英文地質(zhì)論文寫作中常見的問題演示

（優(yōu)選）池國祥英文地質(zhì)論文寫作中常見的問題當(dāng)前第1頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點ImportanceofPublication-Scientificrecords-Communicationwithinternationalcommunity-Contributiontoscientificadvancement-Social-economicimpacts-Careerdevelopment寫作過程也是科研的一部分：激發(fā)思維，推敲研究結(jié)果的意義。審稿和修改過程對科研有促進作用。當(dāng)前第2頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題語法和用詞問題其它問題投稿注意問題當(dāng)前第3頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點科技論文寫作的主要問題是論文結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題，而不是英文問題。結(jié)構(gòu)好而英文不好的論文很容易修改，而結(jié)構(gòu)不好的論文則很難改。當(dāng)前第4頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點Highlight只說做了什么，沒說發(fā)現(xiàn)什么DetailedpetrographicworkcarriedoutImportantconstraintonUmineralizationrecognizedXenotimecoevalwithuraniniteinAthabascaBasinOnsetofUmineralizationrelatedtovolcanismandbrineformation當(dāng)前第5頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點引言的核心是What–Why–How不要把研究結(jié)果在前言里講出來當(dāng)前第6頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點沒有分清目的(purposes)和目標(biāo)(objectives)Thispaperaimstocarryoutdetailedfield,petrographic,stableisotopeandfluidinclusionstudiesofthePoplarMountaingolddeposit.ThispaperaimstounderstandthemineralizationconditionsandprocessesofthePoplarMountaingolddeposit,throughdetailedfield,petrographic,stableisotopeandfluidinclusionstudies.當(dāng)前第7頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點空洞的文獻總結(jié)EmptyReview:ThesedimentaryandstratigraphyoftheVikingFormationhavebeenstudiedbySmith(1978)andWalkeretal.(1990).

Littleworkhasbeendoneondiagenesis,exceptastableisotopestudybyLee(1998).ThepetroleumsystemhasbeenevaluatedbyCook(1989),….InformativeReview:TheVikingFormationhasbeeninterpretedtohaveformedinawave-dominatedshorefaceandtransitionalzones(Smith,1978;Walkeretal.,1990).AdiageneticstudyofcalcitecementsbyLee(1998)yieldedd18Oof-18to-15%o(PDB),whichwereinterpretedtoindicate……當(dāng)前第8頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點參考文獻的引用不恰當(dāng)有些地區(qū)前人已做了大量工作。但這不意味這你要引用所有工作。引用什么和不引用什么要得當(dāng)。引用要放在恰當(dāng)?shù)牡胤?。引用某文（或圖）等于告訴讀者“請看……”。要把Credit

