later, the disaster was a fact. South of Market Street, in the workingclass neighborhoods and in the factories, fires started. Within an hour after the earthquake, the smoke of San Franciscos fires could be seen 100 miles away. The sun was red in the dark sky. There was no stopping the fire

19、s. The firefighters to whom the task was given did their best but there was no way to organize or communicate. The railway tracks were now useless. And the great pipes for carrying water under the streets had burst. All of the ways man had made to keep the city safe were gone in the thirty seconds t

20、he earth moved.By Wednesday afternoon, half of the heart of the city was gone. At that time, I watched the disaster from a ship on the bay （海灣）. Out at sea it was calm. No wind came up. Yet from every directioneast, west, north, and southstrong winds blew upon the unlucky city and those whose homes

21、had once stood in its green hills.Wednesday night saw the destruction of the very heart of the city. Man himself had to make ruins of some of the citys best buildings so that they would not be a danger to those in the streets. Tens of thousands who had lost their homes left the city to look for shel

22、ter from the fire. Some were dressed only in blankets and carried the things that they had been able to rescue from the fires. But there were no fights and no pushing or shoving. Somehow this worst of disasters brought out the best in the survivors. Never in all of San Franciscos history were her pe

23、ople so kind as on that terrible night. 第一步布局謀篇第二步遣詞造句1一場大地震在1906年4月18日襲擊了舊金山。_2這場地震使這座城市被完全破壞。（leave）_3當(dāng)夜晚降臨的時候， 無家可歸的人們看到了可怕的破壞。（destruction）_4無家可歸的人們逃離這座城市尋找住處。_第三步句式升級5用現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語連接句1、句2。_6用現(xiàn)在分詞作時間狀語連接句3、句4。_第四步完美成篇用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇英語短文。_自查語基落實基本知能.核心詞匯根據(jù)語境寫出正確的單詞1. have enough有足夠的供給

24、2. be destroyed by the 被臺風(fēng)破壞3. be damaged by the 被颶風(fēng)損壞4. tap on a 敲打管道5. stay 保持冷靜6air 飛機(jī)失事7. huge 巨浪8. take strike 采取罷工行動 9 food 運送食物.拓展詞匯根據(jù)語境寫出相應(yīng)的派生詞1 at any time 隨時可能爆發(fā)a sudden （n.） 一起突然的爆發(fā)2 the earthquake 在地震中幸存下來the only （n.） 唯一的幸存者h(yuǎn)ave a chance of （n.）有一個存活的機(jī)會3 lines 電線a （adj.） country 一個強(qiáng)大國家4

25、an number 緊急電話號碼some （adj.） events 一些突發(fā)事件.重點短語1 露天； 在戶外 2 急救箱 3 現(xiàn)有（尤指幫助） 4 消滅； 徹底消除 5 多達(dá)6. stay away from 7. make sure 8. in danger .重點句型1句型be doing sth. when.正在做某事這時教材I with my three children water started filling my home.當(dāng)時我和我的三個孩子正在吃早餐， 海水開始灌入我的家里。2句型make it adj. to do sth.教材However, dangerous co

26、nditions and damaged roads will_ food and supplies.然而，險惡的條件和受損的道路將使運送食品和物資變得困難。3句型過去分詞作定語教材Fishermen, tourists, hotels, homes and cars were swept away by huge waves_that reached a magnitude of 9.0.漁民、游客、酒店、住房和汽車都被9.0級強(qiáng)震引發(fā)的巨浪卷走了。探究新知發(fā)展語言知識1（教材P53）Go to an open space away from buildings, trees, or pow

27、er lines.去一個遠(yuǎn)離建筑物、樹木或電線的開闊區(qū)域。powern電力供應(yīng)；能量；力量；控制力（1）come to power 上臺；執(zhí)政（動作）be in power 執(zhí)政；掌權(quán)（狀態(tài)）beyond ones power 超出某人的能力范圍do everything in/within ones power to do sth. 盡某人所能做某事（2）powerful adj. 強(qiáng)有力的佳句As is known to us, knowledge is power.眾所周知，知識就是力量。練通單句語法填空 As your closest friend, I will do everyth

