英語四級(jí)高分作文是這樣練成的

英語四級(jí)寫作造句應(yīng)避免的七大問題 詞性不分詞性不分是英語造句中的忌諱。英語注重形態(tài)，詞性和用法是相對應(yīng)的，例如名詞是絕對不可以充當(dāng)謂語的，而充當(dāng)謂語的絕對不允許由形容詞單獨(dú)承擔(dān)。所以如果詞性錯(cuò)了就意味著其用法也可能出錯(cuò)，這樣的句子一定對文章的準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)有所影響。造句過程中我們要特別注意以下幾點(diǎn)：第一，動(dòng)詞要分清及物與否，不及物動(dòng)詞不直接跟賓語，不用于被動(dòng)語態(tài)。第二，分清楚形容詞和動(dòng)詞，形容詞不能做謂語，動(dòng)詞的謂語形式不能做表語。第三，動(dòng)詞的謂語形式(有時(shí)、體、態(tài)、氣的形態(tài)表示)和動(dòng)詞的非謂語形式(動(dòng)名詞、不定式、分詞)要區(qū)別開來。第四，要分清現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞的使用場合。第五，意義相同但詞性不同的詞要特別注意。第六，拼寫相同但意義不同、詞性不同的詞也要特別注意。鞏固練習(xí)：改正句子。1.Chinahasoccurredthegreatchangesinrecentyears.2.Heveryexcellentinmanyaspects.3.Icansurethatyouwillseeabetterfilm.4.Inthischaoticsociety,wearemorelikelytobecomedepress.5.Humanbeingisakindofanimalfullingofdifferentfeelings.6.Nowadaysitissurprisedthatmanystudentscaretheirappearanceandclothesbutrarepaygreatattentiontotheirstudy.7.Ifyouareeasilytogetfrustrated,youwillgiveup.8.Sinceyouhavebeenkeepingagoodmood,yourteacherswouldbemorelikeyou.解析：1.occur是不及物動(dòng)詞，它的主語應(yīng)該是事物或結(jié)果，原句應(yīng)改寫為:GreatchangeshaveoccurredinrecentyearsinChina.2.excellent是形容詞，不能充當(dāng)謂語，它應(yīng)該與be動(dòng)詞搭配，構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)，原句可以改寫為：Heisveryexcellentinmanyaspects.3.sure是形容詞，應(yīng)該和be動(dòng)詞搭配，構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)，原句可以改為：Iamsurethatyouwillseeabetterfilm.4.depress是動(dòng)詞，不能與become等連系動(dòng)詞搭配構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)，原句可以改為：Inthischaoticsociety,wearemorelikelytobecomedepressed.5.full是形容詞，不能構(gòu)成分詞形式，原句可以改為：Humanbeingisakindofanimalfullofdifferentfeelings.6.surprised為過去分詞演變的形容詞，不能修飾物，只能修飾人，原句可以改為：Nowadaysitissurprisingthatmanystudentscaretheirappearanceandclothesbutrarelypaygreatattentiontotheirstudy.7.easily是副詞，一般不能與系動(dòng)詞連用，應(yīng)該用形容詞與系動(dòng)詞搭配，構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)，原句可以改為：Ifyouareeasytogetfrustrated,youwillgiveup.8.like既是動(dòng)詞又是介詞，但是含義不同，like(v.喜歡)不能與be動(dòng)詞搭配，more作為副詞，修飾動(dòng)詞的位置最好放在動(dòng)詞后面，原句可以改為：Sinceyouhavebeenkeepingagoodmood,yourteacherswouldlikeyoubetter.人稱不一致人稱一致不僅指在一句話中主語應(yīng)該保持一致，而且在一篇文章中，前后的稱謂也應(yīng)當(dāng)保持一致，不能出現(xiàn)混亂的情況。鞏固練習(xí)：改正句子。1.Theyhavetherightofdiscussingwithherhusband.2.Oneseriousproblemthatinfluenceachild'shealthydevelopmentisthattheydonothaveenoughpsychologicalspace.3.Admittedly,therearemerittobotharguments.ButIdobelievethatgamedogoodtochildren.4.Ioftenbuyclothesonsalebecausewecansavealotofmoneythatway.5.Studentsoftenfocusonvocabulary,butyouneedtorealizethatvocabularyisonlyonepartofalanguage.6.Thecommitteedebatedwhethertoallowitsfamiliestoattendthedinner.7.Thequestionthatinterestusishowweshouldprotectenvironmentfrombeingpollutedfurther.8.Inotherwords,one'sactionsaredecidedbytheirmoodindirectly.9.Ifpeoplehaveagoodmood,hewillfaceeverythinghappenedcalmly.正確句子：1.Theyhavetherightofdiscussingwiththeirhusbands.2.Oneseriousproblemthatinfluencesachild'shealthydevelopmentisthattheydonothaveenoughpsychologicalspace.3.Admittedly,therearemeritstobotharguments.ButIdobelievethatgamedogoodtochildren.4.IoftenbuyclothesonsalebecauseIcansavealotofmoneythatway.5.Studentsoftenfocusonvocabulary,buttheyneedtorealizethatvocabularyisonlyonepartofalanguage.6.Thecommitteedebatedwhethertoallowtheirfamiliestoattendthedinner.7.Thequestionthatinterestsusishowweshouldprotectenvironmentfrombeingpollutedfurther.8.Inotherwords,one'sactionsaredecidedbyhismoodindirectly.9.Ifpeoplehaveagoodmood,theywillfaceeverythinghappenedcalmly.