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高考書面表達復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)ByMrWang第二節(jié)書面表達(滿分25分假定你是李華，你的巴基斯坦朋友Khan(屬狗）對中國文化興趣濃厚，他即將過生日。你在購物網(wǎng)站為他購買了一件禮物“狗”，請寫一封郵件，告知他查收。內(nèi)容包括：1.生日祝福;2.屬相“狗”的含義；3.物品到達時間。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。武漢市2018屆高三畢業(yè)生二月調(diào)考WritingStepsStep1審題文體、人稱、時態(tài)Step2構(gòu)思要點、用詞、造句Step3謀篇書寫、分段、排版第二節(jié)書面表達(滿分25分假定你是李華，你的巴基斯坦朋友Khan(屬狗）對中國文化興趣濃厚，他即將過生日。你在購物網(wǎng)站為他購買了一件禮物“狗”，請寫一封郵件，告知他查收。內(nèi)容包括：1.生日祝福;2.屬相“狗”的含義；3.物品到達時間。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。武漢市2018屆高三畢業(yè)生二月調(diào)考文體：告知信人稱：第一人稱要點時態(tài):一般過去時一般現(xiàn)在時一般將來時score:21score:23score:24好作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句子正確：句子成分、句子結(jié)構(gòu)內(nèi)容完整：增加細節(jié)、120字左右行文連貫：關(guān)聯(lián)詞匯、邏輯詞匯高級表達：高級詞匯、高級句型書寫美觀：書寫整潔、三段排版一、句子怎樣才算正確？1.簡單句(simplesentence)主+系+表/主+謂+(賓)IamLiHua.Iamwritingaletter.2.并列句(compoundsentence)簡單句+簡單句IamLiHuaandIamwritingaletter.3.復(fù)合句(complexsentence)主句+從句IamLiHuawhoiswritingaletter.二、怎樣增加細節(jié)？①增加同位語、介詞短語Iknowyouwerebornin2006,theYearofDogaccordingtoChinesetradition.②增加非謂語動詞短語So,Iboughtatoyforyou,hopingyouwillbeasluckyasadog.③增加狀語從句、定語從句、名詞從句Dogsareourfriends,ourbestcompanions,aswellasthemostpopularanimalsintheworld,whoareloyaltohumankinds.三、如何使文章連貫？1.表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but,yet,however,instead,otherwise，onthecontrary,afterall.2.表示因果關(guān)系：since,as,because,so,thus,therefore,asaresult(of),asaconsequence(of).3.表示條件關(guān)系：if,unless,onconditionthat,so/aslongas.三、如何使文章連貫？4.表示時間關(guān)系：when,while,as,after,before,since,assoonas,themoment,theminute,not…until,nosooner…than,hardly/scarcely…when.5.表示先后順序：firstly…secondly…finally…,firstofall/aboveall/tobeginwith…what’smore/inaddition…lastbutnottheleast…；ontheonehand,…;ontheotherhand,…;foronething...,foranother三、如何使文章連貫？6.進行舉例說明：forinstance,forexample,suchas.7.表達個人看法：inmyopinion/view,asfarasI’mconcerned,asweknow,asisknowntoall/us.8.引出話題：Asfor/tosth.Whenitcomesto(doing)sth...,besides,what’smore,inaddition.9.總結(jié)話題：onthewhole,inshort,allinall,ingeneral,inaword.1.使用并列句【原文】Tomstudiedveryhard.Hepassedtheexam.【修改】Tomstudiedveryhardand/sohepassedtheexam.四、如何使用高級表達？2.使用非謂語動詞【原文1】Theywentbacktoschool.Theysangandlaughed.【修改1】Theywentbacktoschool,singingandlaughing.【原文2】AfterIhadcollectedtheinformation,Ibegantoresearch.【修改2】Havingcollectedtheinformation,Ibegantoresearch.四、如何使用高級表達？3.使用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)【原文1】Myfathersatinthesofa.Anewspaperwasinhishand.【修改1】Myfathersatinthesofawithanewspaperinhishand.【原文2】AfterIhaddonemyhomework,Iwenttobed.【修改2】Withmyhomeworkdone,Iwenttobed.四、如何使用高級表達？4.使用定語從句【原文1】Weloveourlibrary.Itisagoodplacetostudyin.【修改1】Weloveourlibrary,whichisagoodplacetostudyin.【原文2】IwenttoBeijingyesterday.Isawmanyinterestingthingsthere.【修改2】IwenttoBeijingyesterdaywhereIsawmanyinterestingthings.四、如何使用高級表達？5.使用狀語從句【原文】Hegotupearly.Hecouldcatchtheearlybus.【修改】Hegotupearlysothat/inorderthathecouldcatchtheearlybus.四、如何使用高級表達？6.使用名詞性從句【原文1】Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.【修改1】Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.【原文2】Asisknowntousall,Chinahasthelargestpopulationintheworld.【修改2】ItisknowntousallthatChinahasthelargestpopulationintheworld.四、如何使用高級表達？7.使用倒裝句【原文1】Wecangethighmarksonlyinthisway.【修改1】Onlyinthiswaycanwegethighmarks.【原文2】Although/Thoughheisold,heoftenworkshard.【修改2】Oldas/thoughheis,heoftenworkshard.四、如何使用高級表達？8.使用強調(diào)句【原文1】Mybravedogsavedmylittlesister.【修改1】Itwasmybravedogthatsavedmylittlesister.【原文2】Ididn’tgotosleepuntilIhadfinishedmyhomework.【修改2】ItwasnotuntilIhadfinishedmyhomeworkthatIwenttosleep.四、如何使用高級表達？9.使用虛擬語氣【原文1】Iamnotabird.Ican’tflyinthesky.【修改1】IfIwereabird,Icouldflyinthesky.【原文2】Youhadn’tfollowedmyadvice,soyoudidn’tpasstheexam.【修改2】

