歷年(1999-2016)上海高考英語作文真題及參考范文

歷年(1999-2016)上海高考英語作文及參考范文

1999上海高考作文及范例

一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為學(xué)英語很重要；一些學(xué)生則認(rèn)為不必學(xué)英語；我認(rèn)為……(觀點(diǎn)、理由)

SomestudentsthinkitisveryimportanttomasterEnglish.Theybelieve“Aforeignlanguageisa

weaponinthestruggleoflife”,OthersconsiderEnglishuseless.TheyfeellearningEnglishis

nothingbutaburdentothem.

Inmyopinion,Englishisoneofthemostimportantsubjectswelearnatschool.OfallsubjectsI

likeEnglishbest.

ThereareseveralreasonswhyEnglishismyfavoritesubject.

First,Englishisoneofthemostwidelyusedlanguagesoftheworld.Nearlyallinformationonthe

Internetandoverhalfoftheworld'stechnicalmaterialsareinEnglish,thusagoodcommandof

Englishwillgreatlybenefitmeinmywork.Secondly,itisbelievedthatgoodEnglishalsoleadsto

greaterchancesandopportunities.Inthecompetitionforawell-paidjob,theonewhocanspeak

Englishhasanadvantageoverthosewhocannot.

ForallthesereasonsweshouldnotonlylearnEnglishbutmasteritintheshortesttimepossible.

(166words)

2000年上海高考作文及范例

lo我最難忘的一課2o具體說明為何難忘3o感想

AnUnforgettableLesson

InmylifeIhaveexperiencedmanyimportantthings.Butperhapsthemostunforgettablething

whichisreallyworthmentioningisthelessongivenbymyChineseteacherjustaftershehadan

accident.

OnemorningjustbeforeourChineselesson,weweretoldourChineseteacher,MissLiu,hadhad

anaccident.Oneofherlegswasbadlyinjuredandshecouldn'tcometoteachus.Whilewewere

planningtovisitherafterschool,wealsothoughtthatmaybewewouldbefreetodowhatever

wewantedduringourChineselesson,andhopedourhomeworkloadwouldbereduced.Butto

oursurprise,shortlyafterthebell,MissLiu,withthehelpofastick,cametothedoorofour

classroom.Withgreatrespectwallstoodupandgreetedher.

Shesatonachairandbeganherlesson.Shespokeslowlybutforcefully.Shepreparedherlecture

quitewellanddemandedthatwedothesame.Towardstheendofthelesson,wegotlotsof

homeworkfromher.

Agoodteacherismanythingstomanypeople.Everyonehasdefiniteideasaboutwhatagood

teacheris.Inmyopiniontheteacherswhodemandedthemostfromthestudentsareperhaps

likedbest.(210words)

2001年上海高考作文及范例

請你談?wù)勣I車大量進(jìn)入家庭后，對家庭、環(huán)境和經(jīng)濟(jì)可能產(chǎn)生的影響。

Nowadaysthenumberofpeoplewhoownprivatecarsisontherise.Likeeverythingelse,

privatecarshavebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.Generally,thefavorableaspectscanbe

listedasfollows.

First,privatecarscanbringconvenienceandmobilitytoowners.Acarallowsapersonto

movecomfortablyandsafelyaswellasquicklyandfreely.Becausemyfamilyownsacar,weare

abletomakeextensivejourneyseveryyear.Therefore,IbelievethetouristindustryinChina

willdevelopmorequicklywiththeincreaseinthenumberofprivatecars.Secondly,ifmore

peoplebuycars,theautomobilesindustrywilldevelopdramatically.What'smore,thegrowthof

theautomobileindustrycantriggertheboomofotherimportantandrelatedindustriessuchas

ironandsteelproduction,energyandtechnologicalapplication.

Everycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Tobeginwith,toomany

carswillgiverisetoaseriesofproblems,suchasseriousenvironmentalpollutionandmore

trafficaccidents.Inaddition,thedrivermayhavedrivearoundandaroundlookingforavailable

parkingspaces.

