大學英語寫作首末段句型示例分析課件

大學英語寫作首末段句型示例大學英語寫作首末段句型示例1文章的結構一個完整的段落包括三部分：主題句，推展句和結論句。一篇完整的四六級作文包括三部分：引言，正文和結論。又稱：三段論。因此，可以說，文章是段落的擴展，段落是文章的壓縮。文章的結構一個完整的段落包括三部分：主題句，推展句和結論句2段落的結構段落的結構3文章的結構文章的結構4十句作文法具體地說，四六級作文實際是一個十句話短文（十句作文法）引言段兩句或三句話：開頭句+主題句（中心思想句+承上啟下的組織句）正文段四句話：主題句+三個擴（推）展句結論段四句或三句話：主題句+擴（推）展句+結論句十句作文法具體地說，四六級作文實際是一個十句話短文（十句作文5Example

LosingWeight1）減肥已成為時尚。2）人們熱衷于減肥的原因。3）減肥的有效方法。1）2sentences2）4sentences3）4sentencesExampleLosingWeight6LosingWeight1)Nowadays,manypeopleareverymuchworriedaboutbeingoverweight.2)Andpeople,theyoungandwomeninparticular,aretryingvariouswaystoloseweight.

LosingWeight1)Nowadays,many73)Therearemanyreasonswhymoreandmorepeopleareconcernedaboutlosingweight.4)Tobeginwith,theyareallawareofthedangerofbeingoverweight,whichmayleadtomanydiseasessuchashyper-tension,diabetesandheartattacks.5)Secondly,morepeoplehavebecomeconcernedabouttheirshapeandtheywanttoappearenergeticandyoung.6)What’smore,losingweightcanhelpthemfeelmentallyhealthierandbuilduptheirself-esteem.3)Therearemanyreasonswhym87)Therearedifferentmeansthroughwhichpeoplecanachievetheirgoaloflosingweight.8)Firstofall,someofthepeoplewhowanttoremovetheirfateatlessoreatnothing.9)Besides,theytakeweight-reducingdrugs.10)Butthemosteffectiveandhealthywaytoloseweightistotakeproperexercises.7)Therearedifferentmeansth9文章的開頭常言道：“織衣織褲，貴在起頭”，不落俗套，別致新穎的開頭（引言段）能吸引讀者，緊緊抓住讀者的注意力。在四六級考試作文評分中，采用globalscoring的評分原則，因此，文章的引言段是否能吸引assessor/examiner，是文章分數(shù)高低的一個關鍵。文章的開頭常言道：“織衣織褲，貴在起頭”，不落俗套，別致新穎10文章開頭寫作的兩點原則要緊扣文章標題，即開頭點題。要能順利地引出下文，和下文（文章中間部分——正文）的內(nèi)容相聯(lián)系，引發(fā)讀者興趣，使人想讀下去。文章開頭寫作的兩點原則要緊扣文章標題，即開頭點題。11首段寫作

（1）諺語法由于諺語一般已經(jīng)被大家所接受，用諺語提出自己的觀點也容易被讀者所接受。

例如：

Asthesaying(proverb)goes,“Hastemakeswaste.”Wearenowlivinginanageofrapidpaceandhighefficiency.Everyonewantstosetthequickestresultwithintheshortesttime.Butiftoomuchemphasisislaiduponspeed,peoplewillignorethequalityofwhattheyaredoing,andthusyieldunsatisfyingresults.首段寫作12Shakespearesaid:“Onewhoisunhappycannevergetabeneficialresult.”Thatistosay,happinessisveryimportantinourlife.FrancisBacononcesaid,“Somebooksaretobetasted,otherstobeswallowed,andsomefewtobechewedanddigested.”Perhapsthisisthebestadviceonhowtoread.Shakespearesaid:“Onewhois13此種開頭段的構成引用的諺語或名言+意義+主題（中心思想）LateChairmanMaoisrightinhissayingthatfailureisthemotherofsuccess.Weshoulddrawalessonfromfailureratherthanbedefeatedbyfailure.Walkthroughfailureandwewillsucceed.

