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議論文題型分類大全搞定這一步，穩(wěn)穩(wěn)上6.5分！TwoQuestions=Report原因分析+解決方案原因分析+有何影響原因分析+隨機(鬼才知道會問什么)造成的問題+解決方案---特別注意你有可能遇到其中任何一種組合TwoQuestions=ReportWhatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatproblemsdoesitcause?往年真題很多人不認識自己的鄰居。(原因+解決)全世界的城市越來越相似。(原因+影響)爸媽在家扮演的角色有很大不同。(原因+會不會有改變)人類壽命越來越長。(導致的問題+解決)report類型的核心段(原因+解決方案版本)1.直接改寫原題，不需要背景引出(擴充或者縮減原題)+承上啟下(提前總結原因/空話過渡)2.第一個原因分析。(idea--support)3.Inaddition,第二個原因分析。(idea--support)4.~~~(強調(diào)問題很嚴重/強調(diào)做某事很重要)~~~~someasuresshouldbetakento…….解決方案1+結果解決方案2+結果5.總結(重復原因/解決方案)2022/12/18用來寫原因的topicsentences1.Thefirstreasonfortheshortageofyoungerteachersisthatateachingjobpayspoorly.2.Thefirstreasonwhybicycleridingisnolongerpopularisthatpeopletodayhavemuchmorechoicesfortransportation.3.Inaddition,theincreaseintheamountofrubbishisalsoaresultofpeopleusingmoredisposableproducts.4.Itistruethatpoorhealthofthegeneralpopulationisassociatedwithpeoplebadeatinghabits.5.事實+過程+結果(這是最應該學會也是最自然的解釋原因方式)2022/12/18分析原因的角度1.不能只局限在中國；2.通過年代對比找到原因(至關重要)；3.必須從事實出發(fā)去寫原因；2022/12/18到底都有哪些變化？1.現(xiàn)代人-忙/錢多/懶/不動2.現(xiàn)代媒體(更多關注negativereports);3.現(xiàn)代工作(變得越來越knowledge-based)；4.現(xiàn)代家庭(孩子減少，溺愛孩子);5.現(xiàn)代教育(更專注孩子的all-rounddevelopment);6.現(xiàn)代城市(越來越multicultural/ethnically-mixed/racially-mixed)；2022/12/18解決方案--切實可行1.政府---至關重要(收稅/花錢/頒布法律)；1).Thegovernmentcouldimposehighertaxeson……sothat…….2).Whatthegovernmentshoulddoistoinvestin…../financiallysupport…../spendmoneydoing……….3).Thegovernmentoughttorequire…..to…...2.個人3.家長4.學校5.公司6.authorities2022/12/18

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1.第一段超簡單；2.原因只寫了一個，大量的support解釋；3.解決方案先粗略，然后很仔細；2022/12/182022/12/182022/12/18范文-21.第一段后半部分太繁瑣；2.原因分析給了兩個idea，非常標準；3.解決方案非常精確；4.結尾段清晰；5.整個結構非常標準；2022/12/182022/12/182022/12/18范文-31.劍橋考生范文，分數(shù)是6.5；2.語法錯誤很多，但是大部分時候表達清晰；3.原因分析太偏向不健康的飲食，對缺乏鍛煉解釋太少；4.解決方案很細致，考官會喜歡；5.這個范文是給大家增加信心用的；2022/12/182022/12/182022/12/18report類型的核心段(原因+有何影響版本)1.直接改寫原題，不需要背景引出(擴充或者縮減原題)+承上啟下(提前總結原因/空話過渡)2.Oneofthereasonsisthat第一個原因分析。(idea--support)3.Inaddition,第二個原因分析。(idea--support)4.過渡句---Tomyknowledge,thereare完全取決于你自己(好/壞/雖然….但是…..)5.總結(重復原因/影響)2022/12/18Someemployersthinkthatformalacademicqualificationsaremoreimportantthanlifeexperiencesandpersonalqualitieswhentheylookforanemployee.Whyisitthecase?Isitapositiveornegativedevelopment?