Throughaboveanalysis,wecanseethatprivatecarsshouldberestrictedratherthan

encouraged.(199words)

2002年上海高考作文及范例

2002年的作文題提供了一幅圖片，圖片上女兒在學(xué)騎自行車。奶奶、父親和一手拿著急救

箱的母親三人滿頭大汗地扶著車，深怕女兒摔著了。圖片下面有一行字：你們讓我騎好嗎？

簡述圖片內(nèi)容，結(jié)合生活實(shí)際，就圖片的主題談?wù)勛约旱母邢搿?/p>

Duototheone-childpolicyinChina,mostfamilieshaveonlyonechildandthereforethischildis

regardedasthetreasureofthewholeworldfamily.Boththeparentsandgrandparentsusually

overindulgethechild.

Wecanseeinthepicture,Whenachildislearningtorideabicycle,theparentandthe

grandparentaresweatingfromrunningalongsidethebikeandaretryingtheirbesttoprotectthe

childforfearthattheyshouldfallandhurtthemselves.

Weallknowthegreatestgloryconsistsnotinneverfalling,butinrisingeverytimewefall.So

Ithink,fortheparents,theyshouldbeawareofthenegativeeffecttoomuchpamperinghason

theirchild.Undertheparents'protection,thechildknowsonlycomfortandease.Iftheydon't

learnhowtoliveindependently,howcantheycopewiththeadversitieswhichtheywillmeetin

thefuture?

Forthechildren,theyshouldlettheirparentsknowthattheyhaveconfidenceinthemselves

andareabletoexistinthecompetitivecommunitywithouttheconstantwatchfuleyeofaneager

parent.

Thepathtosuccessisfilledwithvariouskindsofdifficultiesandobstacles.Onlywhenwe

havelearnedtostandonourowntwofeet,canwesurviveinthe21stcentury.

(219words)

2003年上海高考作文及范例

你的好友因家境一般買不起名牌而悶悶不樂。給他寫信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。

受信人：徐海青寄信人：黃平寫信日期：2003年六月八日

June8,2003

DearXuHaiqing,

Yousaidinyourletterthatmanyofyourclassmateswerewearingfashionableclothes,butyou

couldn'taffordtobuythebestbrands.Soyoufeltverydepressed.Therearedifferentviewson

people'swear.Thefollowingaremyideasaboutit.

Firstly,youshouldn'tputtoomuchemphasisonphysicalappearance.Youmustalwaysremember

themostimportanttaskforyoutodayistoconcentrateyourattentiononyourstudies.No

matterwhatyouwear,youwillreallylookyourbestwhenyoucomeoutfirstinyour

examinations.

Afamoussayinggoes,"'Frugalityisthemotherofvirtue/So,secondly,youmustunderstandthat

itisafinevirtuetolearnliveinfrugality.Sinceyourfamilyisnotabletoprovideyouwithenough

moneytobuyclothesofthebestbrands,itisallthemorenecessaryforyoutotryeverymeans

tolightenthefinancialburdenofyourfamily.Youwillfindthevirtueoffrugalitywillbenefityoua

lotinyourlaterlife.

IhopeyouunderstandwhatImean.Iamsureyouwilltakeapositiveattitudetowardslifeand

willbehappyagainwhenyoureadmyletter.(205words)

2004年上海高考作文及范例

老師要求你負(fù)責(zé)班級墻報(bào)(wall-newspaper)工作并征求你的意見。在日記中表述你的決

定并談?wù)勏敕ā?/p>

TodayMissWangaskedmetobeinchargeofthewallnewspaperofourclass.Iwassogladat

that.ButnowIdon'tknowwhetherIshouldacceptthetaskornot.

ThoughIhavebeeninClass4fornearlytwoyears,Ihavehardlydoneanythingforit.Ithinkit

willbeagoodopportunitytodevotemyeffortstoclassifItakethejob.Ontheotherhand,Km

goodatdrawing.Thejobwillalsoprovidemewithagoodchancetoshowmytalent.

However;Iknowthattakingthejobmeanshavinglesstimetorelaxandstudy.Perhapsitwill

takemeseveraldaystocompleteanexcellentwallnewspaper.Perhapsitwillaffectmystudiesas

well.Perhaps...

No!No!No!Ishouldbelievemyability.Icangeteverythingarrangedwell:relaxing,study,wall

newspaper...Itwillbeanhourformetodosomethingformyclass.Iwanttobeapersonwhois

gladtochallengehimself.

