高考英語書面表達：建議信寫作課件

高考英語書面表達書信、電子郵件類[建議信

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寫作攻略1：什么是建議信？1.建議信是寫信人針對某事向收信人提出建議和忠告。2.建議信有可能是寫給個人，就其遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法和觀點；也可能是寫給某個組織和機構(gòu)，就改進其服務提出建議或忠告。3.建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由。提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌當先。因此建議信要寫得目的明確、簡明扼要，具有合理性和說服力。寫作攻略2：建議信寫作的注意事項a.這類文章一定要符合英語信件的基本格式。b.這類文章的基本時態(tài)多用現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。c.掌握建議信的語言特點：語氣要誠懇，有禮貌；建議內(nèi)容要詳盡具體，不能含糊其辭；可提供的建議通常是多個，因此要注意各條建議之間的銜接。d.熟悉建議信的常用句型。期中試題書面表達（滿分20分）(請在答題卡上作答，否則無效)假如你是高中生李華，你的美國筆友Jack熱愛中國傳統(tǒng)文化，最近打算來中國工作生活一段時間，但是不確定應該去往哪個城市，寫信向你咨詢。請你給他寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你推薦的城市；2.推薦的理由（不少于兩條）；3.表示歡迎和祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習慣。雖然基礎寫作題是半封閉性的，但審題仍然十分重要。現(xiàn)以試題為例，談談如何審題：思考的問題試題分析第幾人稱？（person）文章的體裁是什么？要寫的文章主題是什么(topic)怎樣安排信息點的順序？

(order)動作是什么時候發(fā)生的？(時態(tài))(when)第一、二、三人稱書信對來中國工作生活給出建議說理的邏輯性一般現(xiàn)在時為主第二步：構(gòu)思---建議信結(jié)構(gòu)及內(nèi)容要點三段式：第一段：點明主題：表明寫作意圖/心情/態(tài)度（簡潔明確）。第二段：陳述事實，提出建議，給出理由

（是什么，為什么，怎么樣）第三段：總結(jié)全文，表明希望草稿修改謄寫審題期中范文DearJack,IamsopleasedtolearnthatyouaretospendsometimeinChina.IrecommendyoustayinBeijing,thecapitalandculturalcenterofChina.Thecityenjoysahighreputationforitsabundanceofancientarchitecture,whichrepresentsthetraditionallocallifestyles.Andtherearealsoplentyofmuseumswherepreciousrelicsofhistoricalinterestarewaitingforyoutoexplore.Besides,theexceptionalPekingOperaperformancestherearealsowhatyoucan’tmiss.YouarewelcometoliveinChinaandIwishyouaveryhappyandmeaningfultime!Yoursfaithfully,LiHua寫作攻略3：建議信常用句式A．建議信開頭常用句式

(照應材料，表明意圖)1.AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3.Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.4.Iamwritingtoyouinreplyto...5.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowto…andI'lltrytomakesomesuggestions.6.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning…7.It'smypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon...B.建議信正文常用句式（詳述建議，合情入理）1.Haveyouconsidereddoing.../Sowhynotdo...?2.Don'tyouthinkitmorebeneficialifyoucould…3.Iwouldliketosuggestthatyou(should)…4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.6.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketomakeasuggestionthatyou(should)…7.You'dbetterdo.../Itis/seemsbetterforyoutodo...8.Thebestwaytodosthistodo…/Thereisnobetterwaytodosththantodosth...9.How/Whataboutdoing...?10.Whatif...?11.Itwouldbeagoodideaif...C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式（歸納總結(jié)，提出希望）

1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard(在這一點上).4.Idohopethatmyideaswillwork.5.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindtheseideasuseful.6.Iwouldbereadytofurtherdiscussthismatter/discussthismatterwithyouinfurtherdetail.7.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.8.Let’skeepintouch.Ihopetoheargoodnewsfromyou.9.Ihopewhat'smentionedabovemightbehelpful.10.Iwillappreciateyourconsiderationofmyadvice/suggestions/tips.11.Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thankyou.12.ThesearemysuggestionsandIhopetheycouldmeansomethingforabetterfutureof...寫作攻略4：建議信常用常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞1.表示總結(jié)/歸納的過渡詞或短語:ina/oneword,altogether,allinall,onthewhole,tosumup/conclude/summarize,inconclusion/summary/sum,inshort2.表示遞進/增補的過渡詞或短語moreover;what’smore;besides;inaddition;also;what’sworse;

