讀后續(xù)寫救人脫困 肢體動(dòng)作1篇課件-高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫救人脫困＋肢體動(dòng)作(1)1RReadforthecharactersOlavtheownerofalocalrestaurantinthescenicspotaformervolunteerfirefighterdrovehisvantotransportgoodsforhisrestaurantexpectingaperfectdaydozensoftouriststrappedinthetunnelsavethemoutofdanger2RReadfortheplotandemotionalchangesplotmountain

hopeful,joyfulOlavspottedatourbusonfiresuprised,horrifiedtouristswentthewrongwayanditwasimpossibletogetaround.anxiousconflict升級(jí)Immediately,Olavturnedthevanround,jumpedoutandopenedtheslidingdoorstotheemptycargospace.

Aftera20minutes‘

desperatedrive,finallytheretheyarrived-theexitofthetunnel!

goodendingTunnelgateswereclosed.SmokewaspouringoutinOlav'sdirection.NoonecouldoutrunthetoxicfumesOlavexpectedhisbusinesscouldboominthepeakseaonfortourismdeterminedclimax沖突最大化，也是情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)給出solution，如何幫助游客逃出隧道逃出隧道，游客安全了，隧道修理是否又要影響Olav的飯店生意？如何結(jié)尾

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Theroadtohisrestaurantwasblockedandthestreamoftouristshalted(停止）.Althoughitwasdifficult,hemanagedtokeeptheirstaffon.Asaformervolunteerfirefighter,Olavfirsthadtoraisethealarm.Grabbinghiscellphone,heenteredthecodeswithshakinghands.

“Abusisonfire!Closethetunnelgates!”

kindnessbravery,determinationOnegoodturndeservesanother(好人有好報(bào)).Readforlanguage

用介詞短語描寫人物的“高興”，利用非限制性定語從句，說明他此行駕車的目的，為續(xù)寫部分埋下鋪墊非謂語動(dòng)詞、非限制性定語從句和并列句說明隧道的位置和重要性（通往景區(qū)的唯一通道）、飯店的位置、隧道關(guān)閉曾對(duì)飯店生意的影響續(xù)寫情節(jié)的鋪墊用讓步狀語從句暗示Olav的善良形容詞做狀語，描寫情感謂語動(dòng)詞+非謂語動(dòng)詞，具體描寫游客的動(dòng)作，表現(xiàn)游客的驚慌失措心理活動(dòng)描寫，表現(xiàn)Olav對(duì)隧道情形的熟悉和對(duì)著火的巴士的火勢(shì)的判斷力人物活動(dòng)場景描寫：營造緊張氛圍，為體現(xiàn)Olav的善良、勇敢和果斷做鋪墊，也是續(xù)寫部分的描寫可銜接呼應(yīng)處Readthe2givensentences推測(cè)續(xù)寫情節(jié)Immediately,Olavturnedthevanround,jumpedoutandopenedtheslidingdoorstotheemptycargospace.WhatdidOlavdothen?(calledandsignaledpeopletoruntothevan)

Whatwerethetourists'reaction?ranandgotinthevanWhatdid

Olavdothen?Olavdrovetowardstheexit利用話語+動(dòng)作+心理活動(dòng)+活動(dòng)場景描寫，突出隧道逃生的緊急和危險(xiǎn)Aftera20minutes'desperatedrive,finallytheretheyarrived-theexitofthetunnel!

一段尾句與二段首句銜接Aftera20minutes'desperatedrive,finallytheretheyarrived-theexitofthetunnel!

Whatdidtheyfeel?(tourists:relievedandgrateful;Olav:relievedandupset)Wouldthetunnelberepairedforalongtimeagain?Howcouldhisrestaurantsurvivethistimeifso?描寫人物的情感（如釋重負(fù)、感激、沮喪等）、心理活動(dòng)和神態(tài)捕捉續(xù)寫點(diǎn)可在尾句設(shè)置描寫與該首句首尾呼應(yīng)續(xù)寫部分特定物品續(xù)寫第二段可添加心理活動(dòng)描寫，烘托Olav憂愁隧道修理會(huì)影響飯店生意對(duì)隧道基本情況的介紹埋下續(xù)寫部分的情節(jié)設(shè)置的伏筆游客走錯(cuò)路，Olav應(yīng)該如何引導(dǎo)他們從正確的方向逃離隧道，正是續(xù)寫部分可銜接處第一段可添加作為志愿者消防員所知道的其他與火災(zāi)有關(guān)的情況場景和環(huán)境的細(xì)節(jié)描寫：描寫煙霧的嚴(yán)重性、強(qiáng)風(fēng)對(duì)火勢(shì)的影響、烘托隧道形勢(shì)的緊急分秒必爭，救人需盡快讓游客離開隧道一段可添加細(xì)節(jié)描寫毒霧情感細(xì)節(jié)描寫：驚恐、釋然、感激，沮喪、擔(dān)憂等動(dòng)作細(xì)節(jié)描寫：添加人物肢體動(dòng)作簡短的對(duì)話細(xì)節(jié)描寫：Olav呼喊游客上貨車的話場景細(xì)節(jié)描寫：Olav駕車載游客們逃離隧道的場景和隧道中火、煙霧、風(fēng)、毒煙等的場景描寫添加細(xì)節(jié)描寫（與原文語言特點(diǎn)一致）1.

