高中英語短文改錯含答案

9.9.NOeOlIlikeridmgmybike.Thoughitisnotveiynew,butitismybestfriend.Ifindveiyconvenienttogoanywherewitliabike.Ridegivesmenotonlyexercisebutalsopleasure?Iusemybikemostlyonsunmierwhentheweatlieriswarmanddiy?Itcanveryunpleasantinwinterwhenitiscoldandraiiiispouringdown?Itcanalsobeveiydanger?OfcourseIwillbeverycaiefiilonmybike.Illfacts,accidentsaienottheonlyproblem?Ou亡dayIwenttoschoolandcomebacktofindliisfiontwheelwasmissing?Itwasalongwalktotherepairer'sshop.NowIhavetwostronglocks.3.6.Ilikeridmgmybike.Thoughitisnotveiynew,butitismybestfriend.Ifindveiyconvenienttogoanywherewitliabike.Ridegivesmenotonlyexercisebutalsopleasure?Iusemybikemostlyonsunmierwhentheweatlieriswarmanddiy?Itcanveryunpleasantinwinterwhenitiscoldandraiiiispouringdown?Itcanalsobeveiydanger?OfcourseIwillbeverycaiefiilonmybike.Illfacts,accidentsaienottheonlyproblem?Ou亡dayIwenttoschoolandcomebacktofindliisfiontwheelwasmissing?Itwasalongwalktotherepairer'sshop.NowIhavetwostronglocks..【答案與解析】去掉buta漢語可說^雖然……但是……S但英語習慣上不能相應地說though...but...o（注：不能去掉though,因為這樣還會涉及大小寫的改動，而高考短文改錯每行只允許改動一處。）find后加itD此it為形式賓語，賓正的賓語繪其后的不定式。3?Ride改為Ridmgo動詞原形不能用作主語，要改為動名詞。on改為liio表示在某個季節(jié)，用介詞in。can后加be。此句缺謂語動詞。danger改為dangerous□用形容詞作表語。facts改為factoinfact為習語，意為'?事實上二come改為came。came與其前的went為并列謂語。his改為myo前后使用代詞應一致。此行無錯。No-02TheEnglishCornerinZhongshanParkiswherepeoplegotopractisethekspeakingEnglish?EverySundayafternoontheygatheraround,talktoeachotherinEnglish.Amongtheyarestudents,teachers,doctors,andsoon.IfiistwenttoanEnglishCornerwhenIwasinJuniorGradeTwo.IwentthereeveiySundayandchatwithsomepeopleinEnglish?InthepastthreeyearsIhadneverbeenabsent.I'msurePvemadesomeprogressesinmylisteningandspeaking?AndIhavemademanyfiiendstheie.TheEnglishComerisreallygoodplace?Ihopetliatmorefiiendswilljoininus.on.7.TheEnglishCornerinZhongshanParkiswherepeoplegotopractisethekspeakingEnglish?EverySundayafternoontheygatheraround,talktoeachotherinEnglish.Amongtheyarestudents,teachers,doctors,andsoon.IfiistwenttoanEnglishCornerwhenIwasinJuniorGradeTwo.IwentthereeveiySundayandchatwithsomepeopleinEnglish?InthepastthreeyearsIhadneverbeenabsent.I'msurePvemadesomeprogressesinmylisteningandspeaking?AndIhavemademanyfiiendstheie.TheEnglishComerisreallygoodplace?Ihopetliatmorefiiendswilljoininus.on.7.【答案與解析】此行無錯。把speaking改為spoken□"英語口語"是spokenEnglish□把talk改為talking.用現在分詞作伴隨狀語。把they改為them=人稱代詞作介詞among的賓語，因此要用賓格。這足個倒裝句，amongthem是表語,主語是students,teachers...□去掉oiia在everySunday/week*day之類的時間狀語前，不用介詞。把chat改為chattedochatted與went并列，指最初去英語角的情況。把had改為have。因為inthepast/lastfewyeais常與現在完成時連用。&把progresses改為progress因為progxess是不可數名詞，沒有復數形式。在is后加上3。后面的place是單數可數名詞。去掉join后而的in。joinin是指參加某項活動（即以表示活動的名詞用其賓語）：表示加入到某個組織并成為其中的一員，或與某人一起，要用join。No?03Behindmyapartment,thereisusedtobeadiityandmessycomer.Bitsofplasticbagshangedontlietiees?Brokenbottleswereleftlayinghereandthere?Therewasadamagingcaiinthecenter?Thewholecomergaveoffanunpleasantsmell.Oneveaiago,wedecidedtoturnitillabeautifulpark?Sincethen,greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinthatcomer.Allthenibbishhavebeenclearedawav?FlowersJandyoungtreeshaveplantedallover.Nowbudscomeheretosing、childrencomeheretoplay,andadultscomeheretoeiijoyourpeacefilllifb.Ithastakenonanewlook.