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翻譯選材來源于編譯平臺上的該文本是赫芬頓》于2014年12月13日的一篇健康類。筆者對整篇文章進行了翻譯，主要內(nèi)容為最健康的10個州被評選的原因以及影響人健康的重要因素分全文的關(guān)于最近評選出10個健康指數(shù)最高的州，文章就影響為筆者一直在編譯平臺上做稿件的編譯以往相關(guān)的積累可降低翻譯過 （如圖關(guān)整理，以便于翻譯過進行查閱（詳見附件二）翻譯中的及策來源的平行文本或醫(yī)學詞典，如： 就primarycarephysicians一詞為例展示對該問題的解決過程。原文：…Whenitcomestothequalityofclinicalcare,onceagain,thehealthieststatesstoodout.Sixofthese10stateswereamongthetop10nationallyfortheconcentrationofprimarycarephysiciansandhighestfigureinthe在中進行搜索，結(jié)果顯示primarycarephysicians有“初級原文：…Whiletherehavebeenvastimprovementsininfant-ratesandsmokingratesoverthelastseveraldecades,theUnitedStatesstillstruggleswithobesityanddiabetesinparticular.，譯文：…雖然在過去的幾十年里的嬰兒率和吸煙率有了很大的改善,但如今的人民仍飽受肥胖癥和的折磨。(見附錄1)，主語;句法重形合,要求句子各成分特別清楚,以免結(jié)構(gòu),影響句意。而漢語則是顯著的語言,突出,主語不突出;句法重意合,指代關(guān)系主語難以一眼看清,需要讀者用心識別因而在英譯漢過,確定主語時須考慮原文：…Yet,accordingtoRandall,“Weknowthatjusthavinghealthinsuranceisn’tenough.It’salsoaccesstocare,andmakinggoodwereceivewhenwedoaccessthehealthcaresystem.”譯文：…然而，博士說道“我們深知光有醫(yī)療是遠遠不夠的，健康還涉及到、生活方式的選擇以及醫(yī)療系統(tǒng)中臨床護理的質(zhì)量”達信息焦點的一個重要語序的不同安排就是為了適應(yīng)表示不同信息焦點的原文：…Negativehealth eswerefarlesscommoninthehealthieststatesthanintheleasthealthyones.Theprevalenceofdueinparttorisingobesityrates.厲，努力學習專業(yè)知識，搜索的可用資源，爭取早日成為一名合格的譯者。Nida,EugeneA..OnTranslation|M|.譚載喜譯.中國對外翻譯公司,1984李長栓.非文學翻譯. :外語教學與研究 源文本來源：24/7Wall ByThomasC. Source10MostHealthyStatesinAmericansarebynomeansthehealthiestpeopleintheworld.Whiletherehavebeenvastimprovementsininfant-mortalityratesandsmokingratesoverthelastseveraldecades,theUnitedanddiabetesinparticular.Lastyear,thenation’sobesityrateincreasedto29.4%ofadultsfrom27.6%theyearbefore.雖然在過去的幾十年里，的嬰兒死亡率和吸煙率有了很大的改善,但如今的人民仍飽受肥胖癥和的折27.6%29.4%。，，TheUnitedHealthFoundation’s2014HealthRankingsreportexaminedbothdeterminantsandhealthes.Itincludedsuchfactorsashealthybehaviors,qualityofhealthcare,health,thepresenceofdiseasesanddeathsfromillnessesacrossthenation.Healthvariesconsiderablybetweenstates.Basedonthisyear’seditionofAmerica’sHealthRankings,HawaiiandMississippiareonceagainthehealthiestandleast2014年健康衛(wèi)生健康Negativehealtheswerefarlesscommoninthehealthieststatesthanintheleasthealthyones.TheprevalenceofdiabeteshasincreaseddramaticallyinUnitedStatesinrecentyears,升的肥胖率。在健康指數(shù)最高的10allofthehealthieststates,thenationalrateofnearly10%ofadults.Inaddition,themajorityofthehealthieststateswerealsocardiovasculardeathsper州,成人均低于發(fā)病10%這些城市也是10大心血管率最低Thecostofpoorhealthcanbemeasuredinyearsoflife.TheCentersforDiseaseControlandPrevention(CDC)tracksprematureyearslostwhenpeopledonotlivetoage75.Thisyear,theCDCestimatedthatnearly7,000yearswerelostforevery100,000allofthehealthieststates,onewhich,Massachusetts,led身體狀況不佳往往會影響的長短。