作為一個(gè)前消防志愿者，Olav清楚地明白如果他們不盡快離開，后果會(huì)怎么樣。Asaformervolunteerfirefighter,Olavknewwellwhatwouldhappenif_________________________________________.2.

如果他們不趕緊離開，濃煙將令人們窒息，遮擋人們的視力。Iftheydidn’tleavesoon_______________________________________________________________________________.

描寫隧道逃生時(shí)的緊張場面theydidn’tleaveassoonaspossible

thesmokewouldchokeandblindthemall2.“大家都進(jìn)來!”他聲嘶力竭地喊著，指著那輛貨車，向驚慌失措的人群揮手。①“everyone,getinhere!”

heshoutedatthetopofhislungs,_________________andwavedatthepanickedcrowd.(肢體動(dòng)作，三連動(dòng)詞構(gòu)成動(dòng)作鏈)②“everyone,getinhere!”

heshoutedatthetopofhislungs,____________________________________________________.（非謂語動(dòng)詞作狀語）pointedtothevan

pointingtothevanandwavingatthepanickedcrowd3.“我們走!”奧拉夫喊道，確認(rèn)沒有人落下后，他跳到駕駛座上。①“Weareleaving!”

shoutedOlav,and________thedriver’sseataftermakingsurenoonewasleftbehind.（雙連動(dòng)詞）②“Weareleaving!”

shoutedOlav,____________aftermakingsurenoonewasleftbehind.(非謂語動(dòng)詞做狀語）leapedto

leapingtothedriver’sseat4.致命的毒煙席卷過隧道，所到之處所有的空氣都被污染。①Thedeadlyfumessweptthroughthetunnel,whichcontaminatedalltheairinitspath.②Thedeadlyfumessweptthroughthetunnel,____________________________________________________.(非謂語動(dòng)詞做狀語）5.他剛踩下油門，濃煙就吞噬了整個(gè)地區(qū)。大家都臉色大變。①Hehadhardlysteppedontheacceleratorwhenthethicksmokeconsumedthearea.Thecolorwentfromeveryone’sface.（無靈主語句，神態(tài)描寫+場景描寫）②___________________________________________________________________________.Thecolorwentfromeveryone’sface.(倒裝句）contaminatingalltheairinitspathHardlyhadhehadsteppedontheacceleratorwhenthethicksmokeconsumedthearea1.真是九死一生，所有的人都松了一口氣。Whatanarrowescape!_____________________________.2.他們想要是沒有Olav的話，他們便不能從隧道中逃脫，甚至?xí)谒淼乐兄舷⒍?。TheyfeltwithoutOlav,theywouldnothavegotawayfromitandevenwouldhavechockedtodeathinthetunnel.（虛擬語氣）逃生之后的描寫Allofthembreathedwitharelief3.緊張的情緒終于松懈下來了，他們歡呼慶祝這場死里逃生，并向Olav道謝。①__________________________,theycheeredtocelebratetheirsurvivalandthankedOlavsincerely.（雙連動(dòng)詞）②Everyone’stensionreleased,theycheeredtocelebratetheirsurvivalandthankedOlavsincerely.(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）Everyone’stensionwasreleased4.他們滿懷感激之情，向奧拉夫真誠道謝，但奧拉夫卻皺起了眉頭。Grateful,theythankedOlavsincerely.Hiseyebrows,however,wasknittedintoadeepfrown.（形容詞做狀語，情感+神態(tài)描寫）Grateful,theythankedOlavsincerely,___________,however,wasknittedintoadeepfrown.（非限制性定語從句）whoseeyebrowsagoodending----呼應(yīng)主題式但這是不可能發(fā)生的——善有善報(bào)——消防車及時(shí)趕到，將大火撲滅，隧道將在幾天后重新開放使用。Butthatwasnotgoingtohappen－_____________－thefireenginesarrivedjustintimetoputthefireoutandt