作文煉句-第28篇譯文老師筆記

MoststudentstodayareawareoftheenvironmentalchallengesfacingourplanetYoungpeopleunderstandthatcuttingdownonenergyuse（1.削減能源消耗）anddecreasingwastearenecessarystepstowardscurbingclimatechange（2.遏制氣候變化）andpreventingenergycutdownonenergycutdownonintake、smoking、wastecut VERB短語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞削減;減少使用If cutonsomethingor something,youuseordolessof【語(yǔ)法信息】：VPon【語(yǔ)法信息】：(not【語(yǔ)法信息】：V【語(yǔ)法信息】：AlsoVnHecutdownoncoffeeandcigarettes,andateabalanceddiet...他Carownerswereaskedtocutdowntravel...要求車主們減少駕車出行的Ifyouspendmorethanyour e,canyoutrytocutdown? EhsanToreini,asecurityexpertattheUniversityof Newcastle,andhiscolleagues,describeawaytoturnthatrandomnessinto “fingerprint”thatisuniquetoanygivensheetofp r.(Insecurity afingerprintisanyunique,identifyingpattern,notjustonefroma finger).Thatcould,theyhope,helptocut downonfraud. 模式，而非手）。他們希望這樣能減少詐騙發(fā)生。替換表達(dá)：reducecurbclimateUK[k?:b] [k?:b] tocontrolorlimitsomethingthatisnotwanted Theernmentshouldacttocurbtaxevasion.應(yīng)該采取行動(dòng)抑制curbVERB動(dòng)詞控制;抑制;限定;約束Ifyou curbsomething,youcontrolitandkeepitwithinlimits.【語(yǔ)法信息】：V【語(yǔ)法信息】：beV-【搭配模式】：oftNon...advertisementsaimedatcurbingthespreadofAids...旨在控制病的Inflationneedstobecurbed inRussia.俄羅斯需要抑制通貨膨脹。Curbisalsoanoun.Hecalledformuchstrictercurbsonimmigration.他呼吁對(duì)采取更嚴(yán)Tillersonha edtosupportarevenue-neutralcarbon tax–abipartisansolutionthatinadditiontohel curbclimatechangeanditsdamages,wouldhaveamodestly beneficialdirectimpactontheeconomy.（ 替換表達(dá)：preventreduceclimateSuppress 點(diǎn)評(píng)：suppress（生長(zhǎng)、發(fā)展、起作用等）”，例如：Thesuppressesthebody'simmunesystem.這種抑制身體的免疫系統(tǒng)。但不可以用suppress來(lái)修飾climatechange，這里可以改為常見(jiàn)說(shuō)法curbclimatechange climate點(diǎn)評(píng)：restrain（增長(zhǎng)太多的東西）”，restrainspending/inflation/corruption，不能用restrain修飾climatechangepreventenergy[pr?'vent] tostopsomethingfromhappeningorsomeonefrom something，妨礙；預(yù)防Labelyoursuitcasestopreventconfusion.在你提箱上貼上以[+-ingverb]Hisdisabilitypreventshim UK ['??:r.t??d?] whenthereisnotenoughofsomethingThere'sashortageof foodandshelterin therefugeecamps.難Thelonghotsummerhasledtoseriouswatershortages.這個(gè)夏天漫長(zhǎng)Thenewbodywouldoverseelargeenergyconsumerslimitingtheirconsumptionandwouldorderpowerstationstoincreasetheiroutputtotrytopreventenergyshortages.（ 該新組織將大型能源消耗者的能源消耗限制，命令發(fā)電站加大產(chǎn)出，以避免替換表達(dá)：alleviate/ease/tackleenergyQ：Moststudentstodayareawareoftheenvironmental facingourplanet.如果過(guò)直譯就是：環(huán)境問(wèn)題面對(duì) 典里面face后面都是接問(wèn)題：theproblemsfacedby families單親家庭面對(duì)的問(wèn)題Thecompanyisfacinga crisis.公司正 財(cái)政。She'sfacedwitha decision.她眼前有一項(xiàng)難作的決定。It'snotalwayseasy thetruth.承認(rèn)事實(shí)并不總是一件容易的。②sthfacesomeone和someonefacesthA：somethingfacessomeonesomeonefacessomething這兩種用法都正確，而且沒(méi)有區(qū)別。在麥克米倫詞典中可以找到這樣的例句：Howtocombineacareerandchildrenisadilemmafacingmanywomen.ManyoftheshipyardworkersfacelosingtheirQ：請(qǐng)教老師“Youngpeopleknowingtocutenergyconsumption toreducewasteisnecessarytocurbclimatechangeandprevent A：這句話有問(wèn)題，因?yàn)榫渥又鞲勺兂闪耍篩oungpeopleisnecessaryto climatechange…可以改為：Youngpeopleknowthatcuttingenergyconsumptionand wastearenecessarytocurbclimatechangeandpreventenergyshortages.。。