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好學(xué)義烏·名師云課Module8StoryTimeWriting義烏市毛店初中金斐審核人：義烏市教育研修院陳清偉七年級英語下冊·Fairytales（童話故事）FairytalesAllaroundtheworldparentstelltheirchildren

fairytales.stories:children

Inthestories,animalspeopleThestoriesusuallybeginwith:___________excitingOnceuponatime...OnceuponatimetherewasasmallboycalledTom.OnedayTomwantedtogoforawalkinthedarkforest.Hewalkedforashorttimeandthenhepickedsomeflowers.Next,henoticedalittlehouse.Heknockedonthedoorbutnobodyanswered.Heenteredthehouse.Therewasabigtable,abigchair,abigbowlandabigbear.ThenTomlookedatthebowloffoodwithbigeyes.ThebearaskedTom，“Areyouhungry?Trysomeofmyfood.”Tomtriedthefood.Finallytheyweregoodfriends.

Let'sread!whenwhowherewhatresult(結(jié)果)whysimplepasttense(一般過去時)/r??z?lt/

Let'slearn

Tipsoftellingastory:1.factors(要素)：

whenwhowherewhy/howwhatresult2.linkingwords(連接詞)：

Once

upon

a

time/Long

long

agoFirstthennextfinallyandbutsobecause...3.tense(時態(tài))：simplepasttense

一般過去時

/?f?kt?//?l??k??/

Let'stry!

GoldilocksandtheThreeBearsOnceuponatime…therewasalittlegirlcalledGoldilocks.drawnbyXunjiaying

Let'sspeak.看圖并用所給單詞造句。/?emp?r?/

Thefatherlovedthelittlegirl.Thefatherandlittlegirlplayedgamesinthegarden.Thelittlegirldiedinthesea.

ShechangedintoabirdnamedJingwei.Herfatherwatchedbirdandwasunhappy.Thebirddecidedtofilltheseawithpebbles（小石子）.fill…with…用…填滿…/?peblz/

將句子合并并使用順序連詞.如“and,so,but,because,first,next,then和

finally”連貫全文。Onceuponatime,therewasalittlegirlcalledNuwa.HerfatherwasEmperorYanandheloved_______________________________________________________________________________________________________

Let'swrite.OnceuponatimetherewasalittlegirlcalledNuwa.HerfatherwasEmperorYanandhelovedhisdaughterverymuch.Heoftenplayedwithher.Theywereveryhappy.Butoneday,hisdaughterdiedinthesea.ThenshechangedintoabirdnamedJingwei.Thefather

watcheditandhewasverysad.Jingweiwasalsosad.Finally,shedecidedtofilltheseawithpebbles.Onepossibleanswer:Onceuponatime,therewasalittlegirlcalledNuwa.HerfatherwasEmperor(皇帝)Yan

and

he

loved

hisdaughter.Theylivedinapalace(宮殿).They

playedinthegardenandwereveryhappy.Oneday,Nuwa

decidedtogo

totheseaintheboatbut

theweatherwasverybadandsoontheboatwasinpieces.

Shetriedto

swimbutshe

died.Then

Nuwa

changedinto

abirdcalledJingweiand

returned

hometoseeherfather.TheEmperorcried

because

Nuwadied.

Hewatched

thebirdandhewasunhappy.Finally,thebird

decidedto

returntothe

seaand

triedtofill

thesea

with

pebbles.anotherpossibleanswer:/?p?l?s/

Let'spractice.

從前，森林里住著狐貍媽媽和小狐貍。一天小狐貍餓了，狐貍媽媽去給她找食物，后來發(fā)生了什么樣的故事呢？請根據(jù)圖片提示寫一則英語小故事。intheforestmotherfoxbabyfoxahunterhungry/?h?nt?/Tips:

(1)此篇作文以“講故事”為主線，以介紹故事的發(fā)展為主要內(nèi)容，在寫作過程中始終滲透著本模塊的話題——“故事”。我們可確定在寫作過程中要運用的主要時態(tài)為一般過去時。

(2)實用短語儲備：

從前：

在森林里：決定做某事:

匆忙去某地：跑走：

onceuponatimeintheforestdecidetodosth.hurrytosp.runawayOnepossibleanswer:

Onceuponatime,therewasafoxandherbabyintheforest.One

day,thebabywashungryandcried.MotherFoxdecidedtogetsomefoodforherbaby,soshewenttoavillage.Shewassoluckythatshegotachickenandthenshehurriedtoherhouse.Whenshewasnearherhouse,thehuntercame.MotherFoxshouted,“It’sdangerous.Runquickly!”Finally,BabyFoxranawaybutMotherFoxdied.Howdoyoufeelaboutthisstory?從前有個叫司馬光的小孩，有一天他跟小伙伴們在院里玩耍。院子里有一口大水缸，有個小孩掉到缸里。別的孩子們一見出了事，哭喊起來。司馬光撿起一塊大石頭，向水缸扔去。水缸破了，缸里的水流了出來，司馬光救了這個小孩。請根據(jù)所給故事寫一篇英語短文,并談?wù)勀愕母惺?。寫作要求：語句連貫，60詞左右。提示詞匯：

院子

水缸

石頭

跌落

扔向B扔A打破

yardawatervatstonefall--fell（過去式）throw--threw（過去式）throwAatBbreak--broke（過去式）【思路點撥】1.梳理所給要點，明確寫作思路。(1)寫作思路：司馬光和小伙伴們玩耍→有個小孩掉進(jìn)院子里的大水缸→其他孩子哭喊→司馬光撿起石頭砸向水缸→小孩得救。(2)作文的時態(tài)整體用一般過去時，發(fā)表自己觀點用一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱用第三人稱。/ja:d//v?t//st??n//θr??//θru://breik//br??k/

2.可用詞匯、短語和句型。詞匯和短語：從前有一天和......一起玩在院子里掉進(jìn)哭撿起向......扔......流出救句型：從前，有個叫......的男孩。

onceuponatimeonedayplaywithintheyardfallinto(fellinto)crypickupthrow...at...runoutofsaveOnceuponatime,therewasaboycalled...

Onceuponatime,therewasaboycalledSimaGuang.Oneday,heplayedwithhisfriendsintheyard.Therewasabigwatervatintheyard.However,Achildfellintothewatervat.Otherchildrenbegantocry.Then,SimaGuangpickedupabigstoneand