2023學(xué)年完整公開(kāi)課版咨詢(xún)信

10.咨詢(xún)信

咨詢(xún)信是寫(xiě)信人對(duì)某方面的信息感興趣，希望了解詳細(xì)信息的信件。通常包括三部分內(nèi)容：

1.說(shuō)明自己的計(jì)劃或目的，也就是詢(xún)問(wèn)信息的原因。 2.征詢(xún)具體信息。 3.期待回復(fù)并表示感謝。文體概述1.尋求幫助_______________________2.向某人提供某物_______________________3.詢(xún)問(wèn)關(guān)于……的信息____________________4.盼望著 _____________________5.在你方便的時(shí)候_______________________atyourearliestconvenienceaskforhelpprovidesbwithsthaskforinformationabout…lookforwardto常用語(yǔ)塊6.支付 _______________________7.為……向某人收取費(fèi)用

_______________________8.為……而表示感激之情

_______________________9.對(duì)……來(lái)說(shuō)很重要

_______________________10.更多詳情_(kāi)______________________furtherdetailspayforchargesbfor…begratefulfor…beimportantto…11.對(duì)……感興趣_______________________12.參加_______________________13.決心要做某事_______________________14.希望……_______________________15.缺乏/缺少_______________________beshortof/beinlack/demandofbeinterestedin…/takeinterestin…takepartin/participateinmakeupone'smindtodosthinthehopeof/that套用句式1.如果能給我提供……方面的信息，我將不勝感激。Iwouldbemostgratefulifyoucouldsendmeinformationregarding/concerning…2.我寫(xiě)信是想知道您能否給我提供有關(guān)……的信息。Iamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregarding…3.如果你能提供更多我應(yīng)特別注意的詳情，我將不勝感激。Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermoredetails(that)Ispeciallyneedtopayattentionto.4.我想知道您是否方便告知這項(xiàng)課程舉辦的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)。Iwonderwhether/ifitisconvenientforyoutoinformmewhenandwherethecoursewillbegiven.5.期待您及時(shí)答復(fù)。Iamlookingforwardtoyourimmediateresponse.習(xí)作修改DearSir/Madam,Ihavereadyouradvertisementinthenewspaper,inthatyouensurethatundertheguidanceofyourfullyqualifiedinstructors,learnerswouldbeabletogetthehangofswimmingafteroneweek’straining.Quiteinteresting,Iamwritingtoyouinthehopethatyoucanprovidemewithfurtherinformations.informationinterestedwillwhichFirstofall,wouldyoubekindenoughtoinformmeofwhenandwherethecoursewillbegiven?Beside,howlongwillitlasteachdayandhowmanyshouldIpayforthat?Also,IwouldappreciateifyoucouldoffermoredetailsIspecialneedtopayattentionto.Lookingforwardtoafavorablereplyatmyearliestconvenience. Yours, LiHuayourspeciallyitmuchBesides本文是李華寫(xiě)信咨詢(xún)有關(guān)游泳課程的細(xì)節(jié)。1.that→which

引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句不能用that，which在這里指代前面的advertisement。2.would→will“初學(xué)者將在一周內(nèi)學(xué)會(huì)游泳”使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。3.interesting→interested

表示人“感興趣的”，應(yīng)該使用interested。4.informations→information

因information表示“信息”，是不可數(shù)名詞。5.去掉me后面的介詞of

一些含介詞的短語(yǔ)，后面接賓語(yǔ)從句時(shí)，省略介詞。如：agreethat…/sbbegladthat…/sbbesurethat…/warnsbthat…之類(lèi)。6.Beside→Besides

因beside是介詞，表示“在……旁邊”；而此處是表示“此外，而且”，應(yīng)使用副詞besides。7.many→much

詢(xún)問(wèn)支付多少錢(qián)，應(yīng)該為howmuch。8.在appreciate后加it

固定句型sbwouldappreciateitif…，表示“如果……，某人將不勝感激”。9.special→specially

此處作狀語(yǔ)，使用副詞。句意：如果你能提供更多我應(yīng)特別注意的詳情，我將不勝感激。10.my→your

應(yīng)是“在您方便時(shí)及時(shí)給我回信”。課堂練習(xí)假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Tim邀請(qǐng)你參加他們學(xué)校組織的暑假夏令營(yíng)。你想了解該活動(dòng)的相關(guān)事宜。請(qǐng)給Tim發(fā)一封電子郵件，詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。1.感謝他的邀請(qǐng)；2.夏令營(yíng)的相關(guān)事宜(具體日程安排，需要攜帶的物品等)；3.希望盡快得到回信。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。HiTim,Thankyousomuchforinvitingmetotakepartinthesummercamporganizedbyyourschoolintheapproachingsummerholiday.Quiteinterested,Iamwritingtoenquireaboutfurtherdetails.Aboveall,Iwonderifitisconvenientforyoutoinformmeofthespecificschedule.Besides,thisbeingmyfirstexperiencetoparticipateinsuchanactivity,wouldyoubekindenoughtoofferanysuggestionsonwhatitemsIspeciallyneedtotakewithme?Iamreallyexcitedandlookingforwardtoit.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeareplyatyourearliestconvenience.

Yours, LiHua課外作業(yè)假定你是李華，正在澳大利亞學(xué)習(xí)，打算在暑假期間學(xué)習(xí)繪畫(huà)。互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上一則招生廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確。請(qǐng)發(fā)一封電子郵件，詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。1.初學(xué)者是否可以參加學(xué)習(xí)？2.是否有暑假班？費(fèi)用如何？3.是否需要自帶材料？注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearSir/Madam,Ihappenedtocomeacrossyouradvertisementonyourwebsite.Justplanningtotakeuppaintingthissummerholiday,Iamwritingtoyouinthehopethatyoucanprovidemewithfurtherinformationconcerningthecourse.Firstofall,asabeginnerinpainting,IwonderwhetherIcantakeyourcourse.Besides,isthereacourserunninginthesummerholidayandhowmuchdoesitcost?Lastbu