此種開頭段的構成引用的諺語或名言+意義+主題（中心思想）14ThereisanoldEnglishsayingwhichgoes“Nopains,nogains.”Itillustratestheimportanceofhardworkintheprocessofsuccess.Inotherwords,diligenceisakeyfactortosuccess.ThereisanoldEnglishsaying15“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”isapopularsayinginEnglish.Thereismuchtruthinthisoldsaying.Itmeansthatinordertokeepusingoodhealth,wemusttakesufficientrecreation.“AllworkandnoplaymakesJa16常用的句型有：Thereisanoldsayingthat…Peopleoftensay…Itisoftenquotedthat…Oneofthegreatmenoncesaidthat…

常用的句型有：17（2）定義法定義法是通過對文章中的關鍵詞做一些簡單或正面或反面的解釋，限定其范圍，這樣比較有利于引出主題。

（2）定義法18例如：

Fashionmeansageneraltendencyamongpeopleinacertainsociety,forexample,theircommoninterestinclothes,inonetypeofhairstyleandsoon.Somepeoplelikefashion….例如：19MyFavoriteHobbyAhobbyisaninterestingwayofspendingone’sfreetime.Myfavoritehobbyisplayingchess.Inmyfreetime,Ioftenplaychesswithmyfather.Ilikeplayingchessinmysparetimebecauseofthefollowingthreemainreasons….這種文章開頭方法就是用定義開頭法。解釋文章的標題或話題。下定義MyFavoriteHobby20常用的句型有：Sth.is.../iscalled.../isconsideredtobe.../istakentobe.../referto.../means.../signifies…

大學英語寫作首末段句型示例分析課件21（3）提問法

通過提問一個或一連串的問題，可以激發(fā)讀者的興趣，從而引出主題。

例如：

Doyouhavemanyfriends?Aretheysimilartoyouordifferentfromyou?Whichkindoffriendsdoyouprefer?

（3）提問法22Whatisessentialforhappiness?Ourworldisabigworld,complexandfullofmanydiversepeople.Sodifferentpeoplemayhavedifferentopinions.Inmyopinion,happinessliesintheservicethatyougiveotherpeople.Whatisessentialforhappines23此種開頭段的構成這種開頭段的構成方法如下：問題+答案（過渡句+提供答案的進一步論述）+中心思想句此種開頭段的構成這種開頭段的構成方法如下：24Whatisatruestudentmeant?Atruestudentisonewhopossessesgoodmorality,soundhealth,perfectknowledgeandvariousabilities.Toattainthisend,Ishallgiveafewsuggestionsasfollows.Whatisatruestudentmeant?25（4）現(xiàn)象描述法指先總結文章內(nèi)容所涉及的現(xiàn)狀，然后引出主題。

例如：

Inrecentyears,whileourindustriesandbusinesseshavedevelopedquickly,thenumberoftreesinmanybigcitieshasdramaticallyreduced.Effortsarebeingmadetopreventpeoplefromcuttingmoretrees,buttorealizethesignificanceofmakingcitiesgreenerisofimportance.

（4）現(xiàn)象描述法26（5）主題句開篇法即開門見山直接陳述主題。例如：

Asahumanbeing,onecanhardlydowithoutafriend.Societyismadeupofindividuals,andmakingfriendsisaveryimportantpartofourlife.Friendscangiveyoualot.

（5）主題句開篇法27（6）故事法故事法指用簡單有趣的故事激發(fā)讀者的興趣，從而提出自己的觀點。

例如：

Mostofusmayhavesuchexperiences:whenyougotosomeplacefarawayfromthecitywhereyouliveandthinkyouknownobodythere,youaresupposedtofindthatyourunintooneofyouroldclassmatesonthestreets,perhapsbothofyouwouldcryout:“Whatasmallworld!”（6）故事法28（7）引語法

例如：

"Justaseatingwithoutlikingharmsthehealth,learningwithoutinterestharmsthememoryandcan'tberetained."FromVinci'swordswecanseehowimportantitistomotivatethestudentsinlanguagelearning.

