高考復習專題講座-寫作

透視五年上海高考英語作文試題（１９９９－２００３）第一頁，共二十五頁。高考作文的評分標準（內(nèi)容１０分，語言１２分，組織結(jié)構(gòu)３分，共計２５分）內(nèi)容要求： A檔１０分重點明確，內(nèi)容充實 B檔 ８分 重點明確，內(nèi)容較充實 C檔 ６分 重點明確，但內(nèi)容單?。?D檔 ４分 重點不明確，內(nèi)容松散． E檔 ２分 嚴重離題．第二頁，共二十五頁。高考作文的評分標準２．語言要求：１）語言表達正確，文字流暢．（１２分）２）語法，措詞等錯誤，每處扣１分，同一錯誤不重復扣分．３）單詞拼寫，標點，大小寫等錯誤，每處扣０．５分，同一錯誤不重復扣分．４）每句扣分不超過２分．５）語言分最多扣１２分．第三頁，共二十五頁。高考作文的評分標準３．組織結(jié)構(gòu)要求：凡內(nèi)容和語言兩部分得分超過１６分，詞數(shù)超過１２０個，并符合下列條件者可加分．１）凡全文的措詞，句子結(jié)構(gòu)，上下文連貫性等方面比較出色者，可酌情加１－２分．２）凡內(nèi)容充實，語言正確，用詞貼切的優(yōu)秀作文，可加３分．４．詞數(shù)要求：不足１２０個酌情扣分，少于６０個，總分得分最多不超過１０分．第四頁，共二十五頁。記敘文的寫作 WriteanEnglishcompositionabout100to120words,accordingtothesituationgiveninChinese.我最難忘的一課．具體說明為何難忘．感想．（２０００年上海高考題）第五頁，共二十五頁。

Inmyschoollife,Ihaveattendedmanyclasses.ButthemostunforgettablelessonIhaveeverhadisanEnglishlessonwhenIwasatGradeTwo. Itistheteacher’swayofteachingthatIalwaysremember.Ontheday,wetookoutourEnglishbooksandwaitedforourEnglishasusual.Buttooursurprise,sheenteredtheclassroomwithouttheEnglishbook,butaradioandsomepaperinstead.ShegaveoutthepaperandtoldusthatwewouldlearnanEnglishsongandsheaskedusfillintheblanksinthepaperwhilewelistenedtothesong.Howwonderful!Itwasthefirsttimethatwehadhadsuchatext.Wewereveryexcitedandlistenedtothesongverycarefully.Whatsurprisedusmostwasthatwecouldmemorizethewordsmorequicklythaneverbefore. Ilikethelesson.ThisnewmethodofteachingmakesiteasyforustolearnEnglishwords.ItcanalsodevelopourinterestinEnglish.Iwillneverforgetmylesson.第六頁，共二十五頁。SIMILARTOPICSAnunforgettabletestAnunforgettablepersonAhappyjourneyGreatchangesonthecampus/inShanghai/inmyneighbourhood…AclassmeetingbeforegraduationMyfavouriteTVprogramsGrowingpains第七頁，共二十五頁。提示作文的寫作 根據(jù)提示用英語寫出一段１００－１２０詞的短文．一些學生認為學英語很重要．一些學生認為不必學英語．我認為．．．（觀點，理由）（１９９９年上海高考題）第八頁，共二十五頁。

People’sviewsonlearningEnglishvaryfrompersontoperson.Somethinkintoday’sworldweneedtomakefrequentcontactswithdifferentpeopleindifferentpartsoftheworld,soitisabsolutelynecessarytolearnEnglish.OthersconsiderEnglishuseless.TheyfeellearningEnglishisnothingbutaburden.ButIregardEnglishasoneofthemostimportantsubjects.OfallthesubjectsIlikeEnglishbest. ThereareseveralreasonswhyIlikeEnglishbest.

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Firstly,Englishisoneofthemostwidelyusedlanguagesintheworld.NearlyallinformationontheInternetandoverhalfoftheworld’stechnicalmaterialsareinEnglish.Therefore,agoodcommandofEnglishwillgreatlybenefitmeinmywork. Secondly,astheworldbecomesmoreandmoreglobalized,weneedtolearnmoderntechnologyinordertocatchupwithdevelopedcountries.AsolidfoundationofEnglishmeanschancesandopportunities.Inthecompetitionforawell-paidjob,theonewhocanspeakfluentEnglishhasanadvantageoverthosewhocannot. ForallthesereasonsweshouldnotonlylearnEnglishbutmasteritintheshortesttimepossible.第十頁，共二十五頁。SIMILARTOPICSStudyingabroadNecessityforexaminationsMyviewonmixed-abilityteachingShouldastudentownamobilephone?Studentsdoingpart-timejobs?TheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofprivatetutoringMyviewonschooluniformsStudentsdoingcosmeticsurgery?MyviewonraisingpetsHowtospendaweekend?TheTeacher-studentrelationshipShouldprivatecarsbeencouragedinChina?

第十一頁，共二十五頁?？磮D作文的寫作 WriteanEnglishcompositioninover120wordsonthepictureandinstructionsgiven (2002上海高考題）第十二頁，共二十五頁。

Duetotheone-childpolicyinChina,mostfamilieshaveonlyonechildandthereforethischildisregardedasthetreasureofthewholefamily.Boththeparentsandgrandparentsusuallyover-indulgethechild. Wecanseeinthepicture,whenachildislearningtoridebicycle,theparentsandgrandparentsaresweatingfromrunningalongsidethebikeandaretryingtheirbesttoprotestthechild;forfearthatsheshouldfallandhurtherself. Weallknowthegreatestgloryconsistsnotinneverfalling,butinrisingeverytimewefall.SoIthink,fortheparents,theyshouldbeawareofthenegativeeffecttoomuchpamperinghasontheirchild.Undertheparents’protection,thechildrenknowonlycomfortandease.Iftheydon’tlearnhowtoliveindependently,howcantheycopewiththeadversitieswhichtheywillmeetwithinthefuture?第十三頁，共二十五頁。

Forthechildren,theyshouldlettheirparentsknowthattheyhaveconfidenceinthemselvesandareabletoexistinthecompetitivecommunitywithouttheconstantwatchfuleyeofaneagerparent. Thepathtosuccessisfilledwithvariouskindsofdifficultiesandobstacles.Onlywhenwehavelearnedtostandonourowntwofeet,canwesurviveinthe21stcentury.第十四頁，共二十五頁。SIMILARTOPICSAvideogametrapHowtospendholidaysTrafficrulesarethefriendsofourlives材料的來源：報紙，雜志,漫畫書上的comics第十五頁，共二十五頁。圖表作文的寫作根據(jù)所給圖表，簡要描述某城市試題近年每百人受機用戶的增長情況，并試分析其增長的原因．（２００２年上海春考）第十六頁，共二十五頁。

Thechartaboveindicatesthatthenumberofmobilephoneshasincreasedinthecityinrecentyears.Between1995and1999thenumberofmobilephoneusersincreasedby10percenteachyear.In2001,thenumberalmostdoubled.Itispredicatedthatthenumberwillskyrocketintheyearstocome. Thereasonfortheincreasecanbevarious.Firstamobilephoneisconvenientforpeopleespeciallybusinesspeople.Becauseofitssmallsize,lightweightandportability,youneedn’tgotoaphoneboothtomakeatelephonecall.Oneusersays,“Withamobilephone,Icanmakeaphonecalltodobusinesswithoutworryingabouttimeandspace.Thissavesmetimeandtrouble.第十七頁，共二十五頁。

Besides,mobilephonesarefindingtheirwayintoordinaryfamilies.Mobilephoneloverstalkwiththeirfriends,familymemberswhenevertheylike.Ofcourse,therearesomeotherpeoplebuyingmobilephonesmerelytofollowthefashionorshowtheirpositioninsociety. Whateverreasonitmaybe,Ithinktheincreasewillcontinueintothefuturebecausetheycanmakeourlifeconvenientandtheworldsmaller.第十八頁，共二十五頁。SIMILARTOPICS1.請你談談轎車大量進入家庭后，對家庭，環(huán)境，經(jīng)濟可能產(chǎn)生的影響．（２００１年高考試題）２．大學入學人數(shù)三年遞增說明的問題及你的感想．３．長假期間人們不同的休閑方式及你的分析或建議．第十九頁，共二十五頁。書信類作文的寫作 你的好友因為家境一般買不起名牌而悶悶不樂.給他寫份信,談談你的看法和建議.收信人:徐海青寄信人:黃平寫信日期:2003年6月8日（２００３年高考試題）第二十頁，共二十五頁。June8,2003DearXuHaiqing, Yousaidinyourletterthatmanyofyourclassmateswerewearingfashionableclothes,butyoucouldn’taffordtobuythebestbrands.Soyoufeltverydepressed.Therearedifferentviewsonpeople’swear.Thefollowingaremyideasaboutit. firstly,youshouldn’tputtoomuchemphasisonphysicalappearance.Youmustalwaysrememberthemostimportanttaskforyoutodayistoconcentrateyourattentiononyourstudies.Nomatterwhatyouwear,youwillreallylookyourbestwhenyoucomeoutfirstinyourexaminations.第二十一頁，共二十五頁。

Afamoussayinggoes,“Frugalityisthemotherofvirtue.”So,secondly,youmustunderstandthatitisafinevirtuetolearntoliveinfrugality.Sinceyourfamilyisnotabletoprovideyouwi