28、ing in my power （help） you.We use words every day but not all of us realize their（power） influence. 寫美一句多譯他上臺執(zhí)政已經(jīng)5年了。It has been five years since he_He _ for five years. 2（教材P53）Stay calm.保持冷靜。calm adj.鎮(zhèn)靜的；沉著的vt. 使平靜；使鎮(zhèn)靜（1）calm down 平靜下來calm sb. down 使某人鎮(zhèn)定下來（2）keep calm 保持鎮(zhèn)靜（3）calmly 冷靜地；平靜地佳句The de

29、ep, gentle voice helped calm the nervous girl. 深沉而又溫柔的嗓音使這個緊張的女孩冷靜下來。練通單句語法填空To solve the problem, parents should learn to calm The last thing I saw was Dons face, looking （calm） back at me.寫美應(yīng)用文佳句我們應(yīng)該保持冷靜， 盡力拯救我們自己， 并幫助別人。 and try to save ourselves and help others.3（教材P53）first aid kit急救藥箱aidn援助；幫助

30、；救援物資vi. & vt.幫助；援助（1）give first aid to sb. 對某人急救with the aid of. 在的幫助下come to ones aid 幫助某人 eq blc rc(avs4alco1(（2）aid sb. in doing sth.,aid sb. with sth.,aid sb.to do sth.) 幫助某人做某事佳句With the aid of our teachers, we learned how to do first aid.在我們老師的幫助下，我們學(xué)會了如何進(jìn)行急救。練通單句語法填空/補(bǔ)全句子Id be very grateful

31、if you could aid me my English.He is so kind a boy that he often aids his mother（clean） the house.I couldnt speak French but a kind man（幫助了我）.寫美應(yīng)用文佳句在我的英語老師的幫助下，我這學(xué)期取得了很大的進(jìn)步。， I have made great progress this term.4（教材P54）The most powerful earthquake in the past 40 years caused a tsunami that crashed

32、 into coastlines across Asia yesterday.昨日，40年來最強(qiáng)烈的地震引發(fā)的海嘯襲擊了亞洲沿海地帶crashvi.& vt.碰撞；撞擊n（汽車的）撞車事故；（飛機(jī)的）失事；撞擊聲；碰撞（1）crash into/onto 撞到里/上（2）with a crash 轟隆一聲佳句His car crashed into a tree while he was driving in the snowstorm.當(dāng)他在暴風(fēng)雪中開車時， 他的車撞到了樹上。練通單句語法填空She fell heavily and （crash） her head against the

33、side of the boat.The tree fell a great crash all of a sudden.寫美應(yīng)用文佳句據(jù)報道許多旅客在空難中喪生了。It was reported that a lot of passengers _5（教材P54）Fishermen, tourists, hotels, homes, and cars were swept away by huge waves caused by the strong earthquake that reached a magnitude of 9.0.漁民、游客、酒店、住房和汽車都被9.0級強(qiáng)震引發(fā)的巨浪卷

34、走了。wave n海浪；波浪v揮手；招手；波動；起伏wave goodbye to sb. 向某人揮手告別 eq blc rc(avs4alco1(wave to/at sb.,give sb. a wave) 向某人揮手佳句She refused the offer with a wave of her hand.她擺擺手拒絕了這一提議。練通單句語法填空/補(bǔ)全句子The policeman waved the driver （stop）.我向他揮手告別，但他不理我。I ， but he ignored me.寫美一句多譯公共汽車開走時，他向我們揮了揮手。He _as the bus drov

35、e off.（wave v）He _as the bus drove off.（wave n）6（教材P54）The undersea quake struck around 7：00 am., Sunday off the west coast of Indonesias Sumatra Island.這場海底地震發(fā)生在周日早上7點鐘左右，地點在印度尼西亞蘇門答臘島西海岸。strikevi.& vt.（struck；struck/stricken）侵襲；突擊；擊打；打；撞（擊）；罷工；突然想到；打動，迷??；敲（鐘） n罷工；罷課；襲擊（1）It strikes/struck sb. that

36、. 某人突然想到be struck by 被打動/迷住了strike sb. 介詞the身體部位 打某人的某處（2）be on strike 在罷工go on strike 舉行罷工佳句I was deeply struck by the natural beauty of the Three Gorges.我被三峽的自然美景深深打動了。練通單句語法填空The boy fell, （strike）his head on the edge of the table.（撞）A terrible earthquake（strike） the northern part of Peru on May

