四級(jí)寫(xiě)作沖刺班

新東方四級(jí)寫(xiě)作CET-4北京新東方新浪微博：石雷鵬老師V新浪博客：/neworientalsjz課程介紹第一章、四級(jí)寫(xiě)作概況第二章、快速提分方略第三章、實(shí)戰(zhàn)模擬演練第一章、四級(jí)寫(xiě)作概況1.1試題形式2008年12月Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofLimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBags.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:1.一次性塑料袋曾被廣泛地使用2.造成的問(wèn)題3.限制使用的意義2011年12月四級(jí)四級(jí)真題PartⅠWriting(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,“Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftimes.”Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.審題注意三個(gè)事項(xiàng)：1.英文指令：體裁+話題2.漢語(yǔ)提綱（背景信息）3.字?jǐn)?shù)：140-160詞1.2寫(xiě)作話題2011-12:NothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWill2011-06:OnlineShopping2010-12:

HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?2010-06:

DueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling2009-12:

CreatingaGreenCampus2009-06:

FreeAdmissiontoMuseums2008-12:LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBags2008-06:RecreationalActivities2007-12:WhatElectivestoChoose

2007-06:WelcometoOurClub2006-12:OnSpringFestivalGala四級(jí)寫(xiě)作話題總結(jié)：1.非最熱點(diǎn)話題2.四級(jí)必考話題：社會(huì)話題和大學(xué)生（教育）話題網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物、博物館、塑料袋、春晚成功、家長(zhǎng)溺愛(ài)、單詞拼寫(xiě)、綠色校園、選修課、俱樂(lè)部1.3作文類(lèi)型論說(shuō)文：10次應(yīng)用文：1次圖表作文：0次1.4寫(xiě)作測(cè)試的特殊性以TOEFL為例：環(huán)境類(lèi)話題a.在你家周?chē)ㄒ粋€(gè)工廠，你是否同意？b.你認(rèn)為科學(xué)家對(duì)人類(lèi)的貢獻(xiàn)大還是藝術(shù)家對(duì)人類(lèi)的貢獻(xiàn)大？c.你的職業(yè)夢(mèng)想是什么？d.如果讓你發(fā)明一樣機(jī)器，你會(huì)選擇什么？e.如果你有一筆錢(qián)，你會(huì)用它來(lái)做什么？再以四級(jí)考試為例：題目：OnEnglishLearning提綱：1.英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)很重要2.英語(yǔ)者所面臨的困難3.如何學(xué)好英語(yǔ)Incontemporaryworld,Englishlearninghasgainedgreatpopularityanditisofgreatsignificance.(主題句)Firstly,basedonasurvey,amajorityof

internationalorganizationstake

Englishastheirofficialorworklanguage.(調(diào)查法表述)Secondly,comparedwiththepoorEnglishspeakers,goodEnglish-speakersaresuperiorinmanyways.(比較模板句式)However,Englishlearnersmayhaveavarietyofdifficultiesortroublesintheirlearning.(主題句)Forexample,itcanbenoticedthat

alargenumberofstudentshavedifficultymemorizingwords.Sometimes,itisdifficultforthemtounderstandtherulesofgrammar.Inaddition,thoughsomearegoodatreadingorwriting,theycannotexpressthemselvesfreelyinEnglish.Then,howtogetagoodcommandof(學(xué)好)thislanguage?Iamconvincedthatpracticemakesperfect.Onlypracticecanenableonetospeakandwritefluently.Anditisalsothroughpracticethat

onecanmastertherulesofgrammarandrememberwords,andthereisnootherway.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句式）以上范文靈活改編可以寫(xiě)如下作文1992-6

：HowIOvercamemyDifficultiesinLearningEnglish1.你在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中有哪些困難?2.你是如何克服這些困難的?1993-61.我最喜愛(ài)的電視(或無(wú)線電)節(jié)目是…...2.這類(lèi)節(jié)目的內(nèi)容和特點(diǎn)3.我喜歡它的原因1994-61.人們對(duì)職業(yè)各有不同的理想2.我理想的職業(yè)是什么3.我怎樣為我理想的職業(yè)做準(zhǔn)備1997-11.怎樣理解“熟能生巧”?2.例如：在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中…3.又如…2000-1

：HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation1.上大學(xué)的費(fèi)用(tuitionandfees)可以通過(guò)多種途徑解決2.哪種途徑適合于我(說(shuō)明理由)2000-6：IsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary1.很多人認(rèn)為有必要舉行英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)考試，理由是…2.也有人持不同意見(jiàn)...3.我的看法和打算2003.6：1.簡(jiǎn)單敘述一下這位同學(xué)生病(或受傷)的情況2.同學(xué)、老師和我是如何幫助他/她的3.人與人之間的這種相互關(guān)愛(ài)給我的感受是……2003.121.建議報(bào)考的專(zhuān)業(yè)及理由2.報(bào)考該專(zhuān)業(yè)的基本條件3.應(yīng)當(dāng)如何備考2005.11.你認(rèn)為自己具備了什么條件(能力、性格、愛(ài)好等)可以勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席的工作2.如果當(dāng)選,你將為本校同學(xué)做些什么2005年6月1.向老師致以節(jié)日祝賀。2.從一件難忘的事回憶老師的教誨和無(wú)私的奉獻(xiàn)。3.我如何回報(bào)老師的關(guān)愛(ài)2006-061.校學(xué)生會(huì)將組織一次暑期志愿者活動(dòng)，現(xiàn)招募志愿者。2.本次志愿者活動(dòng)的目的，內(nèi)容、安排等。3.報(bào)名條件及聯(lián)系方式2007年6月：歡迎辭，Welcometoourclub1.

表達(dá)你的歡迎；2.

對(duì)你們俱樂(lè)部作一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)要介紹2007年12月1.各大學(xué)開(kāi)設(shè)了各種各樣的選修課2.學(xué)生因?yàn)楦鞣N原因選擇了不同的選修課3.以你自己為例…2010年6月：DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling1.如今不少學(xué)生在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫(xiě)。2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因。3.如何避免這一問(wèn)題請(qǐng)記住內(nèi)容上：熟悉什么就寫(xiě)什么神馬內(nèi)容你最熟悉？神馬內(nèi)容你最熟悉？贈(zèng)言：盡最大努力（Tryyourutmost）

得最大成功（Achievegreatersuccess）沖刺總體方略：背寫(xiě)：?jiǎn)卧~標(biāo)點(diǎn)一個(gè)都不錯(cuò)。第二章、沖刺提分方略2.1功能段落寫(xiě)作法概論沖刺階段，背誦模板不是最有效的方法，因?yàn)槟０宓膶?xiě)作思路是固定的，然而很多時(shí)候試題的命題思路可能與所背模板思路不同。但是，無(wú)論四級(jí)寫(xiě)作話題如何變化，一般都對(duì)應(yīng)三個(gè)或兩個(gè)漢語(yǔ)提綱。只要按提綱要求去寫(xiě)相應(yīng)的內(nèi)容段落，就做到了緊扣主題。歷年寫(xiě)作提綱可以總結(jié)為六種功能段落。是以，提出“功能段落寫(xiě)作法”的沖刺提分方略。因此，掌握好六種功能段落，也就掌握了所有作文的寫(xiě)作。2.2功能段落破解寫(xiě)作2011-06Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofOnlineShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1．現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物已成為一種時(shí)尚2．網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物有很多好處，但也有不少問(wèn)題3．我的建議2010-12Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切

2.為了讓孩子獨(dú)立,父母應(yīng)該……

2010-06Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofDueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.如今不少學(xué)生在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫(xiě)

2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因

3.為了改變這種狀況，我認(rèn)為…

2009-12Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofCreatingaGreenCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.建設(shè)綠色校園很重要2.綠色校園不僅指綠色的環(huán)境……3.為了建設(shè)綠色校園，我們應(yīng)該……2009-06Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutetowriteashortessayonthetopicofFreeAdmissiontoMuseums.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:1. 越來(lái)越多的博物館免費(fèi)對(duì)外開(kāi)放的目的是什么？2. 也會(huì)帶來(lái)一些問(wèn)題3. 你的看法？2008-12Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled

LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBags.

Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.1.一次性塑料袋的使用2.使用一次性塑料袋帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題3.限制一次性塑料袋的意義2008-06

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutetowriteashortessayonthetopicofRecreationalActivities.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:1.娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)多種多樣，2.娛樂(lè)可能使人們受益，也可能有危害性，3.作為大學(xué)生，我的看法。六種功能段落總結(jié)建議觀點(diǎn)（利弊）意義（利）現(xiàn)象危害（弊）原因2011年12月四級(jí)四級(jí)真題PartⅠWriting(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,“Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftimes.”Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.2011年12月：1.觀點(diǎn)（即評(píng)論）2.意義（分析“意志力”重要性）3.現(xiàn)象或建議篇章層面：六種功能段落的排列組合1.問(wèn)題解決型：2010年6月、2010年12月2.觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比型（利弊分析）：2011年6月3.現(xiàn)象闡述型：2009年12月、2011年12月2.3觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比型作文必背段落組成：現(xiàn)象+利弊+建議2011-06:OnlineShopping1．現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物已成為一種時(shí)尚2．網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物有很多好處，但也有不少問(wèn)題3．我的建議1．現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物已成為一種時(shí)尚現(xiàn)象描述段：思路：引出話題+具體描述Incontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeaprevalenttrendforindividualstopurchasevariousgoodsfromtheInternet.Inthemeanwhile,anincreasingnumberofpeoplefinditconvenientandinexpensivetodoso.Takingalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanyshoppingwebsites:Taobao,DangdangandAmazon.2．網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物有很多好處，但也有不少問(wèn)題（利）Anumberofpeoplefavoronlineshopping.Intheireyes,withoutit,itisimpossibleforthemtostayathomeandgettheirfavoriteclothes,booksandsoon.Inaddition,theyarguethatshoppingonlinecanhelpthemexpandtheirscopeofshoppingchoicesandenrichtheirlife.(下頁(yè)續(xù))（接上頁(yè)）(弊)