High ）.Weshoulddoourpart（4.盡 的職責(zé)）torespondtotheenvironmentalchallengesfacingourplanet.highwaslev·el/?l?vl; /noun AMOUNT數(shù)量,theamountordegreeof something,comparedtoanotheramountordegree數(shù)量;水平，水準(zhǔn)，程度: ofIncreaseds areneededtomeetthelevelofdemand.要增加供應(yīng)high/lowlevelDolphins showahighlevelof Inflationdropped toitslowestlevelin30years.30Atthemoment, publicinterestisatahighlevel BADUSE[Soranunnecessaryorwronguseofmoney,substances,time, abilities,etc浪費(fèi)；Thatmeetingachievedabsoluynothing-wasa wasteoftime.那次會(huì)議根本沒(méi)有取得甚么成果——純粹She'sbeenunemployedfortwoyearsandit'ssucha wasteof talents.她已經(jīng)失業(yè)兩年了，這純粹是浪費(fèi)才華。Mymothercouldn'tbearwaste-shealwaysmadeus eateverythingonourplates.我母親浪費(fèi)——她總是讓吃光自己碟子里的所有東西。Inwealthycountries,therearelowlevelsofunintentional lossesbuthighlevelsof“food waste”,whichinvolvesfoodbeingthrownawaybyconsumersbecausethey havepurchasedtoomuch,orbyretailerswhorejectfoodbecauseofexacting standards. 替換表達(dá)：toomuch high點(diǎn)評(píng)：一般沒(méi)有highwaste的說(shuō)法，可以改為highwasenergy[d?'pli:.??n] [Sor(a)reductionthedepletion theozonelayerIncreasedexpenditurehascausedadepletion our開(kāi)支增加使的資本／減少了ThealliancesaidthestudyfoundthattheBatesonreport's ofdeerphysiologywasfactuallyunsoundandhadledto conclusionsaboutmuscledamage,energy depletionandtheoverallstressofahunteddeer.（ 替換表達(dá)：overuseofenvironmentalenvironmentalADJ形容 的Environmentalmeansconcerned withtheprotectionofthenaturalworldofland,sea,air,plants,and 【搭配模式】：ADJ...economicandenvironmentallegislation.經(jīng)濟(jì)和生態(tài)環(huán)境保...theenvironmentalclaimsbeingmadeforsomeproducts...要求一些產(chǎn)Environmentalgroupsplantostagepublicsduring conference.環(huán)境保護(hù)組織計(jì)劃在會(huì)議期間組織公眾活動(dòng)。 nounwhenthebeautyorqualityofsomethingisdestroyedor spoilt玷environmentaldegradationIran’scriticalwatercrisisisanothermarkofenvironmentaldegradation.Lakeandriversaredryingout.LakeUrmia,oncethelargestsaltlakeintheMiddleEast,isnearlygone.（ 伊朗的嚴(yán)重水又一次印證著環(huán)境 替換表達(dá)：environmentaldoourOne'sresponsibility,duty,orobligation;職責(zé)，義務(wù)：的責(zé)任、職責(zé)或義務(wù)；份額Weeachdoourpartto thehouseone'sshareorallottedtask(asinanaction) <onemust one'sThepresidencyisarelayrace,requiringeachofustodoourparttobringthecountry closertoitshighestaspirations.（ 職和接力比賽無(wú)異，需 每位盡己所能讓全體國(guó)民回到意氣風(fēng)發(fā)之時(shí)替換表達(dá)：doourduty/bit,takeonourQ：高浪費(fèi)英語(yǔ)順序Highwasevels，水平一定排在最后嗎？②highwastelevels可不可以直接用Highwaste，levelA：這是level的一種常見(jiàn)用法，noun+levels表示某事物的數(shù)量、程度等很高， elevels；不可以直接用highwasteThemostbasicwayinwhicha ernmentcanaddresstheenergyshortageistobettereducatethepublicparticularlytheyoungergeneration,abouttheimportanceofconservingenergy（1.節(jié)能）.Thiswillensurethatthechildrenoftodayareawareofthegravity（2.嚴(yán)峻性）ofthesituationandgrowuptobeenvironmentally-conscious（3.