南京英語中考復習-寫作文指導

WritingHowtowritegoodcompositions?1.認真審題2.列出提綱3.連詞成句4.連句成文5.細心檢查

agoodcomposition審時態(tài)人稱體裁內(nèi)容字數(shù)自從實施規(guī)范辦學后，中學生有了更多自主支配的時間，但有些同學不知如何利用好這些時間，針對這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室“校園英語之聲”欄目就“如何更好地利用課余時間”進行征文。請你用英語給該欄目寫一篇廣播稿。內(nèi)容要點包括：

不良現(xiàn)象和行為（至少3點）1.花太多時間在興趣愛好上2.迷戀網(wǎng)吧，上網(wǎng)打游戲3.……

看法我認為……

建議（至少3條）合理安排時間參加興趣小組

……注意:100詞左右，廣播的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)體裁人稱內(nèi)容時態(tài)字數(shù)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主Introduction

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Conclusion不良現(xiàn)象同行為看法建議Writeanoutline花太多時間在興趣愛好上迷戀網(wǎng)吧，打電腦游戲

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------已給出總結(jié)全文，再次點題列關(guān)鍵詞Problemsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbies,

becrazyabout,playcomputergames,watchtoomuchTV,

refusetodohomework,…列關(guān)鍵詞Opinionsnotgoodforourhealthandstudy,paymoreattentionto

…列關(guān)鍵詞Suggestionsplantimecarefully,

joininterestgroups,

achieveabalancebetweenstudyandbobbies,

takepartindifferentafter-schoolactivities,

dosomesports,dosomehousework…列關(guān)鍵詞ConclusionLet’s…,Ihope…并列句復合句結(jié)果狀語從句Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbies.Theycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbiesandtheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontimeSomestudentsspendsomuchtimeontheirhobbiesthattheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontimeHowtomakebettersentences?變換句式連詞成句連句成文Therearemanythingswecando.wecanplanourtimecarefullyandtryourbesttoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.cansetupandjoindifferentkindsofinterestgroups,takepartinsomegoodsocialactivities.wecandosomesports.Ifwehavetime,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.However,howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?ForexampleBesidesthese,AndalsoweWe添加連詞或句子！suggestionsHowdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.方法一：善用連詞連接句子，使文章更流暢。1、表轉(zhuǎn)折的連詞:but,although,however…2、表因果的連詞:

because,so…,sothat,asaresult

3、表順序的連詞:

atfirst,tobeginwith,then,later,atlast…

三類連詞:Let’stry1._____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.2.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.3.Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking.4._____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\Althoughinstead

suchasFirstNextFinally\AtlastA.Alotofpeopletravel.B.Mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.A.SomepeoplevisittheirfriendsandparentsB.Tovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

方法二:善用詞匯甚至善用高級詞匯Somepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.方法三：妙用引文和例子，多用于“正文”,有時用forexample/suchasWeinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.Readloudly（theending）Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.

只會用功不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻Proverb（諺語）加入英語俱樂部是學習英語的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.方法四：加諺語，可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.4.DoastheRomansdo.5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。失敗是成功之母。

中考英語書面表達評分標準1.短語及句子結(jié)構(gòu)不對，人稱、時態(tài)、語態(tài)誤用，均為大錯。一處大錯扣1分。

2.通篇人稱錯誤，統(tǒng)扣2分。

3.拼寫、標點符號、冠詞、介詞等方面的錯誤為小錯。3個小錯相當于1個大錯。

4.相同錯誤，只扣一次。字數(shù)過多或過少詞扣2分。

5.文中若出現(xiàn)自己及老師、學校等真實姓名扣2分。

6.書寫潦草，卷面不清，扣2分。第五檔（13～15分）：能寫明全部要點，語言基本無誤或有少量拼寫錯誤，行文流暢，表達清楚。第四檔（10～12分）：能寫明大部份要點，語言有一些錯誤（句子結(jié)構(gòu)或動詞時態(tài)錯誤1～2處),但行文基本流暢，表達基本清楚。第三檔（7～9分）：能寫明一些要點，語言錯誤較多（句子結(jié)構(gòu)或動詞時態(tài)錯誤3～4處）但意思基本連貫，表達基本清楚。第二檔（4～6分）：能寫明少數(shù)要點，語言錯誤多，意思不連貫，影響意思表達。第一檔（1～3分）：只能寫出若干單詞，無可讀的句子。二、評分檔次：一、評分原則：細心檢查Now,wehavemuchfreetimethanbefore.Butmanystudentsdon’tknowhowshouldtheyspendthetime.Theyspendsomuchtimetoplaythattheycan’tfinishhomeworkontime.AlsosomeofthemwatchtoomanyTV,Somearecrazyaboutplaycomputergames.Idon’tthinkit’sgoodfortheirstudyandhealth.However,howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?First,wecanplanourtimecarefulandtrytoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.Second,wecantakepartininterestgroups.Besidesthese,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehouseworks.Let’smakebetteruseofourfreetimeandmakeourlifecolorful!moretheyshouldplayingmuchplayingcarefullyjoinhousework4大錯，4小錯。-5分4.CheckingSpelling(拼寫)Tense(時態(tài))Grammar(語法)Handwriting(書寫)Punctuationmarks(標點符號)通覽全文仔細檢查Correctmistakes1.Everyoneknowsthathealthisveryimportantforourself.2.Ourstudyisgettingmoreandmorehard.3.Theythinktravellingthatcanmakepeoplefeelrelaxedandhappy.4.Ithinkitisunhealthybecausepeopledon’thaveenoughtimetorelaxedthemselves.5.Todaymanypeoplearesufferfromstress6.Andthereareafewpeoplestillworkontheholiday.7.Peoplecanhaveagoodrestwillbehealth.

.ourselvesharderandharderthattravellingrelaxsufferworkingwhohealthyr15分FromSusan11分卷面整潔不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分！假如上周一你班舉行了“愛護水、節(jié)約水”的主題活動，請你根據(jù)以下要點為你校校報寫一篇活動報道?；顒觾?nèi)容邀請王老師作報告；全班討論如何節(jié)水和愛護水?；顒邮斋@我們知道我國一些地方水源受到污染；我市雖有一些河流和湖泊，但也缺水。所以……(節(jié)水和愛護水的方法至少各發(fā)揮一點)?；顒痈惺堋螅?.詞數(shù)不少于90，文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)；

2.要點完整、層次清晰、語法正確、上下文連貫；

3.文中不得使用真實的人名、校名。Introduction

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Conclusion內(nèi)容收獲Writeanoutline邀請王老師作報告全班討論如何節(jié)水和愛護水我國一些地方水源受到污染我市也缺水節(jié)水和愛護水的方法舉行主題班會活動感受列關(guān)鍵詞Introductionholdanactivityabout…saveandprotectwater列關(guān)鍵詞Contentinvitesbtodogivesbatalkhaveadiscussionabouthowtosaveandprotectwater列關(guān)鍵詞Achievementsomeoftheriversbepollutedbeshortofasaresultthrowrubbishintodump…into…uselesswater…列關(guān)鍵詞Feeling:takepartintheimportanceofprotecttheenvironment…LastMondayourclassheldanactivity.Wetalkedaboutsavingandprotectingwater.Howtomakebettersentences?變換句式連詞成句LastMonda