歷年大學(xué)英語四級作文市公開課金獎(jiǎng)市賽課一等獎(jiǎng)?wù)n件

歷年大學(xué)英語四級作文第1頁第1頁6月英語四級作文題目Forthispart,youareallow30mins.towriteashortessay.youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.Youshouldwriteatleast120andnomarethan180words.“Dad,Iamabitworriedaboutdisposingofnuclearweapon”“Ifyoucanemptythedustbin,youcandoanything”第2頁第2頁第3頁第3頁圖畫作文基本格式分段--三段第一段：圖畫描述

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總體描述：人物/動(dòng)物/事物＋動(dòng)作＋環(huán)境

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挖掘細(xì)節(jié)詞、串連成句

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題目文字描述第二段：寓意描述第三段：結(jié)論段，提議辦法1.結(jié)論句2.針對雙方提提議3.包裝結(jié)尾、展望未來第4頁第4頁作文第一段，要進(jìn)行簡樸描繪圖畫內(nèi)容，這是必須，也是題目中強(qiáng)制要求（abriefdescriptionofthepicture）。描述時(shí)候，只要把父子兩對話移植到第一段，然后把父親手指垃圾桶動(dòng)作描繪一下就能夠了，非常簡樸。作文第二段，進(jìn)行主旨提煉并且敘述。這幅圖畫很容易看出主題，那就是做大事之前，要先做小事（一屋不掃，何以掃天下）,并且題目中其實(shí)早就已經(jīng)透露了主題了（expressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.）因此，第二段通篇敘述小事做起主要性就能夠了。作文第三段，總結(jié)，啟發(fā)。這一段再次強(qiáng)調(diào)小事做起意義，我們不能低估他威力。文章最后能夠以名人名言作為結(jié)尾。第5頁第5頁Wecanseefromtheillustrationthereisafathertalkingtohisson.Havingheardhisson’swords“Dad,Iamabitworriedaboutdisposingofnuclearweapons”,thefatherreplies,“Ifyoucanemptythedustbinhere,youcandoanything”,pointingthegarbagecanbesidehim.第6頁第6頁Funnyandcommonastheconversationsounds,itreflectsthatthefatherintendstoadvisehissontodosmallthingsbeforeundertakingthebig.Unquestionably,doingsmallthingsisthefirststepofsuccessandwilllayrootfordoingsomethingbig.Bydoingsomethingsmall,weareenabledtoaccumulateexperience,masterskillsandtrainourselvestobemorepatient.Inotherwords,wecanbewellpreparedforfurtherchallengesinthecourseoffulfillingsmallthings.Bycontrast,thosewhosetouttodosomethingbigwillbeconstantlyhauntedbydisappointment,frustrationsorevenfailures.Aswhenopportunity“somethingbig”appears,theycanhardlyseizethembecauseofthelackofexperienceandconfidencestemsfromdoingsmallthings.Takingthepicturepresentedaboveasacaseinpoint,howcanthelittleboysucceedindisposingofnuclearweaponsifheevendoesn’tknowhowtoemptythedustbin?第7頁第7頁Frommyperspective,undernocircumstancesshouldweundervaluethepowerofdoingsmallthings.Instead,weshouldregardsmallthingsasthesourceofexperience,skillsandtheprerequisiteofsuccess.“Greatachievementonlybelongstothosewhocandosmallthingsperfectly.”Aristotleoncesaid.第8頁第8頁12月Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountoftheimpactoftheinternetonthewaypeoplecommunicateandthenexplainwhetherelectroniccommunicationcanreplaceface-to-facecontact.You'dwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.第9頁第9頁第10頁第10頁通過這幅所給題目，我們觀測到有兩個(gè)人在電腦前。男子妻子站在后面，而男子則正給他們兒子寫郵件，并說到："親愛安迪，你好！你媽媽和我一切都好，并且很想你，也希望你一切都好。我們期待下次在你電腦崩潰或者是下樓取東西吃時(shí)候再次見到你。愛你媽媽，父親。"第11頁第11頁我們從這幅圖畫得知互聯(lián)網(wǎng)對人們溝通方式帶來了巨大影響。人們過去習(xí)慣于面對面溝通、電話溝通或者是書信溝通。而當(dāng)代社會(huì)，人們更傾向于像圖畫所畫那樣，用諸如郵件、QQ或者是微博這樣互聯(lián)網(wǎng)工具進(jìn)行溝通。人們認(rèn)為這樣溝通方式愈加以便，節(jié)約時(shí)間?，F(xiàn)在，就有這樣一個(gè)問題了："電子交流是否會(huì)取代面對面溝通呢？"答案是否認(rèn)！人們在享受電子溝通帶來便利性同時(shí)，也已經(jīng)開始意識到了這會(huì)削弱人與人之間情感，減少工作效率有時(shí)候甚至?xí)硪恍┱`會(huì)和摩擦。再者，電子溝通也會(huì)使人變得孤僻甚至是產(chǎn)生愈加嚴(yán)重心理疾病。第12頁第12頁圖畫中所描繪場景，是可悲:假如沒有互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，此刻他們也許其樂融融在一起聊天呢。然而現(xiàn)在，同處一室家人，正是由于互聯(lián)網(wǎng)便利性，卻變得相距千里。或許我們應(yīng)當(dāng)花點(diǎn)時(shí)間想一個(gè)問題："有些人想成為互聯(lián)網(wǎng)和電子溝通工具便利性犧牲品嗎？"第13頁第13頁Fromthecartoongivenabove,wecanobservethattherearetwopeopleinfrontofacomputer.Withhiswifestandingbehind,themaniswritinganE-mailtotheirsonwhichstates,"DearAndy-Howareyou?YourmotherandIarefine.Webothmissyouandhopeyouaredoingwell.Welookforwardtoseeingyouagainthenexttimeyourcomputercrashesandyoucomedownstairsforsomethingtoeat.Love,MomandDad."第14頁第14頁WelearnfromthecartoonthattheInternethasexertedagreatimpactonthewayofpeople'scommunication.Peopleusedtocommunicatefacetoface,makecallsorwriteletters.Whileinmodernsociety,peoplearemorepronetocommunicatevia,asthecartoondepicts,InternettoolslikeE-mails,QQormicroblogs.Peopleholdthatthesewaysofcommunicationaremoreconvenientandareabletosavethemanenormousamountoftime.Herecomesaquestion,"whetherelectroniccommunicationcanreplaceface-to-facecontact?"Definitelynot.Whenenjoyingtheconvenienceofelectroniccommunication,peoplehavebegantorealizethatittendstoweakentheaffectionbetweenpeople,reduceworkingefficiencyorevenbringaboutsomemisunderstandingsorfrictions.Moreover,communicatingthroughelectronictoolswillbelikelytomakepeoplesolitaryorevensufferfromcertainmentaldisorders.第15頁第15頁