Now,I'vedecidedI'llacceptthejob.I'IItellmydecisiontoMissWangtomorrow.(187)

2005年上海高考作文及范例

古人云：“天生我材必有用“(Theremustbeauseformytalent)。通過描述你

生活中一件事，說明人各有所長，無論才能大小都能成為有用的人。

ThereisanoldEnglishsayingthattheremustbeuseformytalent.Ihaveregardedit

asmymottoformanyyears.Frommypointofview,thereisnodifferencebetweenoneperson

andanother.Withsomeusefultalent,youwillmakeyourcontributionstothissociety.

WhenIwastenyearsold,therewasanoldmanlivingatthecornerofxxRoad.He

didn'thavetheopportunitytostudyinschool,buthelearnedhowtomakewoodfurniture.Every

timepeoplewenttoaskhimtosolvesomeproblemsoffurniture,hewaswillingtohelpthem.

Tomysurprise,inhissparetime,hewouldmakesometoyswithsmallpiecesof

wood.Someofthemweresoldtothetoystoreandothersweregiventous.ThemomentIsee

thelovelytoysmadebythisoldman,Iwouldrememberthehappychildhood.

Fromthisoldman,wecanseewhateverkindoftalentyouhave,youcanfindyour

ownmethodtodisplayyourtalent.Themostimportantfactorisyourconfidence.Ifyoubelieve

thattheremustbeauseformytalent,youwillsucceed.(200words)

2006年上海高考作文及范例

下表提供了你所心儀的南、北兩所大學(xué)的招生信息。通過比較作出選擇，并結(jié)合個(gè)人情況說

明理由。

南方大學(xué)北方大學(xué)

學(xué)費(fèi)8000元/年5000元年

招生人數(shù)20人10人

優(yōu)惠政策無加20分

Idreamtobecomeanastronaut.TwouniversitiesinChinacanmakemydreambecometrue.

Theyarebothverygood,butIcanonlychooseone.

FromtheInternet,Ilearnedthattherearemoreadvantagesofferedbythenorthernuniversity

thantheonesbythesouthernone.Forexample,thefeechargedbythenorthernoneislower.

Anditwilladd20markswhilethesouthernuniversitywillnot.Incontrast,thesouthern

university'sgoodpointisthatitenrollsmorestudents.

Aftercomparingtheaboveinformation,IthinkIwillchoosethenorthernuniversityforthe

followingreasons.Firstly,myparentsmaynotbeabletoaffordmystudyandlivingexpenses.

Secondly,anadditionoftwentymarksiscertainlyanirresistibleattraction.Moreimportantly,

fouryearsofindependentlifeinthenorthwillobviouslyhelpdevelopmypersonalityrequiredas

anastronaut.

2007年上海高考作文及范例

以“禮物”為主題寫一篇作文。該文章必須包括以下內(nèi)容：

1、你送禮物的對象及所送的禮物；

2、該禮物對他(她)可能產(chǎn)生的影響或帶來的變化。

APresentforFather'sDay

TheFather'sDaywillcomesoon.andIwanttogivemyDadapresent.ThatisaVIPcardofa

healthclub.WhenIwasalittleboy,Dadworkedhardasateacher.Duringterm,MotherandI

sometimesaccompaniedDadinhisofficetillalatehour.Fromthenon,IunderstoodthatDad

workedwithgreateffort.TherearestilltoomanypreciousmemorieswhichI'llcherishinmy

heart.AndIwanttogivethispresenttoexpressmythankstohim.

TimefliesandI'm18now.AsIgrowup,Fatherisgettingolder.Heisnowstilldivingintopilesof

books.Withthehealthclubmembership,Ihopethathewillmaketimetodomoreexercises.I

thinkthathewillrelaxinthehealthclubandmakemorefriends.

2008年上海高考作文及范例

你班將組隊(duì)參加學(xué)校組織的集體舞比賽(groupdancingcooipetition),班長希望大家積極參

加。對此談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

你的文章必須包括以下內(nèi)容：

?你是否會(huì)參加比賽

?你做出該決定的具體理由

Version1:

Agroupdancingcompetitionwillbeheldinourschoolandthemonitorcallsoneverybodyto

takeanactivepartinit.Whilemostofmyclassmatesarestillhesitatingwhethertoparticipate,I

havesaidyestoourmonitorwithgreatpleasure.

