高考英語之建議信各版本通用課件

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Aletterofgivingadvice

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一Cross-question(審題)做到四確定1體裁____________（記敘文？議論文）2主導(dǎo)時(shí)態(tài)____________3主導(dǎo)人稱第____人稱（我？你？他？）4布局謀篇：________段Para1__________________

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基本框架：開頭（beginning）----開門見山，向?qū)Ψ疥愂鲎约旱挠^點(diǎn).(stateyouridea)主體(body)----對(duì)所提出的問題進(jìn)行分析并說明理由，接著提出自己的建議(reasonsandevidence)結(jié)尾(ending)----呼應(yīng)開頭，重申觀點(diǎn)(restateyouropinion.)基本框架：3

注意事項(xiàng)：1）建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。因此建議信要寫得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力2）建議的角度要多樣化，避免重復(fù)。可從政治、經(jīng)濟(jì)、文化、倫理、法律以及個(gè)人等多角度給出建議。3）符合英文信件的基本格式注意事項(xiàng)：4常用套語A．建議信開頭常用句式

(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫作意圖)1．AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2．Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-----5.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.6.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.7.YouhaveaskedmeformyadviceaboutEnglishlearning.常用套語A．建議信開頭常用句式

(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫作意圖)5B.表達(dá)建議（body）1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，afterthat，intheend．finally．Meanwhile,what’smore．．．2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…3.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Youmayconsiderdoing…6.Iwouldseemtomethatyoucould…7.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.8.Iwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowing.9.Whenitcometosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoucan…B.表達(dá)建議（body）6C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式

1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.6.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouw7注意銜接詞使用:表先后次序：First,second,third….FinallyFirstly,secondly，…eventuallytobeginwith/tostartwith,atlast,lastbutnotleast遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：furthermore；moreover；notonly...butalso...；not...but...；,besides；inotherwords；ontheonehand...，ontheotherhand...；meanwhile；atthesametime；注意銜接詞使用:8寫作模板模板一：Dear_____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout_____(問題)，andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:______(建議內(nèi)容).……Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails.Yourssincerely,LiMing寫作模板模板一：9模板二：Dear_____(對(duì)象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning______(問題).Mysuggestionstodealwiththeproblemareasfollows.Firstandforthemost_______(建議一);inaddition_____(建議二);what’smore_____(建議三).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMing模板二：10糾錯(cuò)1語氣錯(cuò)誤Youmustgotodosomesportsoutdoors,suchasplayingfootballandsoon.2從句錯(cuò)誤Youcanfindagoodfriendcanlistentoyou.3從句錯(cuò)誤Ifyoudothis,youwillfeelhappyandforgetsomethingmakeyouupset.糾錯(cuò)114重復(fù)AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkdoingsportsisgoodforyou.5詞匯錯(cuò)誤Youcoulddosomeoutdoorsexercises.6成分Beoptimisticaboutlifeisveryimportant.

4重復(fù)127詞性和語序Youcaneasycalmdownyourself.8單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤Italsocouldbeagoodidearifyoudosomesports.9單詞核心用法錯(cuò)誤Itisagoodwaytomakeyourelax.10that理解錯(cuò)誤Iamsorrytohearthat.Itisnotgoodtoloseyourtemper.7詞性和語序13閱讀以下考場(chǎng)作文，并進(jìn)行必要的潤(rùn)色改寫。DearJack:Iamsorrytohearthatyouarelosingyourtemperrecently.Thisseriouslyinfluencesyournormallifeandstudy.Yes,itisbad.Don’tworry.Igiveyousomeadvice.（1）,Ithinkyoucanfindafriendtolistentoyourproblems.Youwillfeelrelaxed.（2）,Ithinkyoushouldgoouttodosportslikeplayingfootball.（3）,youmustbeoptimisticaboutlife.Ifyoudothese,Iamsureyouwillbehappyagain.Iamwaitingforyouletter.

思考：1結(jié)構(gòu)？2語言及符號(hào)？3可以得多少分？閱讀以下考場(chǎng)作文，并進(jìn)行必要的潤(rùn)色改寫。14書面表達(dá)如何寫？三個(gè)步驟Step1ListthekeypointsStep2MakesentencesStep3.Formapassageandpolish書面表達(dá)如何寫？三個(gè)步驟Step1Listtheke15如何給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分Heading點(diǎn)題；一兩個(gè)句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body

