中考英語書面表達(dá)常見錯(cuò)誤分析

信息提示太白山是陜西著名的森林游覽勝地。一年四季都有其獨(dú)特的景色(scene)。不過，游覽太白山的最佳時(shí)機(jī)是春天。每當(dāng)春天來臨，青山滴翠，美麗的景色吸引了許多游客前來踏青觀光?？蓭啄昵?游人不注意保護(hù)環(huán)境,亂扔垃圾,攀折樹枝花草,獵殺野鳥,點(diǎn)火野餐,致使環(huán)境一度惡化。請(qǐng)你寫篇報(bào)道,說明太白山旅游環(huán)境的變化。習(xí)作實(shí)況TaibaiMountainisafamousplaceofinterestinShaanxiProvince.Ithasitsspecialscenesalltheyearround,andspringisthebesttimetovisitit.Whenspringcomes,thedaysgetlongerandlongerandtheweathergetwarmerandwarmer.Treesarebeginningtoturngreen,andflowerscomeout.Everythingbeginstogrow(1).Themountainsarecoveredwithalotofgreentalltreesandallkindsofcolorfulwildflowers.Itissobeautifulthatalotofvisitorscomehereandenjoyitsbeautyeveryday.Butafewyearsago,someofthevisitorspaidnoattentiontoprotectingtheenvironment.Theyusedtothrowlotsofrubbishsuchasplasticbags,fruitskinsandwastepaperontheground.Theydon'tknowthatcleanersworkfrommorningtillnighttosweepawaytherubbishandwastethings(2).Sometimestheybrokesomebranches,pickedflowersandevenkilledbirds.Someevenmadefiresintheforesttocookfood.Howdangerousitwas!Luckilyenough,thelocalgovernmenthasbeguntodosomethingtostoppollutingthearea.Greatchangeshavetakenplacehere.Newroadsandnicehotelshavebeenbuilt;treesandflowersareplantedaroundthem.Visitorsareaskedtotakeplasticbagsandputtheirrubbishinthem(3).精講點(diǎn)撥..(1)這一部分應(yīng)當(dāng)刪掉。文章應(yīng)圍繞太白山景區(qū)的景色和環(huán)境保護(hù)主題展開,與太白山有關(guān)的春景可以略寫,但不宜用太多的筆墨去描繪春天,這不僅加長(zhǎng)了篇幅,也沖淡了主題。..(2)這一部分也應(yīng)當(dāng)刪掉。因?yàn)?這里批評(píng)了游客亂扔垃圾的不良現(xiàn)象，由于篇幅的限制,沒有必要再去談?wù)撉鍧嵐な侨绾吻謇磉@些垃圾的。..(3)這一部分同樣需要?jiǎng)h掉。根據(jù)上文不難看出,本文主要談?wù)撎咨铰糜螀^(qū)的環(huán)境污染問題，以及政府采取措施后環(huán)境的變化。沒有必要去描述基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施的變化?？偠灾?英文作文中,應(yīng)特別注意避免想起什么寫什么，隨意發(fā)揮,淡化主題。精彩例文TaibaiMountainisafamousplaceofinterestinShaanxiProvince.Ithasitsspecialscenesalltheyearround,andspringisthebesttimetovisitit.Whenspringcomes,themountainsarecoveredwithagreatmanygreentalltreesandallkindsofcolorfulwildflowers.Itissobeautifulthatalotofvisitorscomehereandenjoyitsbeautyeveryday.Butafewyearsago,someofthevisitorspaidnoattentiontoprotectingtheenvironment.Theyusedtothrowlotsofrubbishsuchasraino(4)beallwet的意思是“完全錯(cuò)了”。要表達(dá)“全身濕透了”，可以用wetthroughcompletelywet。(5)由于受漢語“雖然……但是”結(jié)構(gòu)的影響而出錯(cuò)。在英語中，although和but在一個(gè)句子中不能連用。(6)這里要表達(dá)“不管怎么說”,可以用anyway或anyhow,文中的表達(dá)顯然屬于漢式英語。精彩例文Wekeepalovelysmallcatathome.Myfamilyarealwayshappybecauseofher.Iwenttothestoretobuysomefoodforheryesterdayevening.Unluckily,therewasaheavyrainonmywayhome.WhenIgothome,Iwaswetthrough.AlthoughIwaswet,Iwasveryhappy.Anyway,thecatwouldnotbehungry.