讀后續(xù)寫-救助貓頭鷹并接納它成為家庭一員講義- 高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

一．（試題原題）December1952inWisconsin,wasbitterlycold.Acurious7-year-old,Iwasinhesitationwhenmyfatherarrivedhomefromworkwithsomethinghiddeninhisjacket.“GuesswhatIhave”hesaid.Heslowlyunwrappedthejackettotakeoutafrozenowl（貓頭鷹）.He'dfoundthefrozenbirdonhiscarwhenheleftworkandguessedthatithadflownintothewindshield（擋風(fēng)玻璃）.1952年12月在威斯康辛州，天氣非常寒冷。我是一個(gè)好奇的7歲孩子，當(dāng)父親下班回家時(shí)，夾克里藏著什么東西，我猶豫了?！安虏挛矣惺裁础彼f。他慢慢地打開夾克拿出一只凍貓頭鷹(貓頭鷹）.下班時(shí)，他在車上發(fā)現(xiàn)了這只結(jié)冰的鳥，并猜測(cè)它撞到了擋風(fēng)玻璃上(擋風(fēng)玻璃）.§

Dadthoughtitmightbealiveandwantedtoletitwarmup.Mymotheragreedtoletthebirdstayovernight，soDadandItookittothebasement（地下室）

andcarefullylaiditnearourcoalstove.Iwasthefirstoneintothekitchenthenextmorningforabowlofcereal（麥片）.Ifoundtheowlrestingonthesugarbowlasifwaitingforitsbreakfast.Ihurriedtotellmyparentsthattheowlwasaliveandsittingatthekitchentable.Momdidn'tlikethatitwasinthekitchenandwanteditoutofthehouse.爸爸認(rèn)為它可能還活著，想讓它暖和起來。我媽媽同意讓這只鳥過夜，所以爸爸和我把它帶到地下室(地下室）小心地把它放在我們的煤爐附近。第二天早上，我是第一個(gè)進(jìn)廚房吃麥片的人(麥片）.我發(fā)現(xiàn)貓頭鷹在糖碗上休息，好像在等它的早餐。我趕緊告訴父母貓頭鷹還活著，坐在廚房的桌子旁。媽媽不喜歡它在廚房里，想把它趕出家門?！?/p>

Dadinstructedmetoopenthebackdoorwhileheforcedtheowltowardme.Iheardtheflappingofwings,butbeforeIcoulddirectitsflightoutside,theowlturnedaroundawayfromthecoldaircominginthedoorandflewpastme,downthestairsintotheshelterofthewarmbasement.Restinginthespacenearthetopofthebasement,theowlwassafelybeyondourreach.Wetrieddrivingitoutwithabroom,butitcalmlyflewtothefarsideofthebasement.SoonDadandIwerelaughingtoohardtocontinue,andwerealizedtherewasnowaywecoulddrivetheowloutifitwantedtostay.MomagreedtohaveitinthehouseuntilDadcouldcatchitwhenitbecameweakfromhunger.Butthatneverhappened.爸爸指示我打開后門，同時(shí)強(qiáng)迫貓頭鷹向我靠近。我聽到翅膀拍打的聲音，但還沒來得及指引它飛到外面，貓頭鷹就轉(zhuǎn)身避開了進(jìn)來的冷空氣，從我身邊飛過，下樓梯進(jìn)入溫暖的地下室。貓頭鷹在地下室頂部附近的空地上休息，安全地在我們夠不著的地方。我們?cè)囍脪咧惆阉s出去，但它平靜地飛到了地下室的另一邊。很快，爸爸和我笑得太厲害了，無法繼續(xù)，我們意識(shí)到，如果貓頭鷹想留下來，我們就無法把它趕走。媽媽同意把它放在家里，直到爸爸能在它餓得虛弱時(shí)抓住它。但這從未發(fā)生過?！霻hedoordidn’tshutproperly,whichallowedmiceintothebasement.

