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考研英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作三段論：第一段---描述圖畫(huà)或圖表第二段---解釋寓意第三段---給出評(píng)論第一段：第一句1、Asisshownabove,描述圖畫(huà)（倒裝）.Therehasbeenaheateddiscussionaboutapictureinthenewspaper.報(bào)紙上有一張圖畫(huà)引起人們廣泛的關(guān)注。描述圖畫(huà)注意：第一步：尋找圖畫(huà)的中心事物，并確定中心事物的位置。第二部：描述中心事物，可以從動(dòng)作和狀態(tài)兩個(gè)方面來(lái)描述。第三部;尋找中心事物周?chē)嚓P(guān)的事物，并進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的描述。模式：在圖畫(huà)中央有------(倒裝)，它-------（主謂一致、現(xiàn)在分詞、非限定性定語(yǔ)從句），周?chē)?----（獨(dú)立主格作狀語(yǔ)）第二句----總結(jié)Thepicture,atthefistglimpse,seemstobesimple,butonlyapenetratingsightcanpiercethroughitssuperficialmeaning.這幅畫(huà)初看好像很簡(jiǎn)單，但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看穿其膚淺的含義。Theauthor’srealpurposeisnotthefactitself,buttoleadustofindwhathidesbehindtheiceburg.作者的真實(shí)目的不是圖畫(huà)本身，而是要引導(dǎo)我們?nèi)ヌ角笤趫D畫(huà)背后究竟隱藏著什么。第二段第一句----觀點(diǎn)的提出(1)Thepicturetellsusthatnothingcanbecomparedwiththe重要主題.Innocountry,otherthanchina,ithasbeensaid,isthisphenomenonmoreobvious.(2)Thepicturedoesrevelcertaindisturbingsocialphenomenon,thatis,peopletendtooverlookthefactthat有害主題.(或Thepicturedoesrevealthat有害主題isnotonlyharmful,butalsodamaging.)Thepastdecadehaswitnessedahugedevelopmentineconomyowingtothereformandopening-uppolicycarriedout,bringingsomeproblemsatthesametime,withtheaboveonebeingtheforemost.在過(guò)去的十年間，由于改革開(kāi)放政策的執(zhí)行，我國(guó)的經(jīng)濟(jì)有了巨大的發(fā)展，但同時(shí)帶來(lái)了一些問(wèn)題，上面的問(wèn)題是最嚴(yán)重的。（或Innocountryotherthanchina,ithasbeensaidmisthisproblemmoreserous.）萬(wàn)能觀點(diǎn)：圖畫(huà)主題的重要性Nothingcanbecomparedwith······isnotonlynecessary,butalsoindispensable···方便和快捷主題（e.g.WideWorldWeb）providespeoplewithup-to-date,concreteandaccurateandvividinformation.主題（e.g.MSNandotherinstantmessengers）canshrinkthedistancebetweencitiesandevencontinents;smooththecommunicationbetweenresidentsandridofthebarrierbetweenpeople.安全角度主題cansecurehisfoodandshelter.主題canshieldpeoplefromvariouskindsofhazardsrangingfrominjury,robbery,assaultstotrafficaccidents.身心健康①（主題）canrelievenotonlypressurebutalsoanxietyandsuchproblems,stress,isolationandsolitude.②Bydoing(主題)peoplestayhealthy,andthereforepreventheartdiseases,hypertension,diabetesorfattiness.③(主題)canalsohaveaddedbenefitofincreasingone’sknowledgeandgivingusanewperspectiveoftheoutsideworld.生活?yuàn)蕵?lè)It’samajormeansofentertainmentthatrelievesone’spressure,boredom,stressandburden.表“受益”的詞組：Broadenone’smindEnrichone’sexperienceEnhancevigorandputmoreenthusiasmtoone’sworkItiswellreceivedasaninstructivemodeofentertainmentthatprovidespeoplewithnotonlyabulkofinformation,butasourceofimaginationaswell.Itprovidesavarietyofleisureactivitiesthatenhanceyourenergy,enthusiasmandcharm.Itaddsaspecialmeansofentertainmenttoyouseeminglytedious,routineandmonotonouslife.