初中英語中考復習 66 各地中考真題再現(xiàn)02 2021年中考英語書面表達高分作文攻略（全國通用版）

66各地中考真題再現(xiàn)022021年中考英語書面表達高分作文攻略（全國通用版）（1）近年來，學生意外傷害事故頻發(fā)，給許多家庭帶來永久的傷痛。作為中學生，我們該如何有效的自我保護，免受傷害呢?我市正在舉行以“HowtoKeepSafe”為題的中學生安全知識英語征文比賽，請你根據(jù)下表提示，寫一篇短文參賽吧。HowtoKeepSafeTraffictrafficlights,electricbikes（電動車）…Swimmingrivers,swimmingpool…InternetIDnumber,code(密碼）,unhealthywebsites……………要求：1.短文必須包含提示中所有內(nèi)容，并適當發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；4.詞數(shù)：80-100（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。HowtoKeepSafeDoyouknowthatmanydangerousthingswillhappenifwearenotcarefulenough?Asastudent,howtokeepsafeisveryimportant.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterall,lifeisveryimportant.Weshouldlearnsomethingaboutself-protectionsothatwecanprotectourselveswell.【寫作思路】近年來，學生意外傷害事故頻發(fā)，給許多家庭帶來永久的傷痛。作為中學生，我們該如何有效的自我保護，免受傷害呢?我市正在舉行以“HowtoKeepSafe”為題的中學生安全知識英語征文比賽，給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹縃owtoKeepSafeDoyouknowthatmanydangerousthingswillhappenifwearenotcarefulenough?Asastudent,howtokeepsafeisveryimportant.First,weshouldobeythetrafficrules.Whenthelightsarered,weshouldn'tcrosstheroad.Andweshouldn'tridetheelectricbicycles.Second,weshouldn'tswimintheriverbecauseit'sdangerous.Wecangoswimmingwithourparentsinaswimmingpool.Third,weshouldn'ttellstrangersourIDnumberorcodewhenwearesurfingtheInternet.Weshouldn'tsurfunhealthywebsites.What'smore,weshouldn'tgooutwithfriendswithoutourparents'permission.Ifweareindanger,wecanaskforhelpfromourparentsorteachers,evenpolice.Afterall,lifeisveryimportant.Weshouldlearnsomethingaboutself-protectionsothatwecanprotectourselveswell.文中用到了非常好的句型：weshouldobeythetrafficrules.Whenthelightsarered,weshouldn'tcrosstheroad.；Third,weshouldn'ttellstrangersourIDnumberorcodewhenwearesurfingtheInternet.這些給文章增色不少。（2）為了讓學生吃到更加營養(yǎng)、安全的食品，政府出臺了陪餐制，要求從4月1日起，學校領(lǐng)導陪同學生用餐。請你根據(jù)以下要點，給校報英語專欄寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?.學生吃得健康、安全；2.及時發(fā)現(xiàn)就餐問題；3.食堂提供食品多樣；4.父母更加放心。注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.參考詞匯:規(guī)定regulation(n.)；食堂cafeteria(n.)；營養(yǎng)的nutritious(adj.)AnewfoodsafetyregulationwasputintouseonApril1toimprovenutritionandfoodsafetyinschools.Itaskstheschoolmanagerstoeatwithstudentsintheircafeterias.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作思路】本文屬于材料作文，就政府出臺的“陪餐制度”談?wù)勀愕目捶?。根?jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如thanksto,takeplace,beableto,providesthforsb,inotherwords,worryabout,not...atall,carryon,first,second以及also，增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。【參考范文】AnewfoodsafetyregulationwasputintouseonApril1toimprovenutritionandfoodsafetyinschools.Itaskstheschoolmanagerstoeatwithstudentsintheircafeterias.Thankstotheregulation,somethinggreathastakenplaceinourschool.First,weeathealthierandsaferthanbefore.Second,ifthereisanyproblemaboutfoodsafetyorother,ourschoolleadersareabletoknowandsolveitquickly.Also,thecafeteriaworkersaretryingtoprovidedifferentkindsoffoodforus.Inotherwords,ourparentsneedn’tworryaboutourdietanymore.Weteenagersarestillyoungandneedtogrowhealthy,soIthinkthenewregulationisreallygoodandnecessary.Ihopeitwillbecarriedonforever.（3）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李華，你們學校正在開展“安全月”宣傳活動，倡議大家制作關(guān)于安全教育的主題海報，你們班交換生Peter給你發(fā)郵件詢問相關(guān)事情。請用英語回復一封郵件，告訴他海報上交的時間，并分享你設(shè)計海報的一些想法。