第14講英語寫作的8個(gè)閃光句型（原卷版）中考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)培優(yōu)全攻略（上海專用）

第14講英語寫作的8個(gè)閃光句型及劭器環(huán)【知識梳理1】閃光句型之I動(dòng)詞短語和介詞短語haveagreateffecton.?.（對有很大的影響）例句：抽煙對我們的健康有很大的影響。Smokinghasagreateffectonourhealtho.???enables+Object（受詞）/makesitpossibleforsb+to+V（使能夠）例句：聽音樂使我們能夠感覺輕松。Listeningtomusicenableustofeelrelaxedo旅行能豐富人們的生活。Travellingenablesourlifetobeenriched0.By+Ving,xxcanxx（通過能夠）例句：通過做運(yùn)動(dòng)，我們能夠始終保持健康。Bytakingexercise,wecanalwaysstayhealthyo通過閱讀，我們可以獲得更多的知識。Byreading,wecangetmoreknowledge.?.Thanksto/Dueto/Owingto（因?yàn)?，由于）例句：因?yàn)樗墓膭?lì)，我終于實(shí)現(xiàn)我的夢想。Thankstohisencouragement,Ifinallyrealizedmydreamo多虧秦老師的幫助，我通過了考試。ThankstoMissQin'shelp,Ipassedtheexaminationo【例題精講】翻譯以下句子than.…朋友分享更快樂。（nothingis比較級than....）2.沒有什么比上寄宿學(xué)生更能鍛煉人了?！璭ver地我們都可以利用微信同其他人聯(lián)系。（…ever）.不論結(jié)果是什么，至少你有努力過。.不論它有多便利，我們都應(yīng)該時(shí)刻警惕自己不要使用過度。.為了美麗，很多韓國女性都去做整容手術(shù)。.為了豐富我的暑假生活，我決定一個(gè)人去旅行。【鞏固練習(xí)】翻譯以下句子.我的建議是我們應(yīng)當(dāng)理性的使用它，不要讓自己成為它的努力。.這個(gè)活動(dòng)不但有趣，也能擴(kuò)充我們的知識面..是時(shí)候讓自己變得獨(dú)立。,是時(shí)候讓這種情況日益惡化.我贊同舉辦這個(gè)活動(dòng)主要有三個(gè)理由。.重要的是這個(gè)善意的謊言鼓舞了他，而不是我們失去了誠信。7?最吸引我的是節(jié)目的美食環(huán)節(jié)。8.第三，多種樹，這不但可以美化城市也可以讓空氣清新。【知識梳理2】閃光句型之句型與從句.主語+is+the+最高級+名詞+(that)+Ihaveeverseen(known/heard/had/read)海倫是我所看過最美麗的女孩。HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen。張老師是我曾經(jīng)遇到最仁慈的教師。Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhado.Nothingismoreimportant+than+todosth.沒什么比做某事更重要的事。例句：沒有比保持健康更重要的事。Nothingismoreimportantthantokeepfito沒有什么比環(huán)保更重耍的事。Nothingismoreimportantthantoprotectourenvironmento.The+比較級+S+V,?the+比較級+S+V(愈……愈……)例句：你愈努力，你愈進(jìn)步。Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyoumake。我們書讀愈多，我們愈有學(xué)問。Themorebooksweread,themorelearnedwebecomeo.Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子(的原因是)例句：我們必須種樹的原因是它們能供應(yīng)我們新鮮的空氣。Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair?！纠}精講】Writing（作文）：（共20分）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“WhenIseeanoldpersonfalldowninthestreet,I....LU《當(dāng)我看至U老人在街上摔倒，我……》為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。Referencewords（Useatleasttwoofthem）:atraditionalvirtue（美德）；infavorof/against;calm;getalongwith;carefor;（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）學(xué)生范文一：.Whetherornottohelpanoldpeoplewhenyouseehimfalldowninthestreethasledtoagreatargument.Asateenager,IthinkIwillcareforhimandhelphiminhissituationbecauseitisatraditionalvirtue.Butknowingthatsomewarm-heartedyoungpeoplehavesufferedagreatlossbecauseoftheirbehaviors,rilsaysomeonetotakesomephotosformybehaviorsorasksomeonetoprovethatI'mreallyinnocent.Whilehelpingothersisabsolutelyworthpraising,protectingourselvesisalsoimportant.Allinall,I'llcarefullyandbravelygivetheoldpersonahand.學(xué)生范文二:Althoughitcanoftenbeheardthatanoldpersonfelldownhimselfandinsistedthatitwasinnocentpasser-bywhohelpedhimthatcausedtheaccident,Iwillhelptheoldpeoplewhofalldowninthestreetwithouthesitation.Itisatraditionalvirtueforteenagerstorespecttheoldandweshouldkeepcalmifwebecomethoseinnocentpassers-by.Weshouldalwaysbelievethatthereareonlyafewdishonestpeopleandourwarmheartswillbepaidoff.Inaword,I'minfavorofhelpingtheoldwhentheyfalldowninthestreet.【鞏固練習(xí)】?Writing(作文)：(共20分)Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic"Alittlemorefreshair,please.”