（7）引語法29（8）調(diào)查法為了得到讀者的認可，文章的開始可以引出調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)等，借以提出主題。

例如：

Itwasreportedthatscientificstudieshadbeenmadetodeterminewhethersmokingwasahazardtohealth.Evidencehadshownthattherewasaserioushealthrisk.（8）調(diào)查法30（9）假設法假設法是指通過假設提出一種選擇，交代文章要涉及的問題，從而提出文章的主題。例如：

Supposeyouwereofferedtwojobs,oneishighly-paidbutratherdemanding,theotherislessdemanding,butpoorly-paid,whichwouldyouprefer?…（9）假設法31文章的結尾常言道：“編筐編簍，全在收口”。一篇優(yōu)秀的文章其結構和氣勢應為：“虎頭，牛身，豹尾?！蔽覀兊目忌牧壙荚嚂r所寫的文章往往由于時間緊張而“虎頭，蛇尾”。其實，文章結尾的好壞也在很大程度上影響文章的globalimpression.文章的結尾常言道：“編筐編簍，全在收口”。一篇優(yōu)秀的文章其結32文章結尾的作用1.歸納總結概括全文，得出結論。Allinall,travelingonone’sownhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.

文章結尾的作用1.歸納總結概括全文，得出結論。332.突出主要論點，重申強化主題（中心）。Inaword,mylifeoncampusisreallycolorfulandmeaningful.2.突出主要論點，重申強化主題（中心）。343.表達自己觀點，闡述立場。Asforme,ItakethepositionthatatestofspokenEnglishisextremelynecessaryanditshouldbeincludedinCET.3.表達自己觀點，闡述立場。35文章結尾的常用寫作方法重申主題句法總結（結論）法發(fā)表個人看法，總結全文反問結尾法引言結論法提倡議號召（喊口號）法文章結尾的常用寫作方法重申主題句法36

(1)重述或總結主題重述主題指于結論處以另外一種表達方式重申主題，與首段照應。

(1)重述或總結主題37重申主題句法Inconclusion,nothingismorevaluablethanhealth.Ingoodhealth,wecanabsorbknowledgemorereadily.Ingoodhealthwecanachievemoresuccessandmakemorecontributiontoourcountry.重申主題句法Inconclusion,nothingi38例如：

InfluenceonYoungAdults一文的開頭段是：Theprocessofgrowingupisverycomplexforeveryperson.Amongcountlessfactorswhichinfluenceaperson’sgrowth,therearetwoconspicuousaspects:thefamilyandthefriends.結尾段：Familiesofferuswarmthandcare.Friendsgiveusstrengthandhorizon.Theybothhelpusunderstandtheworldasitis.Bothofthemarethedearestpartsinourlife.例如：39常用句型表達InconclusionToconcludeInallAllthingsconsidered常用句型表達Inconclusion40Toconclude,nosuccesscanbeachievedwithoutlaboring.Successissimplythefruitofhardwork.

Inall,ourschoollifeisreallyinterestingandcolorful.Toconclude,nosuccesscanbe41（2）提建議、倡議號召法例如：

Sincepostcardsdousmoreharmthangood,sincewehavemanyotherwaystoconveyourfeelingsandpromoteourfriendship,Ihopeeveryonewilltakeactionsnowtostopusingpostcards.

（2）提建議、倡議號召法42Let’sjoininoureffortstofightagainstthefakecommoditiesandprotecttheinterestsofourpeopleandournation.Let’ssparenoeffortstoprotectourenvironmentfrombeingfurtherdamagedandsaveourplanet.Let’sjoininoureffortstof43常用句型Let’sjoinintheeffortstodo…Let’ssparenoeffortstodo…Let’stakeeffectivemeasurestodo…Let’stakeimmediateactionstodo…Let’stakepracticalstepstodo…常用句型Let’sjoinintheefforts44Onthewhole,asapernicious(harmful)hobby,smokingwilldoyoumoreharmthangood.Foryourownhealth(Forthesakeofyourownhealthandalsoforthatoftheothersaroundyou),

pleasekeepawayfromsmoking(pleasegiveupsmoking,pleasequit/stopsmoking).