主謂不一致在四、六級(jí)寫作中，考生經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)主謂不一致問題。所謂主謂一致指的是英語句子的主語和謂語在人稱和數(shù)上應(yīng)保持一致。它可分為三種情況:(1)語法一致，即主語為單數(shù)形式，謂語動(dòng)詞也采取單數(shù)形式；主語為復(fù)數(shù)形式，謂語動(dòng)詞亦采用復(fù)數(shù)形式。(2)意念一致，即從意義著眼處理主謂一致問題。有時(shí)，主語形式為單數(shù)，但意義為復(fù)數(shù)，謂語動(dòng)詞依據(jù)意義而定，也采取復(fù)數(shù)形式。(3)比鄰一致，即"就近原則"也就是說謂語動(dòng)詞的人稱和數(shù)往往應(yīng)與其最近的主語保持一致。鞏固練習(xí)：改正句子。1.Somewomenarenotsecretaryintheoffice,instead,theybecomemanagerofthecompany.2.Misconceptionsaboutapeshasturnedarelativelypeacefulanimalintoaterrifyingmonster.3.Therisingcostofnecessitieslikefoodandshelterforcemanyelderlypeopletoliveinpoverty.4.Inthedistanceareabillowofblacksmoke.5.Here'sthebooksyouwant.6.Neithertheunionleadersnorthenegotiatorwantthestriketocontinue.7.Ineighteenth-centuryFrance,makeupandhighheelswaswornbymen.8.Eachofthechild'sthirty-fourstuffedanimalshaveanameandanentirelifehistory.解析：1.Somewomenarenotsecretariesintheoffice;instead,theybecomemanagersofthecompany.2.Misconceptionsabouttheapehaveturnedarelativelypeacefulanimalintoaterrifyingmonster.3.Therisingcostofnecessitieslikefoodandshelterforcesmanyelderlypeopletoliveinpoverty.4.Inthedistanceisabillowofblacksmoke.5.Here'rethebooksyouwant.6.Neithertheunionleadersnorthenegotiatorwantsthestriketocontinue.7.Ineighteenth-centuryFrance,makeupandhighheelswerewornbymen.8.Eachofthechild'sthirty-fourstuffedanimalshasanameandanentirelifehistory.時(shí)態(tài)不一致在造句時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)也應(yīng)該保持一致。鞏固練習(xí)：改正句子。1.Themotorbikewasred,andtherearetwopersonsonthemotorbike.2.Hetoldmehewillbeagoodtennisplayerthenextyearwhenwemetonatrain.3.IfIfailedtoachievemydesire,Iwillthinkitcomesfromafatebeyondmypower.4.However,ifthegoalsareobtained,myendlesseffortsbringthemtome.5.Noonecoulddenythatcomputershavemadeourlifeconvenientandmakeourworkefficient.6.Dependingoncomputer,manyproblemscanbeeasilysolved,whichisnotpossible20yearsago.解析：1.Themotorbikewasred,andthereweretwopersonsonthemotorbike.2.Hetoldmehewouldbeagoodtennisplayerthenextyearwhenwemetonatrain.3.IfIfailedtoachievemydesire,Iwouldthinkitcomesfromafatebeyondmypower.4.However,ifthegoalsareobtained,myendlesseffortswillbringthemtome.5.Noonecoulddenythatcomputershavemadeourlifeconvenientandmadeourworkefficient.6.Dependingoncomputer,manyproblemscanbeeasilysolved,whichwasnotpossible20yearsago.指代不清在使用代詞如it,he,she,this,that,which,one等的時(shí)候，前面的句子中應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)明確的先行詞。如果指代不清，就會(huì)造成意思上的混亂。鞏固練習(xí)：改正句子。1.Theworld'senergydemandstillcontinuestorise.Howwillthateverbepossibleforustogetthrough?2.PetertoldAlanthathiswifewasunhappy.3.Marshaattributedhersuccesstoherhusband'ssupport,whichwasgenerous.4.Susan'smotherwonderedifshewastallenoughtobeamodel.解析：1.Theworld'senergydemandstillcontinuestorise.Howwillthesituationeverbepossibleforustogetthrough?2.PetertoldAlan,"Yourwifeisunhappy."3.Marshaattributedhersuccesstoherhusband'sgeneroussupport.4.Susan'smotherwonderedifSusanwastallenoughtobeamodel.斷句錯(cuò)誤英語的句子要求主從句直接要由恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~連接，并列句也要求用銜接詞或分號(hào)連接。由于漢語中沒有這些要求，句子之間可以用逗號(hào)連接，因此，在四、六級(jí)作文中，很多同學(xué)的英語句子用逗號(hào)連接兩個(gè)各自完整的句子；或?qū)蓚€(gè)句子連接，但是沒有使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)或銜接詞，以致于造成病句。鞏固練習(xí)：改正句子。1.Theyreaddifferentbooksjusttomeettheirdifferentneeds.Becausedifferentpeoplehavedifferentneedstoreadthedifferentkindsofbooks.2.StudentsandteacherheardLimingwenttohospital,allofthemwenttovisithim.