中考英語書面表達(dá)常見錯(cuò)誤分析(七)習(xí)慣用法和固定搭配【要點(diǎn)領(lǐng)悟】有的同學(xué)在寫作時(shí)常常把一些習(xí)慣用語、固定詞組及結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤搭配，結(jié)果寫出來的句子讓人看不懂。我們?cè)谄綍r(shí)若將這些英語基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)牢固掌握，考試時(shí)就會(huì)得心應(yīng)手、從容自若?！拘畔⑻崾尽?0月1日星期六睛昨天你叔叔打電話來，請(qǐng)你找?guī)讉€(gè)朋友去他農(nóng)場(chǎng)收桔子。于是今天早上6點(diǎn),你和朋友就坐汽車出發(fā)了。一到農(nóng)場(chǎng)便開始干活。桔子樹上結(jié)滿了桔子,你們又摘桔子又裝車，忙完后在那兒吃了午餐，還吃了不少桔子。下午坐卡車回家。你們雖然忙了一天，卻感到非?？鞓?。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上提示寫一篇80詞左右的英語日記。請(qǐng)注意日記的格式?！玖?xí)作實(shí)況】October1,,SaturdaySunnyMyunclecalledmeyesterday.Hesaidinthephone(1)thathehadanorangeharvest.Heneededsomehelp.Heaskedmetogotherewithmyfriends.Todaymorning(2)welefthomeat6:00.Wewenttherebyabus(3).Thetreesin(4)thefarmwerereallyfullwith(5)oranges.Whenwegotthere,webegantoworkatonce.Wepickedalotoforangesandputthemintheboxes.Somestrongboyscarriedtheboxesintoatruck.Afterwork,wehadthelunch(6)atmyuncle'shouse.Wehadmanyoranges,too.Intheafternoon,wecamebackhomebytruck.Wewerebusytoday,butwewerehappy.【精講點(diǎn)撥】“在電話里說……”應(yīng)用介詞on?！敖裉焐衔纭钡挠⒄Z說法是thismorningoby+交通工具名詞時(shí),其間不用冠詞或其他修飾詞。(4)“在農(nóng)場(chǎng)里”介詞用on,應(yīng)是onthefarm?！薄?結(jié))滿……”有兩種表示方法,befullof...或befilledwith...0(6)英語中在表示吃一日三餐時(shí)，三餐前不加冠詞?！揪贩段摹縊ctober1,,SaturdaySunnyMyunclecalledmeyesterday.Hesaidonthephonethathehadanorangeharvest.Heneededsomehelp.Heaskedmetogotherewithmyfriends.Thismorningwelefthomeat6:00.Wewenttherebybus.Thetreesonthefarmwerereallyfulloforanges.Whenwegotthere,webegantoworkatonce.Wepickedalotoforangesandputthemintheboxes.Somestrongboyscarriedtheboxesintoatruck.Afterwork,wehadlunchatmyuncle'shouse.Wehadmanyoranges,too.Intheafternoon,wecamebackhomebytruck.Wewerebusytoday,butwewerehappy.中考英語書面表達(dá)常見錯(cuò)誤分析(八)詞匯使用錯(cuò)誤要點(diǎn)領(lǐng)悟很多考生在中考書面表達(dá)中,常常會(huì)錯(cuò)用一些詞語,使得評(píng)卷老師不知其所云，得分自然不會(huì)高。因此，我們?cè)谄綍r(shí)的習(xí)作訓(xùn)練中就要特別留意詞匯的正確使用。信息提示李小莉的一個(gè)名叫MaryBaker的筆友給她回了一封電子郵件,談到她對(duì)中國(guó)的喜愛和向往。請(qǐng)以"Ane-mailfromanAmericanpenpal”為標(biāo)題寫一封電子郵件。郵件的開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。From:marybaker0892@To:lixiaolibjcn@163.comSubject:Mywish要求：.意思連貫、符合邏輯、書寫工整;.詞數(shù):85左右。習(xí)作實(shí)況From:marybaker0892@To:lixiaolibjcn@163.comSubject:MywishDearLiXiaoli,I,mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.I'veshowedittomyfriends.Everyone(1)ofusthinksChinaisoneofthegreatestcountriesintheworld.We'veknownmuchaboutyourcountryforyears,butwehavenotchance(2)togothere.WeoftenwatchtheGreatWallandbeautifulBeijingonTV.SoIthinkChinaisworthtovisit(3).IboughtabookonChinaandstudyitwhenI'mfree.IhopeIcanvisityourcountryoneday,andIalsohopeyoutovisit(4)ourcountrysometimes(5)inthefuture.Trulyyours,MaryBaker精講點(diǎn)撥eve^one是不定代詞，它可以用作主語，但不能和含of的介詞短語連用。