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佳作欣賞17假定你叫李華，最近，你的好友林浩來信說他升入高中以后感到不太適應(yīng)，不知道如何結(jié)交新朋友。請(qǐng)你用英語給他回一封信，提出一些建議。提示：1、與人接觸時(shí)要面帶微笑、對(duì)別人又好。2、關(guān)心同學(xué)、樂于助人。3、學(xué)會(huì)傾聽很重要，這樣別人樂于和你相處。4、積極參加班級(jí)活動(dòng)并展示自己才能。5、……（你的建議）注意：1.詞數(shù)130左右，信的格式已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。假定你叫李華，最近，你的好友林浩來信說他升入高中以后感到不18DearLinHao,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter.Fromyourletter,Iknowyouhavetheproblemofhowtomakenewfriendsinhighschool.Thefollowingaremysuggestions.First,youshouldsmileandtrytobefriendlywhenyoumeetpeople.Youshouldalsocareaboutyourschoolmates.Ifyouarealwaysreadytohelpthem,theywillunderstandyoubetter.Second,itisimportantforyoutobeagoodlistener.Thatway,whenpeoplearewithyou,theywillfeelcomfortableandhappy.Finally,itisbetterforyoutotakeanactivepartinclassactivitieswhereyoucanshowyourtalent.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Mayyoubehappyinyournewschool.YoursLiHuaDearLinHao,19DearLiMing,Inyourletter,yousaidyouarenotgoodatcommunicatingwithothersandoftenfeellonely.Ithinkyoucanjustmakeitsolongasyoucanfollowtheadvicebelow.First,youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmates’likesanddislikes.Second,youshouldtakeanactivepartinthediscussionheldinyourclassandshowyourownopinionactively,andatthesametime,learntolistentootherspatiently.Thenyoucanmakefriendswithmorepeople.Third,itwillbeagoodideatohelpotherswhennecessary.Withtimegoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucandotheabove.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours,LihuaDearLiMing,20二、根據(jù)提示，寫一篇150詞左右的建議信。假如你是某報(bào)編輯，昨天收到一位學(xué)生來信。請(qǐng)根據(jù)來信的內(nèi)容和所給的要點(diǎn)提示用英語寫一封回信。（要注意寫信的格式）DearEditor,Iamahard-workinggirlandwanttobethetopstudentinmyclass.Butinexams,Ialwaysmakemanycarelessmistakes.Ireallyworryaboutit.WhatshouldIdotoimprovemyperformanceinexams?BestregardsYourssincerely,LiFang二、根據(jù)提示，寫一篇150詞左右的建議信。假如你是某報(bào)編輯，21要點(diǎn)提示：1.收到來信，獲悉信中所提到的有關(guān)情況；2.不要壓力太大；3.如有問題請(qǐng)教老師或同學(xué)；4.考試時(shí)合理分配（distribute）時(shí)間，并盡量抽出幾分鐘檢查；5.其它建議………………要點(diǎn)提示：22DearLiFang,Ireadyourletteryesterday.It'sgoodthatyouhaveahighaimforyourselfandyouknowwhathaspreventedyoufromachievinghighscoresinexams.Butyoushouldrememberthateventheverybeststudentcanmakemistakessometimes.Sodon'tputtoomuchpressureonyourself.AsfarasIamconcerned,learningfromyourmistakesinpastexamsisaquickwaytostopmakingthesamemistakesnexttime.Tobeginwith,iftherearequestionsthatcan'tbesolvedbyyourself,youshouldturntoyourteachersorclassmatesforhelp.What'smore,duringtheexamsyou'dbettermakeagoodplantodistributeyourtimeaccordingtothequestions.Besides,trytoleaveafewminutesattheendtocheckyouranswers.Enjoythechallengethateachnewexambringstoyou.Ibelieveagoodlearninghabitwillfinallyhelpyougainsuccess.BestwishesYourssincerely,EditorDearLiFang,23書面表達(dá)

Aletterofgivingadvice

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一Cross-question(審題)做到四確定1體裁____________（記敘文？議論文）2主導(dǎo)時(shí)態(tài)____________3主導(dǎo)人稱第____人稱（我？你？他？）4布局謀篇：________段Para1__________________

Para2__________________Para3__________________一Cross-question(審題)做到四確定25

基本框架：開頭（beginning）----開門見山，向?qū)Ψ疥愂鲎约旱挠^點(diǎn).(stateyouridea)主體(body)----對(duì)所提出的問題進(jìn)行分析并說明理由，接著提出自己的建議(reasonsandevidence)結(jié)尾(ending)----呼應(yīng)開頭，重申觀點(diǎn)(restateyouropinion.)基本框架：26

注意事項(xiàng)：1）建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。因此建議信要寫得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力2）建議的角度要多樣化，避免重復(fù)。可從政治、經(jīng)濟(jì)、文化、倫理、法律以及個(gè)人等多角度給出建議。3）符合英文信件的基本格式注意事項(xiàng)：27常用套語A．建議信開頭常用句式

(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫作意圖)1．AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2．Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-----5.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.6.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.7.YouhaveaskedmeformyadviceaboutEnglishlearning.常用套語A．建議信開頭常用句式

(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫作意圖)28B.表達(dá)建議（body）1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，afterthat，intheend．finally．Meanwhile,what’smore．．．2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…3.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Youmayconsiderdoing…6.Iwouldseemtomethatyoucould…7.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.8.Iwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowing.9.Whenitcometosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoucan…B.表達(dá)建議（body）29C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式