提示詞語：design，safetyrule，careful，protect，picture提示問題：Whenshouldyouhandintheposter?WhatwouldyouliketosharewithPeteraboutdesigningtheposter?DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyouremail_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IfthereisanythingmorethatIcanhelpwith,pleaseletmeknow.Yours,LiHua【寫作思路】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給Peter寫一封郵件，告訴他關(guān)于制作關(guān)于安全教育的主題海報的相關(guān)事宜。由題目中給出的提示問題可知，短文中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：首先告訴Peter海報上交的時間；然后和他分享一些設(shè)計海報的想法。第二個內(nèi)容應(yīng)該是短文的主體。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，學生們應(yīng)聯(lián)系自己的實際生活，展開合理的想象，將這些內(nèi)容補充完整后，用正確的英語表達出來，這是寫作中的一個難點。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主、第一、二人稱來敘述。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先要合理安排短文內(nèi)容，敘述應(yīng)有層次、有條理?？梢允褂靡恍┍硎鞠群箜樞虻脑~或短語，如First,Second,Lastbutnotleast等等。題目中給出的提示詞應(yīng)該在短文中用上。其次應(yīng)注意文章的表達，英語句式的結(jié)構(gòu)與漢語是不同的，因此不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)該從句式的整體考慮，先確定主干結(jié)構(gòu)，然后添加修飾成分。為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)注意使用一些高級詞匯、短語以及復合句、非謂語動詞等復雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意上下連貫，表達流暢。【參考范文】DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyouremail.Asitisrequired，youaresupposedtohandintheposterbeforenextFriday.Beingyourclosefriend，Iamextremelywillingtosharesomeideasaboutdesigningtheposterwithyou.Firstandforemost，thebasicsafetyrulesareofgreatimportance，whichshouldbeincludedinyourposter.Inthesecondplace，followingthesafetyrulesissomeaningfulandcrucialthatyouhadbetterremindyourreadersofitssignificanceandadvisethemtobecarefulbothinandoutofschool.Lastbutbynomeansleast，ifIwereyou，Iwouldaddafewsuggestionsaboutsafetyawareness，consideringthatbettersafethansorry.Inaddition，itisagoodideaforyoutodrawafewpicturesonyourpostersoastomakeitmorelivelyandacceptable.IfthereisanythingmorethatIcanhelpwith,pleaseletmeknow.Yours,LiHua這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，給Peter寫郵件，告訴他制作主題海報的一些事情。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合題目要求。除題目中給出的開頭和結(jié)尾，短文主要包括兩個內(nèi)容：第一段用一句話告訴Peter上交海報的時間；文章的中心和重點是放在了第二段上，這一段中作者和Peter分享了一些制作海報的想法。主要從四個方面進行闡述，內(nèi)容非常詳實，并使用了Firstandforemost,Inthesecondplace,Lastbutbynomeansleast,Inaddition等短語，分清了這一段的層次，敘述非常有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，并使用了較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，表現(xiàn)了作者較強的語言運用能力。短文中較好的句型有：Beingyourclosefriend，Iamextremelywillingtosharesomeideasaboutdesigningtheposterwithyou.、Inthesecondplace，followingthesafetyrulesissomeaningfulandcrucialthatyouhadbetterremindyourreadersofitssignificanceandadvisethemtobecarefulbothinandoutofschool、Inaddition，itisagoodideaforyoutodrawafewpicturesonyourpostersoastomakeitmorelivelyandacceptable.等。（4）每個人的生命只有一次，一定要珍愛自己的生命。該怎樣安全自救？請根據(jù)以下提示，以HowtoProtectOurselves為標題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。安全對每個人都很重要交通：外出時遵守交通規(guī)則食品：吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品活動：體育鍛煉時，不要弄傷自己不私自下河游泳自救是重要的技能之一交友需謹慎遠離危險之人遇到危險保持冷靜然后要及時報警或向老師、家長求助盡可能避免受傷害保證自己的安全要求：1.語言表達準確，短文連貫、通順。2.短文應(yīng)包括所有內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯。3.詞數(shù)80左右。