具有環(huán)保意識(shí)的）adults.conserveverbtransitiveUK[k?n?s??v] [-tokeepandprotectsomethingfromdamage,changeor waste保護(hù)；Toconserveelectricity,wearecuttingdownon central為了省電，在減少供熱Thenationalistsareverykeentoconserve customsand民族主義者非常熱衷于保留他們的和語(yǔ)言I'mnotbeinglazy-I'mjustconservingmy later.我不是在偷懶——在為以后保存精力／體力。Puttingtheimpactofsavingenergyinhumanterms,for example,canhelptoencourageotherstafftoconserveenergy. 替換表達(dá)：energy 點(diǎn)評(píng)：沒(méi)有cuttingenergy的說(shuō)法，只有cuttingenergyuse，這里建議改為 UK['gr?v.?.ti] US[-?.t?i] noununcountableSERIOUS嚴(yán)重seriousnessIdon'tthinkyouunderstandthegravityofthe “Youdon'trealisethegravity ofthesituation…”beganMrTrichet.ButhewascutoffbytheFrench ,NicolasSarkozy,whointerjected,oneFrenantoanother:“Perhaps youspeaktobankers.We,weareanswerabletoourcitizens.”（ 點(diǎn)評(píng)：strict是指“嚴(yán)格的”，不可以用來(lái)修飾thedepth ourpresentofthepresentsituationparlous點(diǎn)評(píng)：parlousstatebeinaparlousstate forcewasinaparlousstatein1990.1990年該國(guó)的 environmentallyUK adverb★ina thataffectstheenvironmentorisrelatedtoEverybodyhassomescopeforngtheir jobinamoreenvironmentallyresponsibleway.alessenvironmentallydamagingUK['k?n.t??s] NOTICINGbeconsciousoftonoticethataparticularthingor existsoris present意Thetoothdoesn'texactlyhurt,butI'mconscious ofitIcanfeelit)allthetime.牙齒并不痛，我總覺(jué)得不舒服。[+-ingverb]Ithinkshe'svery of theintheofficewhodidn'thaveauniversity [+that]Hegraduallybecameconscious fact)thateveryoneelsewaswearingasuit.他漸漸其他人都是穿著Issuessuchasequalpay,environmentallyconsciousmanufacturingprocesses,preventionof counterfeitgoods,humantrafficking,responsiblefarmingpracticesand overproductionofgoodsareallattheforefrontofconsumers’mindswhen makingthesechoices. 替換表達(dá)：environmentally 點(diǎn)評(píng)：沒(méi)有environment awareness的說(shuō)法，應(yīng)該改為environmentalQinwhichA：這里是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，Themostbasicwayinwhicha ernmentcanaddresstheenergyshortage…which指代前面的way，句子相當(dāng)于Aernmentcanaddress energyshortageinthemostbasic ernmentcanensurethatthemediaplaysanactiveroleinencouragingtheuseofenergy-efficientpractices（1.節(jié)能措施）.Thismightinclude 宣傳活動(dòng)）topromotetheuseofbicyclesinsteadofcarsormagazineandthebenefitsofbetterhomeinsulation（3.房屋隔熱ns（2.rarticlesenergy-efficientenergy-ADJ形容 能效高的;高能效的Adevice rmationonhowtomakeyourhomemoreenergy ['pr?k.t?s]actionratherthanthoughtorideasItseemedlikeagoodideabeforewestarted,butin practiceitwasadisaster.在動(dòng)手之前這似乎是個(gè)好主意，但實(shí)際上卻是場(chǎng)。Officially,Robert'sincharge,butin HannahrunstheIcan'tseehowyourplanisgoingtoworkin Howdoyouintendtoput theseproposalsinto med?，你打算如何把這些計(jì)劃付諸實(shí)行？Participantsstressthatitisnecessarytobewillingto doanythingandeverythingtogetpeopleexcitedandengagedinenergyefficient 參與者強(qiáng)調(diào)，大家該竭盡所能讓普羅大眾對(duì)節(jié)能措施 ，能投身于其中替換表達(dá)：energy-savingmeasuresenergyconservation 1b.aseriesofthingssuchasevisionor thattrytopersuadepeopletobuyaThenboostedsalesofthejeansby200%.anadvertising/publicity/marketingnAnisanyseriesof actionsoreventsthataremeanttoachieveaparticularresult,likean advertisingnofevisioncommercialsand Internetadsthattriestoconvincekidstobuybubble PriortothepassageoftheBipartisan nReformAct i