worsestill;evenworse;tomakematters/itworse;even;again;aswell(as);apartfrom;too/either;furthermore;notonly…butalso…;and;neither…nor…;

both…and…3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折/讓步的過渡詞或短語:but;however;

yet;although;

evenif/though;evenso/not;whatever...;however...;...as...;despite;inspiteof;regardlessof;while...;ontheonehand,…

butontheotherhand,…;

afterall;some…,

butothers…;otherwise;

foronething...,

butforanother(thing)...4.表示原因的過渡詞或短語:because,since,as,for,nowthat,becauseof,

thanksto,dueto（由于）,

owingto,inviewof,onaccountof,asaresult/consequenceof

5.表示結(jié)果的過渡詞或短語:so,thus,therefore,consequently,accordingly,asaresult/consequence,inconsequence,sothat,forthisreason,thereasonfor/why...isthat...

6.表示條件的過渡詞或短語:if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat...,once...

7.表示時間的過渡詞或短語:(and)then,afterthat,next,finally,eventually,later,intheend,recently,atthesametime,(inthe)meanwhile,atfirst,atlast,fromnowon,until/till,afterwards,on/upondoing,shortly/soonafter,beforelong,atthebeginningof8.表示論述順序關(guān)系的過渡詞或短語:first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,aboveall,firstofall,tobegain/startwith,lastbutnotleast,lastly9.表示解釋說明的過渡詞或短語:inotherwords;thatis(tosay);namely;...,whichmeans

10.表示進行舉例說明的過渡詞或短語:forinstance,forexample,suchas,like,examplesinclude...,...andsoon,and/orthelike,take...forexample

11.表示比較對比的過渡詞或短語:instead;insteadof;

meanwhile;onthecontrary;

unlike;differentfrom...;as...as...;

ontheonehand,…

andontheotherhand,…;

some…,

and/whileothers…;...while...;foronething...,

andforanother(thing)...;similarly;equally;similarto...;inthesameway/manner

12.表示強調(diào)事實的過渡詞或短語:infact/reality/truth/practice,totellyouthetruth,tobehonest/frank/sure,asamatteroffact,honestlyspeaking,actually,aboveall,afterall,anyway,anyhow,certainly/surely,indeed,really,especially,inparticular,truly,importantly,mostimportant,obviously,only/just/simply/merely,withoutdoubt/outofquestion

13.表示選擇的過渡詞或短語：either...or...,or,orelse,otherwise14.表示表目的的過渡詞或短語：forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto,withthepurposeof假設你是某報社編輯，最近收到讀者李華的一封來信。信中李華提到自己在學習英語的過程中遇到了困難，這讓他很苦惱。請根據(jù)以上提示，寫一篇回給李華的建議信，幫他解決困難，促進學習。建議內(nèi)容：1.不要灰心，保持良好心態(tài)；2.掌握學習方法；3.培養(yǎng)對英語的興趣愛好。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

建議信寫作范例第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習慣。雖然基礎寫作題是半封閉性的，但審題仍然十分重要?，F(xiàn)以樣題為例，談談如何審題：思考的問題樣題分析第幾人稱？（person）文章的體裁是什么？要寫的文章主題是什么(topic)怎樣安排信息點的順序？

(order)動作是什么時候發(fā)生的？(時態(tài))(when)第一人稱書信對英語學習給出建議說理的邏輯性一般現(xiàn)在時第二步：構(gòu)思---建議信結(jié)構(gòu)及內(nèi)容要點三段式：第一段：點明主題：表明寫作意圖，（有時要簡單介紹自己）。第二段：陳述事實，提出建議，給出理由

（是什么，為什么，怎么樣）第三段：總結(jié)全文，表明希望草稿修改謄寫審題建議信重點第二段：⑴說明建議的內(nèi)容；（是什么）⑵提出具體建議的原因；（為什么）⑶指出采納建議的益處。（怎么樣）注意事項：語言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對方感受。適當運用模板DearLiHua,I'vereceivedyourletter,saying+你碰到的問題.I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.

Mysuggestionsareasfollows.

Firstly,____________,because________.Secondly,you'dbetter________________,because_________.Thirdly,you’dbetter_________________.Onlyinthiswaycanyou__________.What’smore,_____.

Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.

Bestwishes.Yours,xxx

DearLiHua,

I'vereceivedyourletter,sayingyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish.I'msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.

Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Secondly,thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.What'smore,themostimportantadviceisreadingEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.

Bestwishes.Yours,xxx

范文其他模板Dear___,

I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto____./Iknowthat____from____.

