2023年托福獨(dú)立寫作滿分范文30篇

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s，tｈeatｅｒsandcｅntersｆｏreｎtertａｉnment.WhenIgobaｃkｔhere,IｗｉllhaｖｅｎodｉfficulｔyinｆindingａｊobsuｉｔableformｅaｎdIcaｎmakｅusｅofａｌlthｅｆacilｉtieｓａｖaｉlabletherｅ.Secondly,ifIｇｏbacｋtomyｈomecity,Iｃanlｏokaｆtｅｒｍｙｐarｅnts.ItakeｔｈisintoconｓideｒatｉoｎbｅｃauseIamｔheironlyｃｈilｄaｎｄtｈeyａrenowwｅakａｎdｇettingoｎｉnａge.ＩfIlivｅｉnthesamｅcitywｉtｈthem，Ｉcaｎvｉsitthemveryoｆteｎandheｌｐｔhemwhenｅｖeritisnecｅssａｒｙ.Thirdｌy，ifＩｌｉｖeｉｎｍyｈomecity,Iｗillhａｖealｏｔｏｆｆrｉenｄｓ,sｃhoｏｌｍatｅsaｎｄreｌativeｓtoｖｉsｉtandｔotuｒｎtoforｈelｐｗhenIneed.Ｏfcｏｕrse,IcoｕldgetacquainteｄwｉthmanｙpeoｐleandｍakemanyfrｉeｎｄsifＩwｅreｔogotｏｌｉveｉnaｓｔｒangｅｐlaｃｅ,ｂuｔtｈａt(yī)takesｔime.ＩｆIgobacｋtoｍyｈｏmecｉty,eｖｅrybodｙwillbｅwaｉtingfｏrmeandIwｉｌlｂｅabletosettｌedoｗncomfortabｌｙwithoutaｎytrｏubｌeanｄwasteoftｉｍe．Ｉｎshｏrt,mychoiseiｓbasedｏnacａrefuｌconsiｄeratioｎｏｆｍyｈomecｉtyandmyfamily.Itｈｉnkｉｔｉsabeｔｔeroｒsｅｎsｉbｌechoice;iｎaｃeｒtａinｓense,iｔisaｍｕｓt.Neiｇhborsaretｈepｅoplewholivenｅarｕs．Ｉnyoｕｒopinion，whatａreｔhequalｉtiesofaｇoodneighboｒ？Usesｐeｃificdetａilsandexamplｅsinyouranswｅr.托福寫作輔導(dǎo)：托?？荚嚌M分作文欣賞(4)Ｉfyｏuhaveａgoｏｄｎeighbor，ｙouａrealuckypｅrson．Youhavesomeonewhｏcaｒeｓａboｕtyｏｕrnｅe(cuò)ｄsａndyouｒprｏperｔy，whoiｓhｅｌｐfulinthelｉttlｅday-to-ｄaｙsituaｔionsthatｃomeup,andwhoisｓuｐｐorｔiｖeintimesofｃｒiｓｉs.Ａgoodneiｇhborisｓoｍeoｎeｗhｏ，forinstａncｅ,ｕndeｒstaｎdｓthaｔｙoｕrchiｌdrｅｎmａyoccaｓioｎallyｒｕnａｃrossｈｉsｌaｗn,－ｅｖｅｎthoｕｇｈyouｔelltheｍnoｔtｏ.He'lｌreａｌizｅtｈａt(yī)ｃｈilｄｒencanｂecareｌesｓabｏuｔｔhingslikｅtｈａt(yī),ａndhewｏｎ'tｍakeａbigfuｓsabｏuｔｉｔuｎlessitbecomesaregｕlarthiｎg．Iｎtheｓａmevein,ｈeknowsｔｈａｔyｏu'lluｎｄerstandifsomeｏｆtｈｅtrａsｈfroｍhistrashcansbloｗsacrossｉｎtoyouｒyard.Inotherwoｒds，heiｓsｅｎsiｔivetoｔheunintｅntioｎaltｈingsthatｃaｎhaｐpeｎ.Heｄｏesn'tｍaｋeａｂiｇdｅaｌaboｕtthem.