有助成長(zhǎng)和成功（自己和他人）Peoplecanobtainfinancialaids,materialsupport,mentalcomfort,orspiritualbackfromyoursupport.Theycandrawonexperiencefromyou.Throughyourspeeches,instructionsorassistance,theycanbroadentheirminds,increasetheirincome.Throughyourencouragement,theycultivatethespiritofcompetition,participationandcooperationandfinallyfindtheirownwaystofulfilltheirpursuitofhappiness.Thoughyourassistance,notonlycantheyaccumulatewealth,butwillalsoestablishtheircareer,fitintosociety,andevenattainsocialstatus.Peoplewhotreatotherswithlove,sincerity,sympathy,enthusiasm,hospitalityorgenerosityalwayswinrespectfromothers.Itdose/doesn’tnecessarilycultivatetalent,confidence,self—worth,self—relianceanddignity.文化價(jià)值觀Itcannothelppeopletreattheworldwithbenevolence,confidenceandtolerance.Itcansometimesintensifyconflictsandtensionsbetweennations.Itputharmonioushumanrelationshipindanger.Itcannotpromotemutualunderstanding.Itcanbreachthefriendlyties,andwidenthegapbetweenpeople.環(huán)境保護(hù)Itmeansthatcentralauthoritycansetasidemorefundstoeliminateairpollution,noisepollution,reducesoilerosionordesertification,preventthethinnessofozonelayers,reduceindustrialsewage,andrescuethedwindlingtropicaljungles.Itgovernmentshouldraisethepublicawarenessofenvironmentalpreservation,therebypromotingsustainabledevelopmentandcreatingamorelivableenvironment.社會(huì)宏觀角度Itcanminimizeinflation,economicstagnation,economicrecession,unemploymentrate.Itcanmaintainsocialorderandreducecrimerate.Itmeansthatrevolutionizethescientificlevelofacountry,meansofcocommunicationandqualityoflife.Itmeansthattheauthoritiescanallocatemorefundstotheconstructionandqualityofinfrastructurerangingfromkindergartens,hospitals,medicalcenter,museums,schoollibraries,trainstohighwaysandexpressways.Itmeansthatpeoplecanhaveequalopportunitytocollegeeducation,employments,self—realizationandpursuitofmaterialwealth.（二）、科學(xué)論據(jù)法AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofScience（CAS），···AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofSocialScience(CASS),···ChinaDailyinterviewedforpeoplefromfourprofessions–asurgeon,awhilecollarworker,acarpenterandafarmer.Thesurveydiscoversthatallofthemareoftheideathat主題重要或有害.（三）、舉例子①Ourhumanhistoryhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexamplesof···,withthefollowingonebeingtheforemost.我們?nèi)祟悮v史上與這個(gè)話題相關(guān)的例子有很多，下面這個(gè)是最有說(shuō)服力的。②Amongallthetouchingfactsrelatingto···thatIhavehoard,noticed,andexperienced,themostimpressiveoneis···在我所聽(tīng)到的、看到的、經(jīng)歷過(guò)的所有和這個(gè)話題相關(guān)的例子之中，最有說(shuō)服力的是···第四句（結(jié)尾句——虛擬語(yǔ)氣和利弊句）虛擬語(yǔ)氣：（1）積極的主題如果沒(méi)有···，我們可能根本做不了···Weretherenosth,neverwouldwedosth.（2）消極的主題如果情況繼續(xù)下去，我們將付出更加昂貴的代價(jià)。Werethesituationtocontinueasitis,wewouldpaythehighprice.e.g. Werethetendencytocontinueasitis,ourfuturegenerationwouldnotbothertothinkofexcuseforus.利弊句：(1)弊大于利Thedisadvantagesovershadowthebenefits.Thebenefitsareinlargemeasurecanceledoutbytheproblems.(2)利大于弊Theproblemsseemtobepalecomparedwitht