Whatthecartoondepictedcanbetragic:thefamilycouldhavecommunicatedfacetofacehappilywithoutE-mail.Butnow,afamilylivingtogetherseemstobeathousand-mileapart.Perhaps,weshouldtakeamomenttothink,"DoesanyonetherewanttofallvictimofconvenienceoftheInternetandelectroniccommunicationtools?"第16頁第16頁圖表作文第17頁第17頁如何分段及段落內(nèi)容思考。。。。。。分三段幾點(diǎn)小改變：第一，沒有中文闡明，能夠發(fā)揮第二，有圖片，要加上描述圖片“廢話”第三，圖片中有單詞，有數(shù)據(jù)，要是字?jǐn)?shù)不夠……鑄鍛分析，段段擊破?。?！第18頁第18頁第一段：引入現(xiàn)象

于是開始寫：由于這是圖片題，因此先上句“應(yīng)景”廢話“Aswecanseefromthepicturethat”，其余部分直接往上寫我們模版“nowadays,thephenomenonof……h(huán)asarousedwideconcernamongthepeoplewhocareabouttheyoungpeople‘sfuture”記得要把本來“……”換成關(guān)鍵詞“EducationPays”，剩余隨便寫寫，湊足字?jǐn)?shù)即可第19頁第19頁第一段能夠?qū)懗桑篈swecanseefromthepicturethatnowadays,thephenomenonofEducationPayshasarousedwideconcernamongthepeoplewhocareabouttheyoungpeople'sfuture.Especiallytotheyounggenerationlivinginthebigcities,theytendtoputthepaystotheschoolbutnotthedegree,ignoringthefactthatthisbehaviormayposeunderlyingthreattotheirpresentcareerandmayevenendangerfutures.第20頁第20頁第二段能夠有兩種寫法，第一個(gè)，闡明這個(gè)“EducationPays”原因。第一個(gè)寫成：現(xiàn)象原因。