Evenso,othersholdadifferentviewthatonlineshoppingcarriessomerisks.Firstly,itcallsfortime,energyandmoneytoshoponline;however,thequalityofgoodsisnotalwaysassatisfactoryasexpected.Besides,whatworriesmanyshoppersisthattheirprivateinformationmaybestolenandmisused/theymaybecheatedbydishoneststoresorsellers.

3．我的建議（主題句）Asacustomer,Iamconvincedthattherearevariouswaysinwhichwecanenhanceonlineshopping.（建議1）First,itisessentialthatregulationsshouldbeworkedoutandenforcedtoregulatetheonlinetransactions.（建議2）Then,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourfriends,classmates,andacquaintancestobealertwhenshoppingonline.（展望未來(lái)）Ifwetryourutmosttodoso,thefutureofshoppingonlinewillbepromising,hopefulandrosy.快速提分方略：第一步：背寫(xiě)：思路+表達(dá)第二步：翻譯：英譯漢漢譯英對(duì)比第三步：限時(shí)訓(xùn)練：寫(xiě)改對(duì)比2.4問(wèn)題解決型必背范文Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切

2.為了讓孩子獨(dú)立,父母應(yīng)該……

兩個(gè)提綱三個(gè)提綱三個(gè)功能段落1.目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切2.該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生原因

3.為了讓孩子獨(dú)立,父母應(yīng)該……首段現(xiàn)象描述：1.目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切(主題句)Incontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeatrend

formanyparentstodoeverythingfortheirkids:food,clothes,tuition,andevenmarriage.(事實(shí)描述)

However,anincreasingnumberofchildrenfinditdifficultortroublesometoliveontheirownwithoutparents.(舉例描述)Takingalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanyparentsandchildrenlikethis.

現(xiàn)象、原因、建議、危害、利弊分析邏:一個(gè)中心，四個(gè)基本點(diǎn)：孩子家長(zhǎng)社會(huì)法規(guī)（道德意識(shí)）家庭學(xué)生老師社會(huì)法規(guī)（道德意識(shí)）學(xué)校網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物買(mǎi)方:顧客社會(huì)法規(guī)（道德意識(shí)）賣(mài)方2.該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生原因(主題句)Itisevidentthatthecausesofthisphenomenonarediverse.(原因1：家庭)Tobeginwith,thechangeoffamilystructureistherootcause.(原因1體現(xiàn))Atypicalexampleofthisisthatinmostfamilies,thereisonlyonechildwhoislovedbynotonlyparents,butalsograndparents.(原因2)Inaddition,theincorrectsenseof

parents‘loveconstitutesanothermajorcause.(原因2體現(xiàn))Tobespecific,asparents,theyareconvincedthatlovingmeansgivingchildrenalltheywant.萬(wàn)能原因補(bǔ)充：1.Actually,peopleinmountingnumbershavecometorealizethesignificance/convenience/advantageof______.2.Furthermore,therelatedpolicybeingcarriedoutinChina(doesnot)enables____toattachimportanceto_____.3.Inaddition,socialprejudice/ignorance/emphasis/concernplaysacriticalroleinthismatter/issue.3.為了讓孩子獨(dú)立,父母應(yīng)該……(主題句)Then,howshouldparentshelptheirchildrentobeindependent?Therearevariousways.(建議1)First,itissuggestedthatparentsshouldstrengthentheawarenessoflovingchildrenappropriately.(建議2)Then,theyshouldeducate,advocateandencouragetheirkidstodealwiththeirownproblemsindependentlyinlifeandstudy.(展望未來(lái))Ifallparentscantrytheirutmosttodoso,thefutureoftheirnextgenerationwillbehopeful,promisingandrosy.2.5現(xiàn)象闡述型范文(參考)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofCreatingaGreenCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.建設(shè)綠色校園很重要（意義段：利）2.綠色校園不僅指綠色的環(huán)境…（現(xiàn)象段：描述）3.為了建設(shè)綠色校園，我們應(yīng)該…（建議段）CreatingaGreenCampus1.建設(shè)綠色校園很重要（意義段：利）Theideaof“GreenLife”hasgainedwidepopularityamongChinesepeople,anditisofgreatsignificanceforuniversitiestobuildgreencampuses.Withoutgreenenvironment,itisimpossibleforcollegestudentstohaveanenjoyablelifeintheIvoryTower.Inaddition,greencampusmaybroaden/consolidate/buildupstudents’awarenessofenvironmentalprotection.2.綠色校園不僅指綠色的環(huán)境…（現(xiàn)象段：描述）主題句：Inadditiontothegreenenvironment,greencampusesalsorefertostudents’behaviorsorethics.However,(舉例)takingalookaround,wecanfindagreatmanyexamplesofinappropriatebehaviors：(下頁(yè)續(xù))（接上頁(yè)）(排比)somediscardlitterseverywhere;somestudentscheatintests;somewastefoodoncanteens;somearealwayslateforclasses;someguysevenwatchpornographicorviolentfilmsindorms.

