上海高考英語作文指導(dǎo)-課件(13張)

AGuidetoWriting——OnewithbothdescriptionandillustrationAGuidetoWriting——OnewithbThebasicstructurePartOne:IntroductionPartTwo:BodyPartThree:ConclusionConclusion,proposal,determination,expectationBackgroundinformationPersonalpointofviewTopicSentences&SupportingsentencesDescriptionandillustrationThebasicstructurePartOne:Firstly,agoodcommandofEnglishaddstomyconfidenceinaccomplishingallthetaskswell.SinceEnglishisauniversallanguage,beingequippedwithalargevocabularyandfluentinspokenEnglishwillplayabigrole.Secondly,Ibelievethatacertainextentofknowledgeinhistory,cultureandcustomsiswhatatourguidecan’taffordtolack.Therefore,aninterestinculturesinceearlyofmyageservestomakemeaqualifiedtourguide.Thirdly,thejobofatourguideisquitedemandingandneedscontinuousefforts.Beingbothphysicallyandmentallywell,I’mfullypreparedtoembraceallkindsofchallengesinthework.Firstly,agoodcommandofEng作文題目：請(qǐng)簡要介紹一次給你留下深刻印象的課堂小組活動(dòng)，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)這種組織形式的看法。作文題目：請(qǐng)簡要介紹一次給你留下深刻印象的課堂小組活動(dòng)，并談AnoutlinePara.1：引入話題Para.2：活動(dòng)的過程Para.3：“我”的看法Para.4：結(jié)論AnoutlinePara.1：引入話題BrainstormingGroupactivitiesWhatdostudentsdo?Whatdoestheteacherassign?What’sthetheme?Whatdoyouget?What’syourattitude?BrainstormingGroupactivitiesWAmorespecificoutlinePara.1：引入話題Para.2：活動(dòng)的過程Para.3：“我”的看法Para.4：結(jié)論Bespecific!AmorespecificoutlinePara.1OpeningParagraphOpenthebookofmemory,andIcaneasilyrecallmanywonderfulgroupactivitiesinclass.Ashiningexperienceliesinmyheart--oneinaChineselesson.開門見山，導(dǎo)入話題的語句要有，但最多不超過2句。第一段要亮出全文中心觀點(diǎn)或主題。Sample:OpeningParagraphOpenthDevelopingParagraph(I)

Thatday,ourChineseteacheraskedustotellahistoricalstorytootherswhichwasnotknowntomanypeopleandmakeadiscussionaboutit.Whatsurprisedmemuchwasnottheheateddiscussion,butthestoriesweourselvestold.Ihadneverexpectedthatalmosteveryonehadafertileknowledgeandbroadhorizons.ThereweresomanyinterestingstoriesasIhadneverheard.Intheend,weallbegantorealizethatitwastherealpurposeoftheteacherofthislesson.（簡要）描述段落不要流水賬，對(duì)事件的描述要有重點(diǎn)、有目的性，為下文的議論做好鋪墊。DevelopingParagraph(I)DevelopingParagraph(II)SincethenIhavechangedmyviewonthegroupactivityinclass.Itisnotaboringdiscussionthatmostofusthinkitmightbe,orachatthathasnothingtodowithourstudy,butaprocessofsharingdifferentideasandcultivatingacreativemind.自己的看法（議論）要觀點(diǎn)明確，適當(dāng)加入一些自己的分析或說明可以使文章內(nèi)容更飽滿。DevelopingParagraph(II)SinceConcludingParagraphSoIstronglyappealthatteachersprovideuswithmoreofsuchactivitiestoenhanceourabilitytoexpressourselves,cooperatewitheachotherandbringaboutmoresoundeffectsintheshapingofusyoungstudents.結(jié)尾部分不能草率，要確實(shí)總結(jié)了全文觀點(diǎn)或主題，或在前文基礎(chǔ)上發(fā)出倡議或提出建議。ConcludingParagraphSoIstron假定你是上海星光中學(xué)高三學(xué)生劉華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下學(xué)生會(huì)倡議書的內(nèi)容給某英文報(bào)社寫一封信，敘述你校將開展的此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，并發(fā)表自己的看法。倡議書為了利用學(xué)習(xí)資料，我們倡議高三年級(jí)的同學(xué)將用過的教科書、輔導(dǎo)書、筆記本等贈(zèng)送給高一、高二的同學(xué)?；顒?dòng)意義：鼓勵(lì)節(jié)約，增進(jìn)友誼……活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校圖書館活動(dòng)時(shí)間：11月12日-22日Practice假定你是上海星光中學(xué)高三學(xué)生劉華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下學(xué)生會(huì)倡議書的HomeworkAccomplishthewriting.HomeworkAccomplishthewriting激勵(lì)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的名言警句

1、聰明的人有長的耳朵和短的舌頭。——弗萊格2、重復(fù)是學(xué)習(xí)之母?！掖雀?、當(dāng)你還不能對(duì)自己說今天學(xué)到了什么東西時(shí)，你就不要去睡覺?！ｎD堡4、人天天都學(xué)到一點(diǎn)東西，而往往所學(xué)到的是發(fā)現(xiàn)昨日學(xué)到的是錯(cuò)的?！狟.V5、學(xué)到很多東西的訣竅，就是一下子不要學(xué)很多?！蹇?、學(xué)問是異常珍貴的東西，從任何源泉吸收都不可恥?！⒉贰と铡しɡ?、學(xué)習(xí)是勞動(dòng)，是充滿思想的勞動(dòng)。——烏申斯基8、聰明出于勤奮，天才在于積累－－華羅庚9、好學(xué)而不勤問非真好學(xué)者。10、書山有路勤為徑，學(xué)海無涯苦作舟。11、人的大腦和肢體一樣，多用則靈，不用則廢－茅以升12、你想成為幸福的人嗎？但愿你首先學(xué)會(huì)吃得起苦－－屠格涅夫13、成功＝艱苦勞動(dòng)＋正確方法＋少說空話－－愛因斯坦14、不經(jīng)歷風(fēng)雨，怎能見彩虹－《真心英雄》15、只有登上山頂，才能看