Ａgoodｎｅｉｇhｂorisaｌsorespeｃtｆｕlofperty.Forexaｍplｅ,sheaskｓyouｒpeｒmｉsｓｉonbeforedoiｎgaｎytｈｉｎgerfeｒeｓwithwhaｔ＇syｏurs.Thismeanssｈｅwoｕldn'tpｌantaｈugetreｅｉnbｅtweenyoｕrhouseｓwiｔhouｔaskiｎgｈｏwyｏuｆｅｌtａboutit.Ifｓheｗanｔedtoｐuｔupａfeｎｃe，ｓhewouldletyouknoｗｆirst.Sheｍiｇｈtwoｒkwithｙoutodeciｄewhereitshouldbeplaｃed．Mａybethｅtwooｆyouｗoｕldeｖｅnsplｉttｈecoｓｔ.Agｏodneighbｏｒwouldｌeｎdyousｏｍｅｍiｌｋiｆｙourａnｏｕt.She'dｇｉveyｏuａrideｔｏworkiｆyｏｕrcａrwaｓbrｏken，ａnｄlｅtyｏurchｉldrｅnｓtayaｔhｅrhouseinｔheeveｎiｎgifyoｕgoｔstucｋｗorkiｎgovｅｒtime.Ｙoｕwoulｄdothesameｆorher.Bothofyouｗｏulｄhｅｌｐmaｋethｅotheｒ＇slifeeａsier.Whensｏmｅtｈｉnｇreaｌｌｙawfｕlｈａppenstoyou,likeaｄｅaｔhinthefamｉly,agoodnｅｉgｈｂorwillvｏluntｅｅｒtoｈelｐinanywａyhecaｎ．Thｉscｏulｄmeansｏmethｉngsmaｌl,ｌikemakingｓomｅcａssｅrolestopｕtiｎyourｆrｅｅｚertofeedvisｉtinｇrelatives.Orｉｔcｏuｌdmｅansomeｔhinｇbig,likehelpingyougettｈrouｇhthesadnｅssofｔｈeｆuｎｅral.Ithｉnkonlｙsomeｏnｅwｈohasexｐerｉeｎcedabadneiｇhboｒcanrｅaｌｌｙapｐreciateagoodone！Agoodneiｇhborcanbｅagoodfrieｎd.Ｈeorsｈｅcanmaｋeａlltｈediｆｆerｅncｅiｎthewｏrldtoyoｕrlｉfe.托福寫作輔導(dǎo)：托?？荚嚌M分作文欣賞(5)Somｅｐeoｐｌeprefｅrtoeaｔatfooｄstaｎdｓoｒrｅstauranｔｓ.Otｈerpeoｐｌeprefertoｐreparｅanｄｅａｔfoｏdａt(yī)ｈomｅ.Whｉcｈｄoyoｕprefｅr?Uｓespecificreasoｎsanｄｅsamｐｌｅstosuppoｒtyouｒanｓｗeｒ．Somｅpeopleliｋeｔoeaｔouｔaｔｆooｄｓtanｄｓanｄｒｅｓtaurants,wｈｉleｏtheｒｓlｉkeｔｏprｅｐaｒefooｄaｔhome.Ｏfｔeｎitdepenｄsｏnthekｉndofliｆeｓtyｌepeoｐlehaｖe.Thoseｗithｖerybusyjobsoutｓidｅthｅhouｓｅdon’talwaｙshavｅtimeｔoｃooｋ.Theｙｌiｋｅtheｃｏｎvenieｎceofeａｔｉngouｔ.Overall，tｈoｕgh,itischeａｐｅｒandｈeａlｔhｉertoeａt(yī)ａt(yī)hｏme.Wｈileeatinginｒesｔaurａntsisfast,tｈemｏneyyouspｅｎｄｃaｎａｄdup.WhenＩhavｅdinneratａｒｅｓｔauｒantwithafriend，tｈeｂilliｓuｓｕａllyoｖertweｎtｙdollａrｓ.Iｃaｎbuyａlｏtofgroｃerieswiｔhtｈaｔmucｈｍoｎey.Evenluｎcｈａt(yī)afａｓt-foodｓｔaｎｄｕｓuaｌlycosｔsfivｅorｓiｘdollarsforonｅperｓｏｎ.That’sｅnｏｕgｈtｏｆeｅｄthewhｏlｅｆamilyatｈｏｍｅ.Ｅatiｎgatｈomｅisbｅｔterforyoｕ，too.Ｍｅａlsａｔresｔaurantsaｒeｏｆｔｅnhiｇhinfａt(yī)aｎdcalorｉes，andｔｈｅｙservebigplatesofｆoｏd-muｃhmorefooｄ-ｔhaｎyoｕｎeedtoｅａt(yī)atoｎemeal.Ifyoucoｏｋｆoｏdatｈoｍe,ｙｏｕhavｅmorecoｎtｒolovertheingrediｅnts.Yoｕｃanusｅmarｇaｒineinsteaｄofbuttｅｒonyｏurpotatoeｓ，ornｏtpuｔｓomuｃｈｃhｅe(cuò)sｅonｔｏpｏfyourpizza.Athｏmｅ,youcancoｎtrｏlｙｏurpｏrtionｓize.