?以“多一點(diǎn)新鮮空氣”為題完成不少于60字作文。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。Referencewords(Useatleasttwoofthem):Planttrees,drivecars,walkmore,pollute,haze(H)（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）寫作小Tip：中考議論文寫作羅列觀點(diǎn)時(shí)最好不過三，用邏輯詞連接，觀點(diǎn)層層遞進(jìn)，詳略得當(dāng)；加上語言流暢,詞匯稍作變化，就是言簡意賅的好文。80100(120)【知識梳理3】議論文寫作之三要素和基本題型一、議論文三要素論點(diǎn)，論據(jù)和論詞是議論文的三要素,論點(diǎn)是作者對所論問題所持的見解和主張；論據(jù)是用來證明論點(diǎn)的事實(shí)和道理磐根據(jù)；論證就是用論據(jù)來證明論點(diǎn)的方法和過程。一般來說,議論文每段應(yīng)刊主題句(topicsentence)來確定論點(diǎn)。文章結(jié)尾往往重申自己的看法、意見或建議。論證有立論和駁論兩種,作者證明自己的論點(diǎn)正確，是立論；反之，證明別人的論點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤，是駁論。.開頭：背景+觀點(diǎn)(2句)背景句：Thereisnodenyingthat....ThereisnodoubtthatItiswidelyacceptedthat...playsanincreasinglyimportantroleinourdailylifeRecently,theproblemof....hasarousedpeople'sconcern.最近，…問題已引起人們的關(guān)注。With?the?development?of?science?and?technology,more?and?more?people?believe?that...隨著科技的發(fā)展，越來越多的人認(rèn)為???觀點(diǎn)句：Inmyopinion,....AsfarasIamconcerned,....Frommypointofviewthat...Frommyperspective,....中間(6句)Firstofall/Tobeginwith/TostartwithBesides/Inaddition/FurthermoreWhat'smore/Lastbutnotleast句型：(1)Itis+adj.forsb.todosth.It?is?necessary?(for?sb.)?to?do?/?that...是必要的？??It?is?important/essential?(for?sb.)?to?do?/?that??是重要的Itisofgreatimportanceforsb.todosth.It?is?proper?(for?sb.)?to?do?/?that?...????是適當(dāng)?shù)?It?is?urgent?(for?sb.)?to?do?/?that?是緊急的Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…不用說…e.g.e.g.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatearlytobedandearlytoriseisworthy.早睡早起是值得的。so...that...彳列：At?that?moment,?I?was?so?upset?that?I?wanted?to?give?up.???當(dāng)時(shí)，我非常傷心，最后都想放棄了。Wearesupposedtodosth.我們應(yīng)該做…替換should(5)被動(dòng)、定語從句.結(jié)尾：重申觀點(diǎn)+相信Allinall,Tosumup,Generallyspeaking,Wecandrawaconclusionthat...Istrongly/firmlyholdthebeliefthat...我堅(jiān)信Iamlookingforwardtosth.Onlyinthiswaycanwe...（倒裝句）例如：Onlyinthiswaycanwerealizeourdream.只有這樣我們才能實(shí)現(xiàn)我們的夢想。強(qiáng)調(diào)句：Itis+強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that+句子剩余部分【例題精講】例L94.Writeatleast60wordswiththetopic"HeavyHaze”.(以“茫茫霧霾”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。)提示：去年12月上旬，申城籠罩在茫茫的霧霾(wasshroudedinheavyhaze)中，陷于重度污染(severepollution)o人們戴口罩(wearmasks)出行，霧霾天給人們的健康帶來危害，給生活和工作帶來不便(inconvenience)。請你談?wù)勳F霾的成因及可行的解決方法。TopicSentence.Itcausedgreatdisturbancetoourd?.dailylife.BeginningTSI:Obviously,hazecomesfrompollution.HeavyIdazeMainBodyTS2:Howcanwecurbhazethen?Conclusion...tryourbesttocontributetoacleanerenvironment...Apersuasiveessaycanalsotaketheformofasalesletter,ajobapplication,oracollegeapplicationessay.Ineachcase,persuadingthereaderiskey.Hereisthegeneralformatofthepersuasiveessay:LIntroductionandthesis:Howyoufeel/whatyouthinkaboutatopic(e.g.,**Tumblrisanexcellentlearningtool.")Bodyparagraphs(twoorthree):ProvidedetailedexamplestosupportyourthesisHereisthegeneralformatofthepersuasiveessay:LIntroductionandthesis:Howyoufeel/whatyouthinkaboutatopic(e.g.,**Tumblrisanexcellentlearningtool.")Bodyparagraphs(twoorthree):Providedetailedexamplestosupportyourthesis(e.g.,TheYUNiversity,PWNtheSAT,etc.)Conclusion:Wrapupyourargument公andcallthereadertoaction(e.g.