給該給的人。當(dāng)前第9頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點CitereferencesinchronologicalorderThereareanumberofpreviousstudiesinthisfield(Smith,1999;Andesetal.,2001;Sunetal.,1988).Thereareanumberofpreviousstudiesinthisfield(Andesetal.,2001;Smith,1999;Sunetal.,1988).Thereareanumberofpreviousstudiesinthisfield(Sunetal.,1988;Smith,1999;Andesetal.,2001).當(dāng)前第10頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點Forfirstauthorofthethesamename,theorderoflistingreferencesissingle-authorfirst,two-authorsecond,andmulti-authorlast(inchronologicalorder)Li,S.,2011,……………Li,S.,Anderson,K.andWang,L.,2000,……..Li,S.andBaker,A.,2003,….Li,S.,Wang,N.andZhu,C.,1989,….Li,S.,2011,……………Li,S.andBaker,A.,2003,….Li,S.,Wang,N.andZhu,C.,1989,….Li,S.,Anderson,K.andWang,L.,2000,……..當(dāng)前第11頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點區(qū)域地質(zhì)背景沒有根據(jù)本文的內(nèi)容進行取舍區(qū)域地質(zhì)背景的介紹是很有講究的。不能千篇一律地描述所有的地質(zhì)背景，要根據(jù)本文的重點有所側(cè)重。當(dāng)前第12頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點現(xiàn)象或數(shù)據(jù)的描述與解釋混雜在一起WehavedetectedhighconcentrationsofCO2inthefluid,whichismostlikelyderivedfromthemantle.However,somecrustalCO2hasalsobeendetected,asreflectedbyitscarbonisotopecomposition.Theoresarecharacterizedbylaminatedstructures,whicharelikelyofsyngeneticorigin…Thesyngeneticstructuresarecommonlyfoundinallthedepositsinthestudyarea,suggestingthatthesedepositsareprobablyofSEDEXtype.當(dāng)前第13頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點缺乏詳細的地質(zhì)描述當(dāng)前第14頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點缺乏詳細的巖相學(xué)描述當(dāng)前第15頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點把前人或自己已發(fā)表的數(shù)據(jù)列在結(jié)果部分DatasourcesLiangetal.2008Liangetal.2008Zhuetal.2011ThisstudyThisstudyThisstudyThisstudy當(dāng)前第16頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點展示數(shù)據(jù)的圖表出現(xiàn)在討論部分當(dāng)前第17頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點展示數(shù)據(jù)的圖表出現(xiàn)在討論部分當(dāng)前第18頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點5.Discussion5.1.Agesofmineralization5.2.Sourcesofore-formingcomponents5.3.Oreprecipitationmechanisms5.4.Oregenesis礦床類型不等于礦床成因:Oregenesis:Basedonthegeologicalandgeochemicalcharacteristics,thismineraldepositisconsideredtobeaMVTdeposit.把礦床成因和礦床類型混肴當(dāng)前第19頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點討論部分沒有與引言呼應(yīng)，沒有以事實為依據(jù)Introduction:ThispaperaimstounderstandthemineralizationconditionsandprocessesofthePoplarMountaingolddeposit,throughdetailedfield,petrographic,stableisotopeandfluidinclusionsstudies.Discussion:InthissectionwewillfocusontheoriginsofgolddepositsinsouthwesternNewBrunswick,especiallyontherolethatcrustalevolutionmayhaveplayedinmineralization.當(dāng)前第20頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點討論部分把在引言部分說過的話又說一遍Introduction:TheoriginofthePoplarMountaingolddeposithasnotbeenwellunderstood.Someresearchersbelieveitformedfrommagmaticfluids,whereasothersthought….Discussion:TheoriginofthePoplarMountaingolddeposithasnotbeenwellunderstood.Someresearchersbelieveitformedfrommagmaticfluids,whereasothersthought….當(dāng)前第21頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點討論部分與結(jié)果部分小標(biāo)題重復(fù)2.Results 2.1Oxygenisotopes 2.2Carbonisotopes 2.3Fluidinclusions3.Discussion 3.1Oxygenisotopes 3.2Carbonisotopes 3.3Fluidinclusions3.Discussion 3.1Sourcesofmineralizingfluids 3.2Oreprecipitationmechanisms當(dāng)前第22頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點圖例說明沒有直接標(biāo)在圖例旁邊當(dāng)前第23頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點參考文獻格式?jīng)]按要求作者沒列全錯字太多名字縮寫不統(tǒng)一期刊名稱縮寫或不縮寫不統(tǒng)一卷號及頁碼格式不統(tǒng)一多余的空格當(dāng)前第24頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題語法和用詞問題其它問題投稿注意問題當(dāng)前第25頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點“The”

的用與不用JindingdepositisalargeZn-Pbdeposit.TherearemanySndepositsinthesouthernHunan.TheJindingdepositisalargeZn-Pbdeposit.TherearemanySndepositsinsouthernHunan.TherearemanySndepositsinthesouthernHunanarea.當(dāng)前第26頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點“the”,“a”