此處應(yīng)把Everyone分開，即Everyone,或者用Each來替換它。但要注意，這里不能用Every,因?yàn)樗荒苡米髦髡Z。chance表示“機(jī)會(huì)”的意思講時(shí)是可數(shù)名詞，須和冠詞連用。由于該句是否定句,如果在它前面加上any,它需要變成復(fù)數(shù)。最便捷的辦法是,把not換成no,表示nota,如果no后接的名詞是復(fù)數(shù)，它則表示notanyo.考生對(duì)worth一詞的用法顯然不清楚。worth常用于beworthdoing這一結(jié)構(gòu)。beworth后不能接動(dòng)詞不定式，而要接V-ing形式。因此,應(yīng)當(dāng)把tovisit改為visitingo.hope一詞不能用于hopesb.todosth.結(jié)構(gòu)，如果要表達(dá)“希望某人做某事”要用hope接that從句。因此要將youtovisit改為youcanvisito.應(yīng)將sometimes改為sometime。sometimes意為“有時(shí)"，而sometime的意思是“某個(gè)時(shí)間”，指某個(gè)不確定或未說明的時(shí)間。精彩例文From:marybaker0892@To:Subject:MywishDearLiXiaoli,I'mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.I'veshowedittomyfriends.EveryoneofusthinksChinaisoneofthegreatestcountries.We'veknownmuchaboutyourcountryforyears,butwehavenochancetogothere.WeoftenwatchtheGreatWallandbeautifulBeijingonTV.SoIthinkChinaisworthvisiting.IboughtabookonChinaandstudyitwhenI'mfree.IhopeIcanvisityourcountryoneday,andIalsohopeyoucanvisitourcountrysometimeinthefuture..Trulyyours,MaryBaker中考英語書面表達(dá)常見錯(cuò)誤分析(九)句型結(jié)構(gòu)、固定搭配

錯(cuò)誤要點(diǎn)領(lǐng)悟馬克思生在德國(guó)，他非常擅長(zhǎng)學(xué)習(xí)語言。他不僅能自如地運(yùn)用英語,而且只用了六個(gè)月時(shí)間就掌握了足夠的俄文,能閱讀俄文版的報(bào)刊和雜志。不過，他在介紹英語學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)時(shí),也曾訴苦說：“Iamnottoosureabouttwothings,thegrammarandsomeoftheidioms."o英語學(xué)習(xí)中，句型結(jié)構(gòu)和固定搭配的確是初學(xué)者的“攔路虎”。信息提示眾所周知吸煙有害健康。請(qǐng)以“Smokingisharmfultohealth”為題寫一篇至少100詞的英語短文,來介紹一下吸煙的危害，以喚起人們戒煙。習(xí)作實(shí)況SmokingisharmfultohealthAs(1)isknowntoallthatsmokingisbadforhealth.InChinatherehave(2)millionsofsmokers.Eachyearmillionsofpeoplediefromsmoking.Smokingmakesmanypeopleill.Thosewhooftensmokehaveblackteeth.Lotsofsmokerscoughdayandnight.Lungcancerisoneofthemostseriousillnessesthatarecausedbysmoking.Manypeoplesufferfromthisterriblediseaseandlosetheirlives.Smokingdoesharmnotonlytosmokersthemselves,butalsotonon-smokers,especiallywomenandchildren.Theymayhavetheirhealthharm(3)becauseofthesmokecausedbycigarettes.Everyoneagreesthatsmokingisnotgoodforhealth,butitisnoteasyforsmokerstogivingupsmoking⑷.Ihopeallthesmokerswillstopsmokingforthegoodoftheirownhealthandalsoforthepeoplearoundthem.Let'senjoying(5)cleanandfreshairtogether.精講點(diǎn)撥(1)將As改為It。“Itisknowntoallthat+從句”是一個(gè)固定結(jié)構(gòu)。意思是“眾所周知……”。⑵句型thereis/are表示“某地有某物”，該句型強(qiáng)調(diào)“存在"，而have/has常用來表達(dá)“某人有某物”，強(qiáng)調(diào)“所有”，其主語通常是人。因此，將have改為are。(3)將harm改為harmed。"havesth.done”是一個(gè)固定結(jié)構(gòu)，意思是“使/讓某物遭受……”。本句的意思是“吸煙產(chǎn)生的毒氣很可能使他們(婦女、兒童)的健康遭受到侵害”，因?yàn)閔ealth被smoke損害，因此,要用過去分詞harmed,以表示被動(dòng)的含義。