Onthewhole,asapernicious45發(fā)表個人看法，總結全文Inmyopinion,thebalanceofthesetwokindsofactivitiesmightbemoreusefultothosewholiveinretirement.Inotherwords,physicalactivitiesarenecessaryforgoodhealthbutintellectualrecreationprovidesthemostpleasure.發(fā)表個人看法，總結全文Inmyopinion,the46常用句型InmyopinionPersonally,Ithink/believeItakethepositionthatIhold/taketheattitudethatAsfarasIamconcernedWereitlefttometodecide常用句型Inmyopinion47Asastudent,busyasIamwithmystudy,Ialsodomanyinterestingthingssuchasreadingnovels,writingarticlesatthetwo-dayweekend.IamfirminmybeliefthatAllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Asastudent,busyasIamwit48（3）概括總結

文章最后用幾句話概括全文內(nèi)容，并進一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者的觀點。例如：

Tosumup,inordertokeeptherespectablelife,thestudentsoughttobehavewellaccordingtothefourrulesmentionedabove:1.beambitious;2.bebroadminded;3.bebrave;and4.behonest.

（3）概括總結文章最后用幾句話概括全文內(nèi)容，并進一步肯49（4）提出預測和希望例如：

Inaword,TVadvertisement,Ithink,areanewbornthinginthedevelopmentofoureconomy,ofcourse,thereismuchroomforimprovementintheTVads.IbelievetheTVadswillbenefitboththeadvertisersandconsumers.（4）提出預測和希望50(5)．用反問結尾:雖然形式是問句，但意義卻是肯定的，具有明顯的強調(diào)作用，引起讀者思考。

1.Therefore,listeningskillsmustbeconsciouslyimproved.Sinceitissuchanimportantmeansoflearningandcommunication,whyshouldwenotdevelopthisabilityasfaraspossible?2.So,whatcanwebenefitfromwealthifwedonothavehealth?

(5)．用反問結尾:雖然形式是問句，但意義卻是肯定的，具有51反問結尾法Don’tyouthinkitishightimethatwetookeffectiveactionstofightagainstfakecommoditiesinthemarket?Don’tyouagreewithmyideathatatestoforalEnglishshouldbeincludedinCET-4and6?反問結尾法Don’tyouthinkitishig52常用句型Don’tyouthinkitisnecessaryforusto…?Don’tyouthinkitishigh/abouttimethatwedidsth.?Don’tyouagreewithmyidea/opinionthat…?常用句型Don’tyouthinkitisnece536．應用引語:用格言、諺語或習語總結全文，既言簡意賅又有更強的說服力。

1.Ifyouhaveanythingtodo,trytodoityourself,forthatisthesafestwaytopermanentsuccess.Rememberthefamoussaying."Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves."2.Ifwesticktostudiesdayafterday,thereisnothingthatcan'tbeachieved.Asanoldsayinggoes:"Constantdroppingofwaterwearsawayastone."

6．應用引語:用格言、諺語或習語總結全文，既言簡意賅又有更54Truefriendshipcannotbeboughtwithmoney.Theproverb“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed”isreallytrue.Truefriendshipcannotbeboug55演講完畢，謝謝觀看！演講完畢，謝謝觀看！56大學英語寫作首末段句型示例大學英語寫作首末段句型示例57文章的結構一個完整的段落包括三部分：主題句，推展句和結論句。一篇完整的四六級作文包括三部分：引言，正文和結論。又稱：三段論。因此，可以說，文章是段落的擴展，段落是文章的壓縮。文章的結構一個完整的段落包括三部分：主題句，推展句和結論句58段落的結構段落的結構59文章的結構文章的結構60十句作文法具體地說，四六級作文實際是一個十句話短文（十句作文法）引言段兩句或三句話：開頭句+主題句（中心思想句+承上啟下的組織句）正文段四句話：主題句+三個擴（推）展句結論段四句或三句話：主題句+擴（推）展句+結論句十句作文法具體地說，四六級作文實際是一個十句話短文（十句作文61Example

