專題39應(yīng)用文寫作之邀請(qǐng)信和建議信-2023年高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí) 精講與精練資料（教師版）

專題39應(yīng)用文寫作之邀請(qǐng)信和建議信《考點(diǎn)?題型?技巧》考點(diǎn)導(dǎo)航考點(diǎn)導(dǎo)航邀請(qǐng)信必背好句1．It'smypleasure/agreathonourformetoinviteyoutojoinus.非常榮幸地邀請(qǐng)你加入我們。2．IwonderifI/wehavethehonourtoinviteyoutotheparty.我想知道我/我們是否能有幸邀請(qǐng)你參加派對(duì)。3．I'dliketoinviteyoutojoinusforavisittothenearbynursinghomenextSaturdayfortheDoubleNinthFestival.我想邀請(qǐng)您下周六重陽(yáng)節(jié)一起去探訪附近的養(yǎng)老院。4．Wearehaving/planning...on...(date)andwefeelitwouldbeagreatideaifyoucanjoinus.我們定于……(日期)……(活動(dòng))，如果你能來(lái)參加就太好了。5．Thefollowingaresomedetailsabout.../Herearesomedetailsabout.../Somedetailsabout...areasfollows.……的細(xì)節(jié)如下。6．Tobeginwith,wewill...Besides,therewillbeanumberof/variousactivitiessuchas...whichwill...首先，我們將……。此外，將會(huì)有許多活動(dòng)，例如……這將……7．Idohopeyouwillacceptour/myinvitationifitisconvenienttoyou.我真心希望你方便的話能接受我們/我的邀請(qǐng)。8．We/Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconfirmyourparticipationatyourearly/earliestconvenience.如果你能盡早在你方便時(shí)確認(rèn)參加，我們/我將不勝感激。建議信常用詞匯1.gve/offer

sb.some

advice(on) 給某人提建議2.ask

sb.for

advice 向某人征求意見3.as

follows 如下4.in

my

opinion/in

my

view/from

my

point

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在我看來(lái)5.find..…h(huán)elpful/useful/beneficial 認(rèn)為……有用6.take

part

in/participate

in... 參加7.follow/take/adopt

one's

advice 采納某人的建議8.take

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account/consideration

把……考慮在內(nèi)9.withregardto 關(guān)于；就10.putforward 提出11.in

this

regard/in

this

respect 在這點(diǎn)上/在這方面12.share

sth.with

sb. 與某人分享某事13.with

time

going

on

隨著時(shí)間的推移14.Befacedwith 面臨15.take

sth.seriously 重視；認(rèn)真對(duì)待建議信常用句型.I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtrouble...很遺憾聽說(shuō)你在...有困難。2.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.這樣的問題是很正常的?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh會(huì)有一些幫助。3.Ihavereceivedyourlettersayingyouplanto...我已經(jīng)收到了你的來(lái)信。信上說(shuō)。。。4.

YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtohowtolearnChinese,andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.你關(guān)于如何學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)詢問我的建議，那么我就在這里給出一些建議。5.I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto..很高興收到你的來(lái)信，信上詢問我關(guān)于如何。。。。6.I'mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowto...很高興收到你的電子郵件?，F(xiàn)在，關(guān)于如何在。。。，我寫信給你一些建議。7.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.8.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisaway.9.

Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.10.

Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.

