書面表達高分策略

書面表達高分策略NMET書面表達評分原則1、先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定檔次。第五檔：21~25分第四檔：16~20分第三檔：11~15分第二檔：6~10分第一檔：0~5分語言地道，規(guī)范覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點2、主要內(nèi)容：內(nèi)容要點；詞匯和語法的數(shù)量和準確性；上下文的連貫；語言的得體性應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯有效地使用了語句間的連接成分3、拼寫和標點是語言準確性的一個方面，評分時，應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。4、詞數(shù)少于100和多于140的，從總分中減去2分。5、如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。Howcanwewritesuchanexcellentcompositioninlimitedtime?AsampleTipOne:謀篇布局考試大綱中明確規(guī)定少寫提綱或者篡改提綱是要嚴重扣分的，因此依據(jù)提綱來謀篇布局成為寫作的首要任務。“總-分-總”的三段式結構是高考寫作的萬能結構。TooshortToolongunplannedPerfectTothepointNomistakesClearstructureGoodhandwritingTiptwo:遣詞造句

遣詞造句是寫作的基礎。既要注意用詞的準確無誤，又要注意句式的豐富多變，還要注意語句之間的連接自然合乎邏輯。

在整篇文章中，避免單詞簡單重復,多使用高級詞匯.

●詞匯要準1.喜歡，喜愛Inordertoreleasethestress,35%ofuslikelisteningtomusic,45%likeplayingfootball.whiletherestliketurningtoteachers.likeLike,love,adore,enjoy,beinterestedin,befondof,bekeenon,bedelightedin,takedelightin,beinto,Inordertoreleasethestress,35%ofusenjoylisteningtomusic,45%arefondofplayingfootball.whiletheresttakedelightinturningtoteachers.2.一….就…assoonasOn/upondoing,immediately,directly,instantly,themoment,theinstant,thesecond,assoonas,hardly..when,nosooner…than…他一到那里就打電話給父母.____hisarrivalthere,hephonedhisparents.=Hephonedhisparents__________________hearrivedthere.=Hephonedhisparents_________________hearrivedthere.=Hephonedhisparents__________________hearrivedthere.=________hadhearrivedthere______hephonedhisparents.=____________hadhearrivedthere_____hephonedhisparents.On/Uponimmediately/directly/instantlyassoonasthemoment//instant/secondHardlywhenNosoonerthan1.Learningaforeignlanguageisveryuseful.

Learningaforeignlanguageis____________.2.Ithankhimforhiskindnessandconsiderationsomuch.I____________hiskindnessandconsiderationsomuch.3.Iwanttogethelpfromyou.I_______________togethelpfromyou.4.Onhiswayhome,hefoundanoldmansittingbytheroad,lookingworried.Onhiswayhome,hefoundanoldman_______bytheroad,lookingworried.Practice:使用高級詞匯替換劃線部分的內(nèi)容ofgreatuseappreciateameager/anxiousseated5.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable._______________thegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.6.Weallthinkheisagreatman.Weall___________________him.7.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.___________hespoke,__________excitedhefelt.Practice:使用高級詞匯替換劃線部分的內(nèi)容thinkhighlyofThankstoThemorethemore●句式要變在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個句型，要靈活運用各種語法結構。運用得當?shù)木渥咏Y構可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝并最終獲得高分。Whatsb.usetoreleasethestressis…Sb.holdtheidea/point/viewthat…Whatsb.think/believe/supposeisthat…35%ofusthinkthatsportsareagoodwaytoreleasethestress.But45%

believethat

musicisagoodway,whichisgoodforus.Atlast,20%supposewe’dliketoturntoourteachersifconvenient.同位語從句主語從句表語從句1970年，周群飛出生在湖南省一個小山村,她非常聰明勤奮。雖然家里很窮，她卻意志堅強。她初中畢業(yè)后，不得不放棄學業(yè)。從那以后，周群飛來到深圳，在深圳大學旁找了份工作。為了盡量多掌握謀生技能，她白天去打工，晚上去讀夜校。自助者天助。2003年，她成了藍思科技公司的創(chuàng)始人。是她自己的努力和她的團隊的合作，使得她終于取得了成功。現(xiàn)在據(jù)信她成了中國的女首富。Task:使用較豐富的句式1970年，周群飛出生在湖南省一個小山村,非常聰明勤奮。

ZhouQunfei,whowasborninasmallvillageinHunanprovincein1970,wasverysmartanddiligent.

方法一.把定語從句改為非謂語動詞使句子更簡潔ZhouQunfei,borninasmallvillageinHunanprovincein1970,wasverysmartanddiligent.雖然她很貧窮，卻意志堅強。Poorthough/asshewas,shewasstrong-willed/strong-determined.方法二.使用省略和倒裝使句子生動Although/Thoughshewaspoor,shewasstrong-willed/strong-determined.Although/Thoughpoor,shewasstrong-willed/strong-determined.省略倒裝方法三.使用名言諺語自助者天助。Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.更多的名言諺語Practicemakesperfect.Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.Knowledgeispower.Romewasnotbuiltinaday.熟能生巧。事實勝于雄辯。知識就是力量。羅馬不是一日建成的。Itishereffort/diligenceandherteam’scooperationthatmakehersucceedfinally.

