中考英語(yǔ)作文話題(八)建議勸告

本話題涉及語(yǔ)言知（七下）必會(huì)級(jí)名詞動(dòng)詞動(dòng)詞詞組Agreewith,形容詞副詞句式---Whatdoyouthinkofsoapoperas?Ican’tstandthem.---WhatdotheythinkofAnna?Theyher.---HowwasyourItwasfun.（八上）unit10，unit5,必會(huì)級(jí)名詞Advice,resolution,動(dòng)詞動(dòng)詞詞組Giveup,形容詞副詞句式y(tǒng)oushouldseeaYoudrinksomewithhoney.Heshouldn’teatanything.IhopefeelYoulierest.youcometowithusonI’mgoingtomovesomewhereinteresting.soundslikeacityIcouldIalsowanttoalltheworld.Oneday,I’mgoingretiresomewherequietbeautiful.（八下）U2,U4,U7,必會(huì)級(jí)

選用級(jí)選用級(jí)選用級(jí)名詞everynight,camera,tennisballfreedom,competition,social

etiquette,動(dòng)詞should,uncomfortable,polite,annoy,criticize,receive,improve,smoke,動(dòng)詞詞組stayathome,arguewith,sb.asb.up,agivesb.aticketto…,saysorry,talkaboutitonthehavefightaskforsth,sthfromsb.,undertoojob,getonwell,giveadvice,pressure,in,for,getoutof,inwith,forhappentosb,try(not)todo,keepsb’svoicedown,intakecare(not)tojointhedroplitter,up,inmakeprogress,takeaninterestindoing…,havefundoor,putout1

withsth,形容詞enough,ofstyle,personal,specialenough,副詞alltime,句式notuntil,’stimeforsth,finditdifficulttosth,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand,If…,sbwill…,（aboutdoing,）You(notdo)….Maybeyoucould….Whynot(do)…?Whydon’tyou(do)…?Whatabout(doing)…?Howabout(doing)…?Youhadbetter(do)….Wouldyoumind(doing)…?Ifyou…,you’ll(do)….IfIwereyou,Iwould(do)….Youaresupposedto(do)….九年級(jí))Unit13daysmesad.必會(huì)級(jí)名詞動(dòng)詞動(dòng)詞詞組

organizeddoing,選用級(jí)

形容詞kindofterrible;fair;副詞

tense,mysteriousconfusing;guilty;句式

sb+形容詞

sb+動(dòng)詞（一）文審題假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)雜志Voiceof欄目的編輯Mary,請(qǐng)你針對(duì)Tony的來(lái)信談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⑻岢鼋ㄗh。DearIammiddlestudent.teacheralwaysaskstoworkinOneinourgroupalways’tfinishhisworkontime,thoughhehaspromisedusthathewould.ThethreeoffeelWhatwegoonworkingwith人稱：你/你們---第人稱時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)內(nèi)容：回答問(wèn)題，看法,建議（二）腦風(fēng)暴fromjob.，cooperate，teamthework，，problem，Unfortunatelygiveharm，，blame，offer,，（三）句翻譯造句成文2

1、很高收到你的來(lái)信。_________________________________________________2、我明白的感受。____________________________________________________3、和別人作不容易。____________________________________________________4

你應(yīng)繼續(xù)該和工作，你們是一個(gè)組。______________________________________5、下面是的一些建議。

______________________________________________6、你應(yīng)該他為什么不能完成工作？________________________________________7、他有困，你應(yīng)幫她。8、你應(yīng)該訴他你們?cè)敢夂退黄鸸ぷ鱛____________________________________9、你可以求老師的幫助_________________________________________________10我希望我的建議對(duì)你有幫助。___________________________________________你最好找出他沒(méi)完成任務(wù)的原因。12.如果他真麻煩，作為組員，分擔(dān)困難是你的責(zé)任。13.向老師求助是一個(gè)很好的主意。14.老師是一個(gè)能幫助你和他更好溝通的人。（四）句成篇asso,because,for,but,however,while,although,inorderto,sothat,by,asfor,firstofall,then,next,besides,what’smore,only…butalso,afterall,finally,butnotleast,foron,ononehand,onforforininall,inaword,atpresent,inI’mhappytohearyou__________itnotsoeasytowithpartners.__________,yougoonworkingwith_________youaHeresomefor_______,askhimhecouldn’tfinishthework.___isinyoushouldhelphim________youcantellhimyouwillingtowithyouaskyourforIhope______myadvicewillhelpyouwithproblem.3