(4)英語中表達(dá)“某人做某事很不容易”常用句型“Itisnoteasyforsb.todosth.”。應(yīng)將givingupsmoking改為giveupsmokingo(5)let's后要跟動(dòng)詞原形構(gòu)成"Let'sdosth.”結(jié)構(gòu)。應(yīng)將enjoying改為enjoy。精彩例文SmokingisharmfultohealthItisknowntoallthatsmokingisbadforhealth.InChinatherearemillionsofsmokers.Eachyearmillionsofpeoplediefromsmoking.Smokingmakesmanypeopleill.Thosewhooftensmokehaveblackteeth.Lotsofsmokerscoughdayandnight.Lungcancerisoneofthemostseriousillnessesthatarecausedbysmoking.Manypeoplesufferfromthisterriblediseaseandlosetheirlives.Smokingdoesharmnotonlytosmokersthemselves,butalsotonon-smokers,especiallywomenandchildren.Theymayhavetheirhealthharmedbecauseofthesmokecausedbycigarettes.Everyoneagreesthatsmokingisnotgoodforhealth,butitisnoteasyforsmokerstogiveupsmoking.Ihopeallthesmokerswillstopsmokingforthegoodoftheirownhealthandalsoforthepeoplearoundthem.Let'senjoycleanandfreshairtogether.中考英語書面表達(dá)常見錯(cuò)誤分析(十)人稱和時(shí)態(tài)誤用要點(diǎn)領(lǐng)悟人稱和時(shí)態(tài)的誤用是英語書面表達(dá)中最為常見的錯(cuò)誤。英文寫作對(duì)人稱和時(shí)態(tài)的要求很嚴(yán)格。常用的時(shí)態(tài)有八種之多,初中階段最常見有六種動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。在寫作時(shí)，英語初學(xué)者要準(zhǔn)確判斷一個(gè)動(dòng)作應(yīng)該用哪種時(shí)態(tài)來表示。首先要判斷動(dòng)作發(fā)生的時(shí)間是現(xiàn)在、過去還是將來，注意動(dòng)作是在進(jìn)行還是已經(jīng)完成等，據(jù)此確定該用什么時(shí)態(tài);然后，要熟練掌握各種時(shí)態(tài)所必須使用的謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)和詞形變化;整篇文章完成后,要檢查“時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致”等是否正確。這樣就可以少犯錯(cuò)誤。信息提示電腦是當(dāng)代的高科技產(chǎn)品(ahigh-techproduct),在我們的生活中越來越普及，幾乎深入到每個(gè)家庭。電腦可以幫我們處理(handle)很多事情。列舉一些事例，寫一篇關(guān)于電腦在日常生活中的用途的文章,說明電腦的利弊。習(xí)作實(shí)況Thecomputer一ahigh-techproduct,hasbecomesopopularthattheyare(1)seeninalmosteveryfamily.Itisplayinganimportantroleinoureverydaylife.Thecomputerwillhelp(2)ushandlemanymatters:officialbusiness,chatonline,study,sendinge-mails,long-distanceeducationandentertainmentsuchaslisteningtomusicandwatchingvideo.Butwealsoknowthatthecomputerwas(3)badforoureyes,especiallyfortheyoungkids’.Nowtherearemoreandmorechildrenwhohavetowearglassesinordertoseeclearly.Manychildrenbecomenear-sighted,andtheyaredoingworseandworseintheirstudiesbecausetheyspendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputergames.Soifyouwillwant(4)tohavebeautifulandbrighteyesandgain(獲取)someusefulknowledgewhenwe(5)areyoung,themostimportantthingyouwilldoistoplanyourtimecarefullyandwell.Onlyinthiswaycanyouhaveabrightfuture.精講點(diǎn)撥(1)作者在文章開頭使用了thecomputer一詞，來代表電腦這一類產(chǎn)品。因此,that從句中如果使用theyare,就和句首的主語thecomputer(單數(shù)名詞)不一致，因此應(yīng)將theyare改為itis。(2)眾所周知I,電腦在我們的日常生活中正在起著很重要的作用。因此，不能理解成電腦將要幫助我們處理很多事務(wù),而是現(xiàn)在(每天)電腦都在幫助人們處理日常事務(wù)，這種help是經(jīng)常的，反復(fù)發(fā)生的，應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。