Generallyspeaking,therearetworeasonsformydecision.First,itisagoodopportunityforme

torelaxmyselfwhichwillenablemetostudymoreefficiently.AllworkandnoplaymakesJacka

dullboy,sogoesthesaying,whichclearlyshowsustheimportanceofrelaxation.Besides,Ithink

Iamagooddancerafterlearningdanceformorethanfiveyears.Participatinginthecontestwill

beagoldenchanceformetoshowmydancingskillsandmakesomecontributionstotheclass.

Forthetworeasonsmentionedabove,itisnosurprisethatIhavesuchastrongenthusiasmon

thegroupdancingcompetition.

Version2:

Todaythemonitorcallsoneverybodytotakeanactivepartinthegroupdancingcompetition

whichwillbeheldinacoupleofdaysinourschool.Butaftersomecarefulconsideration,Ihave

decidednottoparticipate.

Thereareanumberofreasonsformydecision.Firstandforemost,astheCollegeEntranceExam

isjustaroundthecorner,studyisthetoppriorityforme.Participatinginthegroupdancing

competitionhastogivewaybecauseitmighttakemetoomuchtime.What'smore,withoutany

experienceofdancing,Idon/tthinkIcanbeagooddancingpartner.Iamafraidmypoordancing

skillswillprobablyspoiltheperformanceofthewholeclass.Inthiscase,it'sbetterformetobea

spectatorcheeringformyclassmates.

Forthesereasons,itseemsmoreappropriateformetowatchthecompetitionthantodance

myself.

2009年上海高考作文及范例

某海外學(xué)校舉辦英語夏令營，開設(shè)了如下課程：園藝(gardening),烹飪(cooking)，防身術(shù)

(self-defence),護(hù)理(nursing)。假如你是王躍華(不可以用自己的真實(shí)姓名)，寫一封申

請信，報(bào)名參加其中一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)。信的內(nèi)容必須包括：1、你感興趣的課程2、你期望

從這門課程中學(xué)到什么3、為什么想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容

模板：

Receiver'saddress

Dear…，Iamextremelypleasedtohearfromyou./toseeyouradvertisementfortheposition

in....AndIwouldliketowritealettertotellyouthat.../IamconfidentthatIamsuitableforthe

kindofthejobyouareadvertising---.../IfeelIamcompetenttomeettherequirementsyou

havelisted.Ontheonehand,....Ontheotherhand,....Iamenclosingmyresumeforyourkind

considerationandreference.Ishallbemuchobligedifyouwilloffermeapreciousopportunity

toaninterview.Iwillgreatlyappreciatearesponsefromyouatyourearliestconvenience/Iam

lookingforwardtoyourrepliesatyourearliestconvenience.Bestregardsforyourhealthand

success.Sincerelyyours,XXX

范文

Itissaidthatasummercampistobeheldbyyourschoolandafewcoursesareavailableto

choosefrom.Iaminterestedingardening,inthatIbelieveitfeaturesmycharacterandpersonal

benefits.

Duringthelearningperiod,Iexpecttogainsomeunexpectedknowledge.Aradical

techniquerdliketoobtainistoknowhowtotelldifferencespeciesofplantsandflowersapart.

Thishelpsmetohaveacleareroutlookofthoseinmygarden.Furthermore,thepropercutting

timeandfrequencytowateraresomeotherskillsIwanttolearn.Alittleknowledgeconcerning

choosingsuitablesoilorreasonablepositionswillalsobeagoodchoice.

ThemainreasonwhyIchoosegardeningisthatIwanttohelpmyparentswiththeirworkin

thedomesticgarden.Inaddition,Ifindthatwestudentsgenerallylacktheknowledgeof

gardening,missingachancetohaveawordwithnature,sothatknowingthesurroundingsis

imperative.Lastbutnotleast,byattendingthecourses,Iwillhaveameaningfulsummervacation,

anddrowningmyselfbetweenplantswillbyallmeansaddabrillianttouchtomylife.

