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EnglishWriting——Mybestfriend設(shè)計(jì)：城西學(xué)校英語(yǔ)名師工作室執(zhí)教：郭敏What'stherelationshipbetweenthetwogirls?Theyarefriends.1.who’syourbestfriend?2.Whycanshe/hebeyourbest1.1.who’syourbestfriend?2.Whycanshe/hebeyourbestfriend？1.who’syourbestfriend?2.Whycanshe/hebeyourbestfriend？1.who’syourbestfriend?2.Whycanshe/hebeyourbestfriend？who’syourbestfriend?2.Whycanshe/hebeyourbestfriend？friend？FreeTalk1.Isshe/heyourbestfriend?2.Whycanshe/hebeyourbestfriend？TopicMybestfriendMybestfriend……appearance外貌hobby愛好personality性格ability能力TimetodiscussTimetochoose

Shehasaroundredapple-likeface.Thereisapairofbigeyes,justliketwobigpurplegrapesAppearanceSheisahelpfulgirl.Itwasaraniyday.Iforgottobringmyumbrella.Afterclass,Icouldn’tgohome.Jennysentmehome.IwasverythankfultoJenny.PersonalityHobbyAbility

Shelikesreading.Whenwearefree,wealwaysreadtogether.Booksshowusanewworld.Welearnalotfromthem.

Shelovessports,andshe'sverygoodatswimming.Ithinksheisoneofthebestswimmersinourschool.TimetobrainstormMybestfriendappearancepersonalityhobbyability

3.What’sher/hishobby?What’sshe/hegoodat?1.Whatdoesyourbestfriendlooklike?heightbuildfacehairhelpful,friendly,outgoing,smart,brave,generous,funny,shy,serious…swimming,singing,dancing,playingtennis/…,playingtheguitar/…reading…astory2.Whatisyourbestfriendlike?FindoutthedifferencesPassage1Passage2Shehasaroundredapple-likeface.Thereisapairofbigeyes,justliketwobigpurplegrapesShehasmanyhobbieslikesingingsongs.IthinkShesingssobeautifully.Shelovessports,andshe'sverygoodatplayingping-pong.Also,sheisabooklover.Whenwearefree,wealwaysreadtogether.Booksshowusanewworld.Welearnalotfromthem.Sheisahelpfulgirl.ItwasquitedifficultformetolearnEnglish.SometimesIevenwantedtogiveup.ButsheoftenhelpedmewithEnglishinherfreetime.Shetaughtme,”Nothingisdifficulttoawillingheart."Herwordswerelikethebrighteststarsinthesky.Shealwaysbringsoutthebestinme.Becauseofherhelp,I’mgettingbetteratEnglish.Shehasaroundface.Thereisapairofbigeyes.Shehasmanyhobbieslikesingingsongs.IthinkShesingsbeautifully.Shelovessports,andshe'sgoodatplayingping-pong.Also,sheisabooklover.Whenwearefree,wealwaysreadtogether.Booksshowusanewworld.Welearnalotfromthem.Sheisahelpfulgirl.ItwasdifficultformetolearnEnglish.SometimesIwantedtogiveup.ButsheoftenhelpedmewithEnglishinherfreetime.Shesaid,”Youcanmakeit.”SometimesHerwordshelpedmealot.Shealwaysbringsoutthebestinme.Becauseofherhelp,I’mgettingbetteratEnglishWhichhasstrongerfeelings?Passage1Passage2Shesingsbeautifully.ItwasdifficultformetolearnEnglish.Iwanttogiveup.

Shehasaroundredapple-likeface.Thereisapairofbigeyes,justliketwobigpurplegrapesHerwordswerelikethebrighteststarsinthesky.

Shehasaroundface.ThereisapairofbigeyesHerwordshelpedmealot.Shesingssobeautifully.ItwasquitedifficultformetolearnEnglish.Ievenwantedtogiveup.Shesaid,”Youcanmakeit.”Shetaughtme,”Nothingisdifficulttoawillingheart.”SimileAdverbsSaying

IfeelsoluckythatIcanhavesuchagoodfriend.Ibelieveourfriendshipwilllastforever!

Shehasaroundredapple-likeface.Thereisapairofbigeyes,justliketwobigpurplegrapes.Shehasmanyhobbieslikesingingsongs.IthinkShesingssobeautifully.Shelovessports,andshe'sverygoodatplayingping-pong.Also,sheisabooklover.Whenwearefree,wealwaysreadtogether.Booksshowusanewworld.Welearnalotfromthem.Sheisahelpfulgirl.ItwasquitedifficultformetolearnEnglish.SometimesIevenwantedtogiveup.ButsheoftenhelpedmewithEnglishinherfreetime.Shetaughtme,”Nothingisdifficulttoawillingheart.”Herwordswerelikethebrighteststarsinthesky.Shealwaysbringsoutthebestinme.Becauseofherhelp,I’mgettingbetteratEnglish.Betterthelayout

Friendshipisreallyimportantinourdailylife.Ihaveabestfriendwithabeautifulname,Alice.

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Friendshipisreallyimportantinourdailylife.Ihaveabestfriendwithabeautifulname,Alice.Shehasaroundredapple-likeface.Thereisapairofbigeyes,justliketwobigpurplegrapes.Shehasmanyhobbieslikesingingsongs.IthinkShesingssobeautifully.Shelovessports,andshe'sverygoodatplayingping-pong.Also,sheisabooklover.Whenwearefree,wealwaysreadtogether.Booksshowusanewworld.Welearnalotfromthem.Sheisahelpfulgirl.ItwasquitedifficultformetolearnEnglish.SometimesIevenwantedtogiveup.ButsheoftenhelpedmewithEnglishinherfreetime.Shetaughtme,”Nothingisdifficulttoawillingheart.”Herwordswerelikethebrighteststarsinthesky.Shealwaysbringsoutthebestinme.Becauseofherhelp,I’mgettingbetteratEnglish.IfeelsoluckythatIcanhavesuchagoodfriend.Ibelieveourfriendshipwilllastforever!MybestfriendtitlebeginningMainsentencesandsupportingdetailsMainbodyendingtopicsentencefeelingsandthoughtsOutlineBeginingMainbodyEndingTopicsentenceThoughtsandfeelingsMybestfriendMainsentencessupportingdetailsEvaluation評(píng)價(jià)方向具體檢查內(nèi)容分值（10）得分Structure(結(jié)構(gòu))Paragraph(段落)1Contents(內(nèi)容)Coverallthepoints(要點(diǎn)齊全