Ｙouｃansｅrｖeyｏｕrselfａsｌiｔtlｅasｙouwant.Iｎarestaurant,youmａyｅatａfｕllpｌateofｆood＂ｂecauseyoupaidforit．＂It’ｓtｒuethatｅatingoｕtiｓｃｏｎｖenient.Youｄｏn’ｔhaｖｅｔｏshop，orcoｏk，orｃｌeanuｐ.Butrealhomｅcｏｏkingdoesｎ’thavetoｔａkeupａlotoｆｔｉme.Theｒｅａreloｔsofｓimpleｍeａlsｔhatdon’ttakelｏngｔomake.Ｉnｆact,ｔhey’refastｅrthaｎｅatingout，espｅciallyｉfyouthinｋoftheｔimｅｙouｓｐenddrivinｇtoａrestａuraｎｔ，parkiｎg，waitingforａt(yī)aｂle,,waｉtingfｏｒseｒｖice,aｎddｒiｖiｎｇhome.Ｂotheatingatrestaurantsａｎdcooｋiｎgathomecａｎｂｅsatisｆyｉng.Bothcantastｅgoodaｎdｂｅe(cuò)ｎjoyeｄwithfamilyandfrｉends.Ｉpreferｃookｉngathoｍeｂecauseofｔhｅmoneyandheａlｔhissueｓ,ｂutpeoplewilｌｍaketｈｅｃｈｏiｃethatfitstheirｌｉfesｔｙlebｅｓt.托福寫作輔導(dǎo):托福考試滿分作文欣賞（6）題目：Ithasrｅcenｔlybeｅｎannoｕnceｄthatanｅwmovieｔｈｅaterｍａyｂebuｉlｔinyoｕrｎｅiｇhbｏrhood.Ｄｏｙousupportorｏpposｅthisｐlaｎ?Wｈy?Useｓpeｃiｆiｃrｅaｓoｎｓandｄｅtaｉlsｔosｕppｏrtyourａnｓwｅr.AＮｅwMovｉeＴheaterEnｔeｒtaｉnｍｅｎｔiｓａniｍportantpartｏfeｖerｙoｎe’slife.Wｅalｌｎeedtotaketimetoreｌaxiｎsgrouｐstoliveｈｅalthｙｌｉvesandｄoourwｏrkｅｆficientｌy.Iｔｉseasiertoreｌaｘwhenanaｐproｐriateｆormofenterｔainmｅntiscｏnvenｉentandcloｓeby．Tｈｅreｆore,Iwouldｓuｐpoｒtapｒoposａltｏbｕiｌdａｎeｗmovietｈeateｒinｍynｅｉghｂｏｒｈｏod.Entｅrtainmentpｌacescanbrｉngｓomedisａdｖａntaｇestoacommunityｓuｃhasincreａsedｔrafficandnoise,ｂｕtIbｅlievetｈeａｄｖanｔagesofaneｗmovｉｅtｈｅａｔｅrwouldoutweｉgｈｔｈｅｓecoｎｃerns.Foｒoｎethiｎg，tｈｅpeopleiｎｍyneiｇhborｈoｏdｗoulｄsave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好的運(yùn)動(dòng)器材,就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生會(huì)比較樂意參與體育活動(dòng)。由于這些活動(dòng)也是教育很重要的一部分,所以良好的運(yùn)動(dòng)器材的重要性是不容忽視的。抱負(fù)的做法是,學(xué)校應(yīng)當(dāng)提供學(xué)生非常均衡的教育,以幫助他們培養(yǎng)各項(xiàng)技能?；谶@項(xiàng)理由,學(xué)校不能忽視體育活動(dòng)，這一點(diǎn)是很重要的。撥出更多的經(jīng)費(fèi)資助這些活動(dòng),可以幫助學(xué)校發(fā)展更好的體育課程，并鼓勵(lì)更多學(xué)生參與。托福寫作輔導(dǎo)：托?？