§Asspringarrived,weknewitwastimefortheowltoleave.門關(guān)不好，老鼠進(jìn)了地下室春天到了，我們知道貓頭鷹該離開了。二．構(gòu)思情節(jié):Thedoordidn’tshutproperly,whichallowedmiceintothebasement.地下室進(jìn)了老鼠一一貓頭鷹抓老鼠(動(dòng)作細(xì)節(jié)描寫)一一媽媽不反對(duì)了一一隨著時(shí)間(冬天)過去，我們接納它成為家庭的一員Asspringarrived,weknewitwastimefortheowltoleave.準(zhǔn)備放飛(動(dòng)作描寫+心理活動(dòng)描寫)--它也依依不舍(動(dòng)作描寫)主題提升(愛護(hù)動(dòng)物，讓其回歸自然三、范文賞析:及格檔Thedoordidn'tshutproperly,whichallowedmiceintothebasement.Inthedaysthatfollowed,theowlcaughtthemiceinthebasementandenjoyedeverymealofthem.Beforelong,itbecamesofatthatDadmighthaveeasilycaughtit.Buthedidn't.EvenMomneveraskedhimtodriveitoutofthehouse.Iusuallyshowedmyfriendstheowlthatlivedinmybasementandexplainingitseatinghabits.Timepassedquicklyandthreemonthswentbybeforeweknewit.(76)Asspringarrived,weknewitwastimefortheowltoleave.Onawarmafternoon,wedecidedtosetthebirdfree.Iopenedthedoor,thoughIhatedtodoit.Theowlseemedtoreadourmindsandflewoutintothetallpeartreeinourbackyard.Weobserveditaroundtheneighborhoodforafewmoredaysandthenitwasgone.Wefeltasenseofloss.Wetookcomfortknowingitwasfreeandhealthy,ifabitoverweight.(74）優(yōu)秀檔:Thedoordidn'tshutproperly,whichallowedmiceintothebasement.Overthenextfewweeks,wenoticedthatthemiceweredisappearing,andthenrealizingthattheowlhadfoundanewhome.Westartedleavingsmallpiecesofmeatbythecoalstovefortheowltoeat,andsoonitbecamearegularvisitor.Itwasfascinatingtowatchtheowlhuntandcatchitsprey.Welearnedsomuchaboutthehabitsandbehaviorofthismysteriousandbeautifulbird.(73)Asspringarrived,weknewitwastimefortheowltoleave.Dadhadconstructedasimplewoodenboxfortheowltonestin,andweplaceditoutsidenearatree.Weweresadtoseetheowlgo,butweknewitwastimeforittoreturntoitsnaturalhabitat.Forseveraldays,wewatchedastheowlflewbackandforthfromourbasementtothewoodenbox.Finally,oneday,itflewaway,andweknewthatithadfoundanewhomeinthewild.Theexperienceofrescuingandcaringfortheowlhadbeenawonderfulgift,andithadgivenusanewappreciationforthewondersofnature.(108)四、一次生成(改寫范文)Thedoordidn'tshutproperly,whichallowedmiceintothebasement.Overthenextfewweeks,wenoticedthatthemiceweredisappearing,andthenrealizingthattheowlhadfoundanewhome.Westartedleavingsmallpiecesofmeatbythecoalstovefortheowltoeat,andsoonitbecamearegularvisitor.Itwasfascinatingtowatchtheowlhuntandcatchitsprey.Welearnedsomuchaboutthehabitsandbehaviorofthismysteriousandbeautifulbird.(73)Thedoordidn'tshutproperly,whichallowedmiceintothebasement.Overthenextfewweeks,themiceweredisappearing.OnedayIhappenedtoseetheowlflappingitswings,shootinglikeanarrowandcatchingthemice.Itwastheowlthatgotridofthemice.WhenItoldmomaboutthis.shenolongerobjectedtoourkeepingit.Welearnedsomuchaboutthehabitsandbehaviorofthismysteriousandbeautifulbird.Astimewentby.itbecamepartofourfamily.(77)Asspringarrived,weknewitwastimefortheowltoleave.Dadhadconstructedasimplewoodenboxfortheowltonestin,andweplaceditoutsidenearatree.Weweresadtoseetheowlgo,butweknewitwastimeforittoreturntoitsnaturalhabitat.Forseveraldays,wewatchedastheowlflewbackandforthfromourbasementtothewoodenbox.Finally,oneday,itflewaway,andweknewthatithadfoundanewhomeinthewild.Theexperienceofrescuingandcaringfortheowlhadbeenawonderfulgiftandithadgivenusanewappreciationforthewondersofnature.Asspringarrived,weknewitwastimefortheowltoleave.Onawarmafternoon,wedecidedtosetthebirdfree.Alittleexcitedandalittlelost,Iopenedthedoor,forceditoutandguideditintotheopenair.Itseemedtoreadourmindsandhoveredaboveforseveralminutes,asifitwasreluctanttoleave.Thenitflewhighintotheskyanddisappearedoutofsight.Thisexperiencegaveusanewappreciationforthewondersofnature.(75)二次生成:注意原文的最后兩句:MomagreedtohaveitinthehouseuntilDadcouldcatchitwhenitbecameweakfromhunger.Butthatneverhappened.Thedoordidn'tshutproperly,whichallowedmiceintothebasement.Overthenextfewweeks,themiceweredisappearing.OnedayIhappenedtoseetheowlflappingitswings,shootinglikeanarrowandcatchingthemice.Itwastheowlthatgotridofthemice.WhenItoldmomaboutthis,shenolongerobjectedtoourkeepingit.Welearnedsomuchaboutthehabitsandbehaviorofthismysteriousandbeautifulbird.Astimewentby,itbecamepartofourfamily.(77)與原文協(xié)同Thedoordidn'tshutproperly,whichallowedmiceintothebasement.Oneday,Ihappenedtoseetheowlflappingitswings,shootinglikeanarrowandcatchingitsprey.Itwastheowlthatgotridofthemice!Anditevengotstrongerfromthehunt,notweak!Havingknownthis,momnolongerobjectedtoourkeepingit.Gradually,welearnedmoreaboutthehabitsandbehaviorofthismysteriousandbeautifulbird.Astimeworeon,itbecamepartofourfamily.(75)二次生成：

Thedoordidn'tshutproperly,whichallowedmiceintothebasement.

Oneday,Ihappenedtoseetheowlflappingitswings,shootinglikeanarrowandcatchingitsprey.Itwastheowlthatgotridofthemice!Anditevengotstrongerfromthehunt,notweak!Havingknownthis,momnolongerobjectedtoourkeepingit.Gradually,welearnedmore