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Howtoimproveyourwriting解讀大綱作文整體要求：1.完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。2.覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點3.應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和高級詞匯4.語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯誤但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。5.有效地使用了語句的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊明明可以靠顏值，偏偏要靠才華優(yōu)秀作文特點層次不亂句式多變亮點若干巧妙串聯(lián)蠢錯不犯整潔卷面蠢錯不犯你可能犯過的錯誤IverylikeChineseculture.Therehavemanystudentstalkingoutside.Therearemanystudentstalkoutside.Itseemstobesomethingwrongwithhimtoday.MyhometownwhichislocatedontheEastSea.Weshouldkeeptheroomiswarm.高級詞匯1.詞匯多樣：thinkguess/suppose/assume/consider/insist2.短語優(yōu)先：Icannotbearit.Iwantit.IthinkIunderstandit.Icannotputupwithit.Iamlookingforwardit.Iholdtheviewthat/AsfarasIamconcerned/Frommyperspective…Ifigureout/makesenseofit.3.棄舊取新Therearemanyways.Weallhavethesamechance.Weallpossessthesamealternative.Thereexistmanyways.我相信通過這些活動你會更好地理解和欣賞這個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。Ibelieveyouwillhaveabetterunderstandingandappreciationofthetraditionalfestivalthroughtheactivity.Iamconvincedyouwillhaveabetterunderstandingandappreciationofthetraditionalfestivalthroughtheactivity.如果盡早回復(fù)我會不勝感激。I’dappreciateitifyoucouldwritebackearlier.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldwritebackatyourearliestconvenience.PracticeWeallthinkheisaverygoodman.2.WeholdthelectureinordertospreadChinesetraditionalculture.WeholdthelectureforthepurposeofspreadingChinesetraditionalculture.Weallthinkhighlyofhim.3.Iamwritingtogetanchance.IamwritingtoyouinthehopethatImayobtainanopportunity.1.SuddenlyIthoughtoftraditionalcultureliketeacultureisverycharmingandvaluable.Itsuddenlyoccurstomethattraditionalcultureliketeacultureisofgreatcharmandhugevalue.

2.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.Thanksto/Owingtotheweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.3.Asformyfavoritesport,Iaminterestedinfootball.Asformyfavoritesport,Iamfascinatedby/crazyaboutfootball.高級句式豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)各種從句非謂語倒裝with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)獨立主格強調(diào)句型虛擬…No.1各種從句歡迎所有學(xué)生參加這個活動，大家可以學(xué)到有關(guān)賽龍舟的知識。Allthestudentsarewelcometoparticipateintheactivity.

Wecanobtainknowledgeaboutdragonboatintheactivity.Allthestudentsarewelcometoparticipateintheactivitywherewecanobtainknowledgeaboutdragonboat.大學(xué)畢業(yè)后，我抽空去旅游了，這是一個明智的決定。Aftergraduatingfromcollege,Itooksometimeofftogotravelling,anditisawisedecision.Aftergraduatingfromcollege,Itooksometimeofftogotravelling,whichisawisedecision.Tips:句型:主句，which…,翻譯成“這”Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudents’compositionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhen但是最令我感興趣的是文學(xué)書籍，尤其是那些著名作家寫的。

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Practice我強烈建議你提前讀一些關(guān)于唐代歷史的書，從長遠(yuǎn)看來這肯定會對你學(xué)中文很有幫助。我很想?yún)⒓舆@個活動，因為我可以交到很多朋友。Ilongto/ameagertoparticipateintheactivity

whereIcanmakemanyfriends.IstronglysuggestthatyoushouldreadsomebooksonthehistoryofTangDynastyinadvance,whichwilldefinitelybenefityoualotinlearningChineseinthelongrun.No.2.非謂語IlearnthataChinesePaintingExhibitionwillbeheldinthislocalcity.Iamwritingtoapplytobeavolunteerofyourteam.(2019全國I)____________thataChinesePaintingExhibitionisscheduledtobeheldinthislocalcity,

Iammorethandelightedtowritethislettertoapplytobeavolunteerofyourteam.HavinglearnedThelecturewillbeheldinthelecturehallofourschoolfrom8am.to11amthisSunday.Itisveryinteresting.Thelecture______beheldinthelecturehallofourschoolnextSundayisveryinteresting.tobe你寫的句子：I

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painting.Iwanttobeavolunteer.李華寫的句子：IlikeChinese

paintingsomuchthatIwanttobeavolunteer.你今天應(yīng)該寫出的句子：SomuchdoIlikeChinesepaintingthatIwanttobeavolunteer.

口訣：so加adj放句首，前面謂語部分用疑問式，剩下直接抄上來邏輯關(guān)系：因果No.3.倒裝努力學(xué)習(xí)才能獲得高分你寫的句子：Ifweworkhardandwecanachievehighgrades.

你今天要寫的句子：Onlyifweworkhardcanweachievehighgrades.Tips:條件句/時間狀語都可以用到，翻譯成：只有…才.使用口訣：only加狀語/介短放句首，前面謂語部分用疑問式，剩下直接抄上來Onlybyworkinghardcanweachievehighgrades.你們絕對不能玩游戲你寫的句子：Youmustn’tplaygames.你今天要寫的句子:Never/undernocircumstances/…shouldweplaygames.任何否定句都可以用倒裝，口訣：否定詞放句首，前面謂語部分用疑問式，剩下直接抄上來本年度最火句子：notonly…butalso…ItwillbearealfeastandalsoitcanhelpyouunderstandtraditionalChineseculturefurther.NotonlywillitbearealfeastbutalsoitcanhelpyouunderstandtraditionalChineseculturefurther.PracticeHerclassissointerestingthatwealllikeher.Sointerestingisherclassthatwealllikeher.Ishouldnothavemadesuchacarelessmistake.NevershouldIhavemadesuchacarelessmistake如果我是你，我會接受這些建議的。（虛擬語氣）IfIwereyou,Iwouldtaketheadvice.直到我成為我們班的班長，我才意識到團(tuán)隊合作的重要性?恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞一篇好的書面表達(dá)，還應(yīng)該行文連貫流暢，具有“邏輯美”。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊，使文章更為地道，更具“英語味”。記得使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，如:英語作文很注重句子間的啟、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合,這在很大程度上依賴于過渡詞語。1)遞進(jìn)型:besides,otherwise,what’smore,thus,moreover,inaddition2)解釋型:thatis(tosay),inotherwords,inthesameway3)轉(zhuǎn)折型:however,nevertheless,but,yet4)列舉型:firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally,first(ofall),then?afterthat?atlast,first?then?next?finally,ontheonehand?ontheother(hand),atthesametime,meanwhile,suchas?andsoon,foronething?foranother(thing)?

5)原因型:because,becauseof,owingto,dueto,onaccountof,since,as,nowthat?6)結(jié)果型:so,therefore,thus,asaresult,therefore,hence我喜歡運動。一般表達(dá)：I

like

sports.較好表達(dá)：I

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English.較好表達(dá)：Jack

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English.

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foreigners

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English

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monitor

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