因此,要改為helpso(3)我們看到的事實(shí)是，電腦在為人們做了大量的好事的同時(shí),也給人們帶來了麻煩。而且，這種困擾現(xiàn)在就存在，即：電腦天天在損害我們的健康和眼睛。應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)iso(4)want一詞一般沒有將來時(shí)。另外,本句是由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句,按英語的時(shí)態(tài)規(guī)則“主句用一般將來時(shí)，從句應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”。將willwant改為want。(5)將we改為you。從本句的條件句可以看出，“如果你在年輕的時(shí)候，既想學(xué)到知識(shí)，又想擁有一雙明亮的眼睛，你就記住,玩電腦可不要超越底線。”在這里,前后句的人稱要保持一致。精彩例文Thecomputer一ahigh-techproduct,hasbecomesopopularthatitisseeninalmosteveryfamily.Itisplayinganimportantroleinoureverydaylife.Thecomputerhelpsushandlemanymatters:officialbusiness,chatonline,study,sendinge-mails,long-distanceeducationandentertainmentsuchaslisteningtomusicandwatchingvideo.Butwealsoknowthatthecomputerisbadforoureyes,especiallyfortheyoungkids'.Nowtherearemoreandmorechildrenwhohavetowearglassesinordertoseeclearly.Manychildrenbecomenear-sighted,andtheyaredoingworseandworseintheirstudiesbecausetheyspendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputergames.Soifyouwanttohavebeautifulandbrighteyesandgainsomeusefulknowledgewhenyouareyoung,themostimportantthingyouwilldoistoplanyourtimecarefullyandwell.Onlyinthiswaycanyouhaveabrightfuture.中考英語書面表達(dá)常見錯(cuò)誤分析（十一）語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤【要點(diǎn)領(lǐng)悟】英語的語態(tài)分為主動(dòng)語態(tài)和被動(dòng)語態(tài)，主要由動(dòng)詞的變化形式來體現(xiàn)。英語中有些不及物動(dòng)詞或不及物動(dòng)詞詞組，漢語理解往往是及物的,而不及物動(dòng)詞卻有漢語中及物動(dòng)詞的意思，所以同學(xué)們?cè)谄綍r(shí)的英語學(xué)習(xí)中要特別注意這一點(diǎn)?！拘畔⑻崾尽勘容^下面兩幅圖片。請(qǐng)以“GreatChangesinOurCountry”為題寫一篇短文,介紹改革開放20多年來祖國(guó)的巨大的變化。詞數(shù)80左右。提示詞：overpass天橋【習(xí)作實(shí)況】GreatChangesinOurCountryGreatchangeshavebeen(1)takenplaceinourcountry.Manybuildingshavebeenbuilded(2)incitiesandtowns,evenatvillages.Themorecarswehave,themorecrowdedtheroadsare.Sotheroadswerebecome(3)widerandwider.Manyoverpasseshavebeenbuilded(4)inbigcities.Chinesepeople?slifeisbetternow.Wecanbuythingsthatweneedineverypartofthecountry.WehaveTVs,washingmachines,fridges,computers,cars,etc.Thesethingscouldn'tbuy(5)twentyyearsago.We'11studyharderandmakeourcountrystrongerandmorebeautiful.【精講點(diǎn)撥】(Otakeplace是不及物動(dòng)詞短語,沒有被動(dòng)語態(tài)。(2)、(4)被動(dòng)語態(tài)的過去分詞用得不對(duì)。⑶動(dòng)詞become在這里是系動(dòng)詞，后接形容詞比較級(jí)作表語。系動(dòng)詞通常沒有被動(dòng)語態(tài)。(5)此處應(yīng)用被動(dòng)式couldn'tbeboughto【精品范文】..GreatChangesinOurCountryGreatchangeshavetakenplaceinourcountry.Manybuildingshavebeenbuiltincitiesandtowns,evenatvillages.Themorecarswehave,themorecrowdedtheroadsare.Sotheroadsbecamewiderandwider.Manyoverpasseshavebeenbui1tinbigcities.Chinesepeople'slifeisbetternow.Wecanbuythingsthatweneedineverypartofthecountry.WehaveTVs,washingmachines,fridges,computers,cars,etc.Thesethingscouldn'tbeboughttwentyyearsago.We?11studyharderandmakeourcountrystrongerandmorebeautiful.