大學英語四級作文課件

試卷構成聽力理解35%對話和短文25%，復合式聽寫10%2.閱讀理解35%仔細閱讀25%，快速閱讀10%3.完形填空10%4.寫作和翻譯20%寫作15%，翻譯5%總分710，425，550試卷構成聽力理解35%總分710，425，550各部分的分值分布計算（百分制）聽力理解長短對話和短文共25題，每題1分聽寫單詞共8題，每題0.5分，聽寫句子共3題，

每題2分。2.閱讀理解快速閱讀共10題，每題1分仔細閱讀

SectionA詞匯閱讀共10題，每題0.5分。

SectionB篇章閱讀共10題，每題2分。3.完形填空共10題，每題0.5分4.寫作15分

翻譯共5題，沒題1分各部分的分值分布計算（百分制）聽力理解考試時間及流程9:00-11:20(考試時間125分鐘，其余15分鐘用于收發(fā)答題卡，聽力試音9:00發(fā)答題卡1和答題卡2（答題卡1用于作文和快速閱讀，答題卡2用于其他題型。9：10正式考試9：10—9：40寫作（9：35發(fā)試題冊）9：40—9：55快速閱讀9：55—10：00收答題卡110：00—10：35ListeningComprehesion10：35—11：00ReadinginDepth11：00—11：15Cloze11：15—11：20Translation11：20收答題卡2，考試結束考試時間及流程9:00-11:20(考試時間125分鐘，其大學英語四級考試作文評分原則和評分標準一、大學英語四級教學大綱對寫作的要求

共1題，考試時間30分鐘。要求考生寫出不少于120詞的短文，試卷上可能給出題目，或規(guī)定情景，或要求看圖作文，或給出段首句要求續(xù)寫；或給出關鍵詞要求寫成短文。

大學英語四級考試作文評分原則和評分標準一、大學英語四級教學大

要求能夠正確表達思想，意義連貫，無重大語法錯誤。寫作的內容包括日常生活和一般常識。短文寫作部分的目的是測試學生運用英語書面表達思想的初步能力。

要求能夠正確表達思想，意義連貫，二、評分原則

1.檢查考生是否達到大學英語教學大綱規(guī)定的教學要求，對作文的評判應以此要求為準則

2.作文題采用總體

(GlobalScoring)評分方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎勵分(RewardScores)，而不是按語言點的錯誤數(shù)量扣分。

3.從內容和語言兩個方面對作文進行綜合評判。作文應表達題目所規(guī)定的內容。評分要考慮文章是否切題，是否清楚而合適地表達思想，語言錯誤是否造成理解障礙二、評分原則1.檢查考生是否達到大學英語教學大綱規(guī)定的2三、評分標準

1.本題滿分為15分

2.閱卷標準共分五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。三、評分標準1.本題滿分為15分2.閱卷標準共分五等14分——切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好。基本上無語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。

14分——切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好。基本上無11分——切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。

Nowmoreandmoremuseumsarefreewithoutchargetothepublic.Doesthatmakeanysence?Freeadmissiontomusuemshelpsussavemoney,butitalsoencouragesustogotomuseumstolearnsomethingelseandgetmoreknowledge.Thiscontributestoimprovethelivinglevelofthepublic.Itcancertainlyletusknowmoreaboutourcountryandtheworld,whichhasagoodeffectonourdevelopment.11分——切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。8分—基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當多，其中一些是嚴重錯誤。

Thereisainterestingandinstractivepicturewhichgoeslikethis:Moreandmoremuseumsarefreeforpeople.Theywantmorepeoplegotomuseums.Butsomepeoplearguethatitmakesometroubleforfreeforpeople.Thereasonistheeconomyofthemuseumswouldbeworsethanbefore.Worstofall,itmaytakeamessformorepeoplecometothemuseums.8分—基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言5分——基本切題。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。大部分句子均有錯誤，切多數(shù)為嚴重錯誤。

Inordertoenrichthecultureofpeople,moreandmoremusuemswereprovidedfreeadmissions.Somebodythoughtitwouldtakesomeproblemslikethat.Thefirst,becauseoffreeadmissionsofMuseumswereattractedalargenumbersofpeoplewhointerestedinallaroundtheworld.Andthosewhotakepartineffectedthetrafficcrowedaroundthemuseums,eventhoughaffectedpeoplewholiveinnexttothemuseumlife…5分——基本切題。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。大部分句子均有錯2分——條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎。

Nowdays,SocialappearedmoremorefreeAdmissionstomuseums.it’sinordertopeoplewastedmoney.Inadition,richinpeople’slifeandincreasemoreknowldeges2分——條理不清，思路紊亂，Nowdays,Soc0分-----白卷；作文與題目毫不相關；內容太少，無法評判；所寫內容無法看清0分-----白卷；作文與題目毫不相關；內容太少，四.作文得分技巧：1、卷面整潔，書寫清楚2、構思簡單，少犯錯誤3、中心突出，層次分明4、固定經典，名言注目5、重在變化，寧簡勿濫大學英語四級作文ppt課件五.寫作模版1）開頭萬能公式：1．

開頭萬能公式一：名人名言

A

proverb

says,

“

Youcannotburnthecandleatbothends.（魚與熊掌不能兼得）”

---適用于已記住的名言

It

goes

without

saying

that（毋庸置疑，不言而喻）

wehavetomakeachoicebecausewecannothavethingsbothways.---適用于自編名言As

everyone

knows,

no

one

can

deny

that…五.寫作模版1）開頭萬能公式：1．

開頭萬能公式一：名人2．

開頭萬能公式二：數(shù)字統(tǒng)計

要想更有說服力，就應該用實際的數(shù)字來說明。According

to

a

recent

survey,

about

78.9%

of

the

college

students

wanted

to

further

their

study

after

their

graduation.2．

開頭萬能公式二：數(shù)字統(tǒng)計要想更有說服力，就應該用實際下面隨便幾個題目我們都可以這樣編造

HonestyAccording

to

a

recent

survey,

about

78%

of

thereasonsforleavethatthecollegestudentsaskedforarefeigned.Travel

by

BikeAccording

to

a

recent

survey,

about86%ofthepeoplepreferredtorideabicyclewhentheytakeashort-distancetrip.下面隨便幾個題目我們都可以這樣編造HonestyYouthAccording

to

a

recent

survey,

about70%ofthesparetimeofstudentsarespendonentertainmentinacertainuniversityinthesouth.Five-day

Work

Week

Better

than

Six-day

Work?According

to

a

recent

survey,about98%ofpeopleagreedtoworkfivesdaysaweek.更多句型：A

recent

statistics

shows

that

…

YouthAccording

to

a

recent

su2)結尾萬能公式：

1．

結尾萬能公式一：作結論

Obviously,

we

can

draw

the

conclusion

that

good

manners

arise

from

politeness

and

respect

for

others.To

sum

up,

…In

conclusion,

…In

brief,…On

account

of

this,…

Thus,it

can

be

concluded

that…,Therefore,

we

can

find

that…2)結尾萬能公式：1．

結尾萬能公式一：作結論Obv2．

結尾萬能公式二：建議

Obviously,

it

is

high

time

that

we

took

some

measures

to

solve

the

problem.Accordingly,

I

recommend

that

some

measures

be

taken.Consequently,

to

solve

the

problem,

some

measures

should

be

taken.2．

結尾萬能公式二：建議Obviously,

it

is六.寫作的“七項基本原則”一）

長短句原則

:在文章第一段（開頭）用一長一短，且先長后短As

a

creature,

I

eat;

as

a

man,

I

read.

Although

one

action

is

to

meet

the

primary

need

of

my

body

and

the

other

is

to

satisfythe

intellectual

need

of

mind,

they

are

in

a

way

quite

similar.二）

主

題

句原則:要寫一個主題句，放在文章的開頭或者結尾，讓人一目了然，比較保險。To

begin

with,

you

must

work

hard

at

your

lessons

and

be

fully

prepared

before

the

exam.

Without

sufficient

preparation,

you

can

hardly

expect

to

answer

all

the

questions

correctly.六.寫作的“七項基本原則”一）

長短句原則:在文章第一三）

一

二

三原則

考官們看文章必然要通過關鍵性的“標簽”來判定你的文章是否結構清楚，條理自然。1）first,

second,

third,

last×

2）firstly,

secondly,

thirdly,

finally3）the

first,

the

second,

the

third,

the

last4）in

the

first

place,

in

the

second

place,

in

the

third

place,

lastly5）to

begin

with,

then,

furthermore,

finally6）to

start

with,

next,

in

addition,

finally7）first

and

foremost,

besides,

last

but

not

least√×

×

×

√√三）

一

二

三原則考官們看文章必然要通過關鍵性的“標簽”四）

短語優(yōu)先原則

1）用短語會使文章增加亮點2）關鍵時刻思維短路，湊字數(shù)I

cannot

bear

it.==I

cannot

put

up

with

it.

I

want

it.==I

am

looking

forward

to

it.

四）

短語優(yōu)先原則1）用短語會使文章增加亮點2）關鍵時刻五）

多實少虛原則（詞匯的運用和替換）正確使用的情況下使詞義更生動豐富，少用常見詞，口語化詞匯（crazy,mad：insane）

走出房間，一般的詞是：walk

out

of

the

room但是小偷走出房間應該說：slip

out

of

the

room姑娘走出房間應該說：sail

out

of

the

room小孩走出房間應該說：dance

out

of

the

room老人走出房間應該說：stagger

out

of

the

room走出房間，一般的詞是：walk

out

of

the

rosmile(微笑)laugh(大笑)grin(露齒而笑)chuckle(暗笑)giggle(咯咯地笑)snicker(竊笑)guffaw(狂笑)roar(哄笑)chortle(歡笑)deride(譏笑)mock(嘲弄)jeer(譏笑)jest(取笑)smirk(得意地笑)smile(微笑)laugh1.(people,persons)individuals,characters,folks2.(good)positive,favorable,rosy，promising，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior3.(bad)dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill4.(some)asliceof,quietafew,several5.(inmyopinion)formypart,frommyownperspective

6.(helpful)beneficial,rewarding7.(very)exceedingly,extremely,intensely

8.(sb.beinterestedin)sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb,take/suckin9.(anger)indignation,wrath,rage,fury10.(cause)giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger1.(people,persons)individua六）

關系詞選擇原則：正確使用選擇關系詞，使文章邏輯性更強，聯(lián)系更加緊密

1）并列（串聯(lián)）可以在任何句子之間加andI

enjoy

music

and

he

is

fond

of

playing

guitar.如果是二者并列的，我們可以notonly…butalso…：Not

only

the

fur

coat

is

soft,

but

it

is

also

warm.其它的短語：besides,

furthermore,

likewise,

moreover六）

關系詞選擇原則：正確使用選擇關系詞，使文章1）并列（串2）轉折The

car

was

quite

old,

yet

it

was

in

excellent

condition.The

coat

was

thin,

but

it

was

warm.更多的短語：

despite

that,

still,

however,

nevertheless,

in

spite

of,

despite,3）因果then,

therefore,

consequently,

accordingly,

hence,

as

a

result,for

this

reason,

so

that,2）轉折The

car

was

quite

old,

y1.英語四級作文句型表示原因

1)Therearethreereasonsforthis.

2)Thereasonsforthisareasfollows.

3)Thereasonforthisisobvious.

4)Thereasonforthisisnotfartoseek.

5)Thereasonforthisisthat...

6)Wehavegoodreasontobelievethat...

2.英語四級作文句型表示好處

1)Ithasthefollowingadvantages.

2)Itdoesusalotofgood.

3)Itbenefitsusquitealot.

4)Itisbeneficialtous.

5)Itisofgreatbenefittous.

其他句型1.英語四級作文句型表示原因2.英語四級作文句型表3.英語四級作文句型表示壞處

1)Ithasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.

2)Itdoesusmuchharm.

3)Itisharmfultous.

4.英語四級作文句型表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能

1)Itisimportant(necessary，difficult，convenient,possible)forsb.todosth.

2)Wethinkitnecessarytodosth.

3)Itplaysanimportantroleinourlife.3.英語四級作文句型表示壞處5.表示措施1)Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.2)Weshouldtryourbesttoovercome(conquer)thedifficulties.3)Weshoulddoourutmostindoingsth.4)Weshouldsolvetheproblemsthatweareconfronted(faced)with.6.英語四級作文句型表示變化

1)Somechangeshavetakenplaceinthepastfiveyears.2)Agreatchangewillcertainlybeproducedintheworld’scommunications.3)Thecomputerhasbroughtaboutmanychangesineducation.5.表示措施7.英語四級作文句型表示事實、現(xiàn)狀

1)Wecannotignorethefactthat...

