【寫作公開課】感謝信 Letter of Thanks

Writing感謝信LetterofThanksWhyareChinesecrazyaboutthegamebetweenChinaandKorea?

Step1.熱點(diǎn)激趣，導(dǎo)入話題

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ChinabeatSouthKorea1:0ataWorldCupqualifierinChangshaonMarch23rd,2017.DoyouknowwhohelpedChinawinthemostimportantgame?1、用漢語拼音代替不會(huì)寫的詞、短語和句子，有的甚至通篇都是漢語。2、有意漏掉某些不會(huì)寫的詞、短語或句子。3、從閱讀理解或其他的語篇中抄襲，企圖蒙騙得分。……感謝信

LetterofThanksWhat’reyourproblemsinwriting?寫作小竅門Tips1：貫徹“化繁為簡”原則遇到難以表達(dá)的，可以采取解釋、簡化、甚至含糊意譯等方式去處理。翻譯歌名：紳士意外演員丑八怪GentlemanAccidentActressVeryuglyperson

Step2.掌握技巧，活學(xué)活用

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馬云為什么能成功？

有人認(rèn)為是因?yàn)榍趭^；有人認(rèn)為是因?yàn)樘熨x；有人認(rèn)為是因?yàn)榻逃挥腥苏J(rèn)為是因?yàn)檫\(yùn)氣……段落寫作（一）

Tips2：貫徹“不重復(fù)”原則嘗試運(yùn)用同義詞或意思相近的短語多樣化表達(dá)。

Somepeople______heissuccessfulbecauseofhishardwork.Somepeople_______histalentas

amainfactor（主要因素）

ofhissuccess.It’salso________thatthegoodeducationhehasreceivedleadtohissuccess.Butsomepeople_______thathehasachievedsuccessonaccountofhisgoodluck.think,believe，consider…as,Itisthoughtthat;Itisbelievedthat;Itisconsideredthat;Sbholdthebeliefthat…如何表示“認(rèn)為”?

辦公室兩個(gè)女生吵得不可開交，鄭老師嚴(yán)肅地說：“吵什么？把吵架的原因說清楚”，兩個(gè)美女爭先恐后地各執(zhí)一詞。“夠了”，鄭老師火冒三丈，大吼一聲，“丑的先說”，頓時(shí)，世界安靜了！勸架也需要智慧。段落寫作（二）

Twogirlsintheofficewerequarreling_____________.“Tellmethereasonforthequarrel”,Mr.Zhengspoke________.Thetwobeautifulgirlswereboth________tospeakfirst."That'senough!"Mr.Zhengfelt________andshouted,“Theugly,speakfirst!”________,itcametobeaquietworld!Tostopaquarrelalsoneedswisdom.

辦公室兩個(gè)女生吵得不可開交，鄭段長嚴(yán)肅地說：“吵什么？把吵架的原因說清楚”，兩個(gè)美女爭先恐后地各執(zhí)一詞?！皦蛄恕保嵍伍L火冒三丈，大吼一聲，“丑的先說”，頓時(shí)，世界安靜了！勸架也需要智慧。violentlyseriouslyeagerangryImmediatelythefirstextremelysmallplants…ItwasnotimmediatelyobviousthatdinosaursgraduallydiedoutIstrongly

suggestthat…Ifirmly

believethat…Isincerelyhopethat…welcomesbwarmlytosp.Tips3：貫徹“小詞大作用”原則注意形容詞和副詞累積與巧用；既增強(qiáng)語境，又拓展文意。Tips4：貫徹“短話長說，短語優(yōu)先”原則運(yùn)用短語使文章增加亮點(diǎn)；關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路，還可以用短語湊字?jǐn)?shù)。use-----makefulluseofaffect----haveaneffectonbenefit----beofgreatbenefitto/bebeneficialtorespect----showrespectto/thinkhighlyof…

useaffectbenefitrespect…

用ratherthando/insteadofdoing完成句子：*我們應(yīng)該再接再厲而不能驕傲自滿.(keepitup,besatisfiedwithsuccess)Weshould_____________*我們應(yīng)該對(duì)自己有信心而不是中途放棄.(beconfidentabout,giveuphalfway)Weshould__________________________舉一返三：利用時(shí)間保護(hù)環(huán)境*