（五）升亮點(diǎn)1.詞組表示合作：with,workingwith,communicatewit,helpout,speakill/highlyofsb,about,findreason,allowdo,insistonofferdo,telldo,expressone’sidea,writesb.aletter,amessage,meweakin,progress2.句型從hadbetterdo,It’sbadfor,+adjbegladthat,reasonwhy…isthat,Ithinkthat…/Ibelievethat…,IfIwereyou,Iwould….Youaresupposed(do)….3.非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)：’s+adj.sb.todo,doinghis…e.g.Youhadbetterfindoutthereasonwhyhecouldn’tthework.IfheisinyouasaItatoaskyourforisthepersonwhohelpyoucommunicatewiththestudents（六）題升華1Icanunderstandyouyoureallytodogoodjob.itforhimtohisyoudbetterI’mlookingtohearingyournews.Ifheisinityourdutytothedifficultywithhim.（七）踐練筆下面是你班班會(huì)上以"中學(xué)生是否能佩帶手機(jī)"為題進(jìn)行討論的情況。假如你是彼得，請(qǐng)你寫一封信給21報(bào)的編輯說(shuō)明該情況，并帶表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)。的學(xué)生贊同60%的學(xué)生不贊同便于同親友聯(lián)系;

手機(jī)輻射對(duì)人健康有害;可以上網(wǎng)查資料.鈴影響自己和他人學(xué)習(xí);余時(shí)間玩玩游戲調(diào)節(jié)大腦儲(chǔ)存有用信息

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書寫規(guī)范(5)評(píng)價(jià)細(xì)化表（用于寫作講評(píng)課）1.內(nèi)容方面2.用詞方面。篇章方面。

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5.書寫方面。Ⅰ段落主題句Ⅰ詞的和文章題是句型結(jié)構(gòu)是單詞拼寫及是否概括本段指關(guān)系否否準(zhǔn)確？

否完整？

大小寫字母是的中心思想？應(yīng)用正確？文章文體主謂人稱是

否正確？Ⅱ文章內(nèi)容是Ⅱ詞的復(fù)所用組織

否一致？標(biāo)點(diǎn)的用否充實(shí)要點(diǎn)有數(shù)正確與否？方否恰Ⅲ時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、

是否正確？無(wú)遺漏？形容詞比當(dāng)？Ⅲ擴(kuò)展句否較和最級(jí)段落間過(guò)

語(yǔ)是否正確？都圍繞這一主用得是否對(duì)？是否理自連句運(yùn)用是題有無(wú)贅句？副詞的置然？

否自然恰當(dāng)？Ⅳ段落層次是是否恰當(dāng)？全文幅比句子之間是否分明是否合動(dòng)詞的配是否當(dāng)？乎邏輯？是否準(zhǔn)確？前松緊？前緊后松？）開闊文章思路；關(guān)注典型錯(cuò)誤；詞句取長(zhǎng)補(bǔ)短例文三

否連貫？青少年吸煙問(wèn)題在我國(guó)是個(gè)嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題。據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)，12-15歲的中學(xué)生約有35%以上的吸煙。一些學(xué)生只是好奇，而一些學(xué)生已經(jīng)逐漸上癮。請(qǐng)你對(duì)此談?wù)効捶ㄍ瑫r(shí)說(shuō)說(shuō)吸煙的危害，并對(duì)那些吸煙的學(xué)生提出你的建議。提示語(yǔ)：teenagers,Itisreported,from12tocurious(好的),usedto,up,polluteSmokingaamonginChina.Itis35%studentsfrom12Somearejustaboutitwhenseeothersothersintothehabit.AnditisIthinkisnotrightforthestudentstosmoke.Smokingbadforpeople’shealth.Manysmokersdiedoflungcancer.Italsoharmspeople’smentaldevelopment,especiallyforteenagers.Smokingpollutestheairaroundus,anditeven5

diefromthefirebysmokingandthesamemanydestroyedbyfire.Ihopethosestudentssmokeshouldupsmokingassoonitnotgoodforbutalsofamilypeopleyou.Youputheartintoballwithfriendstoyourselfahappyhealthy例文四（朝陽(yáng)201201）假設(shè)你叫張華，是美國(guó)中學(xué)生鮑勃的朋友。你收到了他的電子件給他回復(fù)，回答他的問(wèn)題，提出你的建議，并就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶?。Hi!IhaveabigIspendtimewatchingTVineveningafterdoinghomework.Ioftenstayupgetupinthemorning.aIusuallyhavenoforfeeltiredallday.Myparentsdon’tallowmetowatchTVforcemetobeforemakesmeunhappy.Idon’tthinktheyunderstandme.Doyouhavethesameproblem?WhatshouldII’mlookingtohearingfromYours,Hi!Bob,I’mgladtohearfromyou.IusedtohavesameCheerup!I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.First,watchinggotoWatchingTVtooforyoureyesalsoforrstudy.Second,you’dbettergetupontimeandhavebreakfast.isthemostimportantmealofday.Finally,youAllparentstheirchildren.Ifyoulistentothem,I’msureyouwillbecomehealthierandwo’toftenfeeltired.Ithink’simportantforeveryonetokeephealthyandgo