疾病控制和預(yù)防中心研究過75和預(yù)防中心統(tǒng)計，每十萬個人加起70005345nationwith5,345estimatedyearslostper100,000people.Healthybehaviorandhealth.AccordingtoDr.RhondaRandall,thechiefmedicalofficerfortheUnitedRetireeSolutionsandasenioradvisortotheUnitedHealthFoundation,theUnitedStateshastackledissueslikeinfantmortalityandsmokingphysicalinactivityandobesity.Thosearethingsthatarecompleywithinourcontrol,”Randallsaid.Lessthan75%ofAmericansreportedregularphysicalactivity.Innineofthethan70%ofpeopleexercised

，?？档闹饕蛩亍ａt(yī)療退休人員解決方案的首席醫(yī)療官及衛(wèi)生基金會高級顧問朗達·博士（RhondaRandall）表示已經(jīng)解決了嬰兒死亡率和吸煙等問題定期鍛煉身體的人不超過75%。然70%。，。Moneyandemploymentclearlyyrolesinhealth.Thehealthieststates wealthiest,andeachhada eabovethemedianin2013.Allbutoneof入均高于平均收入同年數(shù)據(jù)顯示healthieststatesalsohadaunemploymentratethanthe均低于7.4%的失業(yè)率因為很多rateof7.4%lastyear.國人的工作都配有醫(yī)療，所以失unemploymentratesimprove率低意味著的人可以享受醫(yī)療likelihoodofreceiving險10個最健康的州的醫(yī)療覆蓋insurance,asmanyAmericans均高于國內(nèi)醫(yī)療覆蓋率，其中有coveredthroughtheirwork.All個州的無醫(yī)療居民比率比國內(nèi)平thehealthieststatesalso14.6%bettercoverageratesthannationalcoveragerate.Andthreeofthe10states,percentageofresidentshealthcoveragewaslessthanthenationalfigureofknowthatjusthavinghealthinsuranceisn’tenough.It’saccesstocare,andmakinggooddecisionsforourlifestylechoices,andthenthequalityofaccessthehealthcaresystem.”Whenitcomestothequalityofclinicalcare,onceagain,thethese10stateswereamongthetopofprimarycarephysicians,andMassachusettshadmorethan200doctorsforevery100,000residents,thehighestfigureinthecountry.Randallwentontosaythathealthreallyneedsto

然而博士說道光有醫(yī)療是遠遠不夠的，健康還涉及到、生活方式的選擇以及醫(yī)療保6個州位居十大基層，前領(lǐng)先。，understoodbroadly.“It’snotcare,orwhenyougotoseeyourdoctor,it’salsoabouttheenvironmentwithwhichwelive.”asafeenvironment.Ninthgradershadrelativelylowchancesofgraduatinghighschoolinmanyoftheleasthealthystates,forexample.Additionally,theviolentwerefarhigherthanthenationalrateof387sper率遠遠高于每10萬人387起事件的率Publicisyetanothercontributor.WhiletheUnitedStatesspent$90percapitaonpublichealthservices,severalthehealthieststates—國家政策是另一個影響健康的因素。雖然每年平均為每位公。。Vermont,Massachusetts,andNorthDakota—spentmorethan$100perresident.Yet,amajorityofthehealthieststatesactuallyspentlesspercapitaonpublichealthexinedthat“publichealthspendingisanimportantmeasure,whichiswhyweincludedit.But,it’salsoimportanthoweffectivetheprogramsarethatthemoneyusedfor…Itis于國家人均花費解釋道“公共BasedondataprovidedbyUnitedHealthFoundation’sAmerica’sHealthRankings,24/7thehighestandlowestoverallscores.Thesescoreswerebasedontwoseparatecategories:determinantsand 健康數(shù)據(jù)《24/7華爾街》評出了