【答案與解析】1.Behindmyapartment,thereisusedtobeadiityandmessycomer.Bitsofplasticbagshangedontlietiees?Brokenbottleswereleftlayinghereandthere?Therewasadamagingcaiinthecenter?Thewholecomergaveoffanunpleasantsmell.Oneveaiago,wedecidedtoturnitillabeautifulpark?Sincethen,greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinthatcomer.Allthenibbishhavebeenclearedawav?FlowersJandyoungtreeshaveplantedallover.Nowbudscomeheretosing、childrencomeheretoplay,andadultscomeheretoeiijoyourpeacefilllifb.Ithastakenonanewlook.【答案與解析】1.去掉is。根據下文是“曾經有一位……=所以用thereusedtobe…。.7.9.hanged改為hung。因為hang作“懸掛，解，是不規(guī)則動詞，其過去式是hung：作?，絞死“解，才是規(guī)則動詞.過去式zt:hangedolaying改為lyingo此句leave...doing...（th處于某種狀態(tài)）的被動式：表示狀態(tài)的“在、位于”，用1?其現在分詞是lying；而laying是及物動詞by（放置）的現在分詞。damaging改為damaged□因為car與damage是被動關系，所以用過去分詞作定語。in改為into。因為表示“把變成"是用短語turn…mto…。去掉beeiio因為不去掉been就是被動語態(tài)了，而takeplacezti不及物動詞，無被動語態(tài)。hrve改為Ms。因為主語nibbish不可數名詞，所以謂主用單數。&在planted前加been3因為謂語動詞pkmt與主語是動賓關系，要用被動語態(tài)。此行正確。改為【heir。因為在此指代的是adults。No.04Itisimportanttodowithtlienibbishillcities.Rubbishmustbe1.treatedproperly?Thus,itmaycausealotofproblems?Itmaypollute2.theakandwater.Whenpeoplebreathethepollutedairorchinkpolluted3.water,wemaygetill.Ouicityhasbeguntopayattentiontotheioblem.4.

AsforasIknow、somembbishissortedandsenttodifferentfactoiy?5?Rubbish,suchasoldnewspapersandglass,arelecvcled?Somehainiful6.mbbishissenttoaceitaiiiplaceandburied.Wasteairiscleanedafterit7.goesintotheair.Wastewateristreatedbeforeitpouredmtorivers?Ttectfromtheenvironment,thegovenunenthaspassedlawsto9.preventpeoplefiomtluowiiigmbbisheverywhere?Weshoulddooui10.besttotakegoodcareoftheenviiomnentandfightagainstpollution?【答案與解析】把do改為deal,dowith表示“處理幟能用于與what連用的疑問句中,否則，它是?'需要、想要、忍受”之意(常與can.could連用)。把thus改為othenviseo前后不是因果關系，而是“否則如果不處理好的話，就會…“。3?在dank后加the。thepollutedair與thepollutedw定并列關系，特指前句提到的那些被污染了的空氣和水。把we改為the*因為替代的是前面的people□把factory改為factoriesc不同的工廠，當然不只一家。把are改為儼因為主語是mbbish,是單數，當然用is。把Mer改為before0山前后總義的邏輯關系所知。在poured前而加is。因為it(wastewater)與pour(倒)是被動關系°去掉protect后面的tect身是及物動詞，protect…&om…意為“保護…免受…此行正確。No.0.Howmanytimedoyouspendwitliyourparents?.Yourparentsaieyourdealerpeopleintheworldwhenyouareyoung?Andtheyalwayscareofyoudeep?Buteventhoughmanychildienstilllovetheirmumanddad,familiesmaybecomemorecloseasyougetolder?Theendoftheyearisatimeforfamiliestogettogether.Haveyoueverthoughtofhowyoucanshowyourparentsthatyoulovethem?Findachanceanddosometliingforthemortohavesinceretalkwiththem?Ifyoucandothis,vouiparentswillbeveryhappy.【答案與解析】1?將irnnv改為much□修飾不可數名詞(tune)不能用many。2.將dearer改為dearest□與intheworld連用，用最高級。3?將of改為for。careforsb-lovesb.愛某人。將deep改deeply為。表示抽象意義“深深地S用deeply?將more改為less。illevendiougli和st山可知，小孩隨著年齡增大，與父母的關系可能變得不及以前親密。將you改為they。因為是代替上文的manychildreno去掉of。thinkof后面常接sth.或doingsth.,不接從句。9.9.此行正確。去掉to。have與前面的find并列，均為祈使句。在sincere前加上a。haveatalkwithsb是固定詞組。No.06TOC\o"1-5"\h\zTodayisSunday,Theskyisfiillofsunshine,sodoesmylifb.l._Atabout9:00a.m.Igotothebookstorewithmyfiiends,tliere2._wasalotofnewbooks,Ididn'tknowwhichonetobuy,because3?