Infact,ithasbecomeatrendformanystudentstoturnablindeyetotheirownbadacts.

Ifweletthissituationcontinueasitis,wedonotknowwheregreencampuseswillbeintheforthcomingfuture.3.為了建設(shè)綠色校園，我們應(yīng)該…（建議段）(主題句)Accordingly,itisimperativeforustotakemeasurestomaintaingreencampuses.(建議1法規(guī))First,weshouldappealtouniversityauthoritiestoworkoutregulationstobanthesenegativebehaviors.(建議2發(fā)動(dòng)群眾)Then,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourclassmates,friendsandacquaintancestorefusealluncivilizedacts.(未來(lái)展望)

Ifwetryourbesttodoso,thefutureofourcollegelifewillbehopeful,promisingandrosy.2.62011年12月份PartⅠWriting(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,“Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftimes.”Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.Smokersfrequentlyutterthishumoroussaying:"Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.Ihavedoneithundredsoftime."Obviously,theyneversucceed.Thissayingcanbenaturallyassociatedwiththesignificanceofastrongwill:ifasmokerwantstoquitsmoking,hemusthaveastrongwilltosufferthepainofquittingthishabit.意義闡述

Astrongwillisthekeytosuccessinallfieldsofactivity,anditcanbelikenedtotheroadtosuccess.Tobeginwith,asavitalpsychologicalquality,itbringsuspower,arousesourenthusiasmforworkandhelpsusovercomedifficulties.Inaddition,thisstrongwillandbeliefcanhelpusexpandouropportunitiesofsuccess,becauseitencouragesuswhenwearedismayed.(Itisourstrongwill,ratherthangeniusandextraordinaryability,thatinspiresustoconquerdifficulties.)

Actually,basedonasurvey,amajorityofsuccessfulpeopleadmitthatastrongwillisofgreatsignificanceintheir

achievements.

Accordingly,people,youngstersinparticular,shouldcultivatetheirstrongmindstoovercometheirdifficulties.(

Remember:nostrongwill,nosuccess.)（164words）2.6高分沖刺細(xì)節(jié)1.內(nèi)容相關(guān)（按照提綱要求、涵蓋要點(diǎn)信息）2.結(jié)構(gòu)清晰（新聞聯(lián)播三段論：主題句+拓展句）3.語(yǔ)言精彩（通順、連貫、句子結(jié)構(gòu)詞多變）2.7語(yǔ)言第一位通順、連貫、句子結(jié)構(gòu)詞多變2.7.1連貫：1)句子銜接：and,but,so;however,nonethelessTheideaof“GreenLife”hasgainedwidepopularityamongChinesepeople.Itisofgreatsignificanceforuniversitiestobuildgreencampuses.Theideaof“GreenLife”hasgainedwidepopularityamongChinesepeople,anditisofgreatsignificanceforuniversitiestobuildgreencampuses.2)邏輯銜接：起承轉(zhuǎn)合起：Incontemporarysociety,onmanycampuses,currently,first,tobeginwith,firstandforemost,firstofall承：Second,Third,Last,Next,Then,finally,meanwhile,inaddition,furthermore,besides,inthefirst/secondplace,foronething,foranother,lastbutnottheleast轉(zhuǎn)：However,but,onthecontrary,Ontheotherhand,yet,although,bycontrast,while,whereas,instead,nevertheless,otherwise合：（因此)Asaresult,Therefore,Thus,hence,accordingly,consequently,asconsequence,asaresult;(總之)：Inaword,Inshort,onthewhole,inconclusion,tosumup,inbrief,insummary,toconclude,tosummarize,