方法四.使用強調(diào)句型使句子明朗是她自己的努力和她的團隊的合作，使得她終于取得了成功。方法五.使用被動語態(tài)，特殊句式據(jù)信她成了中國的女首富。ItisbelievedthatshehasbeentherichestfemaleinChina.類似句式Itissaidthat…Itisreportedthat…Itisannouncedthat…Itissuggestedthat…sampleZhouQunfei,borninasmallvillageinHunanprovincein1970,wasverysmartanddiligent.Poorasshewas,shewasstrong-willed.Aftergraduatingfromherjuniorschool,shehadnochoicebuttodropout.Fromthenon,shewenttoShenzhenandfoundajobnearShenzhenUniversity.Inordertolearnasmanylivingskillsas

possible,sheworkedinthedayandwenttonightschooltofurtherstudyatnight.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.In2003,shebecamethefounderofLansiTechnologyCompany.Itisherdiligenceandherteam’scooperationthatmakehersucceedfinally.NowitisbelievedthatshehasbeentherichestfemaleinChina.●邏輯要強從行文需要出發(fā)運用恰當?shù)倪B接詞、過渡詞可以使文章增色不少。使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞能使整篇文章銜接自然、渾然一體、文句流暢。

1.

表示遞進;在同一話題上補充內(nèi)容另外，還有：What’smore;besides;also;furthermore;moreover;inaddition,aswellas2.表示轉(zhuǎn)折關系但是，然而，相反：高考大綱中常用的連接詞：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary;nevertheless3.表示因果關系因為，因此，所以:4.表示條件關系如果，只要:

除非:否則:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;

if;oncondition(that);aslongasunlessor；otherwise

5.表示時間關系

當…的時候:

在…之后:

在…之前:

直到:

一…就…:

后來，然后:

不久:

近來:

自從…:從那時起:when;while;as

after

beforeuntilassoonas;nosooner…than;hardly…whenlater;

afterwardssoon; lately;

recentlysincefromthenon表示特定的順序關系首先,最主要的:

其次:

然后:最后:7.換一種方法表述換句話說:

aboveall，inthefirstplace,mostimportantofall,firstlysecondly,secondthen;next

finally;intheend,lastbutnotleastinotherwords,thatistosay;8.進行舉例說明例如，比如:

9.用于陳述事實實際上:

跟你說實話:

forinstance;forexample;like;suchasinfact;actually;asamatteroffacttotellyouthetruth;tobehonest,honestlyspeaking,franklyspeaking10.

對一個話題進行總結總而言之，總的來說:

onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword,generallyspeakingPractice

請?zhí)钌锨‘數(shù)年P聯(lián)詞或短語。XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet___________heheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.HeadvisedthatIhireacar__________Icouldtravelaroundinthewest.3.Itwasnotlong_______thepolicecame.___________heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.wheninorderthatbeforeAssoonas

5.Doyouagreewithmyarrangement?________,dowritetomesoon.6.Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends.___________,Isaved$80.7.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth.________,itmaymakeusfat.Ifnot/soAsaresultWhat’sworseTipthree:語法正確文章的語法要求使用正確、準確。文章中存在語法錯誤必然會影響最終的得分。所以，大家在平時寫作時要養(yǎng)成時時提醒自己盡量不犯語法錯誤的習慣，特別是要盡量避免由于粗心引起的錯誤.

常見語法錯誤分析1.句子謂語Thebuildinglikeamatchbox.Helpthemwhentheyareneedhelp.

SomestudentslikethebooksthatwaswrittenbyLuXun.Itisthebusinessman’sdeedthatreallymakepeopleangry.2.主謂不一致is/looksweremakes3.時態(tài)錯誤

AbigcharityisheldtohelpthepoorsickstudentinC1220inourschoolyesterday.was4.短語誤用

Toourproud,ourcampusissobeautifulthatitlookslikeabiggarden.pride類似結構toone’ssurprise;toone’ssatisfactiontoone’sexcitement5.冠詞誤用

WehadgoodtimeintheorangegardenonasunnySundaylastterm.a2015,04,19,ourschoolhappenedamovingthing.Therearemanystudentscomplainthatthehomeworkissoheavy.Tostudents,ownamobilephoneisfashionable.6.中式英語

AmovingthinghappenedinourschoolonApril19th,2015.complainingowningManywho嘗試使用高級詞匯代替一般詞匯增加表現(xiàn)力靈活使用多樣化的句型凸顯特色添加恰當?shù)倪B接詞和過渡詞

使行文流暢盡可能的避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤減少失分Homework

Polishyourwriting.

聯(lián)合國教科文組織某考察團正在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員,請根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡要介紹這個村的情況：

1)大小：近100戶人家，約500口人。

2)變化：過去很窮，78年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了?，F(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。

3)教育：原來的學校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學樓有4層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學齡兒童在此免費就讀。注意：1）要點齊全，前后連貫。

2）詞數(shù)：100-120之間。Practice書面表達：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.大家看，這篇書面表達要點齊全，表達正確，但語言平淡，表達方式單一，邏輯性差，它很難在考試的評分中得到較高檔次。如果我們能使用一些恰當?shù)倪B接詞，盡量使用較高級、較復雜的語法結構，就使這個平淡的文章有很大改觀，甚至會變得更精彩。①用介詞短語作定語或用含定語從句的主從復合句。②語句間缺少連接成分。③表現(xiàn)作者對現(xiàn)在鄉(xiāng)村的發(fā)展的喜悅心情，也起到承上啟下作用。④較高級詞匯。Ladiesandgentlemen,

Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehere④arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.

Itusedtobeverypoor.②However,

ithaschangedalotsince1978③

andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.

Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.Nowitistaking

onanewlook.

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.

Inthepast,theschoolherewas