中考英語書面表達(dá)常見錯(cuò)誤分析(十二)母語干擾【要點(diǎn)領(lǐng)悟】許多同學(xué)在用英語寫作時(shí)很容易受漢語的影響而寫錯(cuò)句子，即寫所謂的Chinglisho這是書面表達(dá)中常見的錯(cuò)誤之一?！拘畔⑻崾尽空?qǐng)你根據(jù)實(shí)際情況，以“MySchoolLife”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文?！玖?xí)作實(shí)況】MySchoolLifeVmamiddleschoolstudent.Althoughourschoolisveryusual(1),but(2)it'sbeautifulinmyheart.Theschooliscoveredwithtalltreesandbeautifulflowers.Thehere(3)airisveryfresh.Inthemorning,lotsofschoolmates(4)early(5)gotoschoolanddosomeexercises.Usuallywehavebreakfastafterourfirstclass.Allofthestudentstakemorningexercisesontheplaygroundaftertwoclasses.Afterthat,someone(6)arereadinginthelibrary,othersareplayingandtalkingontheplayground.Wehavethreeclassesintheafternoonanddosomesportsthatwelikeafterschoolandgohomeatabout6:00.Oh!Howcolorfulmyschoollifeis!【精講點(diǎn)撥】(1)作者顯然想表達(dá)“學(xué)校很一般或普通”，此處最好用common一詞,而usual意思是“通常的”。(2)受漢語“雖然……但是……”的影響，作者將這一意思直接譯成英語“although…but…”，而在英語同一句子中只用這兩個(gè)詞的其中之一表示漢語的“雖然……但是……”。(3)here是副詞,用來修飾名詞時(shí)應(yīng)位于被修飾詞之后。(4)schoolmate指校友、同學(xué),通常不包含自己在內(nèi)，改為students好些,指全校學(xué)生。(5)“早早到?！钡挠⒄Z表達(dá)是gotoschoolearly,副詞early應(yīng)位于句末。(6)someone意思是"某人"，要改為somestudentso【精品范文】..............MySchoolLifeI'mamiddleschoolstudent.Althoughourschoolisverycommon,it'sbeautifulinmyheart.Theschooliscoveredwithtalltreesandbeautifulflowers.Theairhereisveryfresh.Inthemorning,lotsofstudentsgotoschoolearlyanddosomeexercises.Usuallywehavebreakfastafterourfirstclass.Allthestudentstakemorningexercisesontheplaygroundaftertwoclasses.Afterthat,somestudentsarereadinginthelibrary,othersareplayingandtalkingontheplayground.Wehavethreeclassesintheafternoonanddosomesportsthatwelikeafterschoolandgohomeatabout6:00.Oh!Howcolorfulmyschoollifeis!plasticbags,fruitskinsandwastepaperontheground.Sometimestheybrokesomebranches,pickedflowersandevenkilledbirds.Someevenmadefiresintheforesttocookfood.Howdangerousitwas!Luckilyenough,thelocalgovernmenthasbeguntodosomethingtostoppollutingthearea.Greatchangeshavetakenplacehere.中考英語書面表達(dá)常見錯(cuò)誤分析（二）文不達(dá)意【要點(diǎn)領(lǐng)悟】在英語書面表達(dá)的提示信息中，常有這樣的語句“可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)”或“可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮”，但所增加的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該與文章相關(guān)。如果所“發(fā)揮”的內(nèi)容與文章無關(guān)，就是“畫蛇添足”了?！拘畔⑻崾尽扛鶕?jù)下面的4幅圖畫用英語寫一篇短文,要求故事包括所有圖畫的主要內(nèi)容,可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使意思連貫。詞數(shù)在100以上?！