讀后續(xù)寫哲理故事類為防強盜把錢埋在地下課件高考英語一輪復習

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習哲理故事——為防強盜，把錢埋在地下1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文NoMore,NoLessManyyearsago,inthesmallPolishtownofPińczów,therelivedatradernamedLeib.Heworkedhard,buttimeswerebad.Hecouldn’taffordtobuyanypresentsforhisfamily.Sometimeshecouldn’tevenbuyfood.Oneday,LeibmadeanimportantdecisiontoleavehomeforthebigcityofKraków.Maybehecouldearnmoremoneythere.InKraków,Leibpouredallofhisenergyintohiswork.Aftertwelvemonths,heearnedsixhundredzlotys.Buthemissedhisfamilysomuchthathedecidedtogohome.Onhiswayhome,LeibstoppedinthetownofRozka.Fearingrobbers,hedecidedtoburyhismoneybeforegoingtothehoteltorest.Nearaseeminglydesertedhouse,hedugaholeandburiedhismoney.Butthehousewasnotdeserted.Theoldmanowningitwaswatchingthroughhiswindow.WhenLeibleft,hedugupthemoney.4續(xù)寫原文Nextmorning,whenLeibfoundhismoneygone,hecriedbitterly.Lookingaround,henoticedthenearbyhouse.“Whoeverlivesinthathousemusthaveseenmeburythemoney,”Leibthought.“ButifIaccusehimofstealingit,hewillcallmealiar.”Thinkingforawhile,Leibknockedonthedoor.Hesaidtotheoldman,“I’mastrangerhereandneedadvice.Iheardyou’rethewisestmanhere.Willyouhelpme?”Theoldmanwasoverjoyed,saying“TellmewhatIcandoforyou”.“Fearingrobbers,Iburiedmymoney—sixhundredzlotys—inasecretplacelastnight,”Leibsaid.“NowIhavereceivedonethousandzlotys.ShouldIburyitinthesameplaceorinanotherforthegreatestsafety?”Theoldmansmiled,“Sinceyouareastrangerhere,Iadviseyouhaveallyourmoneyinthesameplace.”“Thankyouforyouradvice,”saidLeib.“Iwilldoasyousuggest.”5段首句Para1：AssoonasLeibwasoutofsight,theoldmantookoutthemoneyhehadstolen.Para2：Whendarknessfell,Leibwenttothehidingplaceandfoundallhisstolenmoney.6Part2題目分析7點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構建的重點8續(xù)寫思路分析本文以人物為線索展開，講述了一個叫Leib的商人賺了一筆錢，由于害怕強盜，他決定先把錢埋起來，然后再去旅館休息，結(jié)果被一個老人挖走了。于是Leib想了一個聰明的辦法，最終找回了自己所有的錢。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:AssoonasLeibwasoutofsight,theoldmantookoutthemoneyhehadstolen.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“Leib一離開視線，老人就拿出偷來的錢。”可知，第一段可描寫老人內(nèi)心的想法以及老人埋錢。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Whendarknessfell,Leibwenttothehidingplaceandfoundallhisstolenmoney.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“天黑的時候，Leib來到藏錢的地方，找到了他所有被偷的錢?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫Leib拿到錢后回家的事情。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索老人拿出偷來的錢——老人把錢埋起來——Leib找到了他所有被偷的錢——Leib回家——Leib滿足12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類看不見：beoutofsight/disappear趕往：hurryto/rushto購買：buy/purchase情緒類愚蠢：foolish/stupid積極：positiveattitude/actpositively13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Ifthefoolishmandoesn'tfindhismoneywherehehidit,he'llnotburyhisonethousandzlotysthere(運用了if引導條件狀語從句)[高分句型2]Thatisexactlywhathedeservednomore,noless.(運用了what引導表語從句)14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)AssoonasLeibwasoutofsight,theoldmantookoutthemoneyhehadstolen.“Ifthefoolishmandoesn'tfindhismoneywherehehidit,he'llnotburyhisonethousandzlotysthere,”thegreedymanthought.However,ifhefindshismoneywhereheleftit,hewillthinkitsafetoburythemoneyinthesameplace,andIwillgetallhismoney.Extremelysatisfiedwithhistrick,hehurriedtowherehe'ddugupthemoney,putthemoneyawayandcoveredtheholejustasitwas,dreamingtoreapwithoutsowing.16范文呈現(xiàn)Whendarknessfell,Leibwenttothehidingplaceandfoundallhisstolenmoney.“Theoldmanthoughthewouldgetmore,andnowhehasnothing,”Leibflashedabigsmileandthencontinuedhisjourneyhome.Onhisway,heboughtpresentsforhisfamily.Inafewhours'time,hewassittingcozilyathome.Hischildrenplayedwithnewtoyshappilyandhiswifelookedlovelierinhernewdress.Leibleanedbackinhischairandclosedhiseyes,withacontentedsmile.Thatisexactlywhathedeservednomore,noless.17范文譯文萊布一離開視線，老人就把偷來的錢拿了出來。貪婪的人想：“如果這個愚蠢的人沒有在他藏錢的地方找到他的錢，他就不會把他的一千茲羅提埋在那里?！薄Ｈ欢?，如果他把錢放在原處，他會認為把錢埋在同一個地方是安全的，我會得到他所有的錢。他對自己的把戲非常滿意，趕緊去挖錢的地方，把錢收起來，把洞蓋好，夢想著不勞而獲。18范文譯文夜幕降臨時，萊布來到藏匿處，找到了他所有的贓款?！袄先艘詾樗麜玫礁?，但現(xiàn)在他一無所