大學(xué)英語CET62周一寫作

四六級攻略--寫作

DavidLiuBACKTOTHEPASTCHANGETHEFUTURE參與多，通過少1報名積極，準(zhǔn)備不足2能力？準(zhǔn)備？

策略？3寫作滿分為15分，分5個等級：2分、5分、8分、11分、14分。2分-----條里不清，思路混亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子有錯，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯誤。5分----基本切題。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重的語言錯誤。8分---基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫。語言錯誤較多，其中有少量的嚴(yán)重錯誤。11分---切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。14分---切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好基本上無語言錯誤。3.1

寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)漂漂亮亮（14分）、清清爽爽（11分）、馬馬虎虎（8分）、糊里糊涂（5分）、一塌糊涂（2分）。直觀標(biāo)準(zhǔn)我們目標(biāo)是……清爽

（11分）structurecontentlanguage清晰地文章脈絡(luò)

充實切題的文章內(nèi)容

豐富精確的語言Essaywriting高分要求OnlineShopping1．現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時尚2．網(wǎng)上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題3．我的建議12011.6

首段：3句話=背景+事實描述+舉例說明

ThepastdecadehaswitnessedthehugeadvancementofInformationTechnology(背景描述).AndshoppingthroughtheInternethasgainedgreatpopularityamongwebsurfers（主題事實描述）.Forinstance,itcanbenoticedthatanincreasingnumberofyoungsterspurchaseclothes,books,electricalequipmentandthelikeonTaobao,EBayandAlibaba.（舉例法擴展段落）(或：AcaseinpointistheGroupPurchasing,whichattractsthousandsofcustomers.舉例+定語從句）2段：問題分析4句話=

主題句+危害1+危害2+危害總結(jié)Inspiteoftheconvenienceandlowpriceofthisshopping,othersarguethatwecannotturnablindeyetoitsnegativeaspects.Firstly,theypointoutthatthequalitymaynotbeassuperiorasitisdescribedandsometimes,itispossibleforcustomerstobuyfakecommodities.Inaddition,manycustomersfindittroublesometomakeachangewhentheyarenotsatisfied.Ashasbeennoted,thesedoexertbadimpacts.尾段：解決措施（即我的看法）3句話=

總說+建議+展望未來Asacustomer,Iamconvincedthateffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoenhanceit.(總說看法)Tobespecific,itissuggestedthatregulationsandrulesshouldbeworkedouttoscrutinizeonlineshopowners.(或者：Specifically,shoppersarewell-advisedtobealertwhenpurchasingonline.)Apromisingonlineshoppingisjustawaitingusifwesparenoefforttodoso.possibleBelikelyto;beaptto;chancesarethatBECAUSEThanksto;Owingto,inthat;BeattributedtoveryExtremely;Highly;dramaticallyenormouslyIMPORTANTcritical;essential;imperative;crucial…詞匯積累與替換More…think

----believe,argue,claim,insist,maintain,assert,beconvinced,contendharbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,Frommyownperspective,Embracethestereotypethat…disagree----frownon,disapproveof,objecttosolve----tackle,address,resolve,copewithdevelop----foster,cultivate,nurtureadvantage----merit,privilege,blessingdisadvantage----demerit,defectreason----contributeto,resultin,ascribe…to..,attribute…to…,derivefrom..,

so----thus,therefore,asaresult,asaconsequence,consequently,notsurprisinglyshow----depict,describe,reveal,demonstrateGood----fantastic,adorable,amazing,incredible,magnificent,fascinatingspectacular,although----inspiteof,regardlessof,Like---beinterestedin,sthappealstosb.,sthexertanfascinationonsb.Payattentionto---captureone’sattentionRemember---bearinmindRich---financiallywell-offEveryoneknows/asweallknow,----It’satruthuniversallyacknowledgedthat,…

Itcanneverbedenied,…

itisundeniablethat…

Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…

例如，F(xiàn)orexample,Forinstance,Agoodcaseinpointisthat…Icanthinkofnobetterexampleofthepointthantothefactthat…開拓視野tobroadenthehorizon擴大知識面

toexpandone’sscopeofknowledge

啟迪心靈enlightenthemind培養(yǎng)了強烈的責(zé)任感

cultivateastrongsenseofresponsibility提高了社會能力和競爭力promotesocialskillsandcompetence增加生活的情趣

increasethepleasuresoflife

解除緊張和焦慮relievethetensionandanxiety（bothfromthesocietyandtheschoolwork）面臨困難beconfrontedwiththedifficulty重視attachmuchimportance/significanceto經(jīng)不起推敲

can’tholdwater提高大眾的環(huán)保意識arousepeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection日益激烈的社會競爭theincreasinglyfiercesocialcompetition

DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling1.如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫，2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因是…3.為了改變這種狀況，我認為…。12010.6 Nowadaysalotofstudentsdon’tpaydueattentiontospellinginEnglishStudy. Therearemanyreasonsfor…First,…Second,…Third,… Inmyopinion,inordertochangethissituation,Ithink,…