37、26, 2019.（侵襲）Im sorry to learn from the Internet that your hometown （strike） by the tornado yesterday.Fortunately, a stone struck him on back, but didnt cause much injury to him.寫美應(yīng)用文佳句我突然想到，我應(yīng)該拜訪我的老師。 I should pay a visit to my teacher.7（教材P54）I was having breakfast with my three children when wate

38、r started filling my home.當(dāng)時，我和我的三個孩子正在吃早餐，海水開始灌入我的家里。句型公式：be doing sth. when.正在做某事，這時when在句中是并列連詞，表示“正在那時，這時”，常用句型還有：be about to do.when. 正要做，這時（突然）had just done.when. 剛做過，這時（突然）佳句One morning he was walking along the street when a stranger stopped him.有一天早晨， 他正沿著街道散步， 突然一個陌生人攔住了他。練通單句語法填空The young

39、man （deliver）those goods when it began to rain.The teenager was about to go to school he heard someone crying for help.寫美應(yīng)用文佳句我剛從廚房出來，就有人敲門。I someone knocked at the door.8（教材P54）However, dangerous conditions and damaged roads will make it difficult to deliver food and supplies.然而，險惡的條件和受損的道路將使運送食品和物

40、資變得困難。句型公式：makeitadj./n.（賓補(bǔ)）to do/that從句（1）在“makeitadj./n.（賓補(bǔ)）（for sb.）to do sth./that從句”結(jié)構(gòu)中，it作形式賓語，真正的賓語是后面的不定式或that從句；（2）可用于此結(jié)構(gòu)的動詞還有think, believe, find, consider, feel等。佳句The sun gives off light and heat, which makes it possible for plants to grow. 太陽發(fā)出光和熱，這使得植物生長成為可能。練通單句語法填空To make it easy （ge

41、t） in touch with us, youd better keep this card at hand.The new medicine makes possible to treat this terrible disease.寫美句型轉(zhuǎn)換You will find that it is very nice to take a walk in the early morning.You will in the early morning.deliver vt.& vi.遞送；傳達(dá)vt.發(fā)表（演說等）；接生（1）deliver a speech 發(fā)表演講/致辭deliver a bab

42、y 接生（2）delivery n. 投遞；送貨； 分娩，生孩子express delivery 快遞佳句The organization made every effort to deliver the medicines to the disaster area in time. 該組織盡一切努力及時將藥品送到災(zāi)區(qū)。練通單句語法填空The express company will get all these goods （deliver） to the customers today.Its a common sight to see food （deliver） workers ridi

43、ng electric bikes through big cities in China.寫美應(yīng)用文佳句大家早上好， 我很榮幸在這里發(fā)表演講與你們分享我的夢想。Good morning, everyone， here sharing my dream with you.9（教材P55）effect n影響；結(jié)果；效果（1）have an effect on/upon 對產(chǎn)生影響come into effect 生效 （2）effective adj. 有效的；有影響的effectively adv. 有效地；實際上佳句The new traffic law will come into ef

44、fect next month, which will have a great effect on our life. 新的交通規(guī)則將于下個月實施， 這將對我們的生活有巨大的影響。練通單句語法填空There is no doubt that reading books can have a good effect the children.Many poor families have got （effect） help from local government and have improved their life greatly.寫美詞匯升級Smoking is bad for yo

45、ur health, so youd better give it up.Smoking your health, so youd better give it up.Section Reading for Writing對接寫作體現(xiàn)學(xué)以致用目標(biāo)一1On 26 December 2004AsiaIndonesia，Malaysia，Sri Lanka，India and ThailandA tsunami hit Asia.An undersea earthquake.More than 6，500 deaths1，870；2，498；1，900；254；54.Thousands of peo

46、ple are missing; the number of deaths is growing./Rescue work is hard.2Para.1 The tsunami caused by an earthquake and its damage to Asia.Para.2 Detailed information of the damage in different countries.Para.3 Following events and the rescue work.3(1)detailed information(2)examples目標(biāo)三第二步1A great earthquake struck San Francisco on April 18th, 1906. 2The earthquake left the city completely destroyed.3When night fell, homeless people saw the awful destruction.4H