中英文文篇章結(jié)構(gòu)：以漢語(yǔ)四六級(jí)閱讀為例天涯遠(yuǎn)不遠(yuǎn)？不遠(yuǎn)！人就在天涯，天涯怎么會(huì)遠(yuǎn)？明月是什么顏色？是藍(lán)的，就像海一樣藍(lán)，一樣深，一樣憂郁。明月在那？就在他的心，他的心就是明月。題目：概括本段中心思想2.7.2遣詞a.廣度：arich/widevarietyof…1）同義詞2）同根詞3）范疇詞：上義詞下義詞相關(guān)詞4）代詞替換b.深度：棄用第一反應(yīng)詞academicexceedingly,extremely,intensely替換veryanarmyof/agreatmany/ahostof替換alotofAdvancement替換developmentpositive,favorable,promising(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替換goodgiveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替換cause.harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,替think(因?yàn)槭菚?shū)面語(yǔ),所以要加that)beneficial,rewarding替換helpful,

bearinmindthat替換rememberenjoy,possess替換haveshopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替換customer2.7.2造句被動(dòng)句狀語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句名詞從句同位語(yǔ)：身份Itis句式設(shè)問(wèn)強(qiáng)調(diào)句式排比V-ing狀語(yǔ)2.8考場(chǎng)寫(xiě)作時(shí)間安排總計(jì)：30分鐘1.審題:識(shí)別提綱功能2-3分鐘2.以關(guān)鍵詞形式打草稿3-4分鐘3.正文寫(xiě)作18-20分鐘4.檢查修正2-3分鐘：詞性、單復(fù)數(shù)、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、拼寫(xiě)2.以關(guān)鍵詞形式打草稿3-4分鐘例題：NothingSucceedswithoutaStrongWillsurvey:-->Basedonarecentsurvey,amjoarityofchampionsinsportsadmitthatastrongwillisindispensablefortheirsuccess.第三章、模擬實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練

3.1扶不起的社會(huì)Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutetowriteashortessayonthetopicofToHelporNottoHelp?.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:1.幫助別人是一種美德2.但是幫助陌生人容易使自己陷入麻煩3.我的看法1.幫助別人是種美德Incontemporarysociety,itshouldbeavirtueforindividuals

toofferhelptothosewhoareinneed.Withoutthismorality,itisimpossibleforthesocietytobenamed“Harmony”.Apparentlyenough,itisofgreatimportance/significance/value/benefitsforpeopletohelpeachother,especiallyindifficulties.2.有時(shí)幫助陌生人容易使自己陷入麻煩However,ahostofpeoplefindithardortroublesometoofferhelpstostrangers.Wehavebeenfrequentlyinformedthat（Atypicalexampleisthat）awarmheartedman--wholendsahandtoanoldlady—getshimselfintrouble.(Consequently,basedonarecentreport,aminorityofpeopleadmitthat

theyarenotwillingtoofferaidwhentheoldmanorwomanfallsdownonstreet.)Sincehelpingothersmaytriggertrouble,afewpeoplerefusetoofferhelptimely.Andifwelet/allowthissituationtocontinueasitisnow,wewouldnotknowwhere

civilizedsocietywillbeintheforthcomingfuture.

3.我的看法(或建議)Ascollegestudents,weshouldbearinmindthisvirtue.However,itisessentialthatregulationsshouldbeworkedouttosupportthisvirtue.Inaddition,itissuggestedthatweshouldofferaidtostrangersinasafeway,suchasdialing12oor110forhelp.(后續(xù))3.我的看法(或建議)(接前)Then,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourclassmates,friendsandacquaintancestobebothwarmheartedandalert.Ifwetryourutmosttodoso,thefutureofoursociety/civilizationwillbepromising,hopefulandrosy.3.2Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOptimismistheRoadtoaPromisingFuturebyexplainingtheTagore’saying,"Ifyoushedtearswhenyoumissthesun,youwillalsomissthestars."Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.1.評(píng)論該名言2.闡述其意義3.建議或現(xiàn)象首段評(píng)論（即看法理解）Tagore,anesteemedIndianpoet,hasutteredthissaying:ifyoushedtearswhenyoumissthesun,youwillalsomissthestars.Thisremarkcanbenaturallyassociatedwiththesignificanceofoptimism:wheneverandwhereverwefail,nevershouldweloseourconfidence;ifwearenotoptimistic,wemayloseall.意義闡述：Optimismisofgreatsignificancetobothoursocietyandourlife,anditcanbelikenedtotheroadtoapromisingfuture.Tobeginwith,asavitalpsychologicalquality,optimismbringsuscreativepowerandconfidence,arousesourenthusiasmforworkandhelpsusovercomedifficulties.