LosingWeight1）減肥已成為時尚。2）人們熱衷于減肥的原因。3）減肥的有效方法。1）2sentences2）4sentences3）4sentencesExampleLosingWeight62LosingWeight1)Nowadays,manypeopleareverymuchworriedaboutbeingoverweight.2)Andpeople,theyoungandwomeninparticular,aretryingvariouswaystoloseweight.

LosingWeight1)Nowadays,many633)Therearemanyreasonswhymoreandmorepeopleareconcernedaboutlosingweight.4)Tobeginwith,theyareallawareofthedangerofbeingoverweight,whichmayleadtomanydiseasessuchashyper-tension,diabetesandheartattacks.5)Secondly,morepeoplehavebecomeconcernedabouttheirshapeandtheywanttoappearenergeticandyoung.6)What’smore,losingweightcanhelpthemfeelmentallyhealthierandbuilduptheirself-esteem.3)Therearemanyreasonswhym647)Therearedifferentmeansthroughwhichpeoplecanachievetheirgoaloflosingweight.8)Firstofall,someofthepeoplewhowanttoremovetheirfateatlessoreatnothing.9)Besides,theytakeweight-reducingdrugs.10)Butthemosteffectiveandhealthywaytoloseweightistotakeproperexercises.7)Therearedifferentmeansth65文章的開頭常言道：“織衣織褲，貴在起頭”，不落俗套，別致新穎的開頭（引言段）能吸引讀者，緊緊抓住讀者的注意力。在四六級考試作文評分中，采用globalscoring的評分原則，因此，文章的引言段是否能吸引assessor/examiner，是文章分數(shù)高低的一個關鍵。文章的開頭常言道：“織衣織褲，貴在起頭”，不落俗套，別致新穎66文章開頭寫作的兩點原則要緊扣文章標題，即開頭點題。要能順利地引出下文，和下文（文章中間部分——正文）的內(nèi)容相聯(lián)系，引發(fā)讀者興趣，使人想讀下去。文章開頭寫作的兩點原則要緊扣文章標題，即開頭點題。67首段寫作

（1）諺語法由于諺語一般已經(jīng)被大家所接受，用諺語提出自己的觀點也容易被讀者所接受。

例如：

Asthesaying(proverb)goes,“Hastemakeswaste.”Wearenowlivinginanageofrapidpaceandhighefficiency.Everyonewantstosetthequickestresultwithintheshortesttime.Butiftoomuchemphasisislaiduponspeed,peoplewillignorethequalityofwhattheyaredoing,andthusyieldunsatisfyingresults.首段寫作68Shakespearesaid:“Onewhoisunhappycannevergetabeneficialresult.”Thatistosay,happinessisveryimportantinourlife.FrancisBacononcesaid,“Somebooksaretobetasted,otherstobeswallowed,andsomefewtobechewedanddigested.”Perhapsthisisthebestadviceonhowtoread.Shakespearesaid:“Onewhois69此種開頭段的構成引用的諺語或名言+意義+主題（中心思想）LateChairmanMaoisrightinhissayingthatfailureisthemotherofsuccess.Weshoulddrawalessonfromfailureratherthanbedefeatedbyfailure.Walkthroughfailureandwewillsucceed.