1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.6.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouw30注意銜接詞使用:表先后次序：First,second,third….FinallyFirstly,secondly，…eventuallytobeginwith/tostartwith,atlast,lastbutnotleast遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：furthermore；moreover；notonly...butalso...；not...but...；,besides；inotherwords；ontheonehand...，ontheotherhand...；meanwhile；atthesametime；注意銜接詞使用:31寫作模板模板一：Dear_____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout_____(問題)，andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:______(建議內(nèi)容).……Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails.Yourssincerely,LiMing寫作模板模板一：32模板二：Dear_____(對(duì)象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning______(問題).Mysuggestionstodealwiththeproblemareasfollows.Firstandforthemost_______(建議一);inaddition_____(建議二);what’smore_____(建議三).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMing模板二：33糾錯(cuò)1語氣錯(cuò)誤Youmustgotodosomesportsoutdoors,suchasplayingfootballandsoon.2從句錯(cuò)誤Youcanfindagoodfriendcanlistentoyou.3從句錯(cuò)誤Ifyoudothis,youwillfeelhappyandforgetsomethingmakeyouupset.糾錯(cuò)344重復(fù)AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkdoingsportsisgoodforyou.5詞匯錯(cuò)誤Youcoulddosomeoutdoorsexercises.6成分Beoptimisticaboutlifeisveryimportant.

4重復(fù)357詞性和語序Youcaneasycalmdownyourself.8單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤Italsocouldbeagoodidearifyoudosomesports.9單詞核心用法錯(cuò)誤Itisagoodwaytomakeyourelax.10that理解錯(cuò)誤Iamsorrytohearthat.Itisnotgoodtoloseyourtemper.7詞性和語序36閱讀以下考場(chǎng)作文，并進(jìn)行必要的潤(rùn)色改寫。DearJack:Iamsorrytohearthatyouarelosingyourtemperrecently.Thisseriouslyinfluencesyournormallifeandstudy.Yes,itisbad.Don’tworry.Igiveyousomeadvice.（1）,Ithinkyoucanfindafriendtolistentoyourproblems.Youwillfeelrelaxed.（2）,Ithinkyoushouldgoouttodosportslikeplayingfootball.（3）,youmustbeoptimisticaboutlife.Ifyoudothese,Iamsureyouwillbehappyagain.Iamwaitingforyouletter.

思考：1結(jié)構(gòu)？2語言及符號(hào)？3可以得多少分？閱讀以下考場(chǎng)作文，并進(jìn)行必要的潤(rùn)色改寫。37書面表達(dá)如何寫？三個(gè)步驟Step1ListthekeypointsStep2MakesentencesStep3.Formapassageandpolish書面表達(dá)如何寫？三個(gè)步驟Step1Listtheke38如何給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分Heading點(diǎn)題；一兩個(gè)句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body

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佳作欣賞40假定你叫李華，最近，你的好友林浩來信說他升入高中以后感到不太適應(yīng)，不知道如何結(jié)交新朋友。請(qǐng)你用英語給他回一封信，提出一些建議。提示：1、與人接觸時(shí)要面帶微笑、對(duì)別人又好。2、關(guān)心同學(xué)、樂于助人。3、學(xué)會(huì)傾聽很重要，這樣別人樂于和你相處。4、積極參加班級(jí)活動(dòng)并展示自己才能。5、……（你的建議）注意：1.詞數(shù)130左右，信的格式已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。假定你叫李華，最近，你的好友林浩來信說他升入高中以后感到不41DearLinHao,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter.Fromyourletter,Iknowyouhavetheproblemofhowtomakenewfriendsinhighschool.Thefollowingaremysuggestions.First,youshouldsmileandtrytobefriendlywhenyoumeetpeople.Youshouldalsocareaboutyourschoolmates.Ifyouarealwaysreadytohelpthem,theywillunderstandyoubetter.Second,itisimportantforyoutobeagoodlistener.Thatway,whenpeoplearewithyou,theywillfeelcomfortableandhappy.Finally,itisbetterforyoutotakeanactivepartinclassactivitieswhereyoucanshowyourtalent.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Mayyoubehappyinyournewschool.YoursLiHuaDearLinHao,42DearLiMing,Inyourletter,yousaidyouarenotgoodatcommunicatingwithothersandoftenfeellonely.Ithinkyoucanjustmakeitsolongasyoucanfollowtheadvicebelow.First,youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmates’likesanddislikes.Second,youshouldtakeanactivepartinthediscussionheldinyourclassandshowyourownopinionactively,andatthesametime,learntolistentootherspatiently.Thenyoucanmakefriendswithmorepeople.Third,itwillbeagoodideatohelpotherswhennecessary.Withtimegoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandliketomakefriendswithyo