應(yīng)用文講評回復(fù)咨詢慈善義賣課件-2023屆高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

2023.3寧波十校應(yīng)用文假定你是李華，

你校學(xué)生會剛舉辦了“慈善義賣”(CharitySale)活動。你的澳大利亞網(wǎng)友David對這個活動很感興趣，寫郵件向你了解基本情況。請你給他寫一封回信，介紹此次活動的有關(guān)情況。要點如下：1.活動目的和內(nèi)容；2.你的心得體會。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；（-2）2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。體裁時態(tài)人稱語氣要點意識審題告知信（回復(fù)咨詢）一般過去時(描述慈善義賣活動)+一般現(xiàn)在時(第一段和第三段)第三人稱(活動介紹時)+第一人稱(個人心得體會)+第二人稱(交際目的)informal&friendly—e-pal1.活動目的和內(nèi)容；2.你的心得體會。讀者意識和主題意識踩分點比重多P1寫作背景+寫作目的——很感興趣+介紹有關(guān)情況P2活動目的和內(nèi)容+你的心得體會P3實現(xiàn)交際目的(期待回信)文章結(jié)構(gòu)Knowingthatyou’reinterestedin…,I’mwritingtotellsbsth.;sharesth.withsb;introducesthtosb.Ifyouwanttoknowmore,feelfreetoaskme.Haveyoueverparticipatedinsomethingsimilar?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Aimingto+do目的，theCharitySalewasheld+地點+時間(從小到大)[+組織者].P2

活動目的和內(nèi)容+你的心得體會tookplacekickedoffIfanevent,game,series,ordiscussion

kicksoff,or

iskickedoff,itbegins.開始(事件、比賽等)AimedatdoingWiththepurposeofdoingsthInordertodoTodointheschoollecturehall/ontheschoolplayground一個過去的時間點StudentUnion慈善義賣1+1(物質(zhì)意義+精神意義)慈善義賣物品someunwanted/unused

butstillserviceable(能用的)/usefulitemslikesecond-handclothes,booksandsoon.homemadecakes/cookies/snackshandicrafts(手工藝品)madebystudents慈善義賣內(nèi)容sellthematheavily

discountedprices/atpricesbelow

fair

market

valuedonatethemoneyweraisedtocharitiesTheCharitySaleconsistedofmanyremarkableparts/activities,rangingfromsellinghomemadecakesandsecond-handitemsatdiscountedpricestodonatingthemoneyweraisedtocharitiesaswellassomewonderfulperformancesaddingcolortotheactivity.

Withasloganof“TogetherWeCanMakeADifference”,thisactivityaimedtoraisemoneyforkidsinpoverty-hit

mountainous

regionsinChina.Duringthe3-hourbazaar(義賣),sellerssoldmanyunused

items

broughtfromhome,ranging

fromelectronicdevicestooldfancyclothes,mostly

ataprettylowprice.Themoney,alongwiththeleftgoods,went

directlytotheRedCrossandwouldbedistributedtothoseneedychildren.Thehighlightwasthatallthoseinvolvedwere

giventhe“LoveAward”asarewardfortheirgoodness(善良).你的心得體會Asavolunteer/Forme,itwasawonderfulexperiencetohavethechancetohelptheneedyandmakemeabettermyself.Throughtheactivity,Iclearlyunderstoodanysmallkindnesscouldbeofgreatvalueandwantedtolendahelpinghandunceasingly.gainasenseofsatisfactionfromdoinggooddeedsrealizethatifwealldoourbit(盡本分)tomakeacontributiontothe

charitablecause(事業(yè)),thesocietywillbebetter