此種開頭段的構成引用的諺語或名言+意義+主題（中心思想）70ThereisanoldEnglishsayingwhichgoes“Nopains,nogains.”Itillustratestheimportanceofhardworkintheprocessofsuccess.Inotherwords,diligenceisakeyfactortosuccess.ThereisanoldEnglishsaying71“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”isapopularsayinginEnglish.Thereismuchtruthinthisoldsaying.Itmeansthatinordertokeepusingoodhealth,wemusttakesufficientrecreation.“AllworkandnoplaymakesJa72常用的句型有：Thereisanoldsayingthat…Peopleoftensay…Itisoftenquotedthat…Oneofthegreatmenoncesaidthat…

常用的句型有：73（2）定義法定義法是通過對文章中的關鍵詞做一些簡單或正面或反面的解釋，限定其范圍，這樣比較有利于引出主題。

（2）定義法74例如：

Fashionmeansageneraltendencyamongpeopleinacertainsociety,forexample,theircommoninterestinclothes,inonetypeofhairstyleandsoon.Somepeoplelikefashion….例如：75MyFavoriteHobbyAhobbyisaninterestingwayofspendingone’sfreetime.Myfavoritehobbyisplayingchess.Inmyfreetime,Ioftenplaychesswithmyfather.Ilikeplayingchessinmysparetimebecauseofthefollowingthreemainreasons….這種文章開頭方法就是用定義開頭法。解釋文章的標題或話題。下定義MyFavoriteHobby76常用的句型有：Sth.is.../iscalled.../isconsideredtobe.../istakentobe.../referto.../means.../signifies…

大學英語寫作首末段句型示例分析課件77（3）提問法

通過提問一個或一連串的問題，可以激發(fā)讀者的興趣，從而引出主題。

例如：

Doyouhavemanyfriends?Aretheysimilartoyouordifferentfromyou?Whichkindoffriendsdoyouprefer?

（3）提問法78Whatisessentialforhappiness?Ourworldisabigworld,complexandfullofmanydiversepeople.Sodifferentpeoplemayhavedifferentopinions.Inmyopinion,happinessliesintheservicethatyougiveotherpeople.Whatisessentialforhappines79此種開頭段的構成這種開頭段的構成方法如下：問題+答案（過渡句+提供答案的進一步論述）+中心思想句此種開頭段的構成這種開頭段的構成方法如下：80Whatisatruestudentmeant?Atruestudentisonewhopossessesgoodmorality,soundhealth,perfectknowledgeandvariousabilities.Toattainthisend,Ishallgiveafewsuggestionsasfollows.Whatisatruestudentmeant?81（4）現(xiàn)象描述法指先總結文章內(nèi)容所涉及的現(xiàn)狀，然后引出主題。

例如：

Inrecentyears,whileourindustriesandbusinesseshavedevelopedquickly,thenumberoftreesinmanybigcitieshasdramaticallyreduced.Effortsarebeingmadetopreventpeoplefromcuttingmoretrees,buttorealizethesignificanceofmakingcitiesgreenerisofimportance.

（4）現(xiàn)象描述法82（5）主題句開篇法即開門見山直接陳述主題。例如：

Asahumanbeing,onecanhardlydowithoutafriend.Societyismadeupofindividuals,andmakingfriendsisaveryimportantpartofourlife.Friendscangiveyoualot.

（5）主題句開篇法83（6）故事法故事法指用簡單有趣的故事激發(fā)讀者的興趣，從而提出自己的觀點。

例如：

Mostofusmayhavesuchexperiences:whenyougotosomeplacefarawayfromthecitywhereyouliveandthinkyouknownobodythere,youaresupposedtofindthatyourunintooneofyouroldclassmatesonthestreets,perhapsbothofyouwouldcryout:“Whatasmallworld!”（6）故事法84（7）引語法

例如：

"Justaseatingwithoutlikingharmsthehealth,learningwithoutinterestharmsthememoryandcan'tberetained."FromVinci'swordswecanseehowimportantitistomotivatethestudentsinlanguagelearning.