2)Noonecandenythefactthat...

3)Thereisnodenyingthefactthat...

4)Thisisaphenomenonthatmanypeopleareinterestedin.

5)However，that’snotthecase.8.英語四級作文句型表示比較

1)ComparedwithA，B...

2)IprefertoreadratherthanwatchTV.

3)Thereisastrikingcontrastbetweenthem.7.英語四級作文句型表示事實、現(xiàn)狀9.英語四級作文句型表示看法

1)Peoplehave(take，adopt，assume)differentattitudestowardssth.

2)Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.

3)Peopletakedifferentviewsof(on)thequestion.

4)Somepeoplebelievethat...Othersarguethat...10.英語四級作文句型表示結論

1)Inshort，itcanbesaidthat...

2)Itmaybebrieflysummedupasfollows.

3)Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove，wecancometotheconclusionthat...9.英語四級作文句型表示看法11.英語四級作文句型套語

1)It’swellknowntousthat...

2)Asisknowntous，...

3)Thisisatopicthatisbeingwidelytalkedabout.

4)Fromthegraph(table，chart)listedabove，itcanbeseenthat...

5)Asaproverbsays，"Wherethereisawill，thereisaway.

11.英語四級作文句型套語七）

句式多變原則(簡單句，并列句，復雜句）

獨立主格The

weather

being

fine,

a

large

number

of

people

went

to

climb

the

Western

Hills.Africa

is

the

second

largest

continent,

its

size

being

about

three

times

that

of

China.定語從句主語從句賓語從句強調句，倒裝句同位語被動句其他一些非謂語排比句，并列句，前提：句子正確的情況下可使用復合句或其他復雜句，否則還是以簡單句為安全保險七）

句式多變原則(簡單句，并列句，復雜句）獨立主格Th文章主體段落遵循的兩個方法：一、舉實例To

take

…

as

an

example,

One

example

is…,

Another

example

is…,

for

example二、做比較相似的比較：in

comparison,

likewise,

similarly,

in

the

same

manner相反的比較：on

the

other

hand,

conversely,

whereas,

while,

instead,

nevertheless,

in

contrast,

on

the

contrary,

compared

with

…,

…文章主體段落遵循的兩個方法：一、舉實例To

take

…常見寫作錯誤一、主語錯誤

1.主語缺失

Inourcountryfeelsveryfree.

Peoplefeelfreeinourcountry.

2.非名詞主語

1)Richdoesn’tensureahappylife.

Beingrichdoesn’tmeanahappylife.Wealthdoesn’tensureahappylife.

2)Keeptwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.

Keepingtwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.

3.主謂錯位

1)Readingbookscanacquireknowledge.

Peoplecanacquireknowledgefrombooks.

2)Nowpeople’slivescan’tleaveTV.

Nowpeoplecan’tdowithoutTV.

√常見寫作錯誤√二、謂語錯誤

1.多重謂語

1)Inourmodernsociety,therearemanyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated.

Inourmodernsociety,manyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated.2)Povertymakesmanypeoplecan’tstudyabroad.

Povertymakesmanypeopleunabletostudyabroad.Povertymakesitimpossibleformanypeopletostudyabroad.Povertypreventsmanypeoplefromstudyingabroad.Manypeoplecan’tstudyabroadbecauseofpoverty.

二、謂語錯誤

1.多重謂語

1)Inourmode2.非動詞謂語

1)Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersagainstit.

Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersareagainstit.

2)Itissaidthattheplaceworthstouring.

Itissaidthattheplaceisworthtouring.

2.非動詞謂語

1)Somepeoplefirmly3.主謂不一致

1)IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachmeCollegeEnglish.

IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachesmeCollegeEnglish.

2)Iuseadiskbecauseitholdplentyofdata.

Iuseadiskbecauseitholdsplentyofdata.

3.主謂不一致

1)Ihavetovisitthe4.時態(tài)不一致Nowadays，doingexerciseswerebecomingverypopular.4.時態(tài)不一致5.誤用詞組

1)Theyinsistonpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem.

Theyinsistthatpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem.

Weshouldpayattentiononthecreativelearning.Weshouldpayattentiontothecreativelearning.5.誤用詞組

1)Theyinsistonpost-三、冠詞錯誤

1)Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.

Inmyopinion,thefutureofthebicycleisverypromising.

2)Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlythegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadones.

Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlygoodbookstoreadandnevertouchbadones.

三、冠詞錯誤

1)Inmyopinion,thefu四、代詞錯誤

1.偷梁換柱

Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.

Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveusandtheywillleaveusalong.Ifyoucheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.

四、代詞錯誤

1.偷梁換柱

Ifwechea2.指代不明

2)Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdentheyhavetobear.

Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdenstudentshavetobear.

2.指代不明

2)Sometimesteacher

五、形容詞、副詞錯誤

Surprisingenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.

Surprisinglyenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.

五、形容詞、副詞錯誤

Surprisingenough六、分詞誤用

1)Comparingwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.

Comparedwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.

2)Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewingthroughmycamera.

Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewedthroughmycamera.

六、分詞誤用

1)Comparingwithoth七、修飾語誤置

SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforlearningEnglishpeople.

SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforpeoplelearningEnglish.

七、修飾語誤置

SpokenEnglishisan八、垂懸修飾語

1)Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,people’slivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved.

Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,peoplehavegreatlyimprovedtheirlivingstandard.

2)Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,theletterwaspostedatonce.

Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,Ipostedtheletteratonce.

八、垂懸修飾語

1)Havingcarriedou十、搭配錯誤

1)Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassoexpensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.

Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassohighthatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.

2)Crowdedtrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers.

Heavytrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers.

十、搭配錯誤

1)Inthepastthepric十一、破句

1)Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob.Thenyoumustpassthejobinterview.

Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob,youmustpassthejobinterview.

2)Firstyoushouldshowgoodmanners.Becausethefirstimpressionyouleaveonothersisimportant.

Firstyoushouldshowgoodmanners,becausethefirstimpressionyouleaveonothersisimportant

十一、破句

1)Nowadays,ifyouwan若從作文體裁劃分，英文作文有議論文（ArgumentativeComposition）、記敘文（NarrativeComposition）、描寫文（DescriptiveComposition）和說明文（ExpositiveComposition），等等。四級作文最常見的是前兩種。若從作文體裁劃分，英文作文有議論文（Argumentativ作文的種類

從考試的題型來看，則包括以下幾種:

1、提綱式作文

用英文或中文給出提綱，要求按提綱寫作，目前來說，這種提綱經常是以三段的形式給出，又稱三段式作文，這是四級考試的主要形式。

2、圖表式作文

包括表格式作文。這類作文要求考生用簡潔、生動的語言把圖中所提供的信息準確、完整地表達出來。這類作文在四級考試中只是偶然才會出現(xiàn)。

3、情景式作文

用中文或英文給出一個情景，讓你自己去說明或評論。這類作文多見于六級考試之中。例:有些發(fā)明如電燈、火車、電機等，對人類極為重要。作文的種類從考試的題型來看，則包括以下幾種:

1、提綱式作提綱式作文說明利弊題型這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對比事物本身的利弊，有時也會單從一個角度（利或弊）出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度（或對事物前景提出預測）

1．說明事物現(xiàn)狀

2．事物本身的優(yōu)缺點（或一方面）

3．你對現(xiàn)狀（或前景）的看法提綱式作文1.現(xiàn)在越來越多的中國人開始慶祝西方的節(jié)日，如圣誕節(jié)，情人節(jié)等。

2.有人認為這有利于文化的交流，有人則擔心這會導致傳統(tǒng)文化的喪失

3.在我看來……1.現(xiàn)在越來越多的中國人開始慶祝西方的節(jié)日，如圣誕節(jié)，情人節(jié)Nowadays________________(現(xiàn)象）.Then,whetherweshould___________(遵循這種現(xiàn)象）hasbecomeaissueofdiscussion.SomepeoplepreferAbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First________（Ａ的優(yōu)點之一）.Besides____________（Ａ的優(yōu)點之二）.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat________（Ａ的第一個缺點）．Tomakemattersworse,____________（Ａ的第二個缺點）．

Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo________（我的看法）．（FromthecomparisonbetweenthesepositiveandnegativeeffectsofA,weshouldtakeitreasonablyanddoitaccordingtothecircumstanceswearein.Onlybythisway,________（對前景的預測）Nowadays________________(圖表題型作文

要求考生從一個表格或者圖片出發(fā)，按照要求寫作，如：1996年6月六級作文、2002年6月四六級作文、2003年6月六級作文、2003年9