荚嚌M分作文欣賞(11）附近有工廠的利弊題目Ａcompanｙｈasanｎoｕncedthatitwishestobuilｄａlａｒgeｆactoryｎeａryouｒcomｍｕnity．disｃusstｈeａｄvaｎtａgesanddｉｓadvａntagesoftｈisnｅwinfluｅnceｏnyouｒcｏmmunity.dｏyousupporｔoropposeｔｈefactory?expｌaｉnyourpoｓition.范文aｆaｃtｏryneartheneｉghborhoodHａvｉｎｇａｆaｃtoryneａrsｗhｅresonelivesbriｎgsｗitｈitｂothadvaｎtagesａnddisadvanｔａｇes.aｎobｖioｕsａdvaｎtａｇeｉsanｉnｃｒeasｅｉnthenumberoｆaｖailabｌejｏｂs，ａｎｄｍanｙpeopleinｔhｅcomｍｕniｔymigｈtｆiｎdｅmpｌoyｍeｎtiｎthenｅwfactoｒy.theｆacｔｏryｗｏuｌdbriｎgmoｎeyintotｈeｃｏｍmuｎiｔyｉnotheｒwaysaｓwｅll.ｉtｗouldｈaveｔopaysoｍetaxestoｔhelocalgｏvernｍent,andｗorkeｒｓmiｇhｔｇｏshopｐingoreatａt(yī)ａｒestａurantintheaｒeaｂeｆoreoｒaftertheirｓhiｆts.Hoｗevｅr,tｈefactoｒywoｕldbｒingsomedisadvantages，too.ｄepeｎdinｇｏnｗhaｔｋiｎdoｆfacｔoryitis,iｔmightpolｌutｅtｈｅe(cuò)nviroｎmentandbｒｉｎgdoｗnpｒｏpeｒtyvalues.iｔwouldｂesuｒetoｉncreaｓetraｆfｉcintｈeaｒeａ，cauｓinｇcongestionanｄｍakinｇitunsaｆefｏrｃhｉｌdreｎtopｌａyoutｓide.finａlｌy,theneiｇｈbｏｒｈooｄwoulｄbｅcomeａnｏisｙ,buｓyｐｌacｅ.ｆoralloｆthｅseｒeasonｓ,ｉwoｕｌdbeopｐｏsedtotheconｓtruｃtionoｆanｅwfactoｒynｅａrｍｙcommunｉty.whiｌｅtheemploymｅnｔoppoｒtunitieswoulｄheｌｐthｅcomｍuｎiｔy,ｉｂelｉeｖｅiｔwouldbeｂeｔterfｏrreｓiｄｅntsｔoｃommutetoworkandpresｅｒveｔhepeaceofoｕｒｎｅighborhood.托福寫作輔導(dǎo):托?？荚嚌M分作文欣賞(1２）為什么要改造家鄉(xiāng)環(huán)境題目Ifyoucoｕｌｄchａngeonｅiｍｐｏｒｔanｔｔｈingａboｕｔyｏuｒhoｍｅtｏwｎ,wｈatwouｌdyouｃｈanｇｅ?usｅrｅasonｓａndspecｉfｉｃｅｘamplesｔosｕppoｒtｙouranｓweｒ.范文Mｙhｏmetowniｓalargｅcityｗithadensｅｐopulａt(yī)iｏn.ｂecauseitｉsｃrowdedwithpeoｐｌｅandｔheiｒveｈiclｅs，theenvironmentisnｏtascleanａｓiwoｕlｄｌikeitｔｏbe.ｔoｏmaｎycarsandbuｓespollutｅtheaｉrandpeoplealsoｃｒeatealoｔｏfｇarbａｇetｈaｔisｎotalｗａｙsdiｓpｏsedｏｆpropeｒly.iｆicouldｃｈangejustoｎethiｎgaｂoutmyhometowｎ,itwouldbｅthｅｅnvironmenｔ．iwouldmａkｅitaｃlｅaｎeranｄlesspollutｅｄplaｃetoliｖe.Ibeｌiｅvethaｔsｕcｈachangeisｉmportantｂｅcauseaperｓon’sliｖｉｎgｅnvironmeｎtcａｎgreａt(yī)lyａffectbｏｔhｈispｈｙｓicａlａndmenｔａlｈeaｌth.ｂadairqｕaｌitｙcａncoｎtriｂｕtｅtomanｙhealthｐrｏbｌemssucｈasaｓｔhmａ,aｎｄimproperlydiscardedgaｒbagecanｓpｒｅａdｂaｃteｒiathatarｅｄangｅrｏustoheaｌth.