VocabularyaboutThanks(單詞):v.thank,appreciate;n.thanks,gratitude,appreciation;adj.thankful,grateful,appreciative.Tips5：分析篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，建立語料庫積累同一話題的材料，歸納總結(jié)以話題為中心的詞庫、句庫、話題范文，建立起自己的語料庫，提高書面表達(dá)的自主學(xué)習(xí)能力。*

PhrasesaboutThanks(短語):如何表達(dá)“因某事而感激某人”？

1.thankyoufor…2.appreciateone’sdoing…3.begrateful/thankfultosb.for…4.expressmythanks/gratitudefor…*

Sentencestobeused(句型):Para1.表達(dá)感謝并說明原因（常用句式）*Iamwritingtoexpressmysincerethanks

for…*IamwritingthisletterbecauseIamgratefultoyoufor…Para2.細(xì)述并贊賞對(duì)方給與的幫助（常用句式）*Itwasnice/kind/thoughtfulofyouto…(主語從句）*Itwaswithyourselflesshelp

that

…(強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)*Butfor/Without

yourhelpandguidance,Iwouldn’thavedone(虛擬語氣)Para3.再次闡述謝意并表達(dá)愿望(常用句式)*Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelp.*IappreciateitmorethanIcansay.*Pleaseacceptmysincerethanksforyourhelp,whichIwillneverforget.(定語從句）感謝信Dear______,

Iamwritingtoexpressmysincerethanksfor_________(感謝的原因).Butforyourassistancein___________(對(duì)方給你的具體幫助),IfearthatIwouldhavebeen_________(沒有對(duì)方幫助時(shí)的后果).

Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwho__________(給出細(xì)節(jié)).Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!Pleaseacceptmygratitude.Iwish____________(祝愿).Inaddition,itwouldbeagreathonorformetoinviteyoutocometomyhometowninthenearfuture,whenwecansharetheunforgettablememoriestogether.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing*

Possibleversions(同話題模板):

Step3.認(rèn)真審題，三段成文

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書面表達(dá):假設(shè)你叫李華，是一位中國球迷。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給國足教練里皮寫一封感謝信，表達(dá)對(duì)他的愛戴和尊敬。詞數(shù)100左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示：1．對(duì)里皮教練的評(píng)價(jià)。

2．回憶中國戰(zhàn)勝韓國那個(gè)難忘的夜晚。

3．對(duì)里皮和國足的祝愿，邀請(qǐng)里皮游連江。DearCoachLippi,

AsaChinesefootballfan,I'm_____________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaDearCoachLippi,

AsaChinesefootballfan,我寫這封信是為了表達(dá)我最真切的感激之情forthehelpyouareofferingtoChinesefootball.Wereally對(duì)你評(píng)價(jià)很高。Yourcoachingabilityisso毋庸置疑的

thatChinesefootballteamhasbeenimprovedgreatly因?yàn)?/p>

yourcreativework．

我清楚地記得

ChinabeatSouthKorea1:0attheWorldCupqualifierinChangshaonMarch23rd,2017

.Atthebeginning,wehadgreatdifficultyin贏得比賽。沒有你的幫助和指導(dǎo)，中國隊(duì)將沒有機(jī)會(huì)toscorethegoal.正是在你無私的幫助下，我們重拾信心而不是中途放棄.IwishChinesefootballteamwill所向披靡,whichwehavealwaysbeen夢(mèng)寐以求.Inaddition,itwouldbeagreathonorformeto

歡迎你來連江inthenearfuture,whenwecan一起分享難忘的記憶.

Bestwishes.