Inaddition,keepingoptimisticgivesuslight/strengthwhenweareindark,anditencouragesuswhenwearedismayed.

Itisoptimism,ratherthangeniusandextraordinaryability,thatinspiresustosucceed.Toconclude,withoutoptimism,itisimpossibleforustowitnessahopefulandpromisingfuture.Accordingly,people,youngstersinparticular,arehighlyexpectedtofacetheirdifficultieswithoptimism.Remember:nooptimism,nopromisingfuture.（179words）牢記：背寫(xiě)是提高寫(xiě)作翻譯最有效的方法永遠(yuǎn)的朋友：新浪微博：@石雷鵬老師新浪博客：百度搜索：石雷鵬四級(jí)翻譯沖刺主講教師：石雷鵬四級(jí)翻譯沖刺1.命題形式特點(diǎn)2.評(píng)分細(xì)則展示3.快速破題攻略4.考點(diǎn)枚舉解析1.命題形式1.1命題形式時(shí)間5分鐘，5道題全部為漢譯英，占5%，共36分。在答題卡2上作答。句長(zhǎng)為15至30個(gè)詞，其中有部分英語(yǔ)詞匯給出,需添入的部分也只有3到8個(gè)單詞，考生只需按照英文句子意思把漢語(yǔ)部分翻譯成英文。2.考題特點(diǎn)①考點(diǎn)的生活化②考點(diǎn)的重復(fù)性③考點(diǎn)的陷阱性①考點(diǎn)的生活化2007-06：89.Becauseoftheleginjury,theathlete ________________________(決定退出比賽).答案：decidedtoquitthematch2010-06:91.Theyrequestedthat____________(我借的書(shū)還回圖書(shū)館)bynextFriday.答案：booksIborrowed(should)bereturnedtothelibraryI(should)returnthebookIborrowedtothelibrary

②考題的重復(fù)性：考點(diǎn)直接重復(fù)2006-06：87.Havingspentsometimeinthecity,hehadnotrouble________(找到去歷史博物館的路).答案：findingtheway/roadtotheHistoryMuseum.2010-06:87.Becauseofthenoiseoutside,Nancyhadgreatdifficulty__________________(集中注意力在實(shí)驗(yàn)上).

答案：(in)concentratingontheexperiment/

focusingherattentionontheexperiment.2009-06:87.Soonafterhetransferredtothenewschool,Alifoundthathehad

(很難跟上班里的同學(xué))inmathandEnglish.答案：difficulty(in)catchingupwithhisclassmates②考題的重復(fù)性：考點(diǎn)與題干重復(fù)07-12:89.Iamgoingtopursuethiscourse,

（無(wú)論我要作出什么樣的犧牲）.2009-12:88.Despitethehardshipheencountered,Marknever______________(放棄對(duì)知識(shí)的追求).2010-06:91.The16-year-oldgirldecidedtotravelabroadonherowndespite__________________(她父母的強(qiáng)烈反對(duì)).③考點(diǎn)的陷阱性2007-65.Pleasecomehereattentomorrowmorning_____________________(如果你方便的話).ifyouareconvenient(×)答案：ifitisconvenientforyou應(yīng)對(duì)策略：切忌逐字翻譯2011-0690.Georgecalledhisbossfromtheairportbutit__________________(接電話的卻是他的助手).答案：washisassistantwhoansweredthephone.

2.評(píng)分細(xì)則例1：Bycontrast,Americanmothersweremorelikely_______(把孩子的成功歸因于)naturaltalent.1．整體內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言均正確，滿分。2．結(jié)構(gòu)正確，但整體意思不確切、信息不全或用詞不當(dāng)，得一半分值。3．整體意思正確但語(yǔ)言有錯(cuò)誤，得一半分值。4．整體意思完全錯(cuò)誤，即使結(jié)構(gòu)正確也不得分。5．大小寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)忽略不計(jì)。該題目有兩個(gè)固定搭配考點(diǎn)：1)belikelytodosth;2)owe…to/attribute…to答案：toattribute/owetheirchildren’ssuccessto3.快速破題攻略第一步：瀏覽句子、判定考點(diǎn)第二步：判定動(dòng)詞、切塊翻譯第三步：結(jié)構(gòu)組合、檢查修正關(guān)注三方面：詞性、單復(fù)數(shù)、動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、語(yǔ)氣）4.考點(diǎn)枚舉解析宏觀兩大考點(diǎn)：①核心語(yǔ)法②固定搭配（詞匯）①核心語(yǔ)法被動(dòng)、從句知識(shí)（名從、狀從、定從）、倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)、虛擬語(yǔ)氣、比較結(jié)構(gòu)、強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)實(shí)例1：2010-690．Itissuggestedthattheairconditioner______________(要安裝在窗戶旁).【考點(diǎn)剖析】本題是典型的語(yǔ)法題目。重點(diǎn)考查考生對(duì)虛擬語(yǔ)氣和被動(dòng)的掌握。(should)befixed/installedbythewindow例2：(大綱樣題)2.Notonly___________________________(他向我收費(fèi)過(guò)高),buthedidn’tdoagoodrepairjobeither.didhechargemetoomuchdidheoverchargeme語(yǔ)法考點(diǎn)：1.被動(dòng)2006-0691.Thoughaskilledworker,