文章開頭部分已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：參考詞匯：safety,trafficrules,hurtoneself,withoutpermission,self-protection,stayawayfrom…,becareful,beindanger,keepcalm,call…forhelp,behurt.Dearfriends,Everyonehasonlyonelife,weshouldtreasureourlives.Buthowcanweprotectourselves?Herearesomesuggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,weshouldtryourbesttoprotectourselvesandvalueourlives.That’sall.Thankyou!【寫作思路】本文是根據(jù)材料提示寫作，所以分析所給材料之后，首先要在頭腦中確定文章的整體結(jié)構(gòu)，然后逐步細化．就像蓋房子一樣，先有整體框架，然后是房間，最后是室內(nèi)裝修．【參考范文】Dearfriends，Everyonehasonlyonelife，weshouldtreasureourlives．Buthowcanweprotectourselves？Herearesomesuggestions．Ontheonehand，weshouldrealizetheimportanceofsafetyandknowwhattodo．First，whenwegoout，wemustfollowtrafficrules．Ifwewalk，wemustusesidewalksandmustn'trunaredlight；Ifweridebikes，wemustridealongtherightsideandshouldn'tcarryothers；Second，weshoulddevelopahealthyeatinghabits．Eatregularmealseverydayandtrynottoeatjunkfoodoreatless．Whenfoodsmellsbad，don'teatit．Third，whenweplaysportsorgames，becarefulnottohurtourselves．Fourth，wemustn'tswiminriverswithoutourparentsorotheradultsaround．Ontheotherhand，weshouldlearntoprotectourselves，whichisoneofthemostimportantlivingskills．Wemustbecarefulwhenmakingfriendsespeciallyonline．Somepersononlinearenothonest．Theyaredangerous，sowemustkeepawayfromthem．Ifwehappentohavetrouble，weshouldkeepcalmandremembertoaskourparents，teachersorpoliceforhelpsothatwecanprotectourselvesfromdangerorbeinghurt．Inaword，weshouldtryourbesttoprotectourselvesandvalueourlives．That'sall．Thankyou!點評高分句型一：weshouldrealizetheimportanceofsafetyandknowwhattodo.我們應(yīng)該意識到安全的重要性，并且知道如何去做。短語theimportanceof，whattodo結(jié)構(gòu)；高分句型二：whenwegoout，wemustfollowtrafficrules.當我們外出時，必須遵守交通規(guī)則。狀語從句，情態(tài)動詞；高分句型三：weshouldlearntoprotectourselves，whichisoneofthemostimportantlivingskills．我們應(yīng)該學會保護自己，這是最重要的生存能力之一。定語從句；高分句型四：wemustkeepawayfromthem．我們必須遠離他們。keepawayfrom短語高分句型五：weshouldkeepcalmandremembertoaskourparents，teachersorpoliceforhelpsothatwecanprotectourselvesfromdangerorbeinghurt．我們應(yīng)該保持冷靜，并且記住及時向家長，老師或警察求助。以便于保護自己遠離危險，避免受傷害。remembertodo結(jié)構(gòu)，ask...forhelp，intime短語；sothat引導的目的狀語從句，protect..from...短語。（5）請你根據(jù)上面五個問題的內(nèi)容及你的回答，結(jié)合以下提示，以“HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?”為題，寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名。提示：1.謹慎交友。2.不參與打架斗毆。3.面對校園欺凌怎樣自我保護。參考詞匯：1.self-protection（自我保護）2.bully(n./v.欺凌）3.personalsafety（人身安全）4.haveviolentbehaviors(打架斗毆）HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作思路】這是一篇話題作文，以“HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?”為題，寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文。本文人稱主要第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。仔細閱讀所給材料，認真審題，確定主題，確定要點，根據(jù)要點適當發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容。字數(shù)80-100詞。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。【參考范文】HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?Schoolbullieshappeninalmosteveryschool.Inmyschool,wesometimeshavebulliesandsomestudentsarehurt,soitisreallybadforustobullyothersorbebulliedatschool.Wearesupposedtostopanyschoolbullywhenweareinthetroubleofit.Forexample,weshouldstaycalmbeforeabullyingbehaviorhappens.Weshouldalwaysbefriendlyandhelpfulwhenmakingfriendswithothers.Herearesomeofmyideasaboutstoppingschoolbullies.Firstly,wewilllearnhowtohaveaself-protectionbecauseourpersonalsafetyisthemostimportant.Secondly,weshouldbepeacefulwithothersatalltimesandcan'thaveanyviolentbehavior.Finally,obeyingschoolrulesisalsoawaytoavoidschoolbullies.I'mhopingthatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture,doyouthinkso?