浙江高考寫作組合練訓(xùn)練3

寫作組合練訓(xùn)練3(對(duì)應(yīng)學(xué)生用書第203頁(yè))Ⅰ.應(yīng)用文寫作【導(dǎo)學(xué)號(hào)：38144078】假定你是李華，正在新西蘭學(xué)習(xí)，你計(jì)劃寒假期間在當(dāng)?shù)芈眯校?qǐng)寫一封e-mail向旅行社詢問(wèn)相關(guān)的旅行信息。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1．旅行信息(如景點(diǎn)等)；2．當(dāng)?shù)靥厣?如食品等)；3．注意事項(xiàng)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSirorMadam，Sincerelyyours，LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇應(yīng)用文寫作要求學(xué)生給新西蘭的旅行社寫一封e-mail，咨詢旅行信息和當(dāng)?shù)靥厣?。本文屬于書信類?yīng)用文中的咨詢信。人稱用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。本文可分三段寫作。首段作自我介紹，表明寫信的目的；第二段為主體段，寫清想要咨詢的問(wèn)題，如當(dāng)?shù)赜惺裁淳包c(diǎn)，有什么特色食品以及有哪些注意事項(xiàng)；第三段表達(dá)希望能盡快收到對(duì)方回應(yīng)的愿望。在遣詞造句上，學(xué)生可以使用咨詢信常見(jiàn)的套句，如“I'mwritingtoaskforinformationabout...”，“Iwouldbegratefultoreceiveareplyatyourearliestconvenience.”等；此外，應(yīng)盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜句型，如定語(yǔ)從句、同位語(yǔ)從句、倒裝句等；還應(yīng)注意合理使用連接成分，以增強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性和層次感?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earSirorMadam，I'mLiHua，aChinesestudentstudyinginNewZealand.I'mwritingtoaskforinformationaboutyouragency'sNewZealand'stravelforthewintervacation.Couldyoutellmethedeparturetimeandtravellingroutes?Asweknow，NewZealandisfamousforitsbeautifulsceneryandplacesofinterestandIwanttoknowmoredetailsaboutthese.Besides,I'malsointerestedinthelocalfood.HowmuchdoIhavetopayforthetravel?Atlength，arethereotherthingsIshouldbeawareof?I'dbegratefultoreceiveareplyatyourearliestconvenience.Sincerelyyours，LiHuaⅡ.讀后續(xù)寫(2017·浙江溫州二月模擬)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Itwastimetogohome.“Remembertoworkonyourclassspeechesforhomework，”MissWalkercalled，aseveryonestartedtalkingandpackingtheirschoolbags.Jennyfeltsick.Shehatedhavingtoreadaloudinclass.Shewassureeveryonegotreallyboredlisteningtoher.Once，whenJennywasreadingoutherholidaydiary，Leewasevenlookingathiswatch，asilverandblueonewhichseemedjustmagical．JennywatchedLeewalkaheadofherastheyleftschool.Heseemedsoclever，andhehadacertainsortofshiningconfidence．Hewasjustoneofthosepeoplewhoweregoodateverything.Jennysighed.Assheturnedthecorner，shesawLee'swatchlyingrightinthemiddleofthepath.Jennyknewsheshouldjustpickitupandreturnittohim，butshedidn'twanttorunafterhim.Jennybentdownquickly，pickedupthewatchandranhome.Onarrivinghome，Jennyputitonalmostwithoutthinking.Shewassurpriseditfittedsowell.Shewalkedtothemirrorandstartedpracticingherspeech．Wordsjustfloodedoutofhermouth.“I'mgoingtotalkaboutswimming.Ihavebeenlucky.I'vewonlotsofcompetitions.ButwhenI'minara