2010上海高考英語作文

下圖是小學(xué)新生的課堂一角，對照你當(dāng)時(shí)的上課情況，作出比較并談?wù)勀愕母?/p>

受。你的作文必須包括：

?描述圖片里學(xué)生上課的場景

?比較你同時(shí)期的上課情況

?簡單談?wù)勀愕母惺?/p>

范文:

Wearingexcitedandeagerexpressions,thechildreninthepictureraisetheir

handsashighastheycanfortheopportunitytoanswerthequestionmetforwardby

theteacher.Apparently,allofthem,whetherboysorgirls,sociableorshyaretotally

fascinatedandinspired,andarealwaysfullofingenious（新穎的）ideas.

Onseeingthepicture,Ican7helprecallinsmyfirstdayintheelementary

school.7bthebestofmy（就我記憶所及，如果我沒記錯(cuò)的話）,wepupilsat

thattimeallfeltexceedinglymotivatedtoanswerthequestionsaskedbyourteacher.

Moreoftenthannot（通常'）,weraisedourlittlehandsalmostatthesamemomentas

ourteacherputforwardaquestion,alldesperatetograbthechancetoanswer

questionsholdingappealtous.Judgingfromtheexcitementonourfaces,theteachers

alldeduced/triggeredourauthenticyearningforknowledgeinvariousrespects（方面）

andoursubstantial（大量的）curiosity.Moreover,savoring（品嘗）thepleasureof

acquiringknowledgewithobviousrelish（滋味，風(fēng)味）,wefoundthattheuleasureof

gainingknowledgefaroutweighed（遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)大于;比…重要）theembarrassmentofthe

failuretoanswerthequestioncorrectly.

Quitehonestly,Iinterpretmyunvarying（不變的）curiosityandyearningstohave

playedanindispensableinmyongoing（不間斷的）studyinthefollowingtwelve

years.Had/notbeenblessedwithsuchenormousycarninqforknowledge./

couldn'thavebeensomotivatedtodelveimo（鉆研）therealm（領(lǐng)JQofscience,

literatu】eandcultureandletmypotentialsbeexploitedtofull.

2011上海高考英語作文：

若你是明啟中學(xué)李明，想申請一個(gè)扶貧項(xiàng)目，幫助貧困地區(qū)的兒童。根據(jù)以

下啟示寫一封申請信。

啟示

國際兒童基金會(huì)將資助中學(xué)生開展扶貧項(xiàng)目，以幫助貧困地區(qū)的兒童。申

請成功者將獲得項(xiàng)目經(jīng)費(fèi)2000元。有意者請來信告知。

信中請包括：

1.你個(gè)人基本情況

2.你對申請項(xiàng)目具體設(shè)想

3.項(xiàng)目經(jīng)費(fèi)使用計(jì)劃

聯(lián)系方式：2011hope@

2011年6月7日

Dear...,

I'mwritingthise-mailtoapplyfortheprojectaimedathelpingchildreninpoor

areas.MynameisLiMing,astudentfromMingQimiddleschool.Lastyear,Iwas

grantedanopportunitytovisitaschoolinthedepthofamountainandthe

experiencekeptflashingoverandover,whichhadtriRReredtheintentionto

shouldertheresponsibilityofhelpingthemovercomethehardshipsandstruggle

theywouldgothrough.

Thereisaseriesofstepsinmyprojectthatwillbedemonstratedasfollows:

Ofthetoppriorityisourorganizinganactivitytointroducethelivingandlearning

conditionsofkidsinpoorareasandthustobringhometothepublictheurgencyof

immediateactiontobetakentohelpthemout.Whetherbydonatingmoneyorby

sendingdailynecessitiesfromclothestobooks,everyoneshoulddohisbit.Besides,

avideoplaywillbeshottoconveythewishes,cheersandencouragementfromus

citypeopletothem.Equallysignificantly,Ialongwithmyteammateshaveplanned

tovisitthosekids,toplayandchatwiththem,whichisboundtoestablishasolid

connectionbetweenus.

IfIwereluckyenoughtobegrantedthe2000yuanfund,aquarterofitwould

besparedforthetrafficandothercosts,whiletherestwouldbeaddedtothemoney

collectedtobedonatedcontributingtomodernizingandimprovingtheteaching

devices.

Thanksfortakingtimetoreadmye-mailandKmlookingforwardtobeingpart

ofyourproject.