Whateveryoudecidetodo,goodluckwithyourstudies/work！11.Hereareafewsuggestions.【題型分析】1．假如你是李華，現(xiàn)在有兩張京劇《貴妃醉酒》（DrunkenConcubine）的演出門票，想邀請(qǐng)你們班上的英國(guó)留學(xué)生Jean觀看。請(qǐng)你給她寫一封英文的邀請(qǐng)信。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.京劇的簡(jiǎn)介；2.提出邀請(qǐng)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearJean，IknowyouareinterestedinPekingopera,atraditionalartform,whichhasahistoryofmorethan200years.Iamsureyouwouldliketoseeashow,DrunkenConcubine,performedinthenationalgrandtheatreonFebruary10.ItisafamousdramainPekingoperaandispopularwithpeople.LuckilyIhavetwoticketsandI'dliketoinviteyoutowatchtheshowwithme.IfirmlybelievethatitiswellworthseeinganditcanarouseyourinterestintraditionalChineseculture.I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours，Lihua【寫作分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給留學(xué)生Jean寫一封信，邀請(qǐng)她觀看京劇《貴妃醉酒》（DrunkenConcubine）。【寫作步驟】第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.京劇的簡(jiǎn)介；2.提出邀請(qǐng)。第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）beinterestedin;haveahistoryof;morethan;wouldliketo;bepopularwith;invitesb.todo;beworthdoing;arouseone’sinterestin;lookforwardto第三步：連詞成句1.IknowyouareinterestedinPekingopera,atraditionalartform,whichhasahistoryofmorethan200years.2.Iamsureyouwouldliketoseeashow,DrunkenConcubine,performedinthenationalgrandtheatreonFebruary10.3.ItisafamousdramainPekingoperaandispopularwithpeople.4.LuckilyIhavetwoticketsandI'dliketoinviteyoutowatchtheshowwithme.5.IfirmlybelievethatitiswellworthseeinganditcanarouseyourinterestintraditionalChineseculture.6.I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）（供參考）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰?！緦懽鼽c(diǎn)評(píng)】[高分句型1]IknowyouareinterestedinPekingopera,atraditionalartform,whichhasahistoryofmorethan200years.這句話運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。[高分句型2]Iamsureyouwouldliketoseeashow,DrunkenConcubine,performedinthenationalgrandtheatreonFebruary10.這句話運(yùn)用了過去分詞作定語(yǔ)。[高分句型3]IfirmlybelievethatitiswellworthseeinganditcanarouseyourinterestintraditionalChineseculture.這句話運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句。假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷（resume）。給外教MsJenkins寫信，請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！痉段钠纷x】DearMSJenkins,I’mLiHua.Iplantotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncompanyduringthesummerholiday.Ihavealreadyfilledintheapplicationformandhadmyresumereadyforit.However,Iamnotsureaboutthewordsandformat.Therefore,Iamwritingtoaskforyourhelpandprofessionaladvice.Wouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreadthroughthematerialsattached?Wouldyoumindfindingoutthemistakesintermsofwordsandformat?Besides,I’dlikeyoutocorrectthemistakesfoundinthematerialsandformat.Iwouldmuchappreciateitifyoucoulddomeafavor.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【提分詞匯】takeapart-timejob做兼職工作fillintheapplicationform填寫申請(qǐng)表havemyresumeready把簡(jiǎn)歷準(zhǔn)備好professionaladvice專業(yè)建議【亮點(diǎn)句型】Therefore,Iamwritingtoaskforyourhelpandprofessionaladvice.因此，我寫信向您尋求幫助和專業(yè)建議。Wouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreadthroughthematerialsattached?您能抽出點(diǎn)時(shí)間閱讀一下附件中的材料嗎Besides,I’dlikeyoutocorrectthemistakesfoundinthematerialsandformat.另外，我希望你能糾正我在材料和格式上發(fā)現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤。Iwouldmuchappreciateitifyoucoulddomeafavor.如果你能幫我一個(gè)忙，我將不勝感激。檢測(cè)訓(xùn)練檢測(cè)訓(xùn)練1．假定你是李華，你校打算成立Fans英語(yǔ)俱樂部，想邀請(qǐng)外教Smith參加，請(qǐng)你給Smith寫封邀請(qǐng)函，內(nèi)容包括：1.成立俱樂部的目的；2.活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)及安排；3.邀請(qǐng)加入。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearSmith,I'mLiHua,astudentinClass1Grade3.ToarouseourinterestinEnglishlearningandprovideaplatformforustopracticeEnglish,ourgradehasdecidedtosetupFansEnglishClub.We'llgatherinthemeetingroomafterschooleveryFridayafternoon,whenvariousactivitieswillbeorganizedandperformed,likesingingEnglishsongsandhavingdebatesinEnglish.I'mveryhonoredtoinviteyoutojoinusrepresentingourgrade.IholdthefirmbeliefthatyourappearanceinourclubwillcertainlyinspireusalltobecomemoreinterestedinEnglishandthereforeworkharderatEnglish.HopingtoseeyoueveryFridayafternoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作分析】本文要求給外教Smith老師寫封邀請(qǐng)函，邀請(qǐng)他參加你校打算成立的Fans英語(yǔ)俱樂部。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全。完整說(shuō)明題干中給的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展。(2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。根據(jù)題目要求我們?cè)谘?qǐng)信中寫出的內(nèi)容以及我們上面提到的注意點(diǎn)，列出提綱：第一部分：介紹自己以及成立俱樂部的目的（激發(fā)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的興趣，提供練習(xí)英語(yǔ)的平臺(tái)）；第二段：活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)及安排（讓被邀請(qǐng)人清楚的了解活動(dòng)的基本信息。）；第三段：邀請(qǐng)Smith老師加入（您的出現(xiàn)能激勵(lì)我們更努力的學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)）?！緦懽鼽c(diǎn)評(píng)】1.使用高級(jí)句型：非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和將來(lái)時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)We'llgatherinthemeetingroomafterschooleveryFridayafternoon,whenvariousactivitieswillbeorganizedandperformed…；同位語(yǔ)從句的使用Iholdthefirmbeliefthatyourappearanceinourclubwillcertainlyinspireus.……。2.使用了過渡詞語(yǔ)：therefore等。3.使用了重要短語(yǔ)：setup建立；behonoredto感到很榮幸；becomeinterestedin對(duì)…感興趣。2、假設(shè)你是李華，你在美國(guó)夏令營(yíng)認(rèn)識(shí)的朋友Mike給你來(lái)信說(shuō)他最近沉迷于電腦難以控制。請(qǐng)你給他回一封信，告訴他網(wǎng)癮可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致成績(jī)下降、健康狀況惡化、損害家庭關(guān)系等問題，并提出一些建議。參考詞匯：沉溺于be/becomeaddictedto