（6）每年三月的最后一個星期一是"全國中小學生安全教育日"．為了提高同學們的安全意識，學校決定在畢業(yè)前再舉行一次以安全教育為主題的班會．請根據(jù)所給提示，就日常生活中需要注意的安全寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿．提示：1．上學、放學途中的安全；2．校園里的安全；3．家里的安全．要求：1．80詞左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．語法正確，語句通順、流暢；3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名．Hello，everyone!ThelastMondayinMarcheveryyearisNationalSafetyEducationDayofPrimaryandMiddleSchoolStudents．Asmiddleschoolstudents，weshould_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Safetyisveryimportant．Weshouldalwayskeepitinmind．Thankyou!【參考范文】Hello，everyone!ThelastMondayinMarcheveryyearisNationalSafetyEducationDayofPrimaryandMiddleSchoolStudents．Asmiddleschoolstudents，weshouldpaymoreattentiontosafety．Tobesafe，wemustfollowrules．Whenwegotoschoolorgohomefromschool，wemustfollowthetrafficrules．Forexample，wemustwalkonwalk-side．Whenwecrosszebra﹣crossing，stopandlookrightandleft，thengoacrosstheroadfast．【高分句型一】Wemustn'trunthroughredlightswhencrossingtheroad．Don'tplayfootballontheroad．（上學、放學途中的安全）Atschool，don'tpushwhenwegoupstairsordownstairs，orwemayhurtourselvesorothers．Neverusesharpthingsliketheknifewhenweplaywithourclassmates．Weshouldgetonwellwithourclassmates．Don'tfightwiththem，orwe'llbehurt．（上學、放學途中的安全）Athome，weshouldbecarefulwhenweuseelectricity．Ifthereisafireorathief，weshouldcallthepoliceforhelpintime．（家里的安全．）Also，foodsatetyisimportant．Nevereatthefoodthatgoesbad．【高分句型二】Safetyisveryimportant．Weshouldalwayskeepitinmind．Thankyou!（7）根據(jù)一項新的調(diào)查，學生安全已經(jīng)成為一個大的問題。假設(shè)你是一名老師，對學生進行以“自我保護”為主題的消防安全教育，請以“HowtoProtectYourselfinaFire”為題，提出你的建議。要求：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名。2.書寫工整，語句通順，連貫，詞數(shù)不少于80.參考詞匯：coverv.遮蓋takethelift乘坐電梯exitn.出口toweln.毛巾shutoff切斷________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作思路】根據(jù)一項新的調(diào)查，學生安全已經(jīng)成為一個大的問題。假設(shè)你是一名老師，對學生進行以“自我保護”為主題的消防安全教育，請以“HowtoProtectYourselfinaFire”為題，提出你的建議?？忌紫纫J真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。【參考范文】HowtoProtectYourselfinaFireAccordingtoanewsurvey,studentsafetyhasbecomeabigproblem.Youshouldknowsomewaystoprotectyourself.Itwillhelptokeepyousafeinthefire.First,youshouldshutofftheelectricity.Youshouldcoveryourmouthwiththewettowel.Youmustn'ttaketheliftorjumpoffawindow,youshouldfindtheexit.Themostimportantthingistokeepcalm.Ifyoucan'tgointhehouse,thesafestplaceisclosetowater,likewashroom.Ifthefireisserious,youshouldcall119forhelp.Thesemayhelpus.這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如First,Youshouldshutofftheelectricity.Youshouldcoveryourmouthwiththewettowel等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（8）建設(shè)平安校園是我們每個人的責任與義務(wù)。作為一名學生，我們更應(yīng)該珍惜自己的生命，更應(yīng)該注意自己的人身安全。假如你是LiHua，并擔任校學生會主席，請你就安全問題，向全校學生發(fā)出倡議，寫一封安全倡議書。內(nèi)容提示：(1)不帶管制刀具到學校;(2)不私自下河洗澡;(3)不打架;(4)上學放學的途中應(yīng)該注意安全;(5)遇緊急情況，立即報告警察或老師。參考詞匯：管制刀具：restrictedknivesorthings;洗澡：haveabath;打架：fight;緊急情況：emergency;交通安全：payattentiontothetraffic。寫作要求：(1)用詞恰當，要點全面，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范。(2)可適當發(fā)揮，80詞左右，開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。(3)嚴禁出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和學校等相關(guān)信息。參考范文Dearstudents,Asweknow,safetyisthem