__________(他被公司解雇了)lastweekbecauseoftheeconomiccrisis.第一步：由Thoughaskilledworker,lastweekbecauseoftheeconomiccrisis.可以推出，劃線處應(yīng)該補(bǔ)全完整主句，時(shí)態(tài)由lastweek確定為一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。第二步：1.切塊翻譯：“解雇”=befired(注意被動(dòng))；“他”=he；“公司”=company2.重新組合：

[正確答案]：hewasfiredbythecompanyfiredismiss2008-0687.Oureffortswillpayoffiftheresultsoftheresearch____________(能應(yīng)用于新技術(shù)的開(kāi)發(fā)).考點(diǎn)：固定搭配和被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)“applyto”canbeappliedtothedevelopmentofthenewtechnology

2010-1288.Themagnificentmuseum_______(據(jù)說(shuō)建成于)aboutahundredyearsago.【結(jié)構(gòu)分析】主語(yǔ)為thesignificantmuseum，謂語(yǔ)（據(jù)說(shuō)建成于）aboutahundredyearsago為時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)。

【考點(diǎn)】①被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài):主語(yǔ)museum與動(dòng)詞build之間為被動(dòng)關(guān)系;且bulid這一動(dòng)作發(fā)生在過(guò)去。②據(jù)說(shuō)besaidto；besaidto+動(dòng)詞不定式的完成時(shí)，表示不定式表示的動(dòng)作已經(jīng)完成?！敬鸢浮浚篿ssaidtohavebeenbuilt

語(yǔ)法考點(diǎn)：2.定語(yǔ)從句定從翻譯步驟：a.寫(xiě)出正確簡(jiǎn)單句，并確定中心話題(名詞)b.中心話題后加入定從，關(guān)系詞：who/whose/which/where/when；若關(guān)系詞在從句中做賓語(yǔ)，可省略。2007-0688.ThepreventionandtreatmentofAIDSis______________(我們可以合作的領(lǐng)域).

第一步：瀏覽句子，判定考點(diǎn)：定語(yǔ)從句第二步：1.補(bǔ)充完成主句，注意單復(fù)數(shù)….thefield,

2.

完成定語(yǔ)從句寫(xiě)作：判定動(dòng)詞,切塊翻譯答案：thefieldwherewecancooperate或者：thefieldinwhichwecancooperate

2010-1291.Theyrequestedthat__________(我借的書(shū)還回圖書(shū)館)bynextFriday.books(thatIborrowed)shouldbereturnedtothelibrary語(yǔ)法考點(diǎn)：3.名詞性從句a.賓語(yǔ)從句b.主語(yǔ)從句c.表語(yǔ)從句d.同位語(yǔ)從句賓語(yǔ)從句2007-1291.ManyAmericansliveoncredit,

andtheirqualityoflife________（是用他們能夠借到多少來(lái)衡量的），nothowmuchtheycanearn.衡量：measure錯(cuò)誤答案：ismeasuredbyhowmuchcanthey

borrow.正確答案ismeasuredbyhowmuchthey

can

borrow.b.主語(yǔ)從句2008-12：88.

(大多數(shù)父母所關(guān)心的)isprovidingthebesteducationpossiblefortheirchildren.所字結(jié)構(gòu)=what從句（what在從句中作賓語(yǔ)）Whatmostparentsareconcernedabout2009-0690.