Backgroundsandproblems（1）

Hereareafewsuggestions/Hereissomeadvicethat/on_____.First,itisimportantto_____.Then/Second/Also,____.Besides/Inaddition/Furthermore,itshouldbeagoodideato____.Iamsurethat/Ihopethat____.

Suggestions,thanksandhope

Thanksforyourconsideration.I’mlookingforwardto/Lookingforwardto_____.

Yours,

______

SignatureDear_____, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto

(引出主題). Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto

.Then,italsohelpsto

.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato

.Youcanalso

.(此三句不同的句式提出建議) Asto

,Isuggest

(有時根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面).Inaddition,

(其他建議).I'msure

(預測可能的結(jié)果，給對方以行動的信心和決心). I'mlookingforwardto

(表達愿望).

Yourssincerely,

LiHua（2）Dear____, Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowto...,andI'lltrytomakesomesuggestionshere. Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:First,...Ifyoudothis,...Second,...Thisway,...Andlast,...Bydoingthis,... Ihopeyou'llfindtheseideasusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails. Goodluckwithyou.Yours,XXX

（3）寫作訓練1假設你是的李華，下面是你校英語報第一期第二版的主要內(nèi)容。請你給編輯寫一封信，對該版內(nèi)容發(fā)表評論并提出改進建議。版面主要內(nèi)容：體育新聞、學習方法、疑難問答等。注意：詞數(shù)100左右；信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Deareditor,IwasgladtoreadourEnglishnewspaper,especiallySectionBeditedbyyou.AsfarasIknow,mostofthestudentsarefondofthissectionbecauseitprovidesuswithalotofnewsbothfromtheschoolandaroundtheworld.What'smore,itgivesussportsnews,aswellastipsonhowtostudy.Myfavoritepart,though,isAskandAnswer,sinceourquestionscanbeansweredbyteachersintime.Italsohelpsuscommunicatewithourteachersandschoolmates,whichisofgreathelptoourgrowth.范文Despitethegoodithasdonetous,Iwouldstillliketomakesomesuggestions.Thesectionwouldattractmorereadersifyouweretoaddmoreentertainmentcontents,suchashunorousstoriesorjokeswhichwouldmakeitmorelovelyandinteresting.I'mlookingforwardtoreadingmoreinterestingstoriesinourEnglishnewspapers.

Yours,LiHua寫作訓練2假設你是的李華，最近你發(fā)現(xiàn)學校里的浪費現(xiàn)象非常嚴重。請給英語讀寫園地（EnglishReadingandWritingSpace)的編輯投稿反映該現(xiàn)象，并提出自己的建議。注意：詞數(shù)100左右；信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：美德virtue;提倡advocateDeareditors,

IamLiHua,astudentinclassOne,GradeOne.

__________________________________________________________________

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LihuaDeareditors,

IamLiHua,astudentinClassOne,GradeOne.

Recently,

Ihavefoundthatthewasteonourcampusisgettingserious,suchas

thewasteofwater,foodandelectricalenergy.

Facedwith

thesephenomena（現(xiàn)象）,Ireallyfeelworried.

SohereissomeadviceIhopewillhelp.EnglishReadingandWritingSpaceisagoodmediumtoadvocate（倡議）thatsavingisatraditionalvirtue.

Sowouldyou

publishmoreinstructivearticlesonthistopicfirst?

Then,someactivitiessuchas

holdingdebatesorseeingmoviesaboutthephenomenonwillhelpstudentsgetawareof

theharmofwastingandrealize

theimportanceofsaving.Doyouagreewithme?

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHua[精華點評]

建議信的寫作關(guān)鍵在于作者給出建議的語氣委婉而中肯,使對方容易接受。很多學生習慣使用祈使句或者Youshould的句型表示建議,這樣比較生硬，因此應轉(zhuǎn)換不同的句型使語言豐富,如使用youshould...,youhadbetter...,remembertodo等句型。在最后祝愿對方成功的時候,可以用簡明扼要的句型,如wishyougoodluck/wishyousuccess/mayyousucceed,使文章長短句結(jié)合得當。附：請求信模板Dear___________,

Iamwritingtoformallyrequestto___________(請求的內(nèi)容)

Thereasonfor_____isthat______(給出原因).I_____,soI_____(給出細節(jié))

Iwouldalsoliketorequest______(提出進一步的要求).IamsorryforanyinconvenienceIhavecaused.

Thankyouforyourattentiontotheserequests.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,donothesitatetocontactmeat_______(電話號碼).Ilookforwardtoafavorable