及復(fù)數(shù)的使用要根據(jù)上下文而定“The”含有“那個”或“那些”的意思當(dāng)前第27頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點沒有必要的副詞VeryDefinitelyObviouslyExtremelyStrongly…………當(dāng)前第28頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點放在句子前面，可有可無的的副詞Basically,…Actually,…Iffact,……………當(dāng)前第29頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點不客觀的肯定語氣Thedepositmusthavebeenformedfromfluidmixing.Thedepositmayhavebeenformedfromfluidmixing.Thedepositwaslikelyformedfromfluidmixing.當(dāng)前第30頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點不可數(shù)名詞不能用復(fù)數(shù)Thisconclusionissupportedbymanyevidences.Thisconclusionissupportedbyseverallinesofevidence.Researches,equipments,…當(dāng)前第31頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點ZirconandzirconsWaterandwatersWorkandworks有些詞可當(dāng)可數(shù)名詞或不可數(shù)名詞，但意思不同當(dāng)前第32頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點“-”與“–”的區(qū)別Fault-controlledcm-sizedRegional-scaleIce-melting10–20cmquartz–pyriteassemblageNE–SWtrendingFigs.a–c當(dāng)前第33頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點TheHuanglongFormationTheHuanglongandQiziqiaoformationsFormation還是formation？TheHuanglongformationTheHuanglongandQiziqiaoFormations當(dāng)前第34頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點有些中文專業(yè)詞匯可譯為多個含義不同的英文詞匯成礦：Metallogeny;Mineralization測試：Test;Analysis指示：Indicate;Suggest根據(jù)：Accordingto;Basedon包含：Contain;Include勘探：Prospecting;Exploration區(qū)：District;Area帶：Belt;Zone礦體：Orebody;Orebody特征：Features;Characteristics當(dāng)前第35頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點不要用不同的名詞描寫同一個東西或地方TheShizishanorefieldislocatedintheLowerYangtzemetallogenicbelt….TherearenumeriousMesozoicgraniticintrusionsintheShizishandistrict….DifferenttypesofmineralizationoccurintheShizishanarea….TheShizishandepositisinterpretedtohaveformedfrom….當(dāng)前第36頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點“between…and…”和“from…to…”的區(qū)別25333644555677888990TheThvaluesarebetween25oand90oC.TheThvaluesrangefrom25oto90oC.當(dāng)前第37頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點空間副詞和時間副詞Often,frequently,sometimes,occasionally等表示時間概念的詞不能用來描述地質(zhì)現(xiàn)象出現(xiàn)的普遍性或偶然性。正確的用詞應(yīng)該是commonly,generally,locally,inplaces,等等。Goldoftenoccursinfracturesinquartz,butsometimesitoccursasinclusionsinpyrite.Goldcommonlyoccursinfracturesinquartz,butlocallyitoccursasinclusionsinpyrite.當(dāng)前第38頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點避免過長或過短的句子過長的句子容易造成誤解。過短的句子給人感覺信息量太少，效率太低。長句短句相結(jié)合讀起來比較舒服當(dāng)前第39頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點避免主動句和被動句反復(fù)交叉使用Anumberofmineraldepositshavebeendiscoveredinthestudyarea.Manyresearchershavestudiedthemineralogyandgeochemistryofthedeposits.However,theoriginofthedepositshasnotbeenwellunderstood.Anumberofmineraldepositshavebeendiscoveredinthestudyarea.Manyofthemhavebeenstudiedformineralogyandgeochemistry.However,theiroriginhasnotbeenwellunderstood.當(dāng)前第40頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點兩個句子之間不能用逗號分開TheRedLakegolddepositislocatedinnorthwesternOntario,itiswellknownforitshighgradeandlargetonnage.TheRedLakegolddepositislocatedinnorthwesternOntario;itiswellknownforitshighgradeandlargetonnage.TheRedLakegolddepositislocatedinnorthwesternOntario,anditiswellknownforitshighgradeandlargetonnage.當(dāng)前第41頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點美式英語與英式英語不可混用ColourvscolorMetrevsmeterCentrevscenterVapourvsvapor…………當(dāng)前第42頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題語法和用詞問題其它問題投稿注意問題當(dāng)前第43頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點不要用阿拉伯?dāng)?shù)字開始一個句子145fluidinclusionsweremeasuredforhomogenizationtemperatures,ofwhich98werealsomeasuredforice-meltingtemperature.Onehundredandforty-five(145)fluidinclusionsweremeasuredforhomogenizationtemperatures,ofwhich98werealsomeasuredforice-meltingtemperature.當(dāng)前第44頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點數(shù)據(jù)的小數(shù)點用的不對Thehomogenizationtemperaturesofthefluidinclusionsrangefrom100.2oto190.8oC,andthesalinitiesrangefrom27.88to35.69wt.%NaClequivalent.Thehomogenizationtemperaturesofthefluidinclusionsrangefrom100to191oC,andthesalinitiesrangefrom27.9to35.7wt.%NaClequivalent.當(dāng)前第45頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點不要用10-6做單位TheconcentrationsofCuandZnintheporphyryare33.810-6and45.610-6,respectively.TheconcentrationsofCuandZnintheporphyryare33.8ppmand45.6ppm,respectively.當(dāng)前第46頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點英文地質(zhì)論文寫作的常見問題結(jié)構(gòu)及格式問題語法和用詞問題其它問題投稿注意問題當(dāng)前第47頁\共有54頁\編于星期日\14點SubmissionforPublication