玖?xí)作實(shí)況】Oneday,anoldwomanwascrossingthestreetwithabasketinherhand.Shewenttodosomeshopping.Justthenacarcameupandshewasknockeddownontotheground.Shewasbadlyinjuredandcouldn,tmove.Buttoeveryone'sanger,thecarranawayasquicklyasitcould.Theoldwomanhadtolieonthegroundandcried⑴.Luckily,aman,whowassweepingthestreetnearby,sawthis.Heranquicklyuptoherandhelpedherstandup.Hewasangrywiththedriver⑵.Thenhetookhertothenearesthospital.Thereadoctorexaminedhercarefullyandgavehersomemedicalcare.Afterthat,thedustmantookherhome.Whentheoldwoman'sdaughterknewwhathadhappenedtohermother,shewasmoveddeeplyandthankedhimverymuch.Afterawhilethedustmanleftandwenttodohiswork.Thedaughterthankedhimagain(3).【精講點(diǎn)撥】⑴此句與圖中提示不相符，應(yīng)刪去。(2)此處加寫這句屬多余,也與圖畫內(nèi)容不符。(3)文章寫到“...verymuch.”處已經(jīng)很完整了，加上這一句使行文顯得重復(fù)、累贅?！揪贩段摹縊neday,anoldwomanwascrossingthestreetwithabasketinherhand.Shewenttodosomeshopping.Justthenacarcameupandshewasknockeddownontotheground.Shewasbadlyinjuredandcouldn'tmovealittle.Luckily,aman,whowassweepingthestreetnearby,sawthis.Heranquicklyuptoherandhelpedherstandup.Thenhetookhertothenearesthospital.Thereadoctorexaminedhercarefullyandgavehersomemedicalcare.Afterthat,thedustmantookherhome.Whentheoldwoman'sdaughterknewwhathadhappenedtohermother,shewasmoveddeeplyandthankedhimverymuch.中考英語書面表達(dá)常見錯(cuò)誤分析（三）名詞單復(fù)數(shù)【要點(diǎn)領(lǐng)悟】同學(xué)們?cè)趯懽鲿r(shí)，往往把重點(diǎn)放在文章的構(gòu)思和句子結(jié)構(gòu)上,有時(shí)忽略了名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)。在中考作文中，如果名詞的數(shù)使用混亂，也會(huì)導(dǎo)致較多的失分?！拘畔⑻崾尽考偃缒闶菂菑?qiáng)，去年春天和幾位同學(xué)到東浦島野餐，以“Thehappiestday”為題寫一篇80-100詞的作文。要求條理清晰、意思連貫、語句通順、標(biāo)點(diǎn)規(guī)范?！玖?xí)作實(shí)況】ThehappiestdayLastspringmyclassmate(1)andIwenttoDongpuIslandtohaveapicnic.ItwasMarch2.Theweatherwasfineandtherewashardlyacloudinthesky.Westartedearlythatmorning.Weallcarriedsomethingnicetoeatanddrink.Wesanghappilyonourways(2)there.Afteraboutoneandahalfhour(3),wegottotheisland.Thewaterinthelakewasniceandcleanandwecouldseeflowersandgrasses(4)allaroundus.Howbeautifulitwas!Afterabouttwentyminute's(5)rest,wedividedourselvesintofourgroupsandcookedourlunch.Mostofusdidthecookingforthefirsttime.Afterawhile,everythingwasready.Weputallthefoodonabigpieceofpaper.Therewasmeat,fish,fruitandvegetable(6).Howdelicioustheywere!Weenjoyedourlunchandtherewasabigsmileoneveryone飛faces(7).【精講點(diǎn)撥】(1)classmate在本句中看不出錯(cuò)誤來，如果結(jié)合第二段的??.fourgroups就可發(fā)現(xiàn)classmate要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。(2)在onone'sway結(jié)構(gòu)中，way沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。⑶這兒不是半個(gè)小時(shí),而是一個(gè)半小時(shí),所以hour要用復(fù)數(shù)。⑷此處指普通的草，多用單數(shù)。