第五次課獨(dú)立寫作范文講解

一）Language二）三）Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Studentscangetasmanybenefitsfromorganizationorclubactivitiesastheycangetfromtheiracademicstudies. 1）奔法TMSTREEC(Technology&Efficiency;mind&education;socialization&ality;time&space;right&responsibility;environment&health; petition;culture&tradition;competition;學(xué)業(yè)學(xué)習(xí)上：mind&education,competitionorclubactivities具體化，或者對(duì)academicstudies具體化知識(shí)掌握為主，而大學(xué)階段可能社團(tuán)活動(dòng)更為重要；或者大學(xué)期間，freshman和sophomore要掌握專業(yè)知識(shí)，而junior和senior可以從社團(tuán)活動(dòng)中得到。 奔 開頭段的寫作：開頭段的寫作：introductionpositionDoyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Studentscangetasmanyfromorganizationorclubactivitiesastheycangetfromtheiracademic 概念展開：organizationclubactivitiesacademicstudiesStudentstodaytendtoleadverybusylives.Theymustattendclassesanddoallsortsofschoolwork,buttheyalsohavenumerousopportunitiestoparticipateinextracurricularactivitiessuchasclubsandstudentorganizations.Therearemanybenefitsthatcomewithbeinginvolvedinonesuchactivityinadditiontothosethatcomefrom ngwellinacademics.Amongthemareopportunitiestodevelopgoodsocialskills,lastingfriendships,andpracticalskillsthat,althoughnottaughtinacademicclasses,arenonethelessimportanttosuccessin 重申式開頭 +position（認(rèn)同+解釋 Extracurricularactivitieshelpstudentstocultivateeffectivesocialskills.membersofaclubororganization,studentsaresupposedtotrytheirbesttomakevaluablecontributionstotheeffortsofthegroup.Surelythen,somesocialskillsaredeveloped.(解釋句-原因why)Theseskillsincludeanabilitytocommunicateideasclearly,awillingnesstolistentoothers,andtheabilitytocooperatewiththem.(解釋句-是什么)Manyacademicclassesemphasizeindividualachievement,andthatisimportant,(體現(xiàn)比較)butbeingpartofaclubaffordsstudentsopportunitiesto句withagroup plishsomethinggreaterthanwhatonecoulddoonone’s解釋 Asecondbenefitofparticipatinginextracurricularactivitiesistheopportunitytomakefriends.( 句)Lastingfriendshipsareaninvaluablepartoflivingahappylife(解釋句-原因why為什么要發(fā)展友誼)Quiteoftenaclassroomsettingisnottheenvironmentformakingfriends,asstudentsareexpectedtoconcentrateontheinstructorandfocustheirattentiononthesubjectbeingtaught.(體現(xiàn)比較：課堂上不能發(fā)展友誼)Bycontrast,aclubisamuchmorerelaxedandcasualsetting,andthereisusuallymoretimetosocialize.Clubsalsobringpeopletogetherwhoshareinterestswhichisimportantwhenformingfriendships.發(fā)展友誼解釋 Athirdbenefitofextracurricularactivitiesisthattheyoftenallowstudentstodeveloppracticalskillsthatmaybeusefullaterinlife.( 句)Forexample,astudentwhoparticipatesinadebatingclubhasmanyopportunitiestopracticetheskillsofeffectivereasoningandpersuasion,whichcouldbeofgreatvalueinafuturecareer.Similarly,astudentwhobelongstoaserviceorganizationwilllearnmuchaboutcaringformembersofhisorhercommunity,andtheneedtohelpotherswhoarelessfortunate.(例證：范例兩個(gè)Theprincipalgoalofeducationistobringstudentsintoadulthoodwithalloftheskillstheyneedtofunctioneffectivelyinsociety.Thismeansbeingwellrounded.（表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)的重要性）Onemustbeproficientinvariousacademicsubjects,butonemustalsobeadeptatworkingwithothersandcooperatingtowardsacommonastheseareaspectsofdailylife.Themosteffectiveapproachtoeducationisonethatbalancesalloftheseneeds.Stu