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上升的動(dòng)詞：increase,rise,surge,enlarge,swell,soar,enhance,climb,jump,augment,goup下降的動(dòng)詞：decrease,descend,decline,drop,shrink,diminish,dwindle,tape形容動(dòng)詞的副詞：considerably,sharply,remarkably,dramatically,greatly,drastically,extremely,steadily,substantially,continually,continuously,moderately,respectively,generally,slightly,mainly,strikinglyStockpriceshavebeenextremelyvolatile.Theyclimbedsteadilyinthe1950’s,reachedapeakin1966,andthenfluctuatedupanddownuntil1973,whentheyfellsharply.Stockpriceshadrecoveredsubstantiallybytheearly1980swhenamajorstockmarketboomagain,sendingtoDowJonesIndustryAverage(DJIA)toapeakof2722onAugust25,1987.Aftera17%declineoverthenextmonthandahalf,thestockmarketexperiencedtheworstone-daydropinitsentirehistoryon“BlackMonday”,October19,1987,whentheDJIAfellbymorethan500points,a22％decline.句型的變化主體做主語Between1940and1985theproportionoftheelderlypeopleincreasedremarkablyfromabout17%inSwedenand9%intheUSAto13%and15%respectively.年代做主語＋saw+Theperiodfrom1940to1985sawagenerallysteadyincreaseintheortionof3.地點(diǎn)做主語＋experiencedBoththeUSAandSwedenexperiencedanalarming/moderayaseintheproportion寫作時(shí)首是命題的改得分while...shows…,…illustrate…(劍五P52,劍四P100劍四P54)For（首段）Thethreelinesinthecharteachshowthe changesintheproportionoftheelderlypeopletothepopulationoftheUSA,SwedenandJapanfrom1940tilltoday.Alsothechartgivespredicteddateforthetrends.(主體段)Since1940,theproportionintheUSAhasbeenslightlyhigherthanthatinSwedenatanygiventime,whilethatinJapanwasalwaysthesmallest.Specially,thefiguresforthethreecountriesin1940were9%,7%,5%respectively.ThechangesintheproportionintheUSAandSwedenarefeaturedmainlybysteadyincreasealthoughsince1980theUSAexperiencedsomewhatdeclines.Bycontrast,Japandidnotseeincreasesubstantially,sendingittoapeakof5%in2007,thesameasin1940.Accordingtothepredictionsince2000,theupwardtrendswillhavebeenobviousinthethreecountries,butinJapanwillsoaratthefastestspeed.Till/By2040thefigurewillhavereached27%,comparedwith25%intheUSAand23%inSweden.InthetermofthelengthoftheUndergroundRailwaySystem(URS),thatinLondonranksfirstamongthesixinthatitreaches394km,almost36timeslongerthanthatinKyoto,theshortest.ThesecondlongestisinParisFocusingontheopendate,weseethatonceagainLondonURSwasstrikinglyearlierthanallothercounterparts.Putitaccuray,LondonopenedtheURSasearlyasin1863,37yearsearlierthanthatinParis.Bycontrast,theyoungestisLAwhodidnotstarttorunURSuntil2001.段落劃分要合理（得分點(diǎn)P75Tobelocatedinthetowncentre,S2isinthetowncentre,anon-trafficzone.Asresult,itisonlyaccessiblebytherailwaywhereasthemainroadsareunavailable.Moreover,itishemmedoutthehouses,meaningit’sconvenientforthedwellerstodosomeshop.Inaddition,itisclosertothesouthindustrybutfarawayfromthenorth.UnlikeS2,S1willbesetinthecountryside,whereboththerailwayandmainroadsareready.Butthe44000peoplefromBransdonandCrandsonfinditnoteasytoreachS1,althoughitisconnectedbytherailwaywithCrandson.Furthermore,thissiteisfarawayfromthetwoindustryareas.However,itis