網(wǎng)癮：Internetaddiction。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】DearMike,Iamgladtohearfromyou.Asyourclosefriend,I’dliketotalkabouttheharmofInternetaddictiontoyouasIfeelworriedtoknowthatyouhavewastedlotsofvaluabletimeplayingtheInternetgames.Asweknow,theInternetisaconvenienttooltoimproveourknowledgeandskills.However,ourlifewillbegreatlyaffectedifweareaddictedtoit.Forexampleyourgradesmaygodownandyourhealthwillbegoingfrombadtoworse.Tomakethingsworse,itcanalsodamagetherelationshipwithyourfamily.SoIthinkitishightimethatyougotridofthebadhabit.Itisagoodideaforyoutoreadsomemeaningfulbooksanddosomephysicalexercise.Iamlookingforwardtohearingyourgoodnewssoon．Yours,LiHua3．你校校長(zhǎng)李建想邀請(qǐng)你校交換生Peter的父親Smith作為頒獎(jiǎng)嘉賓參加你校新學(xué)期的開學(xué)典禮，現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你代他寫一封邀請(qǐng)信，主要內(nèi)容包括：1．發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)；2．活動(dòng)安排；3．你的看法；4．聯(lián)系方式：fgvert.school@yahoo.Org注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearMrSmithI’mhonoredtoinviteyoutoattendtheopeningceremonyofthenewterm,whichistobeheldat8onthemorningofSept.1(nextMonday)inourschoolmeetinghall.Andweexpectyoutoworkasaguestwhopresentsawardstostudents.Whilebeingthere,youcannotonlygetinvolvedinoureducationalactivitiesbutalsowitnessthegrowthofyourchild.Ifirmlybelieveit’sagoodopportunitytostrengthentherelationshipbetweenourschoolandparents.Wouldyoubesokindastotellmewhetheryoucouldcomeinadvance?Formoreinformation,pleasesendemailtofgvert.school@orcallaBestwishes!Yours,LiJian【寫作分析】這是一篇提綱類作文，文章要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，在寫這篇文章時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.整篇文章時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。2.要點(diǎn)要齊全，但是不要進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的羅列，可以采用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，或者是表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的副詞如Formoreinformation使上下文銜接自然，行文自然流暢。3.注意語(yǔ)氣，此文是寫邀請(qǐng)信的英語(yǔ)短文，所以語(yǔ)氣上應(yīng)該比較誠(chéng)懇，不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)過多的強(qiáng)硬語(yǔ)氣的詞語(yǔ)。4.此作文要分四個(gè)部分寫，每個(gè)部分要更完整，最好用簡(jiǎn)單句與復(fù)合句結(jié)合的方法寫作如I’mhonoredtoinviteyoutoattendtheopeningceremonyofthenewterm,whichistobeheldat8onthemorningofSept.1(nextMonday)inourschoolmeetinghall.5.多采用一些高級(jí)句型，如we’dbetterwearmaskswhenwegooutside，It’soneofthemostdangerousweatherconditions，同時(shí)使用一些詞組如notonly...butalso，behonoredto，heldat，betweenand等?！痉段牧咙c(diǎn)】提綱性文章難點(diǎn)：提綱性文章難點(diǎn)：擴(kuò)充成句，因?yàn)樘峋V性文章主題內(nèi)容已經(jīng)基本列出，在將短句擴(kuò)充時(shí)，要精煉。其中要注意盡量用高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句是來(lái)表達(dá)，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，定語(yǔ)從句等，就如文中“I’mhonoredtoinviteyoutoattendtheopeningceremonyofthenewterm,whichistobeheldat8onthemorningofSept.1(nextMonday)inourschoolmeetinghall.”使用的是定語(yǔ)從句。再者就是要多使用一些高級(jí)詞匯與詞組，如文中notonly...butalso，behonoredto，heldat，betweenand等。最后就是要段落清新，層次分明。就像文中要多使用一些連接詞語(yǔ)使銜接自然。4．假定你是李華，是某國(guó)際學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)生活部長(zhǎng)。近期同學(xué)們反映學(xué)校的餐廳有較多問題，請(qǐng)你給餐廳負(fù)責(zé)人Mr.White寫一封投訴信。內(nèi)容包括:1.寫信目的；2.投訴的具體問題；3.希望問題早日解決。注意:1.詞數(shù)80詞左右。2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearMr.White,I’mLiHua,headofthelifedepartmentoftheStudents’Union.Onbehalfofthestudents,I’mwritingtoexpressourdissatisfactionwiththeschoolcafeteria.First,ithasalimitednumberofdishesandthedailyspecialsarethesameeachweek.Secondly,thereisalackofhealthyfood,suchassaladsorfishonthemenu.Anotherthingisthatwehavetostandinlineforalongtimebeforewecanget