(5)此處應(yīng)將minute's改為minutes',即twentyminutes'resto(6)此處應(yīng)用vegetable的復(fù)數(shù)形式vegetableso(7)這兒指的是每個(gè)人的臉上,應(yīng)將faces改為face。【精品范文】ThehappiestdayLastspringmyclassmatesand1wenttoDongpuIslandtohaveapicnic.ItwasMarch2.Theweatherwasfineandtherewashardlyacloudinthesky.Westartedearlythatmorning.Weallcarriedsomethingnicetoeatanddrink.Wesanghappilyonthewaythere.Afteraboutoneandahalfhours,wegottotheisland.Thewaterinthelakewasniceandcleanandwecouldseeflowersandgrassallaroundus.Howbeautifulitwas!Afterabouttwentyminutes'rest,wedividedourselvesintofourgroupsandcookedourlunch.Mostofusdidthecookingforthefirsttime.Afterawhile,everythingwasready.Weputallthefoodonabigpieceofpaper.Therewasmeat,fish,fruitandvegetables.Howdelicioustheywere!Weenjoyedourlunchandtherewasabigsmileoneveryone,sface.中考英語書面表達(dá)常見錯(cuò)誤分析（四）文體格式錯(cuò)誤精講點(diǎn)撥（1）將日記的日期.3.12Monday改為Monday,March12th,或March12th,,Monday。寫英文日記時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下兩點(diǎn):英文日記的格式與中文日記的格式相差不大。日期和星期應(yīng)寫在第一行的左上角頂格位置，日期和星期的寫法應(yīng)注意:年、月、日俱全時(shí)，可按月、日、年或日、月、年的次序?qū)憽Ｈ?March12th,或12thMarch,;只有月、日時(shí),其順序?yàn)樵隆⑷?，月份可用縮略式。如:September20th或Sept.20th;如果要寫明星期幾,可將其放在日期的前面或后面。如:Friday,Oct.20,或Oct.20,,Friday。（2）寫日記時(shí)，天氣狀況應(yīng)寫在日期的右邊且靠右頂格，而不是寫在日期的下面。天氣狀況一般用形容詞表示。如：Fine（晴），Sunny（晴），Rainy（雨），Snowy（雪），Windy（多風(fēng)），Cloudy（多云）等。（3）本文要求寫一篇日記，而不是書信。Dearfriends是用在寫信時(shí)的稱呼語,在寫日記時(shí)應(yīng)去掉。（4）和⑸都是書信的落款格式,不能用在日記的寫作中，要去掉。在寫作文時(shí),同學(xué)們一定要熟練掌握書信和日記的寫作格式，不能混淆。精彩例文Monday,Marchl2th,SunnyItisMarch12thtoday.Athalfpasteight,alltheteachersandstudentsinourschoolgatheredinfrontoftheschoolgate.ThenwewentonfoottotheWesternHilltoplanttrees.Beforewestartedworking,theteachergaveusatalkontheimportanceofplantingtrees.Hesaidthattreescanhelptokeeptheairclean,protectusfromstrongwindandsandandmakeourcitymorebeautiful.Thenheshowedushowtoplanttreesandaskedeachofustoplantatleastfivetrees.Afterthatwestartedworking.Somestrongboysdugholes,somecarriedwaterandsomegirlsputtreesintheholes.Weallworkedhard.Amongus,LinTao,ourmonitorsetagoodexampletous.Thoughhewasill,heworkedharder.Whenhefinishedhistask,hewentontohelpothers.Hewaswetal1overafterwork.Lookingatthelinesoftheyoungtrees,wesmiledhappily.中考英語書面表達(dá)常見錯(cuò)誤分析(五)用詞不當(dāng)要點(diǎn)領(lǐng)悟】文章構(gòu)思新穎、結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)固然重要，但它只是文章的骨架。要充實(shí)內(nèi)容，就得有一定的遣詞造句的功力,在此基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)就顯得尤為重要了。【信息提示】李華平時(shí)總是忙于功課,很少做家務(wù)。母親節(jié)這一天,她想幫媽媽做飯,卻不小心切了手指，本想讓媽媽在節(jié)日期間好好休息，卻未能如愿。以“OnMother'sDay”為題寫一篇詞數(shù)為80T00的短文。要求條理清晰、意思連貫、語句通順、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確?！玖?xí)作實(shí)況】OnMother，sDayrmusu