，“FollowTheYUNiversity/*MSupportPWNtheSAT,”etc.)HeavyHazeThewinterin2013impressedpeoplenotforitsextremecoldnessbuttheheavyhazehangingover25provinces.Itcausedgreatdisturbancetoourdailylife.Obviously^hazecomesfrompollution.Manyfactoriesletthesmokeintotheairwithoutanyfilteringprocess.Daybyday,itisnowonderthatsmoke,dirt,anddustaccumulateintheairandfinallyturnintodensehaze.Howcanwecurbhazethen?Levyingheavypenaltyonthoseirresponsiblefactoriesisdefinitelyamust-do.Beforetheairisonceagainpurified,weshouldalsotakesomeactionstoprotectourselvessuchaswearingamaskandreducingexposureoutdoors.Weshouldalltryourbesttocontributetoacleanerenvironmentformutualsurvivalandeasierlife.(126words)【鞏固練習(xí)】Howtoprotectmyself（怎樣保護(hù)自己）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“HowtoprotectmyselP.（以“如何保護(hù)自己”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。）提示：自我保護(hù)是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。請談?wù)勀阍谏钪性鯓舆M(jìn)行自我保護(hù)（可結(jié)合生活中的某一個(gè)情景或具體事例，如：面對災(zāi)難如何自救,如何預(yù)防受騙或侵害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等）。Phrasesforreference（以下短語僅供參考）：ask...forhelpcalmdownindangerprevent...from（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)具體人名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評分。）寫作提高Sentencestructure:...sothat......so...that...Itissaidthat...(據(jù)說)Itisafactthat...Itis+adj.+(forsb.)+todosth.Thereisnodoubtthat.??(毫無疑問)Ifyoudon't...,youwill...Theharder+主語+謂語，thebetter+主語+謂語Whata/an+adj.+n.+itis!adj./adv.adj./adv.+主語+謂語！Itisobvious(明顯的)/truethatbut...Oneofmyfavourite+n(復(fù)數(shù)).is...Sb.finds/thinksit+adj.+todoBeginning:Asweallknow,thereismuchdangeraroundus?It'snecessaryfbrustoknowhowtoprotectourselves.Protectingoneselfisanimportantskillthateveryteenagershouldhave.Ending:Thatistheusefulwaytoprotectyourself.Asyoucansee,tokeepussafe,weshouldlearnhowtoprotectourselves,orwe'Hbeindanger.錦堂檢惻一、話題作文1.當(dāng)今社會(huì)，很多家庭對孩子過分溺愛，導(dǎo)致當(dāng)他們面對問題時(shí)不知該怎么辦。因此對孩子們來說，學(xué)會(huì)自立相當(dāng)重要。請以“LearntoBeIndependent”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，首先指出這種不良的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，然后給出你的觀點(diǎn)和建議。參考i司？匚：makedecisions;dependon;lookafter;ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...注意：.請先在答題卡上填寫表中空格；.須全面反映圖表信息，但不能完全照抄；.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校和姓名；.詞數(shù)：100左右。LearntoBeIndependentNowadays,manychildrenaretreatedas"littleemperors”athome.二、材料作文2.許多學(xué)習(xí)生活中的煩惱都會(huì)使人產(chǎn)生壓力，為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問題，你們班特意開展了一次“LessPressure,BetteMife”為主題的英語演講比賽，請你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法，與同學(xué)分享。要點(diǎn)：(I)同學(xué)們中普遍存在的壓力是什么：(2)我的壓力是什么：(3)我是如何緩解壓力的。要求：.詞數(shù)100左右;.短文必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，行文連貫通順；3,短文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。LessPressure,BetterlifeHello,boysandgirls!Pressureisaseriousproblemintoday'sworld.That'sall.Thankyou!.假如你是李華，上個(gè)月你在“中國航天日”參加了科技館舉行的航天俱樂部活動(dòng)，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，描述這次活動(dòng)，并表達(dá)你的想法。(1)我聽了宇航員的故事，學(xué)習(xí)到了科學(xué)精神。(2)我做了物理實(shí)驗(yàn)，增長了科學(xué)知識。(3)我參觀了展覽，使我對太空旅行更感興趣了。(4)我認(rèn)為……參考詞匯：科學(xué)精神??學(xué)精？？？？scientificspirit太空旅行travel要求：(1)詞數(shù)：80?100個(gè)。(2)題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。TheactivitiesonSpaceDayofChinaLastmonth,I.請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“MyTea