(很多人所沒(méi)有意識(shí)到的)isthatSimonisaloverofsports.andfootballinparticular.90.Whatmanypeopledon’trealize使字結(jié)構(gòu)=what從句（what在從句中做主語(yǔ)）寫(xiě)作常用句式：Ithinkthat=whatconvincesmeisthat

2010-1290._____________________(給游客印象最深的)wasthefriendlinessandwarmthofthelocalpeople.What

impressedtouriststhemost

語(yǔ)法考點(diǎn)：4.狀語(yǔ)從句狀語(yǔ)從句：讓步、時(shí)間、條件、目的、原因、地點(diǎn)、結(jié)果、方式和比較小重點(diǎn)：讓步狀語(yǔ)從句a.nomatter+what/who/when/where/howwhat/who/when/where/how+ever區(qū)分：NomatterwhatVSwhatever

Nomatterwhat:只能充當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)Whatever:引導(dǎo)名詞性從句或狀語(yǔ)從句簡(jiǎn)單辦法：有逗號(hào)=nomatterwhat

無(wú)逗號(hào)=whatever2007-1289.Iamgoingtopursuethiscourse,________________________（無(wú)論我要作出什么樣的犧牲）.參考答案：nomatterwhatkindofsacrificeIhavetomake2008-689.Leavingone’sjob,__________(不管是什么工作),isadifficultchange,evenforthosewholookforwardtoretiring.89.Leavingone’sjob,__________(不管是什么工作),isadifficultchange,evenforthosewholookforwardtoretiring.【解析】第一步：待譯內(nèi)容是讓步狀語(yǔ)(從句)?！安还苁鞘裁础笨梢宰g作nomatterwhat或whatever。第二步：切塊（翻譯）組合：nomatterwhatjobitisnomatterwhatthejobiswhateverjobitis2．(無(wú)論誰(shuí)在這抽煙)willbepunished.(主語(yǔ)從句)答案：Whoeversmokeshere（不能用nomatterwho）語(yǔ)法考點(diǎn)：5.倒裝在英語(yǔ)中,主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)有兩種順序:一是主語(yǔ)在前,謂語(yǔ)在后,稱(chēng)為自然語(yǔ)序(NaturalOrder).反之,如果謂語(yǔ)在主語(yǔ)前面,就是倒裝語(yǔ)序(InvertedOrder).倒裝原因：語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的需要；強(qiáng)調(diào)。倒裝語(yǔ)序全部倒裝部分倒裝FullInversionPartialInversion部分(半)倒裝:(一般疑問(wèn)句語(yǔ)序)a.表否定的副詞或短語(yǔ)位于句首，主句半倒裝Iwillneveragree.

NeverwillIagree.

HardlycanIagree.notuntil,never,hardly,scarcely,seldom,neither,little,innocase(決不),此外：onnoaccount,bynomeans,rarely,undernocircumstances,undernocondition,innoway(決不),neither…(nor),nosooner…(than),hardly…(when),barely(僅僅，幾乎不),innocircumstances(決不),notabit,nowhere,notonly…butalso。(大綱樣題)Notonly_____________(他向我收費(fèi)過(guò)高),buthedidn’tdoagoodrepairjobeither.正常語(yǔ)序：hechargedmetoomuch答案：didhechargemetoomuchdidheoverchargeme2010-0688.Themanagerneverlaughed;neither___________(她也從來(lái)沒(méi)有發(fā)過(guò)脾氣)didshelosehertemper.didshebecomeangry.語(yǔ)法考點(diǎn)：虛擬語(yǔ)氣a.

(should)+動(dòng)詞原形的情形b.

if或butfor等引導(dǎo)的條件結(jié)構(gòu)c.

wish,ifonly的用法a1.

(should)+動(dòng)詞原形的情形:表示“命令”、“建議”、“要求”名詞性從句：動(dòng)詞suggest,order,demand,propose,command,request,desire,insist,require,decide,promise,resolve,argue,maintain,determine,recommend,advise,advocate,persuade等。3.Theprofessorrequiredthat

_______(我們交研究報(bào)告)byWednesday.第一步：由Theprofessorrequiredthat_____

,可以推出，劃線處應(yīng)該填寫(xiě)句子，并且是虛擬語(yǔ)氣。第二步：1.切塊對(duì)應(yīng)翻譯：“交”=handin；“研究報(bào)告”=researchreports（名詞注意單復(fù)數(shù)）；“我們”we2.重新組合：[正確答案]：we(should)handin（submit）ourresearchreportsb.

if或butfor等引導(dǎo)的條件區(qū)別：if引導(dǎo)從句

butfor=without:加名詞、代詞、動(dòng)名詞b1:if引導(dǎo)的虛擬語(yǔ)氣

條件從句

結(jié)果主句與現(xiàn)在事實(shí)相反動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式(be動(dòng)詞用were)would+動(dòng)詞原形與過(guò)去事實(shí)相反had+過(guò)去分詞(haddone)wouldhavedone與將來(lái)事實(shí)相反一般過(guò)去時(shí)/were+不定式/should+動(dòng)詞原形would(should)+動(dòng)詞原形a.與現(xiàn)在的事實(shí)相反：[If---+were/did---,---+would/mightdo---]如果我爸是李剛，我相撞誰(shuí)撞誰(shuí)。IfmyfatherwereLiGang,