Sincerelyyours,

LiMing

2012上海高考英語作文:

上周一，你在一所小學(xué)觀摩了小女孩Amy所在班級的兩堂繪畫課（如圖所示）,

回家后你用英語寫了一篇日記，內(nèi)

?對兩堂繪畫課的具體描：

?你從中獲得的啟發(fā)。

范文：

Monday,May28th

Today,IpaidavisittoaprimaryschoolwhereagirlnamedAmystudiesto

observe2artlessons.Inthefirstclass,theteacherpresentedeveryonewithalarge

pieceofpaperandrequiredthemtopaintwhatevertheylikedonit.Soexcitedwas

/mythatsheappliedthecolorstoherfeet,usingthemaspaintbrushes.Onthe^

contrary,intheotherclass,theteacherjustinstructedthemtocopythemodel

painting.DespitethefactthatAmvalsopaintedherpicturesearnestly,Idiscovered

thatshewasn'tinvolvedinthepaintingaspnssionatelv./ma/ntaMitwosthe

creativityandimaginationthatmadethestrikingdifferencebetweenthe2dosses

FirstlywhatimpressedmemostwasAmy'ssweetsmileinthefirstclass.It-oes

withoutsavingthatthehappinessfromone'screationandimaginationwillallow

himtoreceivetherealsenseofachievementandsatisfactionfromhiswork.Only

whenwefeelpleasedwithourworkscanwecreatesomethingbrilliant.

（同時(shí)地）,equippedwithinnovationspirit,wewillbemorelikely

todevelopourpotentialabilities.Giventhateveryoneofussaythesamewordsor

dothesamethings,ourcountrywillbedestinedtobecomelessdynamicand

prosperous.However;itisafairbetthatmoreamazingcontributionswillbeachieved

withou門initiative.

Ashasbeendiscussedabove,/firmlyholdthebeliefthadcreativityand

imaginationaretwoinvaluabledualitieswhichsuccessfeedsTherefore,Iwillgo

toanvlengthtocultivatemycreativityandimaginationtomakegreater

contributionstomycountry.

2013上海高考英語作文：

上海博物館擬舉辦一次名畫展，現(xiàn)就展出場所（博物館還是社區(qū)圖書館）征

集公眾意見，假設(shè)你是王敏，給上海博物館寫一封信表達(dá)你的想法。你的信必須

滿足以下要求：

1.簡述你寫信的目的及你對場所的選擇；

2.說明你的理由（從便利性，專業(yè)性等方面對這兩個(gè)場所進(jìn)行對比）

DearSirorMadam,

I'vereadaboutyourposteraboutselectingthelocationofanexhibitionof

famouspaintings,andIthinkthatthemuseumisaniceplace.

Firstofall,comparedwiththoselibraries,themuseumisanexcellentplace

whichinspiresoureagernessforknowledge.Itiscertainthatvisitorswillbemore

absorbedirthefantasticsurroundings.Bycontrast,Idon'tthinkthosenormal

librariesincommunitiesmatchwellwiththepaintingswithgreatfameandhigh

prices.

Whilesomeofmyfriendsinsistthatlibrariesaremoreconvenient,Imaintain

thatsincethetransportationsysteminShanghaiisveryadvancedandthemuseumis

locatedinthecitycenter;it'snotabitdifficultforustoreachtheshow.

Allinall,Iamfirmlyconvincedthatthemuseumisabetterplaceforthisgrand

paintingexhibition,andit'llbeagreathonorifIcouldstudythosewonderful

paintingsinthebestmuseuminShanghai.Ihopeyouwillacceptmysuggestion.

Yoursfaithfully,

WangMin

2014高考英語作文：

學(xué)校英語報(bào)正在醞釀改版，擬從現(xiàn)有的三個(gè)欄目（健康，娛樂，文化）中

去除一個(gè)，并從三個(gè)備選欄目（時(shí)尚，職業(yè)規(guī)劃，讀者反饋）中挑選一個(gè)納入該

報(bào)。假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生程飛，給校報(bào)編輯寫一封電子郵件，表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)。郵件

必須包括以下內(nèi)容。

你建議去除的欄目及去除的理由；

你建議增加的欄目及增加的理由。

DearEditor,

I'mwritingtoexpresssomeofmyopinionstowardsourschooEsEnglish

newspaper.