（7）引語法85（8）調(diào)查法為了得到讀者的認可，文章的開始可以引出調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)等，借以提出主題。

例如：

Itwasreportedthatscientificstudieshadbeenmadetodeterminewhethersmokingwasahazardtohealth.Evidencehadshownthattherewasaserioushealthrisk.（8）調(diào)查法86（9）假設法假設法是指通過假設提出一種選擇，交代文章要涉及的問題，從而提出文章的主題。例如：

Supposeyouwereofferedtwojobs,oneishighly-paidbutratherdemanding,theotherislessdemanding,butpoorly-paid,whichwouldyouprefer?…（9）假設法87文章的結尾常言道：“編筐編簍，全在收口”。一篇優(yōu)秀的文章其結構和氣勢應為：“虎頭，牛身，豹尾?！蔽覀兊目忌牧壙荚嚂r所寫的文章往往由于時間緊張而“虎頭，蛇尾”。其實，文章結尾的好壞也在很大程度上影響文章的globalimpression.文章的結尾常言道：“編筐編簍，全在收口”。一篇優(yōu)秀的文章其結88文章結尾的作用1.歸納總結概括全文，得出結論。Allinall,travelingonone’sownhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.

文章結尾的作用1.歸納總結概括全文，得出結論。892.突出主要論點，重申強化主題（中心）。Inaword,mylifeoncampusisreallycolorfulandmeaningful.2.突出主要論點，重申強化主題（中心）。903.表達自己觀點，闡述立場。Asforme,ItakethepositionthatatestofspokenEnglishisextremelynecessaryanditshouldbeincludedinCET.3.表達自己觀點，闡述立場。91文章結尾的常用寫作方法重申主題句法總結（結論）法發(fā)表個人看法，總結全文反問結尾法引言結論法提倡議號召（喊口號）法文章結尾的常用寫作方法重申主題句法92

(1)重述或總結主題重述主題指于結論處以另外一種表達方式重申主題，與首段照應。

(1)重述或總結主題93重申主題句法Inconclusion,nothingismorevaluablethanhealth.Ingoodhealth,wecanabsorbknowledgemorereadily.Ingoodhealthwecanachievemoresuccessandmakemorecontributiontoourcountry.重申主題句法Inconclusion,nothingi94例如：

InfluenceonYoungAdults一文的開頭段是：Theprocessofgrowingupisverycomplexforeveryperson.Amongcountlessfactorswhichinfluenceaperson’sgrowth,therearetwoconspicuousaspects:thefamilyandthefriends.結尾段：Familiesofferuswarmthandcare.Friendsgiveusstrengthandhorizon.Theybothhelpusunderstandtheworldasitis.Bothofthemarethedearestpartsinourlife.例如：95常用句型表達InconclusionToconcludeInallAllthingsconsidered常用句型表達Inconclusion96Toconclude,nosuccesscanbeachievedwithoutlaboring.Successissimplythefruitofhardwork.

Inall,ourschoollifeisreallyinterestingandcolorful.Toconclude,nosuccesscanbe97（2）提建議、倡議號召法例如：

Sincepostcardsdousmoreharmthangood,sincewehavemanyotherwaystoconveyourfeelingsandpromoteourfriendship,Ihopeeveryonewilltakeactionsnowtostopusingpostcards.

（2）提建議、倡議號召法98Let’sjoininoureffortstofightagainstthefakecommoditiesandprotecttheinterestsofourpeopleandournation.Let’ssparenoeffortstoprotectourenvironmentfrombeingfurtherdamagedandsaveourplanet.Let’sjoininoureffortstof99常用句型Let’sjoinintheeffortstodo…Let’ssparenoeffortstodo…Let’stakeeffectivemeasurestodo…Let’stakeimmediateactionstodo…Let’stakepracticalstepstodo…常用句型Let’sjoinintheefforts100Onthewhole,asapernicious(harmful)hobby,smokingwilldoyoumoreharmthangood.Foryourownhealth(Forthesakeofyourownhealthandalsoforthatoftheothersaroundyou),

pleasekeepawayfromsmoking(pleasegiveupsmoking,pleasequit/stopsmoking).

Onthewhole,asapernicious101發(fā)表個人看法，總結全文Inmyopinion,thebalanceofthesetwokindsofactivitiesmightbemoreusefultothosewholiveinretirement.Inotherwords,physicalactivitiesarenecessaryforgoodhealthbutintellectualrecreationprovidesthemostpleasure.發(fā)表個人看法，總結全文Inmyopinion