ｉnadｄｉtｉon,theｅｎviｒonmeｎtcangreatlyaｆfectthewａｙaｐersoｎfeeｌs.ｗheninclｅan,atｔrａｃtiveｓuｒrouｎdｉngswealwaysfｅｅlmoreｏｐtimistｉc.forthesereasons,ｉtｈinkｔhepeｏpleofmyhｏmetownshoulｄｗorktｏgｅthertomａkｅitaclｅａｎｅｒｐlacetｏliｖe.Iｎsｇroｕpstｏaccoｍpｌishthｉsgoａlweｈaveｔonotonlｙenａctlawｓtolimitpｏlluｔion,buｔalsotakeperｓoｎalｒesponsibilｉtyfｏroｕｒｏwnacｔｉons.onlywhenpeopｌerealiｚetheeｆfｅctｔhattｈeenvironmenthaｓｏｎtheirwell-ｂｅiｎgwiｌltheytakｅsｕcｈｐroposａｌssｅriｏｕｓly．thｅrｅfoｒe,weｍustfirｓtinformpeｏpleoftheｄaｎｇeｒsofapｏorenviｒonmｅnt.ｔhｅniｂelievewecanaｌllｉvｅｈapｐier,heａlthiｅrlivｅs.托福寫作輔導(dǎo)：托福考試滿分作文欣賞（1３)有時(shí)是否該做不喜歡的事題目doyｏuａgreeoｒdisaｇｒeｅwiththeｆolｌowinｇstａt(yī)emenｔ?ｐeｏpleshoｕｌdsoｍetｉmeｓｄｏｔhｉngｓthaｔtheyｄoｎoｔeｎjｏydoｉng.usｅｓpeｃifｉｃreaｓoｎsanｄｅｘampｌｅstoｓuｐｐｏrtyourａnswer.范文Dｏingthinｇsｗedon’tenｊoｙeveryoneｈａscｅｒtainｌikｅsａnddislikes,aｎdthｅrｅisnodeｎyingthａt(yī)wealｌprefeｒtｏdothethingsthaｔwelike.ｈowｅver，ｓoｍetimesdoingｔhinｇsweｄon’tｅnｊoycanｂebeｎeｆiｃialｆoｒus,aｎdsometiｍeｓitisneｃessａry.tｈeｒｅfore，iａgreeｔhａｔpｅoplesｈoｕｌｄｓomeｔiｍesｄoｔｈingｓthａt(yī)thｅydｏnoｔenjoy.onereasonisthａt(yī)someｏftｈeｔhingstｈatweｄoｎ’tenjoｙａreｇoｏdfｏｒus.fｏrexａmpｌe,ｎｏteｖeｒｙonｅｌｉkeｓtoexerｃise,ｂｕtｅxerｃｉseｉsgooｄfｏrouｒhｅａlthaｎdｓoｗeshoｕldalldoｉtanｙｗay.lｉkeｗiｓe,notmａnｙpｅoplｅe(cuò)nｊoygoｉnｇtoｓeeadeｎtiｓtｏｒadoｃtor,butｉtisgooｄforｕstｏtakeｃareofｏｕrsｅlｖｅｓ,soｗeshｏuldallvisｉtdｅntisｔsandｄoｃtｏrsrｅgulａｒlyfｏracheｃkup.anotherreasonisｔhat,atｔｉmes，ｔｈethｉｎgswｅｄｉsｌikeaｒｅnecesｓary.sｔudｅntｓmuｓttakｅｔestsｉnsｇroupstocompletethｅirｓｔｕdies，andeverｙonemuｓtｗｏrｋiｎｓｇｒｏupstｏmａkeａｌiｖiｎg.andfiｎａlｌy,dｏingthingsｗediｓliｋecaｎａlsoopenupｎewpoｓｓｉｂiliｔiｅｓｆｏruｓ.mｏｓtpeoｐleｃbａｂｌyrｅmｅｍberｈatiｎｇａcertａiｎfoodwhenthｅyｗerｅcｈildｒeneｖenｔhoｕghtheyenjoyｔｈａt(yī)samｅｆoodｎoｗ.sｏ,whenｗedｏtｈinｇswｅdislike,ｗemａyｄｉsｃoversomethingwedｏliｋealongtｈeｗay,oｒsiｍplyfindａbetterwａｙｔodeａｌwiththethingsｗemｕｓｔdo.ｎoonｅlikesｔｏdothiｎｇs