AmplereasonscanaccountfortheissueofEducationPays，thefollowingonemightbethemostcritical.Forthemajorityofyoungpeople,theyhavebeenalwaysconsideringtheeducationasabotheringthingtodoornotanopportunitythatcanaddcolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife.Hence,theywanttogetajobasearlyaspossible.However,asmatteroffact,asthepicturedescribed,thepeoplewhohavelearnedmoreearnmorethanothers；meanwhile，inthepicture,theoneswhohavethedoctoraldegreeearnmore1551dollarsthantheoneswhohaveonlyadegreeasbachelor.在這個(gè)段落中，最后一句話，我著重引用了一下圖片數(shù)據(jù)，比較了一下，沒寫倍數(shù)，那東西一不留神就寫錯(cuò)，不寫！第21頁第21頁第二段也還能夠?qū)懗桑含F(xiàn)象討論，即大家對這個(gè)事兒見解不一致。有人覺得這個(gè)事兒對什么好，有人覺得這個(gè)事兒對什么壞！寫上就好，由于，無論什么事兒，大家觀點(diǎn)都不是一致：

Doesanyonemaintainthesameattitudetowardsthisissue?Definitelynot，asamatteroffact，opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.SomearguethatEducationPaysisbeneficialtodoctors,because,bythisway,theycanearnmoremoney.However，quiteafewpeopleholdtheoppositeopinionthatEducationPaysisdetrimentaltotheoneswholearntheskillsthroughhardworks.While,mostofpeopleagreethatthedemeritsoflesseducationfaroutweighitsmerits第22頁第22頁第三段，其實(shí)萬古不變，就是個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，觀點(diǎn)最好是提議或者對策：

Tomywayofthinking,theissuementionedabovewillboundtogeneratemoreconsequencesifwekeepturningablindeyeanddeafeartoit.Weshouldappealtotherelevantadministration

departmentstostrengthensupervisionoverit.Itishightimethatallofus,parents，educators，andtheauthorities,makecombinedeffortstotelltheyoungpeoplethefactabouttheEducationPays.Withthismeasuretaken,itisreasonableforustobelievethatthisproblemcanbeperfectlysolvedinthenearfuture.第23頁第23頁6月PartIWriting

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnExcessivePackaging.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.許多商品都存在過度包裝現(xiàn)象

2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象原因及其帶來后果

3.為了改變這種情況，我認(rèn)為……第24頁第24頁我覺得你應(yīng)當(dāng)對“商品過度包裝”現(xiàn)象也不陌生。在我們生活周圍，我們隨處可見這樣例子：小電腦包裝在一個(gè)又厚又重紙板盒里，衣服包裝在設(shè)計(jì)精美塑料袋里，月餅通常也放在精致包裝盒里。

這個(gè)問題原因到底是什么?

首先，諸多制造商為了獲得更多經(jīng)濟(jì)利益，通常都將商品用不必要卻吸引人包裝里，目在于吸引顧客注意力，喚起他們好奇心然后刺激他們消費(fèi)欲望。另一方面，相稱多顧客認(rèn)為，包裝越精致，產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量就越高，這個(gè)想法也加劇了商品過度包裝趨勢。

為了改變這個(gè)現(xiàn)狀，我認(rèn)為應(yīng)當(dāng)采用下列措施，首先，必須制定是執(zhí)行相關(guān)法律限制商品過度包裝;另一方面，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)開展廣泛教育運(yùn)動(dòng)喚起人們意識，那就是，包裝不等于產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量。只有這樣我們才干杜絕這種趨勢。第25頁第25頁我覺得你應(yīng)當(dāng)對“商品過度包裝”現(xiàn)象也不陌生。在我們生活周圍，我們隨地可見這樣例子：小電腦包裝在一個(gè)又厚又重紙板盒里，衣服包裝在設(shè)計(jì)精美塑料袋里，月餅通常也放在精致包裝盒里。Iassumethatyouarefamiliarwiththephenomenonof“ExcessivePackaging”.Takingalookaround，wecanfindexampleswithease：asmallcomputerispackedinathickandheavycarton，clothesareputinawell-designedplasticbagsandmoon-cakesareusuallyplacedindelicateboxes.第26頁第26頁這個(gè)問題原因到底是什么?