_thesebookswereallusefultom匕Atlast,Ichosetwo.4._At10:00,wewenttotliecinema,thefilmcallingTitanicwas5._verypopular?Ittookusabout3hourstosee.Havingseenthe6._film,andeveiyonewasdeeplymoved?Somefriendseven7._burstouttears?Fromtliestory,Iunderstandthatloveisnoble8._andvaluable.TliafsareallywondeiiiilfiliiiItisveryworth9._seeingagain.Whatahappyday!IhopetomorrowIwillbeevenhappy!10?.【答案與解析】does->is0主語所陳述的內容與前一句主語所陳述的內容相同，用so連接并倒裝。go-went。文帝的主導時態(tài)是陳述過去，故用一般過去時。3?was—>were□有很多書，故用復數。calling—>calledocalling—>calledo表示"被叫做S作定語修飾film.see后加ito作某事花去某人多少時間。去掉and。前面部分為分詞作狀語，后而部分為主句。out—*into0詞組buistmtotears流，淚。very—>\vell。常說be(well)worthdoing(很)值得作某事，不用very。happy-happier=.根據語境，該用含蓄比較級。No.07Iliketiavelverymuch?IhadbeentomostofthemteiestedplacesinBritainalreadyandIjustdon'twantothercoldEnglishsummer.SoI'llgoabroadforchangethisyear.WhererdliketoisFiance,Spain,orItaly.Thoughgomgabroadhasthetroubleofchangingmoneyabroad?ButwhenIjusttlunkofthesunrdeiijoyfbi\thenewplacesrdsee,thepeoplerdmeet,Igetexcited.Illfact,whichrdreallyliketodoistopracticemyFrenchandSpanish?Itwoulddomealotatwoik..7.Iliketiavelverymuch?IhadbeentomostofthemteiestedplacesinBritainalreadyandIjustdon'twantothercoldEnglishsummer.SoI'llgoabroadforchangethisyear.WhererdliketoisFiance,Spain,orItaly.Thoughgomgabroadhasthetroubleofchangingmoneyabroad?ButwhenIjusttlunkofthesunrdeiijoyfbi\thenewplacesrdsee,thepeoplerdmeet,Igetexcited.Illfact,whichrdreallyliketodoistopracticemyFrenchandSpanish?Itwoulddomealotatwoik..7.2.,3?.,3?4.6.7.&2.,3?4.6.【答案與解析】h3d改為have。指到目前為止己經去過英國的大部分有趣的地方，用現在完成時。interested改為mteiestingc指有趣的地方，而不是指人感到有趣，所以要用mteiestmgoother改為another□因為summer是單數，句意是：我不想再在英國度過一個寒冷的更天。change前加a。forachange足習語，意為“為了改變常規(guī)、為了變化一下“。9后加gOowhereI'dliketogo意為"我想去的地方二of改為withe表示“某事或做某事讓人傷腦筋"用uoublewithsthordoingstho去掉for。Idenjoy足定語從句，前而省略了代替先行詞thesun的that：enjoy是及物動詞，直接說enjoythesum所以for是多余的。此行正確。which改為what□因為用which（哪一）句總不通：what-thethingthat…總為"（所）...的二do改為helpo因為用do.意思不通：helpmealot總為?'對我?guī)椭艽蠖﨨o.08YangLiweiwasbornfromanordiiiaiyfamilyinLiaoningProvincein1965?HebecamethepilotinChineseAirForcein1987?spend1,350hoursintheair.Hehasspent5yeaistrauiiiigtobecomeaspaceman?Husentintospaceat9a.monOctober15thbyChina’sShenzhouspacecraft,thatorbitedtheeanh14times.Helandedsafeat6:23a.mtlienextday,makingCliinathethudcountrysuccessfullysendmgapersonintospacebeforetheformerSovietUnionandtheUSA?YangLiweicomesbacktotheearthaftera21-hourtriptospace?InspaceYangrecordedtoeveiythinghesawandshowedChina’snationalflagtothepeoplewatchmgonTV.【答案與解析】from—>inQ"出生于什么家庭"應該是bebornina...family。the-a°他成為了''一名“中國空軍飛行員。3?spend—^spendingo現在分詞短語作狀語。sent前加was。他""被”神州五號送上天空。that-which-非限制性定語從句不用that引導。safe—*safelyo修飾動詞應該用副詞。Cbefore->afteic中國發(fā)射載人飛船應該是在美國、蘇聯之后。comes—*cameo"回來"這一動作明顯發(fā)生在過去。去掉tOcrecoid繪及物動詞。No.09Oneday,didnotfeelingwell,Mr.Smithwenttothehospitaltohavehimexamined?Whenhewasgiventhetestreport,hewasgreatlyshocked."AmIdying?”Heinmiediatelywasfeltveiyill.Filledwithsadness,hewentbackhome,takingalotofpillsandevenwrotehiswill."Maybead