2024屆高考英語寫作指導(dǎo)之如何寫出高分好句課件

如何寫出高分好句WRITING湊長句的技巧：5keys［who，when，where，what，why］124舉個(gè)例子：ThemanlivedinGuangdong.（5words）who-theman，fromUK，F(xiàn)elixwhen-6yearsagowhere-Guangzhou，Guangdongwhat-Englishteacherwhy-helovedteaching加工后：Sixyearsagoan（tall）EnglishmannamedFelixlived（happily）inGuangzhou（abigcityinGuangdong）asanEnglishteacherbecausehelovedteaching（somuch）.(20words)另外還可以添加adj.和adv.練習(xí)：原句：Westoodoutsidefor20minutes.加工后：Thismorningwestoodstillonthebusstopinfrontoftheschoolfornearly20minutesbecauseofthetrafficjam.積累：表示因果關(guān)系的連詞：原因for/forthereasonthatdueto/owingto/thankstobecause/becauseofas/since；inthat；resultfrom結(jié)果asaresultof；therefor/thus/so/sothatconsequently/asaconsequenceaccordingly因此，相應(yīng)地inevitably不可避免地加入環(huán)境，動(dòng)作，情感，時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，過渡sb.,withsth.inone'shand,doingB,didA,doingC,feeling/looking…例如：男孩跳入湖中嬉戲沖向湖邊rushtothelake脫掉衣服takeoffhisclothes跳入水中jumpintothewater原句：Theboyrushedtothelake,tookoffhisclothesandjumpedintothewater.升級(jí)版：Havingtakenoffhisclothes,theboyrushedtothelakeandjumpedintothewater.練習(xí)：歌手唱歌掃視觀眾glanceattheaudiencecastaglanceattheaudience深吸一口氣takeadeepbreath開始演唱begintosing（1）Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathandbegantosing.（2）Aftercastingaglanceattheaudience,thesingertookadeepbreathandbegantosing.練習(xí)：老人靜坐坐在地鐵上sitonthesubway盯著手機(jī)stareathisphone皺著眉頭knithisbrows/frown（1）Theoldmansatonthesubway,staringathisphoneandknittinghisbrows.（2）Sittingonthesubway,theoldmanstaredathisphone,knittinghisbrows.（3）Absorbedinreading,themansatstillonthesubway,frowning.包含多動(dòng)作的句子：（1）Sb.didA,didBanddidC.（2）Sb.didA,doingBanddoingC.（3）DoingBandC,sb.didA.（4）HavingdoneA,sb.didBandC.（5）SbdidAandB,doing.（6）After/BeforedoingA,sb.didBtodoC.例句：（1）Iclimbedoverthehighestmountain,foundmywayintothedeepforestandbroughtbacktheprincess.（2）Carryingthebestsword,Iwentintothedeepforestandbroughttheprincessback.thedenseforest,bringingbacktheprincess.（3）Iclimbedoverthehighestmountainandfoundmywayintothedenseforesttobringbacktheprincess.（4）Afterclimbingoverthehighestmountain,Ifoundmywayintothedenseforesttobringbacktheprincess.215643加情感：excited/thrilled(興奮的)joyful/overjoyed(快樂的，欣喜若狂的)amazed(驚訝的)delighted(高興的)satisfied(滿足的)sacred(害怕的)worried(擔(dān)心的)ashamed(羞愧的)nervous(緊張的)depressed(沮喪的)例句（1）Depressedandhelpless,theprincesscriedout.（原因/伴隨）（2）Hefinallyfoundhiswayintotheforest,exhaustedbutexcited.（結(jié)果）（3）Hebroughtbacktheprincess,feelingproudandexcited.（伴隨）

加個(gè)工具withsth.inone‘shandwithsth.onone’sheadwiththehelpofsb.withasmileonhis/herface例句：Heclimbedoverthehillwithaswordinhishand.He,withthehelpofanelf(精靈)，savedtheprincess.加過渡表“時(shí)間、用時(shí)”馬上:innotime,immediately那一刻:atthatmoment/timewhen/while/as早/中/晚:earlyinthemorning,inthelateafternoon,thenext/followingmorning表“先后”然后:(and)then,afterthat不久:afterawhile,soonafterwards,shortlyafter,beforelong最終:atlast,intheend,finally,eventuallyLoremIpsum

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70%70%70%70%70%多個(gè)狀語beforelong時(shí)間intotheforest地點(diǎn)tooursurprise過渡withthehelpofanelf工具

feeingproudandexcited情緒例句：（1）Tooursurprise,he,withthehelpofanelf,savedourprincess,feelingproudandexcited.（2）Carryingthebestsword