首先，諸多制造商為了獲得更多經(jīng)濟(jì)利益，通常都將商品用不必要卻吸引人包裝里，目在于吸引顧客注意力，喚起他們好奇心然后刺激他們消費(fèi)欲望。另一方面，相稱多顧客認(rèn)為，包裝越精致，產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量就越高，這個(gè)想法也加劇了商品過度包裝趨勢。Whatarethecausesofthisproblem?Ontheonehand,toearnmoreeconomicprofits,aconsiderablenumberofmanufacturesusuallywraptheirproductswithunnecessarybutappealingmaterialsaimingatattractingcustomer’sattention,arousingtheircuriosityandthenstimulatingtheirpurchasingdesire.Ontheotherhand,quiteafewcustomersbelievethatthemoredelicatethepackageseems，thesuperiorthequalitywillbe,thenotionhasalsoencouragedthetrendofexcessivepackaging.第27頁第27頁為了改變這個(gè)現(xiàn)實(shí)狀況，我認(rèn)為應(yīng)當(dāng)采用下列辦法，首先，必須制定是執(zhí)行相關(guān)法律限制商品過度包裝;另一方面，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)開展廣泛教育運(yùn)動(dòng)喚起人們意識，那就是，包裝不等于產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量。只有這樣我們才干杜絕這種趨勢。Tochangethissituation,Ithinkweshouldtakethefollowingmeasures.First,lawsmustbemadeandimplementedtoimposerestrictiononexcessivepackaging.Moreover,apubliceducationcampaignshouldbelaunchedtoarousecustomers'consciousnessthatpackagingdoesn'tequaltoquality.Onlyinthiswaycanweputanendtothistrend.第28頁第28頁12月

WhereThereIsaWillThereIsaWay

1．堅(jiān)強(qiáng)意志是成功主要確保。

2．意志堅(jiān)定人才干完畢偉大使命，

3．學(xué)生也是這樣，不刻苦學(xué)習(xí)，終歸不會(huì)成為有用之才用。第29頁第29頁Awell-knownproverbgoesthat"wherethereisawill,thereisaway",whichmeansthatonecanfindawaytosuccessaslongasheorshehasastrongwill.Withastrongwill,onecanfocusallhisenergyononepoint,whichmakeshissuccesspossible.Withoutastrongwill,however,onecanbeeasilydistractedfromhisgoalordiscouragedbysetbacks,whichleadstohisultimatefailure.第30頁第30頁Historyaboundswithexamplesofstrong-willedfigureswinningsuccess.Actually,thereisnobetterillustrationoftheproverbthanthedeedsofGouJian,kingofYueinancientChina.DefeatedbyFuChai,kingofWu,Goutriedeverymeanspossibletosteelhiswill.Eventually,withthehelpofFanLiandXiShi,hemanagedtorebuildhiscountryandhisarmiesandhadFuChaitastethebitternessoffailure.第31頁第31頁

Inshort,astrongwillisessentialifwewanttomakeachievementsinourstudiesorwork,orindeedinanyotheraspectofourlives.Oneshouldlosenochancetostrengthhiswillandremember,Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.第32頁第32頁6月Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofOnlineShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.

現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一個(gè)潮流2.

網(wǎng)上購物有諸多好處，但也有不少問題3.

我提議第33頁第33頁

OnlineShoppingWiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,shoppingisnolongeratiringthing.Justclickyourmousetochoosethearticlesyoulike,andthepurchaseisdone.Youdon’tevenhavetostepoutoftheroom.Itseemsalleasyandquick.第34頁第34頁people’sopinionsvaryonthistrend.Somebelievethatonlineshopp