讀后續(xù)寫+社會溫情類（extra+photos）講義 高三英語一輪復習

讀后續(xù)寫社會溫情類（ExtraPhotos）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。“Wakeup,Mom!“Ifeltalittlehandonmyfaceandreluctantlyopenedmyeyes.Therewasmyson,readytostarttheday.Ialsoheardmybabiesawakeinthenextroom.Readyornotthedayhadbegun!Ilovedbeinghomewithmylittleones,butIfelttheweightoftheworldonmyshoulders.MyhusbandandIhadjustboughtahouse,andsomeunexpectedexpensesmadeourbudgettighterthanithadeverbeen.Iwaswearyofspendingmorepennies.Weweren'tfoolishwithourmoney.Weworkedhard.Weweredoingalltherightthings,butwehadhadonefinancialdisappointmentafteranother.Iwasgoingtopickupmykids’photoportraitsfromthestudioatthelocalmall.Despiteoursmallbudget,itwasimportanttometohavepicturesofmychildrenastheyweregrowingup.Thepreviousweek,Ihadfoundacoupon(優(yōu)惠券)andusedsomechangefromthecartobuya$7.99portraitpackage,andtodaywasthedayIwastopickuptheportraits.Sinceweweregoingtothemall,Idecidedtomakeitanoutingandpackedsomesandwichesforustoeatatthefoodcourt.What'smore,therearemanyride-ontoycarsinthemall’sfoodcourtforfunandforfree.Afterbreakfast,wewentoff.Afterweparked,wewalkedintotheportraitstudioatthemall,andIapproachedthecounter.Theyoungwomansmiled.“MayIhelpyou?”“Yes,I'mheretopickupourphotos.”Thewomanaskedmynameandopenedherdrawer,“Ah,yes,heretheyare.Aren'ttheyjustsoadorable?”Shetookoutthephotos,andthesmilingfacesofmykidswarmedmyheart.“Yes,theyaregreat.Thankyou,“Isaid.Sheputthephotosintoanenvelope.Thenshespreadoutadditionalphotosofmykidsthatlhadn'tordered.Iknewwhatthatmeant.Theupsellpitch(推銷)wascoming.“Wouldyouliketopurchasetheseextraportraits?Theyareonlyfifteendollarsapiece!”shesmiledsweetly.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Para.1Myheartturnedcold.“Idon’thavefifteendollars”._______________________Para.2Aswewerehavingourlunch,theyoungwomancameupandpressedsomethingintomyhand._______________________________一、文本解讀：1敘事視角：第一人稱2故事梗概：我家剛買了房子，加上還有幾個孩子需要撫養(yǎng)，一家人生活比較拮據(jù)，但我想給孩子們拍一些照片記錄孩子的成長。上周，我?guī)е⒆觽內(nèi)コ械恼障囵^拍了一組照片。今天是去取照片的日子，我?guī)先髦?，超市那邊的食品區(qū)有玩具馬可可騎，我打算帶孩子玩玩，然后在那邊就餐。到了店里取照片時，店員建議我買下額外的一些照片。二、續(xù)寫主題：社會溫情類，陌生人的善意三、構建續(xù)寫情節(jié)續(xù)寫思路：Para1：Myheartturnedcold.“Idon’thavefifteendollars”---拒絕購買多余的照片—帶著孩子離開---接著帶孩子們在商場的食品區(qū)玩耍---午飯時間到了，吃自帶的三明治Para2:Aswewerehavingourlunch,theyoungwomancameupandpressedsomethingintomyhand.---店員給我送了額外的照片，可能還有一些錢---我的反應---簡短的交流---我的感悟四官方范文Myheartturnedcold“Idon'thavefifteendollars.“Itookthephotoenvelopeand

walkedaway,withmycheeksredaftermyreply.Next,westoppedattheride-ontoy

carsinthemall'sfoodcourt.Thereweren'tanyotherkidsthere.Mykidsclimbedon

themenjoyingthemselvesverymuch.Afterawhile,weweretired,soweunwrapped

ourlunchesthatIhadbroughtfromhome.Althoughthemall'sfoodcourtwasnear,I

didn'thaveextramoney.Itwasearlyforlunch,butwewerehungry.Aswewerehavingourlunch,theyoungwomancameupandpressedsomething

ontomyhand.Shesaid,"Here.Takeyourfamilyoutforicecreamafterlunch.Iwas

surprised.Imanagedtosay"thankyou“assheturnedandwalkedaway.ThenIlooked

downatwhatshehadgivenme.Itwastheadditionalphotosandfifteendollars.Tearsrolleddownmy

cheeksasIquietlyfinishedmysandwich.Thedoubtsinmyheartmeltedawayandmy

faithwasrenewedKindnesscanchangesomeone'sdarkmomentintoabrightone五、下水作文：Myheartturnedcold.“Idon’thavefifteendollars”.Upsetandembarrassed,IcouldfeelmyfaceburningwithheatwhenIblurtedoutthatdisappointingrejection.“Itrulyappreciateyourkindnesstoprintthemoutformeastheyaresoimportanttome.However,Ireallydidn’thaveanyextramoneyforthembecauseofmycurrentlyextremetightbudget.”Theyoungwoman’sexcitementplunged（突降）asshegraspedthatImeantit.Apparently,bothofourheartsanktothebottom.Shetimidly（羞澀地）replied“Sorry”,asweheadedtothedoorforourlunch.Aswewerehavingourlunch,theyoungwomancameupandpressedsomethingintomyhand.Withconfusion,Ilookedintomypalmandfoundmykids’extraportraits.Withatoothysmile,shetoldmeitwasnousekeepingtheseadorablepictureswhileknowingIwouldtreasurethemthemost.Atthesightofthephotos,Icouldn’thelpsheddinggratefultears.Itdawnedonmethatweoftenstruggledwithdifficultiesinlifeandfeltdisappointedwithourlifebutwecouldstillreceivekindnessfromstrangersthatcouldbrightenupoursaddays.六、素材積累（有關善意的主題升華）1.Lifewillhitusunexpectedly,butthereisalwayssomeonetohelpusoutandthereisalwayshopewaitingforus.2.Iheldthephotostightly,tearsrollingdownwithoutcontrol.Itwaslovethatmadetheworldgoaround,whichIfeltdeepinmyheart.3Sometimes,asmallactofkindnessmaybepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifferencetoothers’l