Thepastdecadehaswitnessedtheacceleratedadvancementofeducation,particularlyEnglishteachingandlearning.Recently,however,ithasbeennoticedthatalargenumberofstudentsfailtopaydueattentiontospellinginEnglishlearning,

whichhasarousedapublicconcern,especiallyforthosewhohavebeenconfrontedwiththisproblem.(53words)引出話題Thepastdecadehaswitnessedtheacceleratedadvancementof________.And________hasgainedgreatpopularityamong_______,especially….Recently,___________hasbecomeapublicconcern,especiallyforthosewhohavebeenconfrontedwiththisproblem.（問題解決型）3.Itisnoexaggerationthat______hasbecomeagraveproblemthathascapturedwidespreadattentionfromallwalksoflife,especiallyamong….主題段落reason…Therearemanyfactorsthatmayaccountforthephenomenonof_____，but,frommyperspective,threeofthemdeserveourconcern.Tostartwith,_________(緣由1).Furthermore,___________(緣由2).Eventually,___________(緣由3).Admittedly,theymightbenefitusinashortterm.Inthelongrun,unfortunately,theyarelikelytodousharminmorethanoneway（社會問題）.2.Anumberoffactorscouldaccountforthisphenomenon,but,frommyperspective,thefollowingarethemostcriticalones.3.Buteverythingcanbedividedintotwo.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat_________(主題的缺陷1).Tomakemattersworse,_________(主題的缺陷2)趨勢段1.Werethesituationtocontinue,_______wouldbeboundtosufferahugelossinallaspects/benefitalotinallaspects.2.Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,Itwouldcertainlyexertanegative/positiveeffecton______.解決段

Consideringthesituation,itisimperativeforustotakeeffectivemeasuretotacklethisproblem.Foronething,strictlawsshouldbemadetopunishthosewho(dosth)____.Foranother,thepublicshouldbeeducated(not)to___.Onlyinthiswaycanwewitnesstheidealsceneinwhichallthepeoplecan(enjoytheirlife)totheutmost/Chinesedream,tobuildamoderatelyprosperoussocietyandrealizenationalrejuvenation,willcometrueinthenearfuture.(81words)Insummary,regardingtheissueinquestion,itisamusttotakeavarietyofeffectiveandpracticalmeasurestoreversethetrend.Tobeginwith,lawsandregulationsshouldbesetuptoprotecttheenvironmentoftourists’attractions.Moreover,touristsmustfostertheawarenessofprotectingtouristattractionsandbehavethemselvesproperly.Onlyinthiswaycanwemakeourenvironmentcleanerandmorebeautifulinthelongrun.Judgingfromtheampleevidencepresented,wecansafelydrawaconclusionthattoppriorityshouldbeattachedtoreversingthetrend.Tobeginwith,lawsandregulationsshouldbesetuptoprotecttheenvironmentoftourists’attractions.Moreover,touristsmustfosteralertnesstoprotecttouristattractionsandbehavethemselvesproperly.Onlyinthiswaycanwemakeourenvironmentcleanerandmorebeautifulinthelongrun. Undoubtedly,awarenessofanissuecannotbeidentifiedwithactions.Wearesupposedtoappealtoauthoritiesconcernedtoundertakevariouspublicitycampaignssuchasbenefitcommercials,handoutsandseminarstoputanendtostaradmiration.Inaddition,itisamustforindividualstocultivateanddeveloprightconsciousnessandpracticeandavoidtheadverseimpactofidolworship.Onlybyenforcingthesemeasures,canweeffectively,efficiently,andeventuallyfurtherimprovethecurrentsituationandhaveabrightandbrilliantfuture.

1ThepastdecadehaswitnessedtheacceleratedadvancementofInformationTechnologyandbloghasgainedincreasingpopularityamongpeoplealmostfromallwalksoflife,especiallytheyoungsters,evenlittlekids.2Asisvividlyrevealedinthedrawing,onthesofasitsthefather,whoisaskinghisdaughteraboutherschool,whilethelittlegirl,tohissurprise,tellshimtoreadallaboutitonherblog.3Simpleasthedrawingis,itsintendedmeaningisnothingbutsignificantandenlightening.(83words) ….2Recently,aninterestingpicturehasbeenarousingtheattentionofpeoplefromallwalksoflife.3Asisvividlyandadequatelyrevealedinthedrawing,onthesofasitsthefather,whoisaskinghisdaughteraboutherschool,whilethelittlegirl,tohissurprise,tellshimtoreadherblog.4Simpleasthedrawingis,itsintendedmeaningisnothingbutsignificantandenlightening.旅游之余

Thepastdecadehaswitnessedtheacceleratedadvancementofindustryoftourism.Andtravellinghasgainedgreatpopularityamongpeoplefromallwalkoflife,especiallyyoungsters.2Recently,aninterestingpicturehasbeenarousingtheattentionofpeoplefromallwalksoflife.3Asisvividlyandadequatelyrevealedinthedrawing,onasmallboatsittwopersons,whoarethrowingleftoversintothewatercarelesslywhiletheyareenjoyingtheirholiday.4Simpleasthedrawingis,itsintendedmeaningisnothingbutsignificantandenlightening.(87words)

Itisabundantlyevidentthatthepictureaimsatdrawingourattentiontothisundesirablephenomenoninoursociety:litteringanddestructiontothetouristattractions.Therearemanyfactorsthatmayaccountforthisphenomenon，but,frommyperspective,twoofthemdeserveourconcern.First