2022/12/18Nowadays

,moreimportanceisattachedtoformaleducationalqualificationsthanlifeexperienceandpersonalqualitieswhenacompanyisrecruitingnewemployees.Thereasonsbehindthisphenomenonaremultiple,andIbelieveitisapositivedevelopmentinthelong-run.Firstofall,universityqualificationsprovidedirectproofsofcandidates’competencies.Employerscanhaveaclearpictureofwhatuniversitiesandcoursethecandidateshave

attended,andwhatscorestheyhaveachieved

.Unlikelifeexperiencesandpersonalities,qualificationsarequantifiabledatathatcanbemeasuredeasilyandquickly.2022/12/18Inaddition,peopleholdingqualificationscouldadapttothenewjobmuchmoresmoothly.

Theynormallyneedlesson-jobtrainingwhenstartingajob,andunlikethosewithouthighereducation,theyhavebetterabilityintermsofcriticalthinking,problem-solvingandexpertiseacquiredinuniversityeducation.

Tomyknowledge,givingprioritytohigherqualificationsresultsinmoreadvantagesthandisadvantages.Themostobviousbenefitisthatitencouragesyoungpeopletopursue

higheracademiceducation,whichbroadenstheircareerprospects.Fromthesocietyperspective,itwillcreateahighlyeducatedanddevelopedsocietyifeveryonechoosestoreceivehighereducation.

Inconclusion,universityqualificationsareneededinthisknowledge-basedsocietyandIbelievethistrendbringsmorebenefitsthandrawbacks.Ifgovernmentsallocatemoremoneytotertiaryeducation,itwillsurelybringaboutlong-termbenefitstobothindividualsandthesocietyasawhole

.2022/12/18Report類型的第一段一般不需要背景句，題目中的現(xiàn)象本身就是背景，所以只需要直接開始改寫的工作就可以了。2022/12/18report類型的介紹段(主語總結話題的能力)1)Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudents’behavior.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatsolutionsdoyousuggest?Poorstudentbehaviorseemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadprobleminmanycountries.Ithinkthattheirbehavingpoorlycanbeexplainedbythefollowingreasons.2022/12/18report類型的介紹段(主語總結話題的能力)2).Theaverageweightofcitizenshasbeenincreasinginmanycountries.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatsolutionsdoyousuggest?Theincreaseintheaverageweightofpeopleseemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadprobleminmanycountries.Thisessaywillanalysepossiblereasonsforthisandtrytosuggestsomesolutions.2022/12/18report類型的介紹段(主語總結話題的能力)3).Peopleknowlittleabouttheirneighbors.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatsolutionsdoyousuggest?Thelackofcommunicationandinteractionbetweenneighborsisnotmoninmanycountries.Ibelievethatmodernlifestylesareresponsibleforthisandthatmeasuresshouldbetakentochangethissituation.2022/12/18report類型的介紹段(Therebe句型的基礎能力)4).Childrenandteenagersarecommittingmorecrimesthanbefore.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Howshouldtheybepunished?Therehasbeenanincreaseinthenumberofcrimescommittedbychildrenandteenagers.Ithinktherearetwomajorreasonsthatcanexplainthis.2022/12/18report類型的介紹段(把題目里的概念細化一下)5).Therearesomeactivitiesthatareharmfultopeople'shealth,buttheyarestillpopularwithmanypeople.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauses?Whatsolutionsdoyousuggest?改：Itiscommonsensethatactivitieslikesmokingcigarettesorstayinguplateresultinhealthproblems.Unfortunately,aconsiderableproportionofpeoplearestillobsessedwiththem.Ithinklthiscanbeexplainedbythefollowingreasons.2022/12/182022/12/18report類型的結尾段類型一：直接重復“原因+解決方案”Inconclusion,unhealthyeatinghabitsandsedentarylifest