Hadyoufollowedmyadvice,youwouldhavepassedtheexam.四、如何使用高級表達？10.使用套話Howareyourecently?Haven’tseenyousincelasttimewespentaweektogetherinWuhan.I'mwritingtotellyou...Thereasonwhy...isthat...Iwouldbeverygrateful/appreciateitifyou...四、如何使用高級表達？Tip1:晚詞優(yōu)先1.adj.困難的黯然低分詞：difficult閃光高分詞：challenging2.adj.美麗的黯然低分詞：beautiful閃光高分詞：attractive/appealing/breathtaking3.v.生氣黯然低分詞：getangry閃光高分詞：beovercome/overwhelmedwithanger五、如何使用高級詞匯？Tip2:詞組優(yōu)先1.

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使用黯然低分詞：use閃光高分詞：make(good)useof/takeadavantageof2.adj.

有好處的黯然低分詞：beneficial閃光高分詞：beof(great)benefit3.v.

影響黯然低分詞：affect/influence閃光高分詞：haveaneffect/influence/impacton五、如何使用高級詞匯？Tip3:具體化優(yōu)先1.MrWuisagoodteacher.2.Theactivityissuccessful.Theactivitydisplaysourtalentsandenrichesourlives.MrWuisakind,patientandknowledgeableteacher.五、如何使用高級詞匯？Whichhandwritingisbeautiful?Whichhandwritingisbeautiful?Whichhandwritingisbeautiful?Whichhandwritingisbeautiful?Handwriting意大利斜體Handwriting衡水體第二節(jié)書面表達(滿分25分假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Jim對中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日感興趣，請向他介紹一下中國的清明節(jié)(theTomb-sweepingDay)。內(nèi)容包括：1.清明節(jié)含義;2.清明節(jié)活動；3.你的感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。HomeworkFestival節(jié)日ActivitiesLanternFestival春節(jié)TocelebratetheNewyear,wecounteddown(倒數(shù))forit.SpringFestival元宵節(jié)Seeingfromthetopofthehill,Ienjoyedthespringouting(