Inmypointofview,amonghealth,entertainmentandculture,Iwouldchoose

“entertainment“tobetheonetobeeliminated.Althoughit'snecessaryforstudentsto

getsomerelaxation,I'mworriedthatthemainnewsthattheentertainmentcolumn

offerswillcventuaHyturnintocelebritygossip,whichisneitherhelpfultothegrowth

ofstudentsnortothedevelopmentofourschool.Wearealreadylivinginaworldthat

iscrammedwithuselessinfonnation,andthere9snoneedtoaddsomemore.The

mainfbcusofthenewspaperissupposedtobeplacedonthestudents—notBradPitt's

newmovie.

Asfbrthecolumntobeadded,Ihighlyrecommendthe"careerplanning^^.Iknow

thatrightnowalargenumberofstudentsstillhaveabsolutelynoideaaboutwhatthey

trulywanttobecomeinthefuture,soit'squiteurgentandnecessarytogivestudents

basicunderstandingofwhatdifferentkindsofjobsarelikeandwhatkindsofqualities

arerequiredfordifferedjobs.Thismayhelpstudentsgainabetterunderstandingof

theirstrengthsandweaknessandthusfigureouttheirgoals.Tome,it'smuchmore

meaningfulthan“fashion"or“readers':feedback”.

I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Faithfullyyours,

ChengFei.

2015年上海高考英語作文解析，及，作文范文

II.GuidedWriting（25分）

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

學(xué)校即將舉辦“讀書節(jié)”，目前正廣泛征集“讀書節(jié)”宣傳冊圖片。假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生潘

陽，你已找到以下三幅圖片，決定給讀書節(jié)組委會(huì)寫一封信，推薦其中一幅，你的信須包括

以下內(nèi)容：

1.簡單描述你想推薦的那幅圖片；

2.闡述你用這幅圖片宣傳“讀書節(jié)”的理由。

作文解析：

今年的英語作文題目同樣重點(diǎn)考察了主觀理由型作文的寫作手法，這篇文章要求學(xué)生在

三幅學(xué)校讀書節(jié)宣傳圖片當(dāng)中選出自己最喜歡的一幅，對圖片進(jìn)行描述并說明原因。這也是

繼2013年和2014年連續(xù)兩年考察書信體與主觀理由型文章的結(jié)合體之后出現(xiàn)的第三篇主觀

理由型文章。

整體來看，今年的作文題目似乎與往年沒有什么區(qū)別，但細(xì)細(xì)分析，我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)今年英

語作文的難度，不管是在文章內(nèi)容、還是在形式上面，都有了大幅提升。因?yàn)榭忌枰瑫r(shí)

兼顧三個(gè)難點(diǎn)：1、書信體正確的的書寫格式；2、對圖片內(nèi)容進(jìn)行細(xì)節(jié)的描述：3、找出恰

當(dāng)?shù)睦碛桑?-3點(diǎn)）進(jìn)行論證，說理充分，同時(shí)注意論點(diǎn)和論據(jù)相結(jié)合，以及文章語句之間的

邏輯嚴(yán)密性?？梢哉f，近三年來英語作文雖然都在考察主觀理由這個(gè)大的方向，但是考察的

難度確實(shí)是在逐年遞增。

對于考生來說，要想在短短的20分鐘之內(nèi)寫好這篇作文，首先需要拿捏好這篇文章的

結(jié)構(gòu)。一般來說，文章第一段用來引出話題，第二段可以對所選擇的圖片進(jìn)行描寫，描寫時(shí)

要格外注意的地方是對細(xì)節(jié)的詳細(xì)描述，基本內(nèi)容講清楚就可以開始第三段的理由闡述了。

寫好重頭戲理由之后，在尾段我們無需過多筆墨，基本上通過三句話就可以收尾了。也

就是總結(jié)加升華，由于這是一篇征集建議的書信體文章，所以需要最后有一句客套話，考生

可以通過Lookingforwardtoyourreply或者Iwillappreciateitverymuchifyou

cantakemysuggestionsintoconsideration進(jìn)行文章自然收尾。這樣整篇文章便達(dá)到

了內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，說理充分了

作文范文：

DearSir/Madam,

SincetheReadingFestivalisaroundthecomer,I'mwritingtorecommendapicture

whichcanb