解析：1.Theyreaddifferentbooksjusttomeettheirdifferentneeds,becausedifferentpeoplehavedifferentneeds.2.WhenstudentsandteacherheardLimingwenttohospital,allofthemwenttovisithim.成分殘缺英語的句子雖然結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，但都是由基本的句子結(jié)構(gòu)演化擴(kuò)展而來。如果句子不符合基本的句子結(jié)構(gòu)要求，缺少必要成分或者將從句或短語誤當(dāng)作句子，就不能表達(dá)一個(gè)完整的意思。由于英語和漢語的表達(dá)方法和習(xí)慣不同，成分殘缺是中國學(xué)生在英文寫作中容易出現(xiàn)的問題。鞏固練習(xí)：改正句子。1."Ishonestyoutofdate?"manypeopleasked.Inmyopinion,theanswershouldbe"no".Becausehonestyisnotasimplesocialphenomenon,butakindofhumanitywhichisrootedinourmind.2.Andthenthereisnoneedtoworrywhetheryou'llbelostinastrangeplace,ifyouhaveacellphone.Especially,insomeurgentsituations.3.Thereareotherfunctionsaboutcellphone.Forexample,time-schedule.4.First,asweallknowthatcosmeticsalwayscontaincomplexchemicalelements.Whichmanypeoplewillbeallergic.5.Firstofall,cellphoneservesasaconvenientwayofcommunication.Sinceitallowsyoutochatwithothersonthephonewheneveryoulike.6.First,peopledealwithwastescarelessly.Theypaylittleattentiontotheresultofthewastes.Second,thedevelopmentofindustries.7.Inmyopinion,honestybecomesmoreandmoreimportantinrecentsociety.Thoughthesocietycompetitionbecomesmoreandmorefierce.8.Wecandoalotofthingstoentertainourselvesinsparetime.Likereading,andlisteningtomusic.9.Personallyspeaking,friendshipisanin-depthrelationshipcombiningtrust,support,communication,understanding,empathy,andintimacy.Aspectsoflifethatallofuscrave.10.Thus,couldImakeapieceofadvicetoyouthatreducingthepriceoffood?解析：1."Ishonestyoutofdate?"manypeopleasked.Inmyopinion,theanswershouldbe"no"becausehonestyisnotasimplesocialphenomenon,butakindofhumanitywhichisrootedinourmind.2.Andthenthereisnoneedtoworrywhetheryou'llbelostinastrangeplace,ifyouhaveacellphone,especially,insomeurgentsituations.3.Thereareotherfunctionsaboutcellphone,forexample,time-schedule.4.First,weallknowthatcosmeticsalwayscontaincomplexchemicalelementstowhichmanypeoplewillbeallergic.5.Firstofall,cellphoneservesasaconvenientwayofcommunication,sinceitallowsyoutochatwithothersonthephonewheneveryoulike.6.First,peopledealwithwastescarelessly.Theypaylittleattentiontotheresultofthewastes.Second,itisduetothedevelopmentofindustries.7.Inmyopinion,honestybecomesmoreandmoreimportantinrecentsociety.Atthesametimethesocietycompetitionbecomesmoreandmorefierce.8.Wecandoalotofthingstoentertainourselvesinsparetime,likereading,andlisteningtomusic.9.Personallyspeaking,friendshipisanin-depthrelationshipcombiningtrust,support,communication,understanding,empathy,andintimacy,includingaspectsoflifethatallofuscrave.10.Thus,couldImakeapieceofadvicetoyouthatthepriceoffoodbereduced?英語的句子雖然結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，但都是由基本的句子結(jié)構(gòu)演化擴(kuò)展而來。如果句子不符合基本的句子結(jié)構(gòu)要求，缺少必要成分或者將從句或短語誤當(dāng)作句子，就不能表達(dá)一個(gè)完整的意思。由于英語和漢語的表達(dá)方法和習(xí)慣不同，成分殘缺是中國學(xué)生在英文寫作中容易出現(xiàn)的問題。鞏固練習(xí)：改正句子。11.Itwillpleasetheeyesandmindofotherssothatproduceanexcellentimpression.12.Thereisstillsomethingthatnotsosatisfactory.13.Thewickedalwayspanicky,whilethegoodalwaysfacestherealitywithasmile.14.Always,Idreamaboutthechildhoodwhichincludinghappinessandsadness.15.Idroveslowlypasttheoldbrickhouse.TheplacewhereIgrewup.16.BeforeIturnonthemicrowaveoven.Ihavetoturnofftheoverheadlightinthekitchen.Otherwisethefuseblows.17.Mymotherlikeswatchingdaytimetelevisionshows.Especiallyoldmoviesandsoapoperas.18.IwondernowwhyIhavetolearncertainsubjects.Suchas