高考英語讀后續(xù)寫專練之媽媽的禮物

讀后續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練之Mother’sGift讀后續(xù)寫原文閱讀下面的材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Mother'sGiftIgrewupinasmalltownwheretheprimaryschoolwasaten-minutewalkfrommyhouse.Whenthenoonbellrang,Iwouldracebreathlesslyhome.Mymotherwouldbestandingatthetopofthestairs,smilingdownatme.Onelunch-timewhenIwasinthethirdgradewillstaywithmealways.Ihadbeenpickedtobetheprincessintheschoolplay,andforweeksmymotherhadrehearsedmylinessohardwithme.ButnomatterhoweasilyIactedathome,assoonasIsteppedonstage,everyworddisappearedfrommyhead.Finally,myteachertookmeaside.Sheexplainedthatshehadwrittenanarrator's(旁白的)parttotheplay,andaskedmetochangeroles.Herwords,kindlyexpressed,stillhurtme,especiallywhenIsawmypartgotoanothergirl.Ididn'ttellmymotherwhathadhappenedwhenIwenthomeforlunchthatday.Butshesensedmypain.Insteadofsuggestingwepracticemylines,sheaskedifIwantedtowalkintheyard.Itwasalovelyspringdayandtherosevine(藤蔓)wasturninggreen.Underthehugetrees,wecouldseeyellowdandelions(蒲公英)inthegrassinbunches,asifapainterhadtouchedourlandscapewithgold.Iwatchedmymothercasuallybenddownbyonedandelion.“IthinkI'mgoingtodigupalltheseweeds，”shesaid,“pullingthemupbytheirroots.Fromnowon,we'llhaveonlyrosesinthisgarden.”

“ButIlikedandelions，”Iprotested.“Allflowersarebeautiful—evendandelions.”Mymotherlookedatmeseriously.“Yes,everyflowergivespleasureinitsownway,doesn'tit？”sheaskedthoughtfully.Inodded,pleasedthatIhadwonherover.“Andthatistrueofpeople,too.”

sheadded.“Noteveryonecanbeaprincess,butthereisnoshameinthat.”Relievedthatshehadguessedmypain,IstartedtocryasItoldherwhathadhappened.Shelistenedandsmiled.ReadingMother'sGiftIgrewupinasmalltownwheretheprimaryschoolwasaten-minutewalkfrommyhouse.Whenthenoonbellrang,Iwould

racebreathlesslyhome.Mymotherwouldbestandingatthetopofthestairs,smilingdownatme.

Onelunch-timewhenIwasinthethirdgradewillstaywithmealways.Ihadbeenpickedtobetheprincessintheschoolplay,andforweeksmymotherhadrehearsedmylinessohardwithme.ButnomatterhoweasilyIactedathome,assoonasIsteppedonstage,everyworddisappearedfrommyhead.Finally,myteachertookmeaside.Sheexplainedthatshehadwrittenanarrator's(旁白的)parttotheplay,andaskedmetochangeroles.Herwords,kindlyexpressed,stillhurtme,especiallywhenIsawmypartgotoanothergirl.Ididn'ttellmymotherwhathadhappenedwhenIwenthomeforlunchthatday.Butshesensedmypain.Insteadofsuggestingwepracticemylines,sheaskedifIwantedtowalkintheyard.Itwasalovelyspringdayandtherosevine(藤蔓)wasturninggreen.Underthehugetrees,wecouldseeyellowdandelions(蒲公英)inthegrassinbunches,asifapainterhadtouchedourlandscapewithgold.Iwatchedmymothercasuallybenddownbyonedandelion.“IthinkI'mgoingtodigupalltheseweeds，”shesaid,pullingthemupbytheirroots.Fromnowon,we'llhaveonlyrosesinthisgarden.”

“ButIlikedandelions，”Iprotested.“Allflowersarebeautiful—evendandelions.”Mymotherlookedatmeseriously.“Yes,everyflowergivespleasureinitsownway,doesn'tit？”sheaskedthoughtfully.Inodded,pleasedthatIhadwonherover.“Andthatistrueofpeople,too.”

sheadded.“Noteveryonecanbeaprincess,butthereisnoshameinthat.”

Relievedthatshehadguessedmypain,IstartedtocryasItoldherwhathadhappened.Shelistenedandsmiled.backgroundwhathappenedtomewhatmothersaidanddidwhatIfelt人物:MymotherandI情節(jié)線：Iwaschosentoplaytheprincess

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dandelion._________________________________________________________________________________________the1stparagraphisaboutmyperformanceWhen,whereandhowdidIgethedandelion?HowwouldIrespondtomymother?HowwouldIfeelwhenIsteppedontothestage?Nervousornot?Why?What’smyperformancelike?WhatwouldhappenwhenIarrivedhome?HowwouldIdealwiththedandelion?What’sthelessonIlearntfromthisexperience?Topic?onelessonIlearntfrommymother(itwasmymotherwhoshapedmylife)Plotting文本語言如何說：“IthinkI'mgoingtodigupalltheseweeds，”shesaid,pullingthemupbytheirroots.(say+v-ing)“我想挖掉所有這些雜草”她一邊說著，一邊拔起根。“ButIlikedandelions，”Iprotested.“Allflowersarebeautiful—evendandelions.”

(protest)“但是我喜歡蒲公英”我抗議道。“所有的花都是漂亮的，甚至是蒲公英?！盜nodded,pleasedthatIhadwonherover.“Andthatistrueofpeople,too.”

sheadded.(add)我點頭，因為我說服了她而開心。她又說：“人也是一樣的?！盡ymotherlookedatmeseriously.“Yes,everyflowergivespleasureinitsownway,doesn'tit？”sheaskedthoughtfully.(ask+adv)媽媽認(rèn)真地看著我，她若有所思地問道“是的...”如何說：sb+said+doing...1.“IthinkI’mgoingtodigupalltheseweeds,__________________________“Fromnowon,we’llhaveonlyrosesinthisgarden.”(para.4)2.“It’sokay,mydeardaughter,”hesaid______________________(眼睛在跳躍著),“Iwillalwaysbeonyourside.”3.“W-w-what？”（感到有點緊張地說）he__________________________.4.“Iadoreit,Grandma,andIloveyoufromthebottomofmyheart!”Julie_____________________.shesaid,pullingitupbyitsrootswithhiseyesdancingsaidfeelingabitnervousexclaimedsmiling如何說：sb+said+adv....1.“Yes,everyflowergivespleasureinitsownway,doesn’tit?”__________________(她若有所思地問)(para6)2.“Andthatistrueofpeopletoo,”________________________(她又溫柔地說).“Noteveryonecanbeaprincess,butthereisnoshameinthat.”(para6)3.I_____________(勇敢地說),“Iwasafraid,that’strue.ButIshallnothesitatenexttime.I’llpullmyswordlikethis.”4.“Isuccessfullycompletedmymathexam!”__________________(Lauren激動地說),herfacebrightwithhappiness.5.“Thatmoneybelongstomeandyouknowit!”__________________(Billy激烈地喊道),hisfacehotwithanger.saidLaurencheerfullyshoutedBillyfiercelysheaskedthoughtfullysheaddedgentlysaidbravely如何說：根據(jù)具體語境替代“say”的動詞1.“Mark,Ithoughtwewerefriends.Howcouldyoutreatmethisway?”sobbedSarahasshebrushedthetearsfromhersaltycheeks.2.“IwishIhadmorefriendsatschool,”Jennysighedtoherself.3....whisper inquiredeclare questionscream addgrumble replysigh utterbeg scoldjoke interruptgreet ...文本語言如何做：Whenthenoonbellrang,Iwould

racebreathlesslyhome.Mymotherwouldbestandingatthetopofthestairs,smilingdownatme.(v+adv;v+v-ing)ButnomatterhoweasilyIactedathome,assoonasIsteppedonstage,everyworddisappearedfrommyhead.(從句+無靈主語)Butshesensedmypain.Insteadofsuggestingwepracticemylines,sheaskedifIwantedtowalkintheyard.Iwatchedmymothercasuallybenddownbyonedandelion.(v-ing;adv+v)文本語言如何做：仿句：1.每當(dāng)我陷入困境的時候，我總會想起站在臺階上笑著看我的媽媽，也會時常想起媽媽跟我說的話。EverytimeIwasintrouble,Iwouldthinkofmymotherstandingatthetopofthestairs,smilingdownatmeandIwouldthinkofwhatmymothertoldme.2.無論我遇到多大的困境，我一想起與媽媽的午餐時光，這些煩惱都從我的腦海中消失了。Nomatterhowchallengingthesituationis,assoonasIrecallthelunchtimespentwithmymother,everytroubledisappearsfrommymind.文本語言如何感：Herwords,kindlyexpressed,stillhurtme,especiallywhenIsawmypartgotoanothergirl.(無靈主語)Underthehugetrees,wecouldseeyellowdandelions(蒲公英)inthegrassinbunches,asifapainterhadtouchedourlandscapewithgold.(擬人)Relievedthatshehadguessedmypain,IstartedtocryasItoldherwhathadhappened.(v-ed)文本語言如何感：仿句：1.媽媽的話就像是春日的陽光一樣溫暖著我，使我能夠像大樹一樣健康成長。Mom’swordswarmsmelikethesunshineinspring,whichenablesmetogrowhealthilylikeatree.2.擔(dān)心忘記臺詞，我不停地查看筆記。